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Deadline 1-CHEN SITING

I have completed the Training,[1]week 1 Please check. KellyChen0221 (talk) 07:32, 10 March 2025 (UTC)

@KellyChen0221 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)-gaoxiaoxia

Hello,professor This is my deadline1, This is my deadline1 screenshot.please check Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:33, 10 March 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（Week2)LIANG ZHIWEI

Hello,professor.I am a student in class Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have enrolled the dashboard system and completed the training.Please check!Thank you.—-LIANG06 (talk) 08:09, 10 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2)XuXinRan

Hello professor, I am Xu Xiran from the Society of Everyday Life course. this is my deadline1. Please check it. My dashboard. My training XXUXINRAN (talk) 10:42, 10 March 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（Week2)Zhou Ziyu

Hello,professor.I am in the class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished deadline1. Thank you very much for your inspection.

https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/Zzzzzhouziyu

https://imgur.com/a/zhouziyu-s-ddl-WluHPCO

Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 11:01, 10 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2):ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. 1.I have completed the training [2] 2.Edited my homepage and registered the dashboard [3]. Please check it. Thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 12:06, 11 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2):WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the Wiki course training and registered the course dashboard. Please check it. Thanks. WSH0927 (talk) 02:35, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I also have created my userpage. Please check.

Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 09:53, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Venne Couwenberg

Dear professor,

I follow the course everyday life & social sturcture and completed the basics training, See screenshot for proof I also registered to the dashboard and made a userpage were I mention some information about myself and mention the course with a link to the dashboard.

Thank you in advance for your feedback,

VenneCouwenberg (talk) 11:05, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@VenneCouwenberg Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Hello, Professor, I am Seo Young Kim 2024096508 who is taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure (Class B - Mon. 13:00-14:30, Fri. 13:00-14:30) class. I am leaving a message to finish Deadline 1 (Week 2). Please check. Thank you.

[4]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/2024096508%20Kim%20Seoyoung

[5]https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 11:13, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure (ISM2007) and I have completed the homework due date. Here is the link

https://imgur.com/a/ddl1-5580Kjs

https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/Mcx8202229 Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 11:37, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2): CHEN SIWEN

Dear Professor,I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.training and registered thedashboard Please check

Chensiwen（talk） Chensiwen (talk) 12:11, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Ok - just practice Wikipedia:Signatures - your fist signature above is wrong (second one is ok). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check, Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 12:31, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):HU ENFAN

Dear Professor, I took both of your courses" Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence" at the same time.I have completed your first course training and registered the dashboard. Please check it. 호인본 (talk) 13:00, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):LIU YINGTONG

Respected professor, I have chosen your daily life and social structure. I have completed your course training and registered for the dashboard. Please check it. Thank you. Ryuthefang (talk) 14:01, 12 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):CAI ZHIHANG

Hello, Professor.

I am learing about "Everyday Life and Social Structu".

This is the link to the dashboard.

Here is a link to the student training assignment.Thank you Caizzz (talk) 00:38, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2)-Qu Hongyu

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have completed the basics training, and I also registered to the dashboard. Please check here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 00:47, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2)-WU JIACHEN(오가신)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. A1246632822 (talk) 02:30, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3)-Qu Hongyu(굴홍우)

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I want do my main project individually.

For Everyday Life course, I choose translate Florian Znaniecki and Three warfares two articles to Chinese. For Understanding Wikipedia course, I choose translate Web novels in South Korea and The Coming War with Japan two articles to Chinese.

Dose it available? Looking for you reply.

Thank you Pineappleq (talk) 02:46, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good job choosing topics early. The topics are approved and recorded in the spreadsheet. Good job

For extra credit I encourage you to visit your past article (zh:中国的药品政策) and try to resolve the issue reported in the orange warning box. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:28, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, I have taken two of your courses, "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence". I have coThank you, Professormpleted your first course training.https://imgur.com/a/vdckESMDashboardhttps://imgur.com/a/okXfkgPUser:Hanyangdaxue Hanyangdaxue (talk) 03:11, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:28, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) LI ZIKANG

Dear Professor, I took both of your courses" Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence" at the same time.I have completed your first course training and registered the dashboard. Please check it. Lzk1503863666 Lzk15038863666 (talk) 05:42, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:28, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1——XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor,

I took two classes, "Sociology of Everyday Life" and "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia," which are my training and dashboard registration. Please check, thank you! Xjx921 (talk) 06:48, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2)-YU JIE(여결)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 07:08, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1(week2)- HE ZIXUAN（하자선）

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard.The dashboard page has added a link to the user page. Please check. Thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 07:25, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1(week2)- YAN JINJIN (염금금)

Dear Professor,I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the training 2 and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. JINJINYAN (talk) 07:38, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 (Week 2) - Jeong seolah (정설아)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check.

Thank you. Jeong seolah (talk) 07:42, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jeong seolah Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:30, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 (Week 2) - CHEN SIYU (진사우 )

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. chensiyu2004 218.235.241.136 (talk) 07:59, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Please WP:SIGN your above post correctly (after logging in). --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:30, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 (Week 2) - CHEN SIYU (진사우 )

Dear Professor, The content I sent above did not use the Wikipedia number I registered with, so I sent it again using my own Wikipedia number.I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the [6]training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 08:39, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:30, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) ZHANG JINGYANG (장정양)

Hello,professor.I am in the class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished deadline1. Thank you very much for your inspection. https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Zjy402 (talk) 11:01, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):Wanghao

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the course Training and registered the Dashboard. Please check. 61.253.183.32 (talk) 12:00, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student - please WP:SIGN your above post correctly (after logging in). --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2)- Kim Seongil (김선길)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you.

https://imgur.com/gallery/dead-line-2-wikipidia-training-modules-rB6fA7m

https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/ 김선길 (talk) 13:43, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（Week2）-ZHOU XINRU(주흔여)

Dear，Professor， I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students ZHOUXINRU929 (talk) 01:23, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHOUXINRU929 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1（Week2）：LIUYIKANG（유역강）

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure 。The training course has been completed. and completed registrationPlease check, thank you, professor.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students LIUYIKANG (talk) 01:27, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIUYIKANG Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1：LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor,I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia.

I have completed the training and registered the dashboard.

Please check. Thank you. Peter011008 (talk) 02:30, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Peter011008 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Jeongwoo Rhee (이정우)

Dear Professor, I am a student taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM.

I have completed the training session and registered the dashboard.

Thank you. Leorhee04 (talk) 04:06, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 (Week 2) - LONG ZILIN（용재림)

Hello,professor.I am in the class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished deadline1. Thank you very much for your inspection. https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/LONG%20ZILIN

https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/training LONG ZILIN (talk) 04:09, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@LONG ZILIN Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)---ZHANG LINYUE

Good afternoon, Professor! I am Zhang Linyue from the afternoon class of "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I have completed the student training and also joined the course plan check it please! thank you!AYAO32269 (talk) 04:14, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@AYAO32269 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Sociology of Everyday Life). I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check.Zhuo1221 (talk) 04:16, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)--- GUOYING

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the course Training and registered the Dashboard. Please check. Guoying1 (talk) 04:29, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Guoying1 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - LAOXINYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. And I edited my homepage. Please check. Thank you.Laoxinyi (talk) 04:43, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline1 (week2)-XIXIANGRUI

Dear Professor,I am talking "Everyday Life and Social Structure"(class10:30-12:00) I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training . https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/XIXIANGRUI#course-details. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students please check . XIXIANGRUI (talk) 04:44, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - BAILINHAN

Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure， I completed training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Bai0926 (talk) 04:45, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) -- GUAN YUE

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered on the dashboard. For the extra credit activity, I have also created a user page for my account. Please check.

Thank you. Uuueol (talk) 04:52, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（week2）—JIA YUAN

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the course Training and registered the Dashboard. Please check. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:54, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (week 2)−− ParkChanhee(박찬희)

Dear Professor, im taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at 1300-1430. I have completed [[7]]. [[8]] Yhnahc (talk) 05:00, 14 March 2025 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yhnahc (talk • contribs) 04:56, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhnahc Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week1 and week2,total more than 20edits.Please check here and here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 05:07, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（week-2）--MUYE（모엽）

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure（class B）and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. MUYW (talk) 05:14, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)-WU WENHAO（오문호）

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (25521) and Collective Intelligence in Practice(23280) at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. "This is my Wikipedia user interface. Please check. Thank you. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 05:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) Lee Jae-hyun

Hello professor, I am a student who taking a class named Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia (집단지성). First, I already completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students, and also enrolled in the wiki dashboard for this course. And took several screenshots in my site. Please check it. https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline-1-week-2-collectiove-intelligence-practice-understanding-wikipedia-XL9V8bJ

My dashboard: Dashboard

Also, I created an userpage for my self account(Extra Points). User Page

I'd appreciate it if you could review all of these things! Thanks for your kindness :) JHyunlee (talk) 06:16, 14 March 2025 (UTC) JHyunlee (talk) 06:20, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Good, your userpage looks nice too. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Kim, Kyung min

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed the Deadline 1. Please check.

1. Wikipedia:Training/For students : https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline-1-week-2-post-2-kim-kyung-min-0vB2eau

2. Enroll in the wiki dashboard for our course : https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline-1-week-2-kim-kyung-min-SBcbG4X

3. Created an userpage for my self account : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kkm.hanyang22 [Extra points]

Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 06:23, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Good, your userpage is good too. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)- Kim jong min (hanyang)（김종민）

Dear Professor, I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice(23280) at the same time.

I have completed the training and registered the dashboard.

This is my Wikipedia user interface. (extra credit)

Please check. Thank you! @Kim jong min (hanyang) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:28, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good, your userpage is good too _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)-Liu Junyu（유준오)

Hello professor. I am a student of the courses Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have completed the training for both courses and registered for the Wiki dashboard. Please check this. https://imgur.com/a/88H2qf6LJY2455 (talk) 06:33, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2)- WANG YIKE

Dear Professor, I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice(23280) at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you! Alexk27 (talk) 06:44, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 - Chaebin Park (박채빈)

Hello Professor, I’m Chaebin Park (2021069516) taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. I want to submit the deadline1 assignment. This is my Dashboard and I completed the Student Training Modules. Thank you. CHAEBIN99 (talk) 07:08, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2)- HONG JIARAN

Dear Professor, I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice(23280) at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you! Redyeoni (talk) 07:11, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Redyeoni Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 : Lee jisu

Hello professor,

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I have completed assignments that dashboard and wiki education.

Thank you.Xisuux (talk) 07:13, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

截止日期1（第2周）---JIANGJIASHAN（강가삼）

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you.https://imgur.com/a/PDxbX3q Ttkx11 (talk) 13:30, 14 March 2025 (UTC) Ttkx11 (talk) 04:33, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 week 2 :QIAN ZIYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure（class B）and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 20:47, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(week2) - Lee Yewon(이예원)

Hello Professor, I’m Lee Yewon(2023056917) who is taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure Class A. I am leaving a message to finish Deadline 1. My Dashboard, and i finished Wiki education link.

Have a nice day! Nowey22 (talk) 06:37, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I made a page for extra points. Please check it out! Thank you. User:Nowey22 Nowey22 (talk) 14:22, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 ---FAN XINRU

Hello,professor.I am a student in class Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have enrolled the training [9] and completed the Dashboard registration[10].Please check.Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:20, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 week2 DENG YAZHI

Hello Professor, I’m DENG YAZHI（2024015223) taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. I want to submit the deadline1 assignment. This is my Dashboard and I completed the Student Training Modules. Thank you. https://imgur.com/a/p4ZFjMU https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/DENGYAZHI DENGYAZHI (talk) 10:44, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@DENGYAZHI Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):SHAO TIANYI

Dear Professor, I took both of your courses" Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence" at the same time.I have completed your first course [11] and registered the [12]. Please check it. ––Yeomll (talk) 13:02, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):ZHONG QI

Dear Professor, I took both of your courses" Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence" at the same time.

I have completed your first course [13] and registered the [14].Please check it. —Kylo09 (talk) 14:09, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3)：CHEN SIYU(진사우)

Hello Professor, since I chose your two classes, 일상생활 과사회구조의이해 and 집단지성. I chose the articles "Environmental Social Science," and"Future Shock," and "피에르 부르디외" and "합리적 선택 이론." Please help me check if these four articles are suitable.Thank you, professor. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 14:14, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 As you can see from checking Korean language versions of the English articles linked, they have already been translated, so you need to choose other ones. You also need to tell me which is chosen for which class. I am also not clear why you linked to two Korean articles - they both have a superior version in English so they are not valid for translations from English. Please be clear which language you want to translate a particular article into. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline 1 week2 서아

Hello Professor, I’m xuya 서아（2024072951) taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. I want to submit the deadline1 assignment. This is my Dashboard and I completed the Student Training Modules. Thank you. https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/GAOQINING https://imgur.com/a/4AUSJkc GAOQINING (talk) 14:55, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@GAOQINING Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (week 2): TRAN THUY NGA ( 짠 튀 응아)

Hello, Professor. I am TRAN THUY NGA (2022024920) who is taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure ( class A - Mon: 10:30-12:00/ Fri: 10:30-12:00). I am leaving a message to finish Deadline 1 (week 2). I completed Training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you! 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 17:37, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:33, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 week 2 :JIN CHUYUE 근추월

Hello Professor, I am JIN CHUYUE ，I am a student majoring in Everyday Life and Social Structure in the afternoon class.I have completed the training 小太阳888 (talk) 17:43, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the training [15] and registered the dashboard 小太阳888 (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@小太阳888 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:33, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 week 2 :QIAN ZIYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure（class B）and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 20:43, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:33, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine1 week 2 :LIU MINGHAN（유명함)

Hello professor, I am LIU MINGHAN from the Society of Everyday Life course. this is my deadline1. Please check it. My dashboard .My training Liuminghan (talk) 05:55, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Liuminghan Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:33, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1Week 2:LI QINGLU

Professor, hello. I am LI QINGLU.I have completed dashboard and Wikipedia training.Please check.Thankyou.@ 이청로 (talk) 07:12, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@이청로 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:34, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1Week 2:ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear professor, I'm ZHANG MINGSHUO, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have completed the basics training, and I also registered to the dashboard. Please check here. Thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:34, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Jung Ui Jun

Dear professor, I completed training and registered the dashboard. Thank you. Koolujman (talk) 11:33, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Koolujman Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:34, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Chen Yunlin

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.I completed training and registered the dashboard. Thank you. Songyi77 (talk) 12:12, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:34, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1Week 2:JIANG SIYU 강사우

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.I completed training and registered the dashboard. Thank you.JIANG SIYU (talk) 12:21, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:35, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline(Week2) - 정유나

Dear professor,

저는 Everyday Life and Social Structure(A반) 오전 수업 학생입니다. I completed [16] and registered the [17].

Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 13:06, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:35, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline(Week2) - Kwak dain

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(class A 10:30~12:00) I have completed training(https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline-1-kwak-dain-1UETnKA) and registered the dashboard(https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/Kwak%20dain) Thank you. Kwak dain (talk) 13:20, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:35, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Lee Jeong Eun(이정은)

Hello! I'm Lee Jeong-eun, a student in Class A (morning class) of daily life and social structure. After completing the training, I registered the dashboard! Please check, thank you. Lee0616 (talk) 14:37, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:37, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline(Week1)- Daeun Jung

Dear professor, I am a student in the lecture Everyday Life and Social Structure. (class A 10:30-12:00) I've completed the training and registered the Dashboard . Please check it, thank you. Dj0131dj (talk) 14:56, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dj0131dj Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:37, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

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Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Park suhyun

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Thank you. Park suhyun (talk) 15:55, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

@Park suhyun Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:37, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Bae Jinsu(배진수)

Dear professor. I am taking Collective Intelligence and I have completed join the dashboard and finished the Wiki training. Here is my Wikipage as well. Please check this. Thank you. Jameseugene (talk) 00:27, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jameseugene Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Lee Sihoon(이시훈)

Dear professor,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! Skymir1127 (talk) 00:51, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（Week2）DONG TINGCHUN

Dear Professor, I am studying daily life and social structures, and I have completed my training.[18]https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Dongtingchun Dongtingchun (talk) 05:42, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dongtingchun Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1—TANG YINI

Dear professor,

I am a student of “Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure”. I completed trainingand registered the dashboard。Please check this. Thank you. Tyuni06 (talk) 07:09, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Tyuni06 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（Week2）Chen Yiling（진이령）

Dear professor, I am a afternoon class student Chen Yiling of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have finished deadline1.Please check it. Thank you![19]https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students 222.117.18.156 (talk) 07:32, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

this is incorrect Cylingling (talk) 07:51, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cylingling I assume you corrected your post by signing in - that's correct. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:39, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week) ChenYiling(진이령)

Dear professor, I am a afternoon class student Chen Yiling of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have finished deadline1.Please check it. Thank you! [20]https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students@Hanyangprofessor2 Cylingling (talk) 07:43, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

--Chachaeyoung (talk) 08:14, 16 March 2025 (UTC) test ==

test messages. Chachaeyoung (talk) 08:03, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung @Cylingling The two of you need to remove incorrect signatures from your two posts above, I am unsure which one is whose. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:40, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2): XU YAN

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard. Please check, Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 08:17, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:40, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2):TANG BIYAO

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check, Thank you. Tby0204 (talk) 08:37, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Tby0204 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:41, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - LIN YUYANG (임유양)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I also have created my userpage. Please check.

Thank you.L01yy11 (talk) 08:53, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@L01yy11 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:41, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)- 안소율(An soyul)

Hello, Professor, I'm Soyul An(2024013072), who is taking a class on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Class B - Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I'm leaving a message to complete the deadline 1(Week 2). Please check. Thank you.

Dashboard Profile: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/ Screenshot of the completion of the curriculum: https://imgur.com/a/Dbz9Wku An soyul (talk) 09:20, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:41, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)-YANGCHAOHAN(양초함)

Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class, and I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard. Please check, Thank you Yhan0619 (talk) 10:03, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:42, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - Fatima Lopez

Dear Professor,

I'm taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Colective Intelligence in Practice". This is the link where you can see that I have finished training and registered the dashboard.

Thank you, Fatimald (talk) 10:21, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:45, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week 2) - Choisieon

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure morning class. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I also have created my userpage. Please check. Thank you. Choisieon (talk) 11:15, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Choisieon Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:49, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Natalie Tian

Dear Professor,

I am Natalie Tian Student Number: 9088120256 I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard.

Link to dashboard [21]https://imgur.com/a/QCJNt3L

Link to check my student training assignment.[22]https://imgur.com/a/9RDI7Lp

Please check the link attached, Thank you! LookatmiWiki (talk) 13:24, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@LookatmiWiki Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:50, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Minjoo Kim

Hello, professor. I am a student who is taking a morning class of daily life and social structure. This is the link to the dashboard. This is the link to my student training assignment. thank you ! Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 13:28, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:50, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - MinaZhuang777

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check, Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 13:46, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:51, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Hello，professor. I am a student who is taking an afternoon class of daily life and social structure.This is my deadline1.I completed this training.Please check it.Thank you.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 13:56, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:51, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) — Destiny Samuel

Dear professor, I've finished the modules of the training and I'm enrolled in the dashboard system.

--Michéle Vera (talk) 14:22, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Michéle Vera Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:51, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2) - KANGHUIWU2005(오강혜)

Hello,professor.I am in the class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished deadline1. Thank you very much for your inspection.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students KANGHUIWU2005 (talk) 14:58, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@KANGHUIWU2005 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:51, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) — jongyeol heo

Dear Professor. I am attending your 1 o'clock Everyday Life and Social Structure. here is my training session, and my dashboard, thank you Gjwhdduf123 (talk) 14:58, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gjwhdduf123 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:52, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (week2) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

Hello, professor. I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia'.

I have completed assignments that dashboard and training.

Please tell me if I did wrong. Thank you.

Jujuheee0408 (talk) 14:59, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:52, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) Jeongwoo Rhee (이정우)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(1:00-2:30). I chose to translate 2 articles into Korean. These are two articles I chose: Income inequality metrics, Opera in South Korea.

I would like to know if I can edit these.

Thank you.

Leorhee04 (talk) 00:11, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 Good, the topics are approved and recorded. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:52, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have chosen articles to translate into Korean.

For Everyday Life and Social Structure:

German atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II

Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II

For Collective Intelligence in Practice:

Online hate speech

International Sociological Association

Are they available? Please check.

Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 09:50, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo The topics are ok except International Sociological Association which seems already sufficiently translated to Korean (instead, how about American Sociological Association?). However, you have not signed the spreadsheet so I cannot record them. Please do so at the earliet opportunity after class or during my office hours. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:44, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I have signed the spreadsheet and changed International Sociological Association into American Sociological Association according to your advice. Please check.

Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 01:20, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (week 2) Yinna van der Vliet

Hello, Professor, I am Yinna and I follow the course 'everyday life & social sturcture' and completed the Training see screenshot for proof. I also registered to the dashboard |dashboard -218.235.241.120 --Lotte Young (talk) 01:26, 17 March 2025 (UTC) 02:56, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student (Lotte Young) - please WP:SIGN your above post correctly (after logging in). --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:21, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2) - Wangsisi031012

Hello,professor.I am in the class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished deadline1. Thank you very much for your inspection.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Wangsisi031012 (talk) 06:22, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) SHU YING

Dear Professor

I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check

Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 01:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) - kim cahe eun

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I am posting this after completing the training. Please confirm. Good Night.

Dear student. You have forgot to WP:SIGN your message, and you also left it into the wrong place (see WP:BOTTOMPOSTING). Please fix these errors. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2) - Gayeong Cho

Dear professor,

I am a morning class student of Everyday Life and Social Structure.
 I completed training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Gayeong Cho (talk) 02:40, 17 March 2025 (UTC)49.163.172.236 (talk) 03:35, 15 March 2025 (UTC) 49.163.172.236 (talk) 03:27, 15 March 2025 (UTC) add your signature above. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho Ok - now it is better, but be careful - you also removed part of my previous reply to you _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2): Hyunji Shim(심현지)

Dear professor,

I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A). I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check it. Thank you. --2024099889심현지 (talk) 01:49, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to WP:SIGN your message correctly, please sign it above. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 14 March 2025 (UTC)--

Hello professor, I added my sign. Please check it. Thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 02:32, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Now it is good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Ljhwa (이진화)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class 10:30-12:00) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the dashboard registration and training course according to the syllabus. Please check.

Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 08:41, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Please WP:SIGN your above post correctly. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

I've finished the modification, please check it. Ljhwa (talk) 08:47, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Now it is good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)--CUI ZAN

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure（class B）and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Cuicuizan (talk) 04:47, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,for the extra credit activity, I have also created a user page for my account. Please check.Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 09:24, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Good - you can also create a userpage here, in English, for more extra points _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline(Week2) - Hyunji Kwon

Dear professor,

I'm taking a collective intelligence in Practice class. I completed training and registered the dashboard.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 05:35, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

You forgot to WP:SIGN your post properly. There is only your username, but not date, which tells me you entered it manually. Please use the button instead. Please sign your post in a correct way to complete the assignment. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:37, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

I modified it. Please check it. Khji0620 (talk) 05:36, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Good, now it is ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Ljhwa (이진화)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (10:30-12:00) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I chose to translate the documents into Korean, and the following are the documents I hope to translate.

Everyday Life and Social Structure:

Censorship by copyright

Web novels in South Korea

Collective Intelligence:

Book consorship in china

book consorship in United States

Please make sure that the subject does not overlap with others.

Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 10:37, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa The topics are ok except Book consorship in china which seems already sufficiently translated to Korean (instead, how about Chinese censorship abroad)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:49, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

After sufficient consideration, we have selected a new topic.

The new topic is "Censorship by Apple."

Please review if it is okay to select the subject.

Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 01:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Ok - this is a good choice, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) HONG HAOTIAN

Good afternoon, Professor!I am Honghaotian from the afternoon class of "Everyday Life and Social Structure".I have completed the student training and also joined the course plan check it please! thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 05:05, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,for the extra credit activity, I have also created a user page for my account. Please check.Thank you！ Honghaotian (talk) 05:06, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) YOUN HYUNSEOK

Dear Professor

I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check Youn1002 (talk) 05:27, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:40, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3)

Hello Professor, I am XI XIANGRUI I am a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure (10:30-12:00 ) . I want to confirm with you whether I can translate this article from Chinese to English. thankyou Professor https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%95%99%E8%82%B2%E7%A4%BE%E4%BC%9A%E5%AD%A6 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 05:30, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor it's mistake but didn't delete it XIXIANGRUI (talk) 07:36, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI That article is already translated so you'll need to choose a different topic _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week3) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

I've decided on the main project.

Among the examples, I would like to work on "Corruption in Russia" and "Corruption in China".

I will translate these two English articles into Korean.

Thank you. Jujuheee0408 (talk) 06:30, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Updated topics approved (CiR + Corruption in China) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:47, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) Hyunji Kwon(권현지)

Dear Professor,

I'm taking a collective intelligence in Practice class.I selected two articles for translation into Korean.

1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Australia

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interstellar_travel

Please check the article, thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 06:35, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:47, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3)XUXINRAN

Dear professor,

I'm Xu Xinran, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I want do my main project individually.

For Everyday Life course, I choose translateThe Social Construction of Reality and Future Shock two articles to Chinese.

check it please! thank you! 218.235.241.133 (talk) 06:48, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. The first topic is ok. The second is already translated and you'd need to find a different one to translate.

For example, how about The Use and Abuse of History together with 21 Lessons for the 21st Century? (They are short, so together they'd count as a single project)

Also, you need to log in and sign your post again since you did not, and I am not seeing any "XUXINRAN" in my spreadsheet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:50, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2)- Jo HyeonSeong

Dear Professor, I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice(23280) at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. This is my Wikipedia user interface. (extra credit) Please check. Thank you! Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 07:13, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:56, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)——XI JIAXIN

Dear professor，

I took two classes, "Sociology of Everyday Life" and "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia,"   and chose two topics respectively. All are translated from Chinese to English.

Sociology of Everyday Lifehttps://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%B8%85%E6%9C%97%E8%A1%8C%E5%8A%A8#2020%E5%B9%B4%E6%B8%85%E6%9C%97%E8%A1%8C%E5%8A%A8

Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%B2%89%E7%A2%8E%E5%9B%9B%E4%BA%BA%E5%B8%AE Xjx921 (talk) 07:30, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Good, both approved as discussed in class _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:00, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

GUAN YUE

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A6%99%E6%B8%AF%E5%82%B3%E5%AA%92%E7%88%AD%E8%AD%B0 Uuueol (talk) 08:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol As we discussed, this is not a very good article, so I am waiting for your suggestion for another topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:03, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-XIXIANGRUI

Hello Professor, I am a student studying Everyday life and social structure. （10:30-12:00）I would like to translate these two articles. Could you please help me check if they can be translated? English translate to Chinese "pollution in Korea" and"Chinese clothing " thank you XIXIANGRUI (talk) 07:14, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI The first topic is approved, but the second one is not the best choice due to so-so quality of both articles (English and Chinese). How about translating Fast fashion in China instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:59, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok professor XIXIANGRUI (talk) 10:57, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（week2）-BAI SHIQI

Dear Professor, I took two classes, "Everyday Life and Social Structure “and “Collective Intelligence " which are my training and dashboard registration. Please check, thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 07:28, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I couldn't join the blog. Can you invite me? 白诗棋 (talk) 00:10, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline (Week3) - Kim, Kyung_min

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. In regular class time, I’m completed the article selection in professor office. To complete this task, leave a message about the topic on the talk page as follows. Please check. Thanks :)

1. English to Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender_pay_gap

2. English to Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Biodiversity_loss

And I have also added Article Assignment to our dashboard profile. Link: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_(2025)/students/articles/Kkm.hanyang22 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kkm.hanyang22 (talk • contribs) 04:21, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 07:18, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Good, both approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:57, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1Week 2: NGUYEN KIM CHI (응웬김찌)

Dear Professor, I am NGUYEN KIM CHI who is taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure ( class B - Mon: 1:00-14:30/ Fri: 1:00-14:30). I completed Training and registered the Dashboard. Please check. Thank you!NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 06:01, 18 March 2025 (UTC) 218.235.241.137 (talk) 04:03, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

You forgot to WP:SIGN your post properly. Please sign it to complete the assignment. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:36, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

I signed. Please check. Thank you 218.235.241.137 (talk) 04:04, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

You need to log in first, otherwise it won't work (you are just displaying your IP address). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor,

I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A.

I have selected two articles for translation into Korean. The articles I chose are:

1. Culture shock
2. Data mining

Please let me know if any modifications are needed.

Thank you. Gayeongkim0 (talk) 11:45, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits(week3)-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week3,total more than 10edits.Please check here and here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 01:37, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine2(week3)-JIANGJIASHAN(강가삼)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

I chose to translate the article into Chinese. For Everyday Life and Social Structure: 1.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Royal_Asiatic_Society_Korea_Branch 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Search_neutrality

For Collective Intelligence in Practice: 3.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Resource_mobilization 4.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manifest_and_latent_functions_and_dysfunctions

Are they available? Please check.

Thank you. Ttkx11 (talk) 06:20, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 The topics are good but the last one is rather short. You can shore it up by translating in addition another short article - how about Obliteration by incorporation? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:45, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, thank you for your reply. I will follow your advice to complete the above translation. Thanks. 218.235.241.138 (talk) 00:22, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)---HE ZIXUAN(하자선)

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I chose to complete the translation task alone. I have selected the following two articles for translation into Chinese. Please check them, thank you. 1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_rights_in_Asia 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_of_TikTok ZixuanHE (talk) 05:39, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE I am afraid both topics are reasonably well translated/written in Chinese already. Try to find topics that are not translated well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have re-selected two articles. Please check them. Thank you1.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_immigration_to_Sydney 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_hate_speech ZixuanHE (talk) 14:14, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Ok - topics are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - Lee Sihoon(이시훈)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays(Class B). I want to ask a question about topics. Can I translate these two topics from English to Korean?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2024_Central_European_floods

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Allied_prisoners_of_war_in_Japan

Thank you for taking the time to read this.

I have sent the same to your email.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 06:33, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Yes, they are approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（Week3）LIANG ZHIWEI

Hello,professor.I am a student in class Everyday Life and Social Structure.I want to translate these two articles to Chinese.Please check Thank you Anime club Anime and manga fandom—- LIANG06 (talk) 08:15, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Anime and manga fandom is approved, but the anime club is too short and not referenced enough to be approved. How about translating Sports fandom as your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:02, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

OK then I would like to choose the Anime and manga fandom/sports fandom as my translation Thank you：）！— LIANG06 (talk) 09:25, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:42, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3)XUXINRAN

Professor, I have logged in again. I am Xu Xiran, from Everyday Life & Understanding courses. Based on your feedback, I have chosen to translate "The Use and Abuse of History" and "The Social Construction of Reality" into Chinese. Please confirm, thank you! XXUXINRAN (talk) 09:17, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Or change it to The Use and Abuse of History and 21 Lessons for the 21st Century as per your suggestion. XXUXINRAN (talk) 09:23, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Please talk to me after our classes finish during my office hours - I cannot locate a student with the username XUXINRAN in our spreadsheet, so I cannot record your choices. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:43, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - 양예주(Yang yejoo)

Dear professor,

This is Yang yejoo, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! 218.235.241.132 (talk) 11:16, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to log in, and because of this you did not sign your message correctly. Please try again _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:49, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（week2）：YUE SHUYU（유서윤)

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check, Thank you. 930ysy (talk) 11:42, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@930ysy Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline 1 (week 2) - Kim Gyuri (김규리)

dear professor, This is Gyuri Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. thank you! 1. https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline-1-week2-kimgyuri05-05-kim-gyuri-G8TwVPQ 2. https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/%EA%B9%80%EA%B7%9C%EB%A6%AC05 김규리05 (talk) 11:51, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（week-2）--LIU ZIYE

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure（class B）and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have completed the training and registered the [23]dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Poeyal (talk) 12:23, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Poeyal Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) LI mengchen

Good afternoon, Professor!I am LI mengchen from the afternoon class of "Everyday Life and Social Structure".I have completed the student training and also joined the course plan check it please! thank you Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:46, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 14 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,for the extra credit activity, I have also created a user page for my account. Please check.Thank you！ Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:12, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Good job. I recommend writing mostly in English on your English userpage (you can write in Chinese on your Chinese userpage) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

I made the changes, thank you for your suggestions. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:51, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline1(week2)--kim kiwoong

Hello professor, I'm Kim Ki-woong, majoring in media, and I'm listening to the understanding of daily life and social structure. You have completed the training after completing the subscription to the dashboard. Thank you.https://imgur.com/a/zh4U3tu Kimkiwoong (talk) 12:57, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:51, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) - Kim Myeongjun(김명준)

Professor, I am a student who takes a class at 1 p.m. for Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I also have created my userpage. Please check. Thank you. Myeong220 (talk) 16:50, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:53, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)——WU WENHAO

Dear professor，

"I took two classes, 'Sociology of Everyday Life' （Afternoon class）and 'Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia,' and chose a topic for each.I chose to translate these two topics from Chinese to English. I will include official data and new content.

Sociology of Everyday Life：Here is the link.

Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia：Here is the link.

Thank you. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 01:04, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Good, they are approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1——계해운 (JI HAIYUN)

Dear professor, I am a student in the lecture Everyday Life and Social Structure. (class A 10:30-12:00).I have completed the course training and registered the dashboard.Please check, Thank you. Lrxx123 (talk) 01:20, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor，this is my Wikipedia user interface. (extra credit) Please check, Thank you. @Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 01:41, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) - ZHANG BINGYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you!! https://imgur.com/a/3Dg15qB Zhangzhang111 (talk) 05:23, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine2(week3)- ZHOUZIYU(주자유)

Dear Professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I'm Zhouziyu.I chose to complete the translation task alone. I hope to select the following two articles and translate them into Chinese. Thank you very much for your checking. thank you！

Female infanticide in China https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 06:53, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu Both of these articles have been translated to Chinese already, so I am afraid you'll need to choose something else. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:56, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I'm Zhouziyu. I hope to select the following two articles and translate them into Chinese. Thank you very much for your checking.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_North_Korea

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minorities_in_North_Korea Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 09:47, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu I am afraid these topics have been chosen by others. How about Abortion in India and Street children in India instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:39, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

I would be very glad to choose these two articles. Thank you, Professor! Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 05:51, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week 3) - Lee Yewon (이예원)

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.

I would like to translate these two articles into Korean.

Please check if it is possible! Thank you. Nowey22 (talk) 10:21, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Beyond Utopia already seems translated. Democratic backsliding is approved. For your second topic, how about Business-firm party? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:48, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Based on the professor's opinion, the second topic will be that. Thank you. Nowey22 (talk) 06:51, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - Bae Jinsu (배진수)

Dear professor.

I am Bae Jinsu who taking the Collective Intelligence class. I have selected the following articles as my assignment and would like to translate it into Korean. I would appreciate it if you check it.

- Urban sociology

- Planned obsolescence

Thank you. Jameseugene (talk) 03:49, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jameseugene Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:52, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadine2(week3)- YAN JINJIN (염금금)

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia.I chose to complete the translation task alone. I have selected the following two articles for translation into Chinese. Please check them, thank you. 1.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Proto-globalization 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intensive_animal_farming JINJINYAN (talk) 05:43, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN First is ok second you need a different one _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:54, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

I relearned and chose the second article. Please check it out. Thanks.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Better_Angels_of_Our_Nature JINJINYAN (talk) 07:03, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

This is other option.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yellow_journalism JINJINYAN (talk) 07:17, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Approved The Better Angels of Our Nature _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:26, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week2) - Kim Donggun(김동건)

Dear professor,

This is Donggun Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! Hy donggunkim (talk) 05:52, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hy donggunkim Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3) - Kim jong min (hanyang)

Professor, my name is Jongmin Kim and I am taking Collective Intelligence.

I have decided to translate two English documents into Korean, and the documents I want to translate are as follows.

I will translate them by myself(alone).

Graham Porter (ENG- > KOR)

Atlanta Falcons (ENG -> KOR)

I've inserted the link into the sentence above, and I want professor to check it out and give you approval and feedback.

Thank you.

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 07:14, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) The topics are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:21, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week2) - Jang YuKyung (장유경)

Dear professor,

This is Jang Yu Kyung, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! Jang Yu Kyung (talk) 07:24, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jang Yu Kyung Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week3) - Donggun Kim (김동건)

Dear Mr. Piotr, This is Donggun Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays(Class B). I want to ask a question about topics. Can I translate these two topics from English to Korean?

Book censorship in the United States - Wikipedia

Censorship by copyright - Wikipedia

Thank you for taking the time to read this.

I have sent the same to your email.

Best Regards, Donggun Kim Hy donggunkim (talk) 07:47, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hy donggunkim As I probably replied by email the first topic is ok but the second has been selected by someone else. See email for possible suggestions _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:58, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor, I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. And this is my Wikipedia user interface. (extra credit) I apologize for the late submission. Please check. Thank you. Gayeongkim0 (talk) 10:31, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:58, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2) -LIU XINRUI(유신예)

Dear professor, I am a student who takes a class at 1 p.m. for Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. As well as creating a user page and linking to a dashboard page. Please check. Thank you! 유신예 (talk) 16:45, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@유신예 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:59, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4)-Qu Hongyu(굴홍우)

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I added an inline reference to an article and checked its feasibility with the User:Headbomb tool.Please check the diff link here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 01:34, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:03, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) - Jung YeonWoo

Dear professor. I am a student in the 13:00 class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training. https://imgur.com/a/pWnBWlf Please check. Thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 03:24, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo Good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:04, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-XIXIANGRUI

Hello Professor the translated article I selected has been added to my personal dashboard. Thanks you XIXIANGRUI (talk) 03:49, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 - Lee Jae-hyun

Dear Professor, I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice at Friday 14:30~16:00. I chose to translate the documents into Korean, and the following are the documents I hope to translate. I will translate it alone.

Collective Intelligence:

- Information overload

- Sociology of religion

Please make sure that the subject does not overlap with others. Thank you!JHyunlee (talk) 05:33, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

Plus, I already got permission about editing those article to professor, so I assigned my article in dashboard. Please check it! Thanks for your kindness sincerely.Dashboard(about assigned articles) JHyunlee (talk) 05:44, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Ok - approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:13, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-안소율(An soyul)

Hello, professor. I'm Soyul An, 2024013072 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I selected the two articles below as the topic of the 3rd week's assignment. Please check if it is possible. Thank you.

- https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%99%A9%EC%83%89%EC%96%B8%EB%A1%A0 - https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B8%EA%B0%84%EC%A4%91%EC%8B%AC%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 An soyul (talk) 06:12, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul I am afraid both of these are reasonably well translated to Korean, so you'll need something else _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:14, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-CHEN SIYU-진사우

Hello Professor, I listened to your comments yesterday and re-selected the article.since I chose your two classes, Everyday Life and Social Structure(13：00~14：30）and Collective Intelligence (14：30~16：00）in Practice at the same time. I have selected four articles for translation. For Everyday Life and Social Structure:（I want to translate these two English articles into Chinese.) 1.“Coffee culture” 2.“Korean idol”For Collective Intelligence in Practice:(I want to translate these two English articles into Chinese.） 1.“Street food of Thailand”2.“South Indian culture” Are they available? Please check again. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 06:54, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Ok - approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:15, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) - Jo YeSeul

Hello, professor. I am a student who is taking a morning class of daily life and social structure.

This is the link to the dashboard. This is the link to my student training assignment. thank you :) Jo YeSeul (talk) 07:17, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:15, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(week 2) - Jung youbin(정유빈)

Dear Professor

This is Jung youbin, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 am. on Mondays and Fridays. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 07:28, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@JUNG YOUBIN Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:15, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(week 2) - ImYeonJin

Dear professor

I'm an afternoon class student on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I completed the training and registered for the dashboard. Sorry for the late posting.

ImYeonJin (talk) 13:53, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week2) - 이예나(LEE YENA)

https://imgur.com/a/vwSuZdl

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training. Please check. Thank you. Sorry for the late upload.

Leeyena528 (talk) 13:57, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week2)-고은채(KO EUNCHAE)

dear professor. I completed training. Please check my screenshot and dashboard

Thank you :) Koeunchae04 (talk) 15:48, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Koeunchae04 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:19, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week2) - 남현서 ( NAM HYUNSEO)

https://imgur.com/a/lGsaHZv I'm an afternoon class student on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I completed the training and registered for the dashboard. Sorry for the late posting. Hyunseo050907 (talk) 15:53, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:19, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2)-홍수정(HONG SOOJUNG)

Professor, I am a student in the afternoon class of "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I have completed the training and participated in the dashboard. Please check it. Thank you Sooraon05 (talk) 16:22, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:19, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3):LIU YINGTONG

Respected professor,

Hello I am LIU YINGTONG. Students learning about "daily life and social structures." For this course, I want to translate "Minorities in South Korea" and "Prisoners of War in World War I" into Chinese. Can I? Looking forward to your reply! Ryuthefang (talk) 01:46, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang Please talk to me after class as you need to sign our spreadsheet. The topics are ok but I cannot record them for you until you sign the form. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:21, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) - 양예주(Yang yejoo)

Dear professor,

This is Yang yejoo, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day!Yangyejoo (talk) 03:50, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:21, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 2) yejoo Yang(양예주)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(1:00-2:30). I chose to translate 2 articles into Korean. These are two articles I chose: Anti-Western sentiment in China , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Book_censorship_in_the_United_States

I would like to know if I can edit these.

Thank you. Yangyejoo (talk) 04:07, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo The first topic is ok but the second has already been chosen by another student. How about Campaign against spiritual pollution as your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:23, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

마감일 2(3주차) - 정유나

교수님, 저는 일상생활과 사회구조(A반) 오전수업을 듣는 학생입니다. 다음 두 글을 한국어로 번역하고 싶습니다: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_by_Apple https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_by_TikTok 혹시 이미 있다면 추천해주실수 있으실까요? 감사합니다. 218.235.241.132 (talk) 04:44, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Please leave me a message in English and WP:SIGN it correctly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:23, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3 ) Jung Ui Jun

Dear professor, I'm Jung Ui Jun, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I want do my main project individually. For Everyday Life course, I choose translate "Music (Playboi Carti album)" and "Mike Dean (record producer)" to Korean. If you have any feedback, please comment. Thank you. Koolujman (talk) 07:50, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Koolujman Ok - topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:27, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week 3) Venne Couwenberg

Dear professor, I am a student from your course everyday life & social structure.

I choose to work on the following topics together with Yinna van der Vliet and Destiny:

Create climate of South-Korea

Create climate of The Netherlands

| Translate Korean cuisine to | Dutch language, Koreaanse keuken

I also added the pages above to my dashboard

VenneCouwenberg (talk) 10:23, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@VenneCouwenberg Yes, topics approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:32, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3）：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear Professor

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure morning class. I want to create an article on my own. I want to select To create or improve on" China and the Korean War" in English Wikipedia. ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 02:45, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH This is an interesting topic. Remember that such an article has to contain only information based on reliable sources, including EnglishThe article you create should look similar to Soviet Union in the Korean War. Perhaps instead, you could try to translate an existing article from Chinese or Korean Wikipedia to English? It could be easier _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:27, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor

I want to change the topic and complete the Chinese expansion of citizen journalism.Thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 16:43, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH That's fine, but you'll need to choose one more topic to translate to zh. How about you translate Soviet Union in the Korean War to Chinese for your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

ok！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 09:37, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week 3) Yinna van der Vliet

Dear professor, I am a student from your course Everyday Life & Social Structure.

I choose to work on the following topics together with Venne Couwenberg and Destiny Samuel:

Create climate of South-Korea

Create climate of The Netherlands

| Translate Korean cuisine to | Dutch language, Koreaanse keuken

I also added the pages above my dashboard — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lotte Young (talk • contribs) 12:19, 20 March 2025 (UTC) Lotte Young (talk) 12:21, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lotte Young Good, approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:52, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4): LAOXINYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have added the citation after the article content. 1) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ne_Zha_2&diff=1281442659&oldid=1281441882

2)https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ne_Zha_2&diff=1281556602&oldid=1281556198

Please check. Thank you!Laoxinyi (talk) 12:39, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:55, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week 3)：WANG HONGDA

Hello professor,I am Wang Hongda a student who is taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I choose to translate this Chinese Wikipedia article into English.

Translate title：The Three Siblings Pudding Incident.

Please confirm.Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 16:06, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@WANG HONGDA Good choice, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:59, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week2) - WANG SISI

Hello,professor.I am in the class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished deadline1. Thank you very much for your inspection. Wangsisi031012 (talk) 16:17, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wangsisi031012 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:00, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week2) - WANG HONGDA

Hello, professor. I am Wang Hongda a student who is taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the Wikipedia training assignment.

Please check it out. Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 17:10, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@WANG HONGDA Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:02, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week 2) - PARK SUMIN

Dear professor, I am a student in the morning class(10:30~12:00) of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training. [24]https://imgur.com/a/deadline-1-OOELNgm Please check, Thank you. Cpr0329 (talk) 19:31, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cpr0329 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:02, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week2) Yoon Hongman(윤홍만)

Dear Professor, I’m Yoon Hongman (2022028640), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I apologize for the late submission. Please check. Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 02:02, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:09, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline2（week3）LI ZIKANG

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have chosen articles to translate with my group member. For Everyday Life and Social Structure:（group member is HU ENFAN）English to chinese Female infanticide in China and 《Anti-Korean sentiment in China》。 Collective Intelligence in Practice （group member is HU ENFAN）English to Chinese:《Prisoners of war in World War II》and 《Prisoners of war in World War I》 Are they available? Please check. Thank you. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 02:30, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 See above for my reply to your teammate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:22, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(weed3)ZHOUXINRU929(주흔여)

Dear professor I am a student of Your 'understanding of daily life and social structure'. I would like to translate the following two articles into Chinese. Please check whether it is available. Thank you！ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liangshanpo_nomenclature_dispute https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4_%EC%8B%AC%EB%A6%AC%ED%95%99 ZHOUXINRU929 (talk) 03:14, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHOUXINRU929 The first topic is already translated to Chinese. Media psychology can be translated. Please talk to me after class as you need to sign our spreadsheet; I cannot locate a student with your wiki username in our list. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:23, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2)-Kim Yerim(김예림)

Dear professor

I'm an afternoon class student on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I completed the training and registered for the dashboard. Sorry for the late posting. Check Please. Thank you. Yrmisoee (talk) 05:29, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:33, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 - Chaebin Park (박채빈)

Hello Professor, I’m Chaebin Park (2021069516) taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia.

I choose this two topic and I will translate this article from English to Korea.

- Marriage in modern China

- Japanese people in North Korea

Thank you. CHAEBIN99 (talk) 05:53, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Ok - approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:34, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Fatima Lopez

Dear Professor,

I'm in both "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence" classes, my topics are "South Korea and the United Nations" and "North Korea and the United Nations". Fatimald (talk) 06:03, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Ok - approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:34, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1Week 2:YIN CHANG(은창)

Dear professor, I'm YIN CHANG, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have completed the basics trainingand I also registered to the dashboaedPlease check here. Thank you . Yc01319 (talk) 06:14, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yc01319 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:36, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, hello, I am studying "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Wisdom Practice" at the same time. My articles are Political cartoonPolitical cartoonand Protest song, Protest songtranslated from English to Chinese, thank you professor Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:21, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good, topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (week4) Kim jong min (hanyang)

Professor, I'm Kim jong min ,taking a class on collective intelligence. I've added a reference to the end of the post.

For extra credit, I inserted a DIFF link so the professor can see the difference right away. -> Diff link

If the diff link doesn't work for you, check out these links

Article LINK: Kim Ha-neul , View history

Please check it. Thank you!

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 07:05, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (week2) Kim Minji(김민지)

Dear professor I'm an B class student on "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I completed the training and registered for the dashboard. Sorry for the late posting. Kaldwl (talk) 07:29, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kaldwl Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:40, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week 2) Ju Yewon

Dear professor, I'm taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure B class. I finished training and registered on the dashboard. Please check. Yxvvxn (talk) 07:33, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:40, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week 1)YU XIYUE

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training.https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/2023012388Y Please check.Thank you. 2023012388Y (talk) 07:40, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@2023012388Y Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:40, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline1(week 2) - Jaejun Kim

Dear Professor, I am a student taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 10:30 AM

I have completed the training session and registered the dashboard. Kimjaezzang (talk) 07:53, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:41, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) Kim Minji(김민지)

Dear professor, I'm an B class student on "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I'd like to expand and translate Korean rock, South Korean protest music. Please check. Thank you! Kaldwl (talk) 08:01, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kaldwl These topics have been already selected by other students, so you'll need to choose something else _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:41, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) Ju Yewon

Dear professor, I'm an B class student on "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I want to translate the topic of Sensorship by copyright into Korean. /https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_by_copyright. Please review and reply. Yxvvxn (talk) 08:06, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn This topic has been already selected by other students, so you'll need to choose something else _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:42, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week2)-Choi yun ji (최윤지)

Dear professor I'm an afternoon class student on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I completed the training and registered for the dashboard. Sorry for the late posting. Yumdanggg (talk) 08:23, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yumdanggg Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:43, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline2(week3)-DENG YAZHI 2024015223

Dear Professor,

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Xu ya and I are in the same group, and our topics are abortion in Japan and female infanticide in China. We look forward to your response!

Thank you! 182.220.146.236 (talk) 08:36, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. First, you forgot to log in and sign your post properly. Second, you forgot to tell me whether you want to translate these articles to Korean or Chinese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:44, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline2（week3）- XuYA 서아(2024072951)

Dear Professor,

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Deng Yazhi and I are in the same group, and our topics are abortion in Japan and female infanticide in China. We look forward to your response!

Thank you! GAOQINING (talk) 08:37, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@GAOQINING Please see above for my reply to your teammate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:44, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline2（week3）- XuYA 서아(2024072951)

Dear Professor,

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Deng Yazhi and I are in the same group, and our topics are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_China. Translate both of these articles from English to Chinese.

We look forward to your response!

Thank you!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_China GAOQINING (talk) 08:41, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@GAOQINING Thank you for clarifying you want to translate to Chinese. Both of these topics have already been translated to Chinese so you should choose something else. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:46, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(weak3) DENG YAZHI 2024015223

Dear Professor,

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Xu Ya and I are in the same group, and our topics are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_China.

We look forward to your response!We want to translate it to Chinese.

Thank you!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_China DENGYAZHI (talk) 08:42, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@DENGYAZHI Please see above for my reply to your teammate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:46, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week 3) -FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I would like to select the Chinese version of this article for expansion. Please help me check whether it is appropriate, thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:57, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb I am afraid that article has already been selected by another group. You should also talk to me after class and sign our spreadsheet as I cannot locate your name in our list _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:48, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)- CHEN SIWEN（진사문）

Dear Professor,

I am CHEN SIWEN,I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure, and I want to work on my main project on my own. For understand everyday life, I chose to translate the articles "German Atrocities Committed Against Prisoners of War During World War II" and "The Coming War with Japan" into Chinese. For social structure, I chose to translate the History of Comics, Climate change in North Korea, and United States non-interventionism into Chinese if they are available.

I look forward to your reply. Chensiwen (talk) 12:17, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen 3 topics approved but "The Coming War with Japan" has been selected by someone else earlier _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Physically based animation Chensiwen (talk) 07:28, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen As discussed in class, please choose another topic from the lists _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:17, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear  Professor, As you said in class, I chose Belle's ball gown for translation. Please check it out. Chensiwen (talk) 09:24, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:30, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)- YU JIE（여결）

Dear professor, I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I want do my main project individually. For Everyday Life course, I choose translate "Censorship by TikTok" and "History of macroeconomic thought" to Chinese. For Understanding Wikipedia course, I choose translate “Proto-globalization” and “Intensive animal farming” two articles to Chinese. Dose it available? I look forward to your reply. A15928872517 (talk) 13:22, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 For EL, it's ok but for CI we need new topics _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:07, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

For Understanding Wikipedia course, I choose translate “Sustainable agriculture” and “China's peaceful rise” two articles to Chinese. Sustainable agriculture. Dose it available? I look forward to your reply. A15928872517 (talk) 07:14, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Second one to replace _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:25, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

For Understanding Wikipedia course, I choose translate “Sustainable agriculture” and “Censorship by Facebook” two articles to Chinese. Sustainable agriculture. Censorship by Facebook Dose it available? I look forward to your reply. A15928872517 (talk) 07:30, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Yes, these are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:33, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week 2)WANG RUITONG

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training. https://imgur.com/a/ZsmIQ6q Please check. Thank you. --WANGRUITONG (talk) 01:15, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@WANGRUITONG Dear student. Your message is in the wrong place (see WP:BOTTOMPOSTING). Please fix this errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, sorry I wrote the wrong class name; my class is "Collective Intelligence." WANGRUITONG (talk) 15:56, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - Lee Sihoon(이시훈)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays(Class B). I have updated my dashboard with two topics that have been approved to be translated from English to Korean, please check them out at this link.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 17:36, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 WANG RUITONG & LIN YUYANG

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is the topic my team and I have chosen. This is an English translation into Chinese.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hoax?wprov=sfti1#This is a translation from Chinese to English.顏成坤Please check.Thank you --WANGRUITONG (talk) 01:42, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@WANGRUITONG Your topics are approved, good choices. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:53, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, sorry I wrote the wrong class name; my class is "Collective Intelligence." WANGRUITONG (talk) 15:56, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok, I'll update that _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:33, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - LIN YUYANG(임유양)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have chosen articles to translate with my group member.

For Everyday Life and Social Structure:（group member is BAI SHIQI） Chinese to English： 认知作战（Cognitive warfare） English to Chinese： The Better Angels of Our Nature

For Collective Intelligence in Practice:（group member is WANG RUITONG） Chinese to English： 颜成坤（Ngan Shing-kwan） English to Chinese： Hoax

Are they available? Please check.

Thank you.

L01yy11 (talk) 05:45, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@L01yy11 Better Angels has been selected by another group - how about Enlightenment Now instead? 認知作戰 to cognitive warfare is approved

For Collective Intelligence, your groupmate Wang Ruitong has registered these topics already, but under Everyday Life. Please talk to me after class to check if this is an error (which class are they taking?). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

I just reminded Wang Ruitong that she did get the names of two classes wrong.

And can we change the English-to-Chinese article for the Everyday Life class to Right to repair?

Thank you. L01yy11 (talk) 16:16, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@L01yy11 Ok, right to repair with 白诗棋 is approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2(Week 3) - Jung YeonWoo (정연우)

Dear professor, I am a student of the 13:00 class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B). I would like to translate these articles into Korean:

1) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4_%EC%8B%AC%EB%A6%AC%ED%95%99 2) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A3%BC%EB%A5%98_%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4

Please check if it is possible. Thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 03:34, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo As you can see, both of these are already translated and similar to their English versions _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:05, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I am a student of the 13:00 class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B)

Is the two topics below possible? I checked that it has not been translated into Korean.

1)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_network

2)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_enterprise 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 01:06, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo Yes, those would be ok to translate to Korean. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:36, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - ZHANG JINGYANG (장정양)

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I choose this two topic and I will translate this article from English to Chinese. Please check if it is possible. Thank you. 1. Alcohol in France 2. The World Is Curved Zjy402 (talk) 10:28, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline（week3）WANG HAO

Hello professor, I am a student of "Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure," and I would like to chooseandAmerican CenturyPlease select these two articles for Chinese translation. Please have the professor review and respond. 218.235.241.102 (talk) 06:10, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to log in and sign properly and I cannot locate "WANG HAO" in our spreadsheet. Anyway, American Century is ok but the agriculture in China article has been selected by another student, so you need to choose a different topic _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:36, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I'm sorry my name didn't appear. I am a student of daily life and social composition on Mondays and Fridays, and my Korean name is 왕호.My student ID is 2024067165

Because Chinese agriculture has been chosen, I want to select future shock after the changes.Future Shock，So the two chosen articles are about the impact of the American century and the future shock.Please confirm my student information and review this article.thank you. 61.253.183.32 (talk) 16:10, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Please talk to me after the next class, as you need to add your information to our spreadsheet. Future Shock has already been translated. How about this book instead? Archaeology, Anthropology, and Interstellar Communication _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:40, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, since the professor recommended it, I'll choose this article. Very sorry, I don't have student information. I will confirm it with you after the next class. 61.253.183.32 (talk) 10:43, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）- XuYA 서아(2024072951)

Dear Professor, Hello, I hope you are doing well. Deng Yazhi and I are in the same group, and our topics are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_China. Translate both of these articles from English to Korean. We look forward to your response! Thank you! GAOQINING (talk) 05:29, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@GAOQINING Both of these have also been translated to Korean. Please check the status of an article before asking to translate it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

If you want some suggestions, let me know and I can give you topics to translate (please let me know if you want to translate to Korean or Chinese) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

I apologize, Professor. I'm not very familiar with checking the translation status of articles. When I opened the link you provided, the Korean and Chinese text was not crossed out, so I assumed it was an article that could be translated. Could you kindly provide some advice? I would like to translate the article into Chinese. Would it be possible to suggest two articles that can be translated into Chinese? Thank you very much! I look forward to your response. GAOQINING (talk) 05:57, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@GAOQINING Of course, here are suggestions for an article that have not yet been translated to Chinese: Violence against women . Because it is very long, I will count it for two topics, so you do not have to select another one - this will be enough for your project for this class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:26, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week 3) ImYeonJin

Dear professor, I am a student who takes afternoon class of Understand Daily Life and Social Structure. I want to translate the articles into Korean.

Film censorship in South Korea

Please let me know if I can edit this article. ImYeonJin (talk) 09:28, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin That article is already translated, please choose something else _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the information. Has this document also been translated into Korean?

Tattooing in China ImYeonJin (talk) 07:49, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin Tattooing in China is ok to translate to Korean - topic approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:16, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

But remember you need to choose two topics to translate. For your second topic, how about Criminal tattoo? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:18, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Yes sir! I will translate those two topics. Thank you. ImYeonJin (talk) 10:01, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor, I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. I have selected two articles for translation into Korean. The articles I chose are:

1. Culture shock

2. Data mining

I have updated my dashboard with two topics. Please check them out at this link.

Please let me know if any modifications are needed. Thank you. 121.65.172.133 (talk) 09:39, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to sign, both here (your post, after logging in) and our spreadsheet in class (there is no 김가영 in it). Please talk to me after class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:13, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

PS. Your topics are ok, we will record them when you sign the spreadsheet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:15, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) ZHONG QI & SHAO TIANYI

Dear professor, I'm Zhong Qi, taking the course Everyday Life(Class B) & Understanding Wikipedia. I plan to complete the main project of this semester together with Shao Tianyi.

For Everyday Life course, we choose translate https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opera_in_South_Korea to Chinese and https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%94%B5%E5%BD%B1%E9%A2%91%E9%81%93_(CCTV-6) to English.

For Understanding Wikipedia course, we choose https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_feminism to Chinese and https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%9B%B7%E9%94%8B to English.

Looking for you reply. Thank you

—Kylo09 (talk) 10:12, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Very good, your choices are approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:15, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）- XuYA 서아(2024072951)&DENG YAZHI 2024015223

Dear Professor,

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Xu ya and I are in the same group, and our topics are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/German_atrocities_committed_against_prisoners_of_war_during_World_War_II and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rescue_of_Jews_during_the_Holocaust.

We look forward to your response!

Thank you!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/German_atrocities_committed_against_prisoners_of_war_during_World_War_II https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rescue_of_Jews_during_the_Holocaust DENGYAZHI (talk) 12:11, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@DENGYAZHI See above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:24, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Weekly project - Natalie Tian

Dear professor, In this week I learn and edit in easy basic wikipedia like fixing a lot of Grammar errors. Since the 1st week I did not do much edit. In this week I do in total around 20~30 credits. Please kindly check and let me know if is good for practicing weekly edit. In the future, I will try to edit more in advanced. Thank you LookatmiWiki (talk) 01:35, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@LookatmiWiki Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:34, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) Lee jaejin(이재진)

Dear Professor, I’m Lee jaejin (2022033654), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B. I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I apologize for the late submission. Please check. Thank you. Jaejin123 (talk) 03:13, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jaejin123 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:37, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3) Lee jaejin(이재진)

Dear Professor, I’m Lee jaejin (2022033654), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B. I would like to translate sociocultural evolution and society of education in this project. If you have any feedback, please comment. Thank you. Jaejin123 (talk) 04:30, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jaejin123 Ok - topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:38, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (week2) Chachaeyoung(이채영)

Hi professor, I'm Lee chaeyeong who is taking Everyday Life and Social structure.(pm 01:00) I completed join 'dashboard' I finished Wiki training. Sorry for the late deadline, I'm not good at dealing with Wikipedia yet, so it took me a while. Thank you:) Chachaeyoung (talk) 06:27, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:38, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（Week3）LONG ZILIN

Dear Professor!

I am LONG ZILIN,from Class B of Daily Life and Social Structure. I will complete this task alone. I want to translate the following two articles into Chinese. Please check my topic:

Nepotism

Voluntary childlessness

I look forward to your reply! Thanks! LONG ZILIN (talk) 07:32, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@LONG ZILIN Ok - topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:39, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1（week3）- YUE SHUYU（유서윤）

Dear Professor,I hope you are doing well. I am taking Everyday Life an d Social Structure(10:30 AM.) TANG BIYAO and I are in the same group.I chose to translate 1 article into Chinese.These are a few articles within my selection range：Racism in South Korea，Cannabis in Japan，Censorship by FacebookI want to know if I can edit one of them. Thanks, teacher. 930ysy (talk) 09:39, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@930ysy @Tby0204

For your zh to en project, I recommend 頭城開成寺城隍廟

For your en to zh project, I recommend Racism in South Korea _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:45, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3)—TANG BIYAO

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life an d Social Structure(10:30 AM.)  YUE SHUYU and I are in the same group.I chose to translate 1 article into English. These are one article I chose:頭城開成寺城隍廟,美国协防台湾.I want to know if I can edit one of them.

Thank you. Tby0204 (talk) 10:08, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

See above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:46, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week 3) - Park suhyun

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I want to translate these two articles into Korean. Pidakala War and Yellow Ribbon Campaign and Sewol Ferry Protest Movement. Please check if it is possible. Thank you. Park suhyun (talk) 11:31, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Park suhyun Please talk to me after class as you need to sign our spreadsheet - I cannot locate your name in it.

Pidakala War is ok but very short, so it can only count as half an article. For the other half, how about 2020–2021 women's strike protests in Poland?

Yellow Ribbon Campaign and Sewol Ferry Protest Movement seems already similar in size in ko than in en, so it is not eligible. Instead, how about Cattle in religion and mythology? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:56, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Gaeun Lee (이가은)

Dear Professor! I am Gaeun Lee ,from Class B of Daily Life and Social Structure. I would like to choose a topic related to multiculturalism and racism. Therefore, I am attaching an article related to the subject, so please check it and answer it. Multicultural education / Racism 175.212.161.245 (talk) 11:39, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Remember to log in before posting so you can sign your message properly. Please talk to me after class as you need to sign our spreadsheet - I cannot locate your name in it. The topics seem ok, we will double check and record them after class. You forgot to tell me what language you want to translate them into. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:57, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3):ZHANG XIAOTONG

Hello professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence. My group member is ZHUANG MINNA, please confirm if we can translate the following article.

Everyday Life and Social Structure: 1.English to Chinese: Historiography of Korea,2.Chinese to English:阳关林场风波

Collective Intelligence: 1.English to Chinese: Welcome to Video case,2.Chinese to English:东南日报

Please check, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 11:43, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 @Minazhuang777 Good, your topics are approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:59, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)- Mina Zhuang&Zhang Xiaotong

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence. My team member is Zhang Xiaotong. Please confirm whether we can translate the following articles.

Everyday Life and Social Structure，English to Chinese: Historiography of Korea Chinese to English: 阳关林场风波

Collective Intelligence， English to Chinese: Welcome to Video Case Chinese to English: 东南日报

Please check, thank you！ Minazhuang777 (talk) 11:43, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 Ok - see above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:59, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - YOUBIN JUNG(정유빈)

Dear Professor! I am YOUBIN JUNG. Class A. of Daily Life and Social Structure. I would like to choose this artcle:

The Coming War with Japan - Wikipedia

Is this document possible? Thank you JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 12:44, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@JUNG YOUBIN I am afraid this has already been selected by another group. Also, you need to choose two topics. How about the following: War poetry and hyperspace? You also forgot to tell me what language you want to translate them into. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline2(week3)-kimkiwoong(김기웅)

Hello Professor, this is Kiwoong Kim from your 1:00–2:30 class. For the Week 3 assignment, I’ve selected two possible topics I’d like to work on. 1.The Coming Conflict with China 2.Criticism of communist party rule Kimkiwoong (talk) 13:05, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong Please let me know which class this is for, as you have signed our speadsheet for two of my classes. You also need to tell me which language you want to translate them to.

The first topic is already reserved. But the second (Criticism of communist party rule) can be translated to Korean. Since it is very long, for your second topic you can choose a very short article - how about The Coming Collapse of China? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:13, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week 3) Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, my team members and I have already selected articles that can be translated from English to Chinese. We are just short of articles that can be translated from Chinese to English, so I chose a Chinese article. This article is about the intangible cultural heritage of China’s ethnic minorities. Since the Chinese article is shorter, I will expand the English article. Please checkhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%99%BD%E6%97%8F%E4%B8%89%E9%81%93%E8%8C%B6 Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 10:31, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 The topic is good but it may be a bit too short, so you may need to select another short article to translate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:33, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I know this article is too short. I can expand the translated English article to make it more informative and accurate. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 11:44, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Ok. We will see how it looks; if it is too short we can always select something else later. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:18, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2(Week 3)- Kim Seongil (김선길)

Hello Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I chose the two articles below as the topic of assignment. Please check if it is possible. Thank you.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Coming_Conflict_with_China
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Coming_War_with_Japan 김선길 (talk) 07:22, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 The Coming War with Japan is approved but the other one has been translated already. How about this one for your second choice? Anti-Japanese sentiment in the United States _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

All right, I will register 'The Coming War with Japan' and 'Anti-Japanese sentient in the United States' on the dashboard. Thank you. 김선길 (talk) 11:49, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor,I added two topics to my profile in the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. 김선길 (talk) 12:00, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok, topics recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)- Choiyunji(최윤지)

Dear Professor! I am Choi yun ji. Class A. of Daily Life and Social Structure. I would like to choose this artcle. https://ko.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/러시아_안에서의_인종차별 Information overload Yumdanggg (talk) 13:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yumdanggg Information overload has already been selected. Racism in Russia is ok. How about Herman Kahn for your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:24, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

I'll proceed with the assignment with the article you recommended. Thank you. Yumdanggg (talk) 13:30, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) Jongyeol Heo(허종열)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (1:00–2:30), and I have chosen to translate two articles into Korean. The articles I selected are "Trade route" and "Beyond Utopia"

I would like to know if I am allowed to edit the translation.

Thank you for your time. Gjwhdduf123 (talk) 01:52, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gjwhdduf123 Unfortunately, both of these have been translated to Korean already. Instead, how about Incense trade route and Inca road system? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:37, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Understood. I will look into the Incense Trade Route and the Inca Road System instead. Thank you for your suggestion!Gjwhdduf123 (talk) 14:15, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3)- Kim Gyuri (김규리)

Hello Professor, I have chosen two papers to work on. I would like to translate the text of this topic into Korean. Can I write a dashboard on this topic? I look forward to your reply. Thank you.

my topic : Korean proverbs and Ansan Street Arts Festival

1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_proverbs 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ansan_Street_Arts_Festival 김규리05 (talk) 09:11, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 The topics are ok but as they are very short, to reach the required word count, you will need to translate additional articles. I'd suggest the following: Chinese proverbs and Japanese proverbs, for a total of four (short) articles. Most of your friends are translating fewer articles, but their articles are usually much longer. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:42, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay. Then I will translate four articles: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_proverbs, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_proverbs, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_proverbs, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ansan_Street_Arts_Festival. Thank you for your reply. 김규리05 (talk) 14:41, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) Jaejun Kim

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(10:30 AM.) I chose to translate 1 article into Korean. These are one article I chose:

I would like to know if I can edit these. Cognitive psychology Kimjaezzang (talk) 05:59, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you. Kimjaezzang (talk) 05:59, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Topic approved but you need to select one more topic. How about Collective memory for your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:29, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

That's a great idea. I'll translate the topic. Thank you. Kimjaezzang (talk) 14:49, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-남현서 NAM HYUNSEO

Professor, I am a student who studies daily life and social structures in the afternoon. I have selected two articles to translate into Korean. Could you please check it is available? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Soviet_atrocities_committed_against_prisoners_of_war_during_World_War_II & https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prisoners_of_war_in_World_War_II Hyunseo050907 (talk) 15:00, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

Sorry but I already chose the article Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II and added it to my dashboard four days ago so you might have to change the topic.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 01:32, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_hate_speech

Then I want to change with this topic. It is possible? Hyunseo050907 (talk) 02:31, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

As far as I know the article Online hate speech is also taken. I think the professor will give you some advice on that matter.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 05:32, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 Prisoners of war in World War II is ok, but the other topics you mentioned are reserved for others. How about this one instead for your second topic: Katyn massacre ? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:58, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

okay Hyunseo050907 (talk) 15:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) - Kim Nahee

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training. https://imgur.com/a/MFs2F5y Please check. Thank you. --Naheekim2025 (talk) 14:15, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Dear student. You have forgot to WP:SIGN your message, and you also left it into the wrong place (see WP:BOTTOMPOSTING). Please fix these errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:49, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure(10:30~12:00). I completed training, and Here is my dashboard Please check again. Thank you. Naheekim2025 (talk) 17:43, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Good, now this is correct _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:03, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Hello, professor. I'm Seo-young Kim, 2024096508 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I selected the two articles below as the topic of the 3rd week's assignment. Please check if it is possible. Thank you.

1. Sociology of sport https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_sport 2. South Korean protest music https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/South_Korean_protest_music 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 04:15, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Please talk to me after class as you need to sign our spreadsheet or add your wiki username to it.

Sociology of sport is ok, the other topic has been chosen by someone else already _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello, professor, thank you for your answer. If so, please check if the topic of political cartoon is okay with the other one. Thank you.

Political cartoon https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Political_cartoon 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 14:27, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Yes, this is ok. I approve both as a translation to Korean _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:05, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week 2)-Lee Dong Gyu(이동규)

Dear Proffesor

I’m Lee Dong Gyu(2024050455), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A(10:30 ~ 12:00). I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. I apologize for the late submission. Please check. Thank you. Dong Gyu Lee (talk) 13:41, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dong Gyu Lee Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:08, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (week4) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

Professor, I'm Kim jUHEE, taking a class on collective intelligence. I've added a reference to the end of the post.

For extra credit, I inserted a Diff link.

Please check it. Thank you! Jujuheee0408 (talk) 13:54, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:08, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）：XU YAN（서염）

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is the theme I chose for the Chinese-English translation: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%9C%89%E5%A6%96%E6%B0%94 Xuan6699 (talk) 14:33, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Good topic, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:12, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 XU KEYING

Dear professor. I am a student in the  class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is the topic I have chosen. This is an Chinese translation into  English [25] Please check.Thank you Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 14:50, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Very good, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:14, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 - XUKEYING

Dear professor,

This is XU KEYING, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 14:58, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:14, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）- XuYA 서아(2024072951)&DENG YAZHI 2024015223

Dear Professor, Hello, I hope you are doing well. Deng Yazhi and I are in the same group, and our topics are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/German_atrocities_committed_against_prisoners_of_war_during_World_War_II and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rescue_of_Jews_during_the_Holocaust Translate both of these articles from English to Chinese. We look forward to your response! Thank you! GAOQINING (talk) 11:55, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@GAOQINING German atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II has already been chosen by another group, but Rescue of Jews during the Holocaust is ok. How about Allied prisoners of war in Japan for your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:23, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, Professor. Thank you very much for your advice. GAOQINING (talk) 01:57, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week 3) - PARK SUMIN

Dear professor, I am a student in the morning class(10:30~12:00) of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I would like to ask you to select two articles to translate into Korean and check if they can be used.

Abortion in Japan Biodiversity loss

Please check, Thank you. Cpr0329 (talk) 21:53, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cpr0329 Abortion in Japan has already been translated to Korean. Instead, how about these two short articles (together they would count as one): Abortion in Vietnam+Abortion in the Philippines?

Biodiversity loss has been reserved by another person. How about this instead: Nutrient pollution? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:05, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Ok, Thank you for letting me know. I will translate the three documents recommended by the professor into Korean. Cpr0329 (talk) 03:05, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2(week 3) - TRAN THUY NGA (짠 튀 응아)

Hello, Professor. I am TRAN THUY NGA (2022024920) who is taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure ( class A - Mon: 10:30-12:00/ Fri: 10:30-12:00). I selected two articles. I will translate these two English articles into Korean.

1.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Media_ethics 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Internet_censorship_in_Vietnam

Please check. Thank you! 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 04:04, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 The topics are likely good but you need to stop by my office or talk to me after class, as I cannot find a username 짠 튀 응아 in our list of students in the spreadsheet _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

PS. Media ethics is too low quality to be translated - I suggest choosing another topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

I have chosen another topic. I will translate from English to Vietnamese. Please check. Thankyou!

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vietnamese_cuisine

짠 튀 응아 (talk) 08:42, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

And I will stop by your office next Monday. 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 08:56, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Your second topic is Internet censorship in South Korea to Vietnamese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:08, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) - NGUYEN KIM CHI( 응웬김찌)

Dear Professor, I am NGUYEN KIM CHI who is taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure ( class B - Mon: 1:00-14:30/ Fri: 1:00-14:30). I selected two topic. I want to translate these two English articles into Korean or Vietnamese. 1 Influencer marketing 2. Women's rights Please check. Thank you! NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 06:30, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12 The first topic is ok but you need to talk to me after class because you have not signed our spreadsheet and I cannot record your topics.

The second one is already translated to both Korean and Vietnamese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12 Your second topic is Influencer to Vietnamese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:11, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) : Minjoo Kim

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is the topic that i have chosen. I wnat to translate English-Korean. The two topic is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/TikTok, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KakaoTalk. Is it possible to use these two topic to do my assignment ?? 0r anything wrongs? Please check this. Thank you (2023086671) Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 02:16, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo TikTok can be expanded but

KakaoTalk seems pretty similar and would only count for half an article credit. I can approve it but you should also translate another, third, short article. How about Napster? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)- GUO YING

Dear professor, hello. I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. (class 13:00-14:30). I want to translate The United States cooperates to defend Taiwan Chinese article into English. Please check if it's feasible! Thanks. Guoying1 (talk) 04:51, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Guoying1 I am afraid that has already been chosen by another student so you need to select another topic _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:33, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I chose another subject Please check if it's feasible! Thanks. Guoying1 (talk) 10:14, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Guoying1 This has already been translated. Please check the interlanguage links before suggesting a topic. How about this one instead? zh:周恩来之死 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:22, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

OK, I will translate this article. Guoying1 (talk) 04:05, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - An soyul (안소율)

Hello, professor. I'm Soyul An, 2024013072 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I selected the two articles below as the topic of the 3rd week's assignment. Please check if it is possible. Thank you.

1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yellow_journalism 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_religion_in_India

Dear student. Please remember to WP:SIGN your messages in the future. Yellow journalism has already been translated to Korean, so you'll need to choose another topic. Freedom of religion in India is ok. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:45, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

Yes, I'm not used to using the site, so I'm having a hard time choosing a topic. If possible, can you recommend one topic? Thank you always. An soyul (talk) 00:29, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul Sure, how about Freedom of religion in China _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:23, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you, professor. I will choose the Freedom of Relegation in China and the Freedom of Relegation in India topics that you recommended. Thank you again. An soyul (talk) 04:07, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）LIQINGLU(이청로)

Dear Professor,

Hello, I hope you are doing well.I am liqinglu from 2024052588. Understanding daily life and social structures (Class B). I chose these two topics and translated them from English into Chinese.     I look forward to your reply. Thank you!

1.Chinese immigration to Sydney

2.Do-it-yourself biology 이청로 (talk) 13:48, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@이청로 I am afraid both topics have been or are being translated.

Instead, how about Makassan contact with Australia and Hacker culture? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:28, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

OK！Thank you！ 이청로 (talk) 04:12, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3) / 고은채 (KOEUNCHAE)

Dear professor, I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure (10:30~12:00). can I transfer 'Cannabis in Japan'and Animal 'welfare and rights in China'? (English -> Korean)

please check this topic thank you :) Koeunchae04 (talk) 02:30, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Koeunchae04 Sorry, both of these are already translated. Instead, how about Animal welfare and rights in Japan and Cannabis culture instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

okay! I'll take both topics thank you so much!! Koeunchae04 (talk) 04:16, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）：Lee Yena（이예나)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure A(10:30-12:00). I chose to translate 2 articles into Korean. These are two articles I chose 1. Upper class 2. Fake news

I would like to know if I can edit these. Thank you.

Leeyena528 (talk) 17:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Fake news can be expanded, since only half of this large article has been translated. But the other topic has been reserved by another student. How about translating and expanding Lawrence Lessig for your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Yes, I have confirmed it, Professor. I will take that as my second topic. thank you. Leeyena528 (talk) 04:32, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Dear Professor, I am a student of daily life and social structure in the afternoon.I choose two articles to translate into Chinese. Freedom of speechandHistory of communication.Are they available? Please check.Thank you！ WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 08:14, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy History of communication is ok but freedom of speech is already sufficiently translated to zh, so you should choose something else. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:29, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have chosen a new article. History of communicationandResource mobilization.I choose two articles to translate into Chinese. Are they available?Please check again.Thank you！ WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 11:43, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy History of communication and Resource mobilization have both already been selected by another group.

Instead, how about Origin of speech and Peace flag? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:14, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

OK！Thank you！ WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 12:16, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Ok. History of communication is still available (I made a mistake in my second reply), so you can choose any two of these three topics. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:17, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

OK.I will translate the History of communication and Peace flag into Chinese.Thank you！ WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 05:03, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) JIANG SIYU

Professor, we are students of the two courses Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence. （JIANG SIYU and CHEN YUNLIN）In the course Everyday Life and Social Structure, I will choose two articles to translate from English to Chinese.1深圳卫视2张星特

Chinese to English 1 Ernest Ranglin2Law & Order: Special Victims Unit season 12

Please check here. Thank you . JIANG SIYU (talk) 07:18, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU 3 approved but not the TV show, instead translate this: Sliders (TV series) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:31, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week 2)- ZHONG RUIQI

Hello, Professor.

I am learing about "Everyday Life and Social Structu".

This is the link to the dashboard.

This is the link to my student training assignment.

thank you！

Dear student. You forgot to WP:SIGN your message correctly, please sign it above. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:50, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello, Professor. Sorry.

I have now confirmed that the sign is successful.

Thank you. ZHONGrich (talk) 05:57, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

hello Professor

I have just contacted you, please reply to me

Thank you ZHONGrich (talk) 05:17, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Yes...? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 - Jo HyeonSeong

Dear Professor, I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I chose to translate the documents into Korean, and the following are the documents I hope to translate. I will translate it alone.

Collective Intelligence:

- Corruption in Russia

- Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world

Please make sure that the subject does not overlap with others. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 15:07, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world is approved by corruption in Russia has been selected by another person. How about Corruption in Japan instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:52, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Thank you professor. Than, I will translate corruption in japan. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:50, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you professor. Than, I will translate corruption in japan. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 05:13, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:35, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - Gayeong Cho

Dear professor, I am a morning class student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I will translate this article from English to Korean. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Climate_change_in_South_Korea Please check it. Thank you. Gayeong Cho (talk) 05:24, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho The topic is ok but you need to select another one. Please talk to me after class as you need to sign our spreadsheet or add your wiki username to it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:13, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

I found two new articles, and I will translate the two articles into Korean.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lookism

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Information_overload

Please check. Thank you. :) Gayeong Cho (talk) 08:16, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho Your first choice of Climate change in South Korea (translate to Korean) has already been approved, so you need only one more choice. Lookism is approved as your second topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:38, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2: Lee jisu

Dear professor,

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I chose the topics for the translation process in the class.

I would like to translate the documents below from English to Korean.

Collective Intelligence

- Cannabis in Japan

- Bronisław Malinowski

Everyday Life and Social Structure

- Kim Ju Ae

- Hoax

Please check if those topics are possible.

Thank you

Xisuux (talk) 06:20, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:22, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the confirmation.

I decorated the user page for extra credit.

Wikipedia user interface

Please check this out too Xisuux (talk) 06:03, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:39, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-Youn Hyunseok

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure. I would like to translate this“Middle class”article for Korean

Please let me know if I can use this topic. Thank you. 08:07, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to sign your post properly. The topic is approved but you need to choose one more. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:17, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure. I would like to translate this“Social class”article for Korean too.Sorry for the inconvenience and let me know if I can use this topic. 218.235.241.136 (talk) 04:24, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok, topic approved. Make sure to log in in the future before making edits. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:40, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week3) - Yoon Hongman (윤홍만)

Dear professor, I am taking class 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I chose the topics for the translation process in the class. I would like to translate the documents below from English to Korean.

Everyday Life and Social Structure

- Korean rock

- Upper class

Please check if those topics are possible. Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 04:37, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Upper class is ok, but Korean rock is mostly translated already, so you need to choose another topic _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:30, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, then how about Women in South Korea? Please check if this topic is possible. Nokmalwiki (talk) 04:13, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Ok approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - ZHANG JINGYANG (장정양)

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I choose this two topic and I will translate this article from English to Chinese.

Please check if it is possible. Thank you.

1. Alcohol in France

2. The World Is Curved Zjy402 (talk) 10:27, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402 The articles are fine but since they are so short you'll need to translate another (third) article to reach the required word count. How about The World Is Flat? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:19, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

So can i change the article to Alcohol in France ，The World Is Curved and Tattooing in South Korea ？Is that still short？

Tattooing in South Korea has already been selected, so no. I recommend your topics to be Alcohol in France ，The World Is Curved and The World Is Flat --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:56, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week2) - Haein Lee

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (B). I have completed the training and registered the dashboard. https://imgur.com/a/Z2v2KFC Please check. Thank you! Haein Lee (talk) 04:14, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:05, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - ZHONG RUIQI

Dear professor, I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure （1:00-2:30）

I hope to translate the following two articles into Chinese.

1:Florian Znaniecki link

2:Władysław Umiński link

please check this thank you ZHONGrich (talk) 04:24, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHONGrich Ok - approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:06, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3(week4)XIXIANGRUI

Professor, I made additional edits on my personal homepage. If you have time, please check.Thankyou XIXIANGRUI (talk) 04:24, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Ok. I recommend making it more visually appealing, but you can host poems or drafts there too _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:07, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 - XUKEYING

Hello Professor, I’m XU KEYING taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. I completed join dashboard and I finished Wiki training. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Have a great day! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 04:42, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:07, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Dwadline1-YU XIYUE

Hello, professor. I'mYU XUYUE, 2023012388 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30). I choose this two topic and I will translate this article from English to Chinese. Please check if it is possible. Thank you. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_Cultural_Renaissance https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_Painting_incident 2023012388Y (talk) 04:59, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@2023012388Y These topics already seem similar in both languages, so they are not good choices. Additionally, I cannot locate your name in our spreadsheet. Please talk to me after class or in my office, we need to add your name to the spreadsheet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:10, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

If you want a suggestion, how about Zhuangzi (book) and Life of Pi (film)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:45, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3（week4） Kim, Kyung min

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed the Deadline 3. Please check.

Link: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EB%8D%95%EC%88%98_%EA%B5%AD%EB%AC%B4%EC%B4%9D%EB%A6%AC_%ED%83%84%ED%95%B5%EC%86%8C%EC%B6%94

Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 05:49, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:51, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1Week 2:YIN CHANG(은창)

Dear professor, I'm YIN CHANG, taking a class on collective intelligence . I have completed the basics trainingand I also registered to the dashboaedPlease check here. Thank you .

Yc01319 (talk) 06:04, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yc01319 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:53, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3（week4） Lee-Jae hyun

Hello, professor. I am a student who takes courses named 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. I already have completed Deadline 3, please check.

This is a link that I'd added reference. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%8B%B8%EC%9D%B4%EC%9B%94%EB%93%9C JHyunlee (talk) 06:35, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:54, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3): CAI ZHIHANG

Dear professor, I am in the class Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have confirmed with the professor in Google Mail that I translated both articles from English to Chinese.

1.Climate change in North Korea

2.Minorities in North Korea

Looking forward to the professor's reply, thank you Caizzz (talk) 08:44, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Yes, topics approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:54, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）BAI SHIQI(백시기)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have chosen articles to translate with my group member. For Everyday Life and Social Structure:（group member is LIN YUYANG） Chinese to English： 认知作战（Cognitive warfare）English to Chinese： The Better Angels of Our Nature Collective Intelligence in Practice：（English to Chinese Anti-corruption campaign under Xi Jinping） Are they available? Please check. Thank you. 白诗棋 (talk) 06:10, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 Fir the first class, 认知作战（Cognitive warfare） is approved but the other topic is reserved for another group; see suggestions I made to your groupmate.

For the second one, Anti-corruption campaign under Xi Jinping is ok (the zh article can be expanded from en) , but if you are working by yourself, you need one more article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:26, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, my other personal article is: 公民社会Can it be approved? 白诗棋 (talk) 00:07, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 Yes, that can be expanded, good. I've approved both topics _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:36, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2[week3]--LIUYIKANG[유역강]

Dear professor

I am a student of Your 'understanding of daily life and social structure'. I would like to translate the following two articles into Chinese. Please check whether it is available. Thank you！ Agriculture in China Korean needs expansion ko:중화인민공화국의 농업 / Chinese needs expansion。China's peaceful rise Korean needs expansion ko:화평굴기/Chinese needs expansion。 LIUYIKANG (talk) 02:10, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIUYIKANG Agriculture in China is ok but China's peaceful rise has already been selected by another student so you need to choose a different second topic _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:12, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Korean is needed/Chinese needs expansion zh:电影审查制度 Hello Professor,Can this article be translated into Chinese? LIUYIKANG (talk) 01:04, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIUYIKANG Yes, you can expand Film censorship in China in Chinese. Topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:05, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) YANG CHAOHAN（양초함) &LIU MINGHAN(유명함)

Dear professor, hello.Me and my team membersLIU MINGHAN I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. I want to translate Ceilidh and Scrimshaw's English articles into Chinese. Please check if it's feasible! Thanks. Yhan0619 (talk) 15:24, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 The choices are interesting, but sadly, the quality of these articles in English is not good enough for me to recommend translations (they are undercited).

Instead, if you are interested in old English culture, how about Cú Chulainn and Boudica? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:32, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

PS. However, if you are working in a group, you need to select one article to translate to Chinese and one article to translate FROM Chinese to English _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:33, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Alright, Professor. Thank you for your advice. We will translate Boudica's article from English into Chinese. The article on pancake fruits has been translated from Chinese to English. Thank you. Yhan0619 (talk) 08:33, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 I have recorded Boudica for you. However, I don't see that there is much difference between Chinese and English articles on Jianbing guozi. Culinary topics are fine, but you need to find one that is well developed in Chinese but not very well developed in English _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:59, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Good, Professor, thank you for your advice. We will translate Li Yu's article from Chinese to English. If there are already suggestions for screening, could you recommend them to me? Thanks. Yhan0619 (talk) 14:16, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Li Yu (1611–1680) from zh to en is a very good choice, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:36, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1 (Week2) - Yun Chaeeun(윤채은)

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed the training and registered for the dashboard. Sorry for the late posting. Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 13:27, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yunchaeeun0810 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:44, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（Week4）WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I added a citation. Please check it. Thanks. WSH0927 (talk) 14:47, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week 3)：WANG SISI

Hello,professor.

I am Wang Sisi in the class B of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have chosen my Wikipedia article(宝林茶室中毒案). Translated from Chinese to English.Translate title：Po Lin Teahouse Poisoning Incident.

Please check it out. Thank you. Wangsisi031012 (talk) 00:28, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wangsisi031012 That's a good topic, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:55, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4)-WANG SISI

I am Wang Sisi in the class B of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the task of adding references.

Please check it out.Thank you. Wangsisi031012 (talk) 00:54, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wangsisi031012 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I added citation to this article.

Here is diff link for extra credit.

Please check. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 03:35, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo Good. Please note your reference should contain both the original title (here, Korean) and its translation. See how I fixed it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）：QIAN ZIYI

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is the theme I chose for the Chinese-English translation.This is my link.Please check.Thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 20:55, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne The topic is ok but the Chinese article is undereferenced. Remember that only referenced content can be translated and added to Wikipedia for our assignment. To translate much of the content from that article, you'll need to find references verifying the claims made in it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:22, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, here is an external link to this article. Is this considered a quote?

If this doesn't work, I found another one. Here's the link. Is this topic okay? 218.235.241.134 (talk) 02:39, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, here is an external link to this article. Is this considered a quote?

If this doesn't work, I found another one. Here's the link. Can this topic be covered? Buryab0ne (talk) 02:40, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne Yes, that's a good topic, I'll approve it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:02, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week3): SHU YING

Dear Professor,

I am taking the course Everyday Life and Social Structure. I chose two articles to translate into Chinese.

Here are the links: article1,aticle2.

Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 05:34, 18 March 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Both topics have already been translated or selected by someone else; I am afraid you need to choose others. How about Self-censorship as one of your two topics? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:10, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

OK. I also found two other articles. Here is the link1, link2.

If one of these two articles is usable,please check. Syouziiye (talk) 02:00, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye The topics are ok. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for your checking. Syouziiye (talk) 04:07, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - Jo YeSeul

Dear professor, I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure (10:30~12:00).

I would like to translate the text of this topic into Korean. can I transfer Web novels in South Korea and Online hate speech ?

please check this topic thank you XD! Jo YeSeul (talk) 04:13, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul Unfortunately, both of these have been selected by other students. I assume you want to translate to Korean? How about Bande dessinée and Dehumanization (expand :ko:비인간화)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:05, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

okay! I'll take both topics thank you so much :> Jo YeSeul (talk) 06:07, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（Week3）：WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I chose to translate these two articles into Chinese.：Korean rock，Michael S. Hart.Is this okay? WSH0927 (talk) 08:45, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927: Korean rock has been reserved by another person. zh:迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 already appears translated.

I am afraid you'll need new ideas. How about Lawrence Lessig, for example? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:05, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2I agree, I will translate Lawrence Lessig. Thanks. WSH0927 (talk) 14:24, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Ok. You still need one more topic. Since you are interested in music, how about Japanese rock to expand zh:日本搖滾樂? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:30, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2Can I translate content from English Japanese rock into Chinese 日本摇滚乐 for expansion? WSH0927 (talk) 04:01, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Yes, I've recorded your topics as Lawrence Lessig to zh and Japanese rock to zh _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2OK.Thanks！ WSH0927 (talk) 06:19, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week3) - 정유나(Jung yuna)

Professor, I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (Class A). I would like to choose the following two articles: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_by_Apple and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_by_TikTok. If there are already recommendations available, could you please suggest them to me? Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 08:30, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Censorship by Apple can be translated to Korean. Censorship by TikTok is already translated to both or being translated, so you need another topic. How about Criticism of Twitter? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:12, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your recommendation, I will apply it. Jungyuna (talk) 01:45, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Unfortunatley, Censorship by Apple has already bene confirmed by another student. How about Criticism of Apple Inc. for your second topic? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, I will apply. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 04:22, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - Kim Nahee(김나희)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(10:30-12:00). I chose to translate articles into Korean. These is article I chose: Anti-Korean sentiment in Japan I would like to know if I can edit these. Thank you. --Naheekim2025 (talk) 23:42, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Dear student. Please read the guide on how to post messages on Wikipedia again - your message should be at the bottom of the page.

Also, please read our syllabus - you should select two topics, not one.

Your selection of Anti-Korean sentiment in Japan is approved. For your second topic, how about Anti-Polish sentiment? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:02, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay. I will accept your recommendation. Thank you professor. 118.218.39.63 (talk) 13:47, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(week2) - kim seo young(2024020700)

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed training. https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline1-week-2-seo-young-kim-GyIvdca Please check. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seoyoung0710 (talk • contribs) 10:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710 Dear student. You have forgot to WP:SIGN your message, and you also left it into the wrong place (see WP:BOTTOMPOSTING). Please fix these errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:49, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor. I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure(10:30~12:00). I completed training, and i resistered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. Seoyoung0710 (talk) 13:57, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4)-BAILINHAN

Hello professor, the content I want to create is Superstition in China. I saw that someone has edited the draft. Should I expand directly from his draft or create a new one? Bai0926 (talk) 04:11, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 You can expand (edit) the draft. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:54, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-홍수정 (HONG SOOJUNG)

Professor, I am a student who studies daily life and social structure in the afternoon class. I chose two articles to translate into Korean. If you can carry out the assignment with two topics, please approve it. The theme is 1. novels_in_South_Korea 2. China_clothing. 218.235.241.135 (talk) 04:28, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to log in, you did not sign your post correctly, your first topic has been selected by another person, and your second link is broken. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:28, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I am attaching the two links again. Please confirm the approval. The first topic is Voluntary childlessness and the second topic is Tattooing in China. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 04:48, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Voluntary childlessness is approved, but Tattooing in China has been selected by another student. For your second topic, how about Childlessness? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

ok. I was worried because the topic kept overlapping, but thank you for your recommendation.

Then, let's have Voluntary Childlessness and Childlessness two themes! Please give me final approval. Sooraon05 (talk) 04:35, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 Ok, topics are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:56, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) - SeoYoung Kim (김서영)

Hello Professor,

I’m SeoYoung Kim (2024020700), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure I have selected two articles for translation into Korean. The articles I chose are:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_human_rights https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Health_in_North_Korea

Can I do this topic? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seoyoung0710 (talk • contribs) 14:13, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710 History of human rights has been already translated, so you need another topic. Health in North Korea is approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:59, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2(Week 3) - Hyunji Shim(심현지)

Dear professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A). I would like to translate the article into Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fake_news Please check if it is possible. Thank you. --2024099889심현지 (talk) 01:22, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

Sorry but I already chose the article Online hate speech and added it to my dashboard three days ago so you might have to change the topic.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 06:40, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Fake news is already translated, and Online hate speech is reserved for Yeonsoon, so you'll need different topics.

How about expanding Korean article on Deepfake and translating one on Media prank? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:03, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello, professor. Thank you for your answer. Can I choose http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deepfake on a different topic? 2024099889심현지 (talk) 00:22, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

And please check if https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Media_prank is also possible based on the current standard, thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 00:58, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Yes, Deepfake and Media prank are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:00, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1(Week3) - KANGHUIWU2005（오강혜)

Dear professor

I am a student of Your 'understanding of daily life and social structure'. I would like to translate the following two articles into Chinese. Please check whether it is available. Thank you！

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A3%BC%EB%A5%98_%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%EC%9D%B8%EC%A7%80%EC%9D%B4%EB%A1%A0 218.235.241.132 (talk) 03:14, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@KANGHUIWU2005 Yes, the topics are ok. Please remember to log in before making edits in the future _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:25, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

PS. Please remember to translate from English, not Korean _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:26, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Very well, I am well - informed. May I humbly inquire, Professor, whether it is requisite to render these two articles from English into Chinese and thereafter submit them? KANGHUIWU2005 (talk) 06:54, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@KANGHUIWU2005 Your project is recorded as

Mainstream media to zh

Social cognitive theory to zh

Remember to translate from English _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:09, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - Kim Yerim(김예림)

Dear Professor

I'm a student in the B class of Daily Life and Social Structure. I would like to translate [26] and [27] into Korean, please check. Thank you. 222.237.218.107 (talk) 13:00, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Remember to log in before posting so you can sign your message properly.

Both of these articles have been selected by others and/or translated already. How about these instead:

• Cannabis and religion
• Cannabis in Hong Kong + Cannabis in North Korea (they are both very short, so together they'd count as a single article)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:10, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Yes, Professor. I'm logged in, I'll complete the assignment with the two articles you recommended, thank you very much :) Yrmisoee (talk) 13:24, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee Ok. Please talk to me after class as I cannot locate your name in our spreadsheet, you have to record your information in it so I can record your choices there. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:26, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I didn't write my Wikipedia nickname correctly on the spreadsheet. I've corrected it, so please check it out. I apologize for the hassle. Yrmisoee (talk) 04:39, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee Ok. I recorded your topic as

Cannabis and religion to kr

Cannabis in Hong Kong + Cannabis in North Korea to kr _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:11, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-WANG YIKE(왕흘가)

Hello, professor. I'm a student in this class of Collective Intelligence in Practice. I will complete a Chinese translation into English and an English translation into Chinese with my team member @LJY2455. I would like to know if I can edit these.Thank you. . Alexk27 (talk) 05:47, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 See above - you need a different zh to en topic, unfortunately _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:50, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

I have selected a new English Wikipedia article to expand. Could you please tell me if this article by Tan Zhenlin is feasible? Thank you! Alexk27 (talk) 04:21, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Yes, that is ok. Approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:14, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（Week4）HUENFAN

Dear professor I'm  HU ENFAN ,taking a class on collective intelligence,andSociology of Everyday Life  I added content to two articles in total。One is Shadowverse, which is my favorite CCG game. I added the latest information about the sequel of this game.And another one is its Production company Cygame‘s Games released  , in which I added Shadowverse worlds beyond.

For extra credit, I inserted two DIFF1 DIFF2

Please check it. Thank you! 호인본 (talk) 11:14, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Good attempt, but I had to remove your changes to Shadowverse. The content (text) is good, but there are major formatting errors - please review this. Note that your edit removed external links and the {{Cygames}} navigational template. Additionally, references should be done through footnotes, not by external links in the text. Please read the following guides: Wikipedia:External links, Help:VisualEditor#Adding_a_new_reference Please try again or ask me for help during class activities or my office hours _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:43, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

I made corrections and added references to both articles, please check

diff1，diff2 호인본 (talk) 07:21, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:17, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - HONG HAOTIAN

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I chose to translate articles into English.These is article I chose: 1 2 I would like to know if I can edit these. Thank you. Honghaotian (talk) 00:13, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian While 中國風俗畫 is an interesting and important topic, much of the article has no references (footnotes), and so I'd recommend a different topic (one that has more footnotes). 臺灣編查流寓 seems ok and I can record it as one of your topics. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

I have chosen a new article. I would like to know if I can edit it. Thank you. Honghaotian (talk) 08:25, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Yes, this is ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:20, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) Yinna van der Vliet

Dear professor, I am Yinna van der Vliet and I completed deadline 3 for Everyday Life and Social Structure. I translated the chapter "prehistory" to "De oertijd". Please check the following link: [keuken|Koreaanse keuken] Lotte Young (talk) 02:06, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lotte Young Unfortunately the link is broken. Please make sure the link you send me works; otherwise, it is difficult for me to review it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

The link works on my laptop. Since we are translating the Wikipedia page into Dutch, the link is a Dutch link. I don't know how to make the link work otherwise.

https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koreaanse_keuken Lotte Young (talk) 00:46, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lotte Young Very good start. See the history of your work at Bewerkingsgeschiedenis van Koreaanse keuken - Wikipedia and check what comments and fixes other volunteers have made since your edit, and try to learn from them _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:22, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) Venne Couwenberg

Dear professor, I am Venne Couwenberg and I completed deadline 3 for Everyday Life and Social Structure.I translated the chapter "periode van de drie koningen". Please check the following link: [keuken|Koreaanse keuken] VenneCouwenberg (talk) 02:12, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@VenneCouwenberg Your message is identical to your friend's above, and so is my reply, except that I'll add that this assignment should be completed individually. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I appoligize for the inconvienence.

Something went wrong when we were writing on the talk page. We both worked individually on the same article and tried to help eachother.

I meant to say in my message that I worked on the chapter "periode van de drie koningen".

If the link works now, you should be able to see in the edit history that we both worked on a different part of the wiki page.

[28]https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koreaanse_keuken

VenneCouwenberg (talk) 00:39, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@VenneCouwenberg Yes, good, see above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:23, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）--MUYE

Dear Professor, I am studying the courses "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I chose these four articles for translation, from English to Chinese. Everyday Life and Social Structure：1.Journalistic objectivity 2.Evolution of morality Collective Intelligence in Practice： 1.Operationalization 2.Upper class Please check it out. Thank you. MUYW (talk) 06:12, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Good, all approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:24, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)--YAN JINJIN

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the task of adding references.Please check. Link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1282244767 JINJINYAN (talk) 07:09, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN Your edit did not add any reference, just removed some code, damaging the page, and as such have been reverted by another volunteer. Please study the instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2 They should help you complete the assignment _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:39, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) -- GUAN YUE

Dear professor,

I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For my Wikipedia translation assignment, I have chosen the articles titled “Maxim's Caterers” and “Cognitive warfare”. Both articles are translated from Chinese into English.

Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 07:36, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Good, all approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:40, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) -- CUI ZAN

Dear professor,

I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For my Wikipedia translation assignment, I have chosen the articles titled link1 link2” and “link1 link2”. All the articles are translated from English into Chinese.

About the Everyday Life class — I was originally in the 10:30 session, but as I mentioned before, I’ve switched to the 1:00 PM class due to some personal reasons.

Thanks a lot for your understanding! Cuicuizan (talk) 07:47, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:40, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadlin3 (Week4) -- Jo HyeonSeong

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I added citation to this article.

You can check it here.

Please check it. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 12:01, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:41, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week4 more than 10edits.Please check here and here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 13:59, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:42, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) ZHOUXINRU929(주흔여)

Dear Professor,I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.On Monday, you asked me to find another article to translate. I would like to translate the following article into Chinese. Please check if it is available. thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%88%98%EB%A9%B4_%EC%9C%84%EC%83%9D https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94_%EB%AA%A8%EC%9E%90%EC%9D%B4%ED%81%AC ZHOUXINRU929 (talk) 06:58, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHOUXINRU929 Sleep hygene is already translated sufficiently but you can expand Cultural mosaic (from English, not Korean).

Your projects are recorded as

Media psychology to zh

Cultural mosaic to zh _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:13, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadlin3 (Week4) -- WU WENHAO （오문호）

Dear professor,

I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'.

I have added citations to the article Unemployment in China. Please take a look. Thank you. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 08:30, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:14, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (week 4)- Yewon Lee (이예원)

Professor, I'm taking an understanding of everyday life and social structure a class. I added citation to this article. Here's the diff link for extra points.

Thank you. Nowey22 (talk) 09:22, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Ok, but a Korean language video is not a useful reference on English Wikipedia. Please use printed sources next time. Use of videos as references is also discouraged as they are hard to use to verify content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:16, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (week 4)- Mina Zhuang

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the task of adding references.Please check if this is correct （ link ） thank you！ Minazhuang777 (talk) 09:29, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 Ok - but it is more useful to add citations outside the WP:LEAD _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:17, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (week4) - Kwon Hyunji(권현지)

Dear professor,

I'm taking a collective intelligence in Practice class. I added citation to this article. I have attached a diff link for additional credit. Please check this link. Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 15:01, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4): SHU YING

Dear professor,

I am taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'.

I have added a citation in this article.

Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 04:14, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) - Jeongwoo Rhee (이정우)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM.

I add citation to this article.

For extra credit, here is my diff link.

Please check it, thank you Leorhee04 (talk) 04:41, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:19, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (week 4)- CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor

I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure.

I added citation to this article

I have attached a diff for additional credit and the diff

please check this thank you Caizzz (talk) 04:45, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

I made some changes to these article

diff and diff Caizzz (talk) 05:25, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:19, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) - 정유나(Jung yuna)

Professor, I am taking a course on understanding daily life and social structures. I have added a quote Here is the diff link for the additional points. Jungyuna (talk) 05:06, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:20, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）—LI ZIKANG

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I add citation to the article 1 and 2

For extra credit, here is my diffand diff

Please check it, thank you

Lzk15038863666 (talk) 06:43, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline3 (week4) - 임연진(Im Yeon Jin)

Dear Professor, I am listening to 'everyday life and social structure' at 1 pm.

And I added a quote to this article.

And here is my diff link.

Please check. Thank you. ImYeonJin (talk) 12:06, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:27, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4):ZHONG RUIQI

Hello, Professor.

I am learing about "Everyday Life and Social Structu".

This is the article to the dashboard.

This is diff

This is diff

Please cheack these, thank you. ZHONGrich (talk) 12:14, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHONGrich Good attempt. but I removed your edit to topaz as the website you used seems to be a commercial advertising, rather then a scientific or reliable newspaper source. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:30, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-김다영(kim da young)

Professor, I am a student who studies daily life and social structures in the morning. I have selected two articles to translate into Korean. Could you please check if they are available for use? Sex-ratio imbalance in China , Web novels in South Korea Day123kk (talk) 10:10, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Sex-ratio is ok and approved but Web novels in South Korea is chosen by someone else, so you'll need to choose another topic _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:31, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

How about Animal welfare and rights in China? Day123kk (talk) 02:01, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk That has been selected by another student. How about Animal welfare and rights in India instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:04, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay! I’ii choose it! Day123kk (talk) 01:57, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（Week 3）—JIA YUAN

Dear professor, hello. I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. (class B 13:00-14:30). I want to translate Climate change in South Korea from English to Chinese.Please check if it's feasible! Thanks. Dear Professor, I haven't received the invitation to join the blog. Please send me the link again. Thank you.Dear Professor, I haven't received the invitation to join the blog. Please send me the link again. Thank you. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:49, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Climate change in South Korea is ok, but you'll need to choose one more topic. Blog invitations for everyday life class will be sent out later. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:32, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, please help me choose another translation. Thank you. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:13, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy How about Individual action on climate change? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:51, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

OK, I will translate this article. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:14, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - LI MENGCHEN

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I chose to translate articles into English.These is article I chose:1 2 I would like to know if I can edit these. Thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 00:07, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Those are both good topics to translate from Chinese to English, if this is what you are asking. I can approve them as your assignments _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:52, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for approving them as my assignment. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:19, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Jung YeonWoo (정연우)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM. I add citation to this article. For extra credit, here is my diff link. Please check it, thank you 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 07:56, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo Your links above are incorrect; there are no edits by your account to the article(s) linked. Please fix your links. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:23, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor

I try this again.

Please check it

I added a quote to this article

and here is my diff link.

Thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 04:36, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo Now it is ok. Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4):ZHANG XIAOTONG

Hello professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I added citations to this article which can be viewed here, also I added the diff for extra credit, please check, thanks. Hyodong318 (talk) 08:12, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:25, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 However, your edit to New Year was reverted, as another volunteer raised questions about the quality of http://www.shuxueji.com/w/4456 which looks like a wiki, and as such is probably just a copy of Wikipedia and/or Baidu stealing information from them. If you disagree, please explain on the talk page of that article what makes that website reliable. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

I added the citation again in another place, please check. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:01, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 That seems a bit better, but in the future, it is best to primarily use academic and news sources. There are many low quality websites that simply copy content from Wikipedia _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:52, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2（week3）:LIU JUNYU(유준오)

Professor, I am a student of the two courses Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence. In the course Everyday Life and Social Structure, I will choose two articles to translate from English to Chinese.1.Royal Asiatic Society Korea Branch 2.Sociology of race and ethnic relations.

In the Collective Intelligence class I will work in groups.@Alexk27

English to Chinese：Allied prisoners of war in Japan Chinese to English：https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A0%AD%E5%9F%8E%E9%96%8B%E6%88%90%E5%AF%BA%E5%9F%8E%E9%9A%8D%E5%BB%9F

I would like to know if I can edit these.Thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 05:44, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 @You have not signed the spreadsheet to indicate which EL class you take - morning or afternoon?

Regarding your topic choices, Royal Asiatic Society Korea Branch has already been selected by another student. Sociology of race and ethnic relations is ok.

For CI, Allied prisoners of war in Japan I to zh is ok and I have reserved it for you. However, another group has already chosen 頭城開成寺城隍廟 so you'll need to select another topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:50, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor. My class of Everyday Life and Social Structure is at 10:30am and my class of Collective Intelligence is at 2:30pm. Can I edit the article Hoax translated from English to Chinese? If that still doesn't work, please recommend an article.Thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 01:46, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Hoax LJY2455 (talk) 01:52, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Since Hoax has already been selected by another group, how about this: Ghostwriter? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, professor. LJY2455 (talk) 06:08, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)--계해운 (JI HAIYUN)

Dear professor, hello. I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. (class A 10:30-12:00). I want to translate Zheng Peimin's Chinese article into English. Then add introductions to the characters featured in the annual China Person of the Year award. Please check if it's feasible! Thanks. Lrxx123 (talk) 01:48, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 The topics are fine; the first article is very short but if you can translate the second one, then together they should be enough _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:08, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok professor, I will add Zhang Rongsuo to translate this article into English. Please confirm. Lrxx123 (talk) 23:54, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Nice choice, approved as your third final article _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:04, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have not received your invitation to enter bolg. My email address is {hyunyyds@gmail} Please confirm, thank. you!@Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 04:48, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Invitations to that class blog will be sent later. Blogging is not obligatory for that class _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:27, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline1（Week3）-CHENYILING（진이령)

Dear professor I am a student of Your 'understanding of daily life and social structure'. I would like to translate the following two articles into Chinese. Please check whether it is available. Thank you！https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B8%ED%84%B0%EB%84%B7_%EB%B0%88 Cylingling (talk) 04:02, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cylingling You did not link two articles; your single link is not working. You should be translating from English, not Korean, anyway. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:27, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, hello. Here are the two articles I have chosen again. I want to translate it all into Chinese. Check it out.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disinformationhttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech Cylingling (talk) 05:49, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cylingling Ok. Disinformation is approved. Freedom of speech is already sufficiently translated.

How about this topic instead: Harm principle _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)LIANG ZHIWEI

Dear professor,I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure. I add citation to this article And this is the diff Please check Thank you-- LIANG06 (talk) 19:30, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Good. Please remove the unnecessary code you added to the article, however (== visible in the top). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:37, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor I have already removed the== in the article Please check-- LIANG06 (talk) 03:38, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:36, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)--HE ZIXUAN

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the task of adding references.Please check. Link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1282242812 ZixuanHE (talk) 06:52, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE I am afraid this is not correct. What you have done is added an external link (which you have done correctly, and it will count for extra credit). However, to complete this assignment, you need to add a reference (footnote).

Please study the instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2

They should help you complete the assignment _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:26, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, please check.Link：https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E8%8C%85%E5%8F%B0%E9%85%92&diff=prev&oldid=86600230#cite_note-5 ZixuanHE (talk) 07:40, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) WANG HAO

Dear professor,I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure. I add citation to this article And this is the diff Please check Thank you Wanhink (talk) 02:06, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Wanhink Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:47, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) - An soyul(안소율)

Hello, Professor, I'm Soyul An(2024013072), who is taking a class on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Class B - Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30).

I have added a citation to the article "https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Street_Woman_Fighter#References". Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Street_Woman_Fighter&diff=prev&oldid=1282712638

Please let me know if any changes are needed. Thank you! An soyul (talk) 04:37, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:55, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) -LI MENGCHEN

Dear professor,I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure. I add citation to this article And this is the diff Please check Thank you Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:47, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:58, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) -HONG HAOTIAN

Dear professor,I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure. I add citation to this article And this is the diff Please check. Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 04:58, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:58, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) -- GUAN YUE

Dear professor,

I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article James Wu. And here is my diff link.

Please check. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 04:59, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:59, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）BAI SHIQI（백시기)

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I added references to the article and corrected incorrect citations. here is mydiff link Please refer to it, thank you. 白诗棋 (talk) 05:05, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 This is not correct, as Wikipedia cannot be used as a source for itself. Please remove these references and add ones that are reliable (to newspaper, academic works, or government websites). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:02, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) -- CUI ZAN

Dear professor. I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link.

Please check. Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 05:06, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:04, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)--CHEN SIYU진사우

Hello Professor, since I chose your two classes, Everyday Life and Social Structure(13：00~14：30）and Collective Intelligence (14：30~16：00）I modified these two articles separately.1.Original article：龙抄手 diff line is:[29]https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=龙抄手&diff=prev&oldid=86598549 2.Original article：担担面 diff line is:[30]https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=担担面&diff=prev&oldid=86598799 Please check. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:14, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, I added another article I cited.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%89%E5%A4%A7%E7%82%AE

Below are the references I have added after making the modifications.

https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E4%B8%89%E5%A4%A7%E7%82%AE&diff=prev&oldid=86599169

Help me check, thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:58, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 This is not a reference, just adding unreferenced content. In the second example, your reference should follow the text (sentence) it serves to verify. Adding a reference to the first word is not very helpful. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 - ljhwa (이진화)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (10:30-12:00) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I added citation to this article.

Here is diff link for extra credit.

Please check. Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 05:47, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa The ref is formatted correctly, but you need to explain how it is reliable. Is this an official channel of the group, or of some reliable organization, like a newspaper? At what point in the video does it say that the song was was influenced of Arabic music? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:12, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) Ju Yewon

Dear professor, I'm an B class student on "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I chose a new topic again. Can I translate the subject of Cannabis in Japan? Please review and reply. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Japan Yxvvxn (talk) 06:20, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn That topic has been selected by others. You need to choose a different one and tell me what language you want to translate it to. Remember you need at least two topics to translate if you are translating to Korean or Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:13, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week3) Kim Mini (김민지)

Dear professor, I'm an B class student on "Everyday Life and Social Structure". You said that the topics I chose are already in progress, so I chose a new topic. I'd like to expand and translate Censorship of TikTok. Please check if this topic is possible. Thank you! Kaldwl (talk) 06:21, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kaldwl That topic is already translated to Korean of Chinese. How about Think of the children instead? Remember: you'll need to choose two topics total. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:15, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- WANG YIKE（왕흘가）

Dear professor, I am a member of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This is the editing of Hu Haifeng that I have completed. Thank you Alexk27 (talk) 06:28, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)-LIU JUNYU(유준오)

Dear professor. I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure ， Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have added some citations to the article.Please check this. thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 06:39, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Good attempt. However, the first reference was removed because it is unreliable (blog). Please find a reliable reference for this topic - academic or newspaper. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5) - Chaebin Park (박채빈)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice. I created my personal sandbox.

Thank you. CHAEBIN99 (talk) 06:58, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 This is a good start _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:25, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- XU KEYING

Dear professor,

I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link.

Please check. Thank you! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 07:47, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:27, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

데드라인1(주2) -김다영(kim da young)

Professor, I am a student in the morning class of *Everyday Life and Social Structure*. I have completed the training and participated in the dashboard. Please check it. Thank you. Day123kk (talk) 10:49, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You did not WP:SIGN your post correctly. Please try again. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

I did it. please check it please. thank you Day123kk (talk) 01:51, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:12, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)-홍수정(HONG SOOJUNG)

I am Hong soojung in the class afternoon of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the task of adding references.

You can enter this link. Please check it out.Thank you! Sooraon05 (talk) 08:00, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

Posts that can show the difference between the two editions will only be visible by clicking on the bottom "view the difference" on the corresponding link. Please check — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sooraon05 (talk • contribs) 08:05, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 Your link above is incorrect; there are no edits by your account to the article linked. Please fix your links. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:24, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

I'm attaching it again. It has been edited with references that fit the content.

"The timing of marriage women's decision to have no children and

A Study on Factors" Sooraon05 (talk) 04:25, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 The reference is reliable but you did not format it correctly, and it had to be removed from the article. Please format your reference correctly. See here how to do this: User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2 (step 2) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:50, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

I am attaching this link

again, and it. Sooraon05 (talk) 13:01, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 Your edit has been rejected as still malformatted (if a bit better - but still not good enough, see here) and likely not relevant. See explanation provided at Voluntary childlessness: Revision history - Wikipedia .

If you believe it is relevant to the cited sentence, please provide a relevant quotation from your source on the talk page of the article, as requested by the reviewer. If you can argue your point well (show how your reference is relevant), I will consider it for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:21, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)--WANG HONGDA

Hello professor,I am Wang Hongda a student who is taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed the task of adding the application, please check it.

Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 08:53, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@WANG HONGDA Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:31, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)LYU YANGCHENG

Dear Professor, I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice". This is the assignment for week 4.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taoism&diff=1282726865&oldid=1282726105andhttps://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yin_and_yang&diff=1282739703&oldid=1282618720Added citations to the article, please check，Thank you, Professor Hanyangdaxue (talk) 09:50, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue As discussed in class, please correct the first reference to English (as the cited page is just a Chinese translation of a page that is originally in English) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:32, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)WU JIACHEN

Dear Professor. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"I have completed the task of adding the application. Both adding are in the same article.Please check it. A1246632822 (talk) 11:17, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:35, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)LIU YINGTONG

Dear Professor. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" .For the assignment in Week 4, I added some citations to the article. Please check it. Thank you. Ryuthefang (talk) 11:29, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:36, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)YU JIE

Dear Professor. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"I have completed the task of adding the application. Both adding are in the same article.Please check it. A15928872517 (talk) 11:44, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:41, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)--CHEN SIYU진사우

Hello Professor, I took your advice and studied and revised it.since I chose your two classes, Everyday Life and Social Structure(13：00~14：30）and Collective Intelligence (14：30~16：00）I chose this article.The original text is:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/三大炮 I quoted two parts. [31]https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=三大炮&diff=prev&oldid=86599169 [32]https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=三大炮&diff=prev&oldid=86602964 Chensiyu2004 (talk) 11:56, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good. But for your first example, consider this: A reference should be added to the end of a sentence or paragraph, to verify claims made in it. It is not necessary to add a reference to the title of the article. How is it helpful? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:43, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) - Lee Sihoon(이시훈)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays(Class B). I added a reference(quote [5]) to Japanese war crimes wiki article.

I'm also attaching diff link here. please check them out at this link.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 12:21, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:48, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Hello, professor, I am Seo Young Kim, 2024096508 taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure class B. I am attaching the 4th week assignment, so please check it. Thank you.

[33] 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 13:12, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:49, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- Kim Seongil(김선길)

Hello professor,I am Seongil Kim, taking your Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure class A. I have completed the citation assignment. Here is the link to my edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Giriboy And the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Giriboy&diff=1282766093&oldid=1268478467 Please check. Thank you. 김선길 (talk) 13:55, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Very good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:51, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- Youn Hyunseok

Hello professor. Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.I add citation middle class and social class. Let me know if there is a problem. Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 08:10, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:59, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) Lee jaejin(이재진)

Dear Professor, I’m Lee jaejin taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B. I added a citation to this article. For extra credit, here is my diff Please check. thank you. Jaejin123 (talk) 09:42, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jaejin123 Please format your citation using citation templates, as explained and requested in the description of the activity in the syllabus _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:03, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3)---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello Professor. I am JIA MENGZHUO, a student of group 9.I will edit the article (National Comprehensive Fire and Rescue Team) translated from Chinese to English. Please check.Zhuo1221 (talk) 12:01, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Good choice, approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:04, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)-김다영(kim da young)

Hello Professor,

I am a student in the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" morning class. I have added a citation for reference, and I have also included the diff link for your review. Day123kk (talk) 12:50, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:06, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)--XI JIAXIN

Dear professor. I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link.Please check. Thank you! Xjx921 (talk) 13:26, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Very good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this.

Since you added some blue links to Chinese Wiki articles, for extra credit, you can use this tool to do it even better: Template:Interlanguage link. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:12, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (weak3): Park Chanhee(박찬희)

Dear professor, I am taking a class 'everyday life and social structure'. Here are my topic to translate. Thank you. 1) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_War 2) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Republic_of_Korea_Air_Force Yhnahc (talk) 13:14, 27 March 2025 (UTC)Yhnahc (talk) 13:12, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhnahc I assume you want to translate them to Korean? In either case, they are not very good choices. Korean War is already similarly developed in Korean, and as for the Air Force, the English article is undercited and not good enough quality to translate. Please choose other topics instead or talk to me after class and I'll give you suggestions. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:34, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, Thank you for your feedback, Professor. Would these topics be acceptable instead?

1) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_people_in_North_Korea

2) Conscription in North Korea Yhnahc (talk) 04:24, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhnahc Japanese people in North Korea seems to be already translated to Korean. Conscription in North Korea is ok and I'll record it as your first choice. For another topic how about two shorter articles that together would count as one: North Korean ghost ships and North Korean space program? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, I understand! Thank you, Professor! Yhnahc (talk) 15:39, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (weak4): ZHOUZIYU

Dear Professor, I am listening to 'everyday life and social structure',

This is the article that I edited.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nanjing_decade

This is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=prev&oldid=1282617485&title=Talk:Nanjing_decade Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 15:11, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu Your edit was rejected as it is was not a link to a source but just a link to a search engine query. Please try again and reference a relevant paper, not a search engine page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:35, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor I have changed [34] And this is the dif please check Thanks Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 03:44, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu I am afraid you keep repeating the same mistake. Please use correct URL and link to the paper, not to the search engine results. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:35, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

dear professor，I have changed it.

And this is the dif. Thank you for your checking. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 09:05, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu The reference is now correctly formatted, but it is not relevant to the article. The topic of the article is Nanjing decade and the source you cite does not seem to mention that concept. The reference requested should be relevant to the entire sentence/paragraph, and not just to a single concept/term mentioned in it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:29, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

dear professor，I have changed

it

.And this is the diff

[35]

Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 16:28, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

There is very little relevant information for this article. This is the most suitable one I could find.Thank you very much for your understanding.thank you for your checking. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 16:32, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

This is the final revision. Thank you for your checking.

Nanjing decade

Diff[36] Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 17:28, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu Good. In the future I suggest finding a simpler topic to reference; obscure history is interesting but challenging to find sources for. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:07, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) - Hyunji Shim(심현지)

Dear professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A).

I added a citation to this article. Please check this diff link. Thanks. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 04:17, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:52, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello, professor. I added an English title.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shin_Hyun-joon_(actor)&diff=prev&oldid=1283077615

Thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 09:23, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Good but you swapped the expected content of "title" and "translated_title" parameters. Please read the description of what should be in each and swap them as needed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:10, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)--ZHOUXINRU929(주흔여)

Dear professor,

I am taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure

I added a quotation to the articlehttps://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E7%9A%84%E5%92%96%E5%95%A1&oldid=83048081&action=edit

Please check ZHOUXINRU929 (talk) 06:49, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHOUXINRU929 I cannot locate your edit in this article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor，Sorry, I forgot to click on the previous post.I added a quotation to the article

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E7%9A%84%E5%92%96%E5%95%A1

Please check ZHOUXINRU929 (talk) 08:01, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZHOUXINRU929 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:11, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)--KANGHUIWU2005(오강혜)

[edit source] Dear professor, I am taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure I added a quotation to the article

https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%AA%92%E4%BD%93%E6%89%80%E6%9C%89%E6%9D%83%E9%9B%86%E4%B8%AD%E5%8C%96&action=edit KANGHUIWU2005 (talk) 07:37, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@KANGHUIWU2005 I cannot locate your edit in this article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I forgot to click "Publish" on the last one. I've re-uploaded it. Please take a look. Here's the link:

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AA%92%E4%BD%93%E6%89%80%E6%9C%89%E6%9D%83%E9%9B%86%E4%B8%AD%E5%8C%96 KANGHUIWU2005 (talk) 08:00, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@KANGHUIWU2005 Your reference should follow the text (sentence) it serves to verify. Adding a reference to the first word is not very helpful. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:40, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)CHEN SIWEN

Professor, hello. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"I have completed the task of adding the application. Please check it.(1)(2)

Thank you. Chensiwen (talk) 10:50, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen A reference should be added to the end of a sentence or paragraph, to verify claims made in it. It is not necessary to add a reference to the title of the article. How is it helpful? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:34, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I tried editing it again. Please check it(1)(2) Chensiwen (talk) 18:10, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Now this is correct _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:42, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)--남현서 NAM HYUNSEO

Hello Professor, I am a student in the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" afternoon class. I choose the Katyn massacre article for my Wikipedia assignment. You can find my edit through the diff link below: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Katyn_massacre&diff=prev&oldid=1282952980 Please check Hyunseo050907 (talk) 16:03, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907Good. However, the text you added concerns events from 2010 but you have added it to the section discussing 1940s. I've moved it to the correct location. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:47, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Gayeong Cho(조가영)

Dear professor, I am a morning class student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. Here is my diff link. Please check it. Thank you. Gayeong Cho (talk) 04:04, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho Good, but next time use Wikipedia:Citation templates _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:50, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Lee Dong Gyu(이동규)

Hello, Professor, I'm Lee Dong Gyu(2024050455), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure A class(10:30 ~ 12:00).

I add citation to this article.

And for extra credit, I submit my diff link.

Thank you for read my work, professor! Dong Gyu Lee (talk) 05:01, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dong Gyu Lee Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:50, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Kim Jaejun(김재준)

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 10:30 AM.

I added citation to this article.

here is the diff link for extra points.

Kimjaezzang (talk) 05:47, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:52, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Jung Uijun

Hello, professor. I'm Jung Uijun. I'm taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure. I add citation Jinju and Choi Dong-won. Thank you. Jung Ui Jun (talk) 06:23, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jung Ui Jun Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. Also, remember that only edits made while you are logged into your account can be counted towards your score. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:53, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)-gaoxiaoxia/chensiting

Hello professor.

This is our deadline link1 link2 for Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia class, please check

Thank you Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:44, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Very good. Can you explain why some content from the " Housing project scandal" section was removed? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:58, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(weak4) - Park Chanhee(박찬희)

Hello, professor. I'm Park Chanhee. I'm taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure. I add citation to articeland here is diff. Thank You! Yhnahc (talk) 08:37, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhnahc It's a good start, but please format your citation using citation templates, as explained and requested in the description of the activity in the syllabus _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:59, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) - Minjoo Kim

Dear professor, I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link.[37] Please check. Thank you! Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 09:10, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo While your reference is formatted correctly, for the assignment, you should add a reference to a claim that does not nave a reference. The sentence you added a citation to already had a reference. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:10, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)-kiwoong kim(김기웅)

Hello Professor, I am kimkiwoong from the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" afternoon class. I chose the *Criticism of communist party rule* article for my Wikipedia assignment. You can find my edit through the diff link below: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Criticism_of_communist_party_rule&diff=prev&oldid=1282952980

Please check. Thank you!

Kimkiwoong (talk) 10:33, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong The above link does not appear to be correct. It links to an edit by another student in another article, and I cannot locate any edit of yours in the "criticism of..." article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:14, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline3(week4)-choiyunji(최윤지)

Hello professor, I'm Yun ji Choi from the morning class of Daily Life and Social Structure. For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link. here is diff link. Yumdanggg (talk) 11:08, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yumdanggg Good. Your first edit was incorrect and was removed, but I see your second one is better. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:16, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline3(week4)-choiyunji(최윤지)

Hello professor, I'm Yoonji Choi from the morning class of Daily Life and Social Structure. I'm reposting the post above because I misplaced it. I've added a quote for my Week 4 task. I've added a quote to this article. Here's diff. Yumdanggg (talk) 11:11, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yumdanggg Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:18, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5)-Jo HyeonSeong(조현성)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I created an outline of your project in my personal sandbox.

You can check it in this link.

Please check it. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:53, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeongIt is good to start early.However, if you are translating content to Korean Wikipedia, you should be using a sandbox on Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Please move your content to Korean Wikipedia and see what formatting issues need to be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:24, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Thank you for your feedback

I made an outline of my project in my 연습장

please check it

Thank you Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 13:48, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Good progress. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:26, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Kwak dain (곽다인)

Professor, I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (Class A). I would like to choose the following two articles: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Sociological_Imagination, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cognitive_psychology and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Futures_studies. If there are already recommendations available, could you please suggest them to me? Thank you. 221.140.59.121 (talk) 11:00, 23 March 2025 (UTC) I logged in and reposted this. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Futures_studies I'll translate this into Korean. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kwak dain (talk • contribs) 06:25, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Remember to log in before posting so you can sign your message properly.

Regarding your choices , you need to tell me what language you want to translate them into. Future studies is ok in either zh or ko.

For another topic, how about two short articles (that together would count as one): Rubber science and Academese? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:52, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

I logged in and reposted this. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Futures_studies I'll translate this into Korean. Thank you. Kwak dain (talk) 06:28, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain Ok, I have recorded Future studies to Korean for you. Remember you need to select another topic or topics (see my suggestions above). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:00, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cognitive_psychology Can I translate this into Korean? Kwak dain (talk) 10:12, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain That is already being translated by another group. How about Illusory truth effect instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:58, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Understood, professor. I will translate 'Illusory truth effect' into Korean. Thank you. Kwak dain (talk) 01:47, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - TRAN THUY NGA (짠 튀 응아)

Hello, Professor. I am TRAN THUY NGA (2022024920) who is taking the Every Life and Social Structure (class A- Mon: 10:30-12:00/ Fri: 10:30-12:00). I have added a citation to the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vietnamese_cuisine. Because the first time I edited, I missed the English article title so I added it. And here are 2 diff links: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Vietnamese_cuisine&diff=prev&oldid=1282772521 / https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Vietnamese_cuisine&diff=prev&oldid=1282776140 Please check. Thank you! 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 14:50, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 While the reference is correctly formatted, it does not appear to be relevant to the sentence (paragraph) you've added it to. While it is related to article's topic, the requested reference should serve to verify claims made in that paragraph (about international popularity). I do not see this topic covered in the reference you've added? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:55, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

I fixed it. Check it: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Vietnamese_cuisine&diff=prev&oldid=1283127036 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 16:09, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:01, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- ZHONG QI

Dear Professor, I’m ZHONG QI. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"I have completed the task of adding the application. Please check it.[[38]][[39]] —Kylo09 (talk) 12:44, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Very good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:05, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, it has been modified according to your request. Please check it! Kylo09 (talk) 15:18, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:02, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4):XU XINRAN

Dear Professor, I am listening to 'everyday life and social structure'

This is the article I edited.

This is diff

Please confirm, thank you. XXUXINRAN (talk) 12:51, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

This is another diff XXUXINRAN (talk) 13:43, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN The sources are good but you need to format the code correctly to so that the reference is a footnote. Please fix this problem or stop by my office if you do not know how. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:32, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, I have completed the footnote addition. Please confirm.

This is diff XXUXINRAN (talk) 04:20, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Good. One final issue to fix: When using a foreign language reference, please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:28, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (week 4) - Fatima Lopez

Dear Professor,

I'm Fatima Lopez from the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Inteligence", here is the citation requested.

Fatimald (talk) 12:36, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:32, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (Week4) - Donggun Kim (김동건)

Dear Mr. Piotr,

This is Donggun Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B).

I added a reference(quote [5]) to Seoul Street Art Festival wiki article.

I'm also attaching diff link here. please check them out at this link.

Thank you for taking the time to read this.

Sincerely, Donggun Kim Hy donggunkim (talk) 13:01, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hy donggunkim Good but your English and Korean titles should be split between "title" and "translated_title" parameters. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:34, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4): XU YAN(서염)

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure. Here is the content and reference I added to the article. Please check it, thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 13:30, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:11, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - LIN YUYANG (임유양)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I added citation to this article.

Please check. Thank you.

L01yy11 (talk) 13:36, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@L01yy11 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:12, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4)-YANG CHAOHAN(양초함)

Dear Professor. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" .For the assignment in Week 4, I added some citations to the article.Here is the diff link Please check it. Thank you. Yhan0619 (talk) 14:35, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Good. When using a foreign language reference, please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:14, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4)-LIU XINRUI(유신예)

Dear professor. I'm taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.As work for the fourth week.I added a citation to this article.Here is the link.Please check it. Thank you. 유신예 (talk) 14:55, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@유신예 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:19, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3(Week 4) - Kim Myeongjun(김명준)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM. I add citation to this article. For extra credit, here is my diff link. Please check it, thank you Myeong220 (talk) 15:02, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:20, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3(Week 4) - Lee Ga eun (이가은)

Professor, the Wikipedia link I referred to is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2000_in_South_Korea#Events And, my diff is : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2000_in_South_Korea&diff=prev&oldid=1283118763.Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 15:34, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun There is an error with the formatting of your citations. Perhaps you were typing the code manually rather than using the Visual Editor, as recommended by the activity? Please follow the detailed how-to advice I have for students at User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2 (point 2).

Also, please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:22, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3：LIU ZIFU

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at A class. I add citation to this article. For extra credit, here is my diff link. Please check it, thank you Peter011008 (talk) 02:51, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Peter011008 Good, but please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:24, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4: LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor,

I'm taking Everyday Life and Social Structure" at A class.

I have completed the Deadline 4. Here is my sandbox.

Please check. Peter011008 (talk) 02:54, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Peter011008 That's a good start. Now work on adding links to other Wikipedia articles as well as references.

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:24, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 ( week4) NGUYEN KIM CHI( 응웬김찌)

Hello, Professor. I am NGUYEN KIM CHI (2022001730) who is taking the Every Life and Social Structure (class A- Mon: 1:00-14:400/ Fri: 1:00-14:400). I have added a citation to the article: Influence of mass media

And diff link : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Influence_of_mass_media&diff=prev&oldid=1283213718

Please check. Thank you! NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 03:53, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12 Good, but please add the English title while keeping the original Vietnamese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Likewise, there is a dedicated metadata parameter to indicate the language of the source, called "language". Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:26, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline(Week4)CHEN SIYU-진사우

Hello Professor, I took your advice and studied and revised it.since I chose your two classes, Everyday Life and Social Structure(13：00~14：30）and Collective Intelligence (14：30~16：00）I chose this article.The original text is：[40]https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/三大炮 I quoted two parts. After the revision, I listened to your opinion and quoted it in the first sentence： [41]https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=三大炮&diff=prev&oldid=86635346 I also chose an entry to quote in the following paragraph：

Please check it for me～ thank you～ Chensiyu2004 (talk) 04:14, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Yes, this is better now _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:30, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

ZHANG BINGYI

Dear Professor, I haven't received the invitation to join the blog. Please send me the link again.

Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 04:25, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 The blog for EL class is optional and not yet activated _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:30, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3) - XU KEYING

Hello Professor, I’m XU KEYING taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia.This is the topic I have chosen. This is an Chinese translation into  English [42] Please check.Thank you Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 05:03, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 I have your recorded as working on zh:城市绿心森林公园 That's a good topic but rather short. You should select one more similarly sized article.

The one you linked is selected by another student anyway _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:42, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,I have selected another Chinese article for translation. Here is the link. Could you please confirm if this article is suitable? Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 05:49, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Good. You can translate 澳門城市藝穗節 and 城市绿心森林公园 to Englisish for your project _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:39, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- SHAO TIANYI

Dear Professor, I’m SHAO TIANYI. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"I have completed the task of adding the application.[43] I am also make a diff link here![[44]]Please check it. ––Yeomll (talk) 08:58, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Good, but when citing a book, you need to provide the number of a relevant page you used, and if the book is not online, a quotation. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:08, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Also, Please add the Chinese title while keeping the translated English one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:09, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,I added the relevant page numbers and Chinese titles. Please check it.

––Yeomll (talk) 14:33, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Good, but for the title use the parameters "title" and "translated_title", not just "title" _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor，I have re-added the title and translated_title. Please check it.

––Yeomll (talk) 05:38, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:58, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Kim Gyuri (김규리)

dear professor, This is Gyuri Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I have replaced a dead link in the Kang Ha-neul Wikipedia article with a reliable source. Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kang_Ha-neul&diff=prev&oldid=1283096123 thank you. 김규리05 (talk) 12:36, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 Good. When using a foreign language reference, please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:30, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Additionally, your ref should be added to the end of a sentence or paragraph that has no references, to verify claims made in it. Right now your reference has been to a content that already had a reference, where it serves no purpose _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:31, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, I've completed the task for my new paper. I've added references to the parts that need citations in Marado's paper. Here's my diff link : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marado&diff=prev&oldid=1283221207 . Please let me know if you need anything else. thank you 김규리05 (talk) 05:03, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

I'm sending you the wrong answer above. Sorry, this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marado&diff=prev&oldid=1283225482. Please make sure I got it right. thank you. 김규리05 (talk) 05:36, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 The new reference does not have the translated title. Other than that, it is good. Update the title to have both English and Korean title, and you will be done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:59, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4)- XU KEYING

Dear professor,

I am currently taking ''Collective Intelligence in Practice''.For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link

Please check. Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 04:44, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Good. However, Baidu is not the best source (see here for an explanation). Can you find a more reliable source? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:09, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）----MUYE

Dear Professor. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I added citation to this article

I have attached a diff for additional credit and the diff

please check this thank you MUYW (talk) 05:16, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Good, but Baidu is not the best source (see here for an explanation). Can you find a more reliable source? Additionally, remember that only referenced content counts for extra credit, so make sure all content you add has references.

There is no need to add "en：" in front of a translated title. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) -- GUAN YUE

Dear professor,

I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For Deadline 4, I’ve been working on a translation project, and you can find the current version in my sandbox.

Please check. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 05:44, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

In addition, I have moved the completed portion of my translation from the sandbox to the main article on English Wikipedia. The rest is still in progress. Uuueol (talk) 06:37, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Good. You can continue working on the public article (not in your sandbox) to save time. Remember that all content has to be referenced to be counted for course credit - if you translate unreferenced content, you need to find references for it.

Also, when a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles that exist on Chinese Wikipedia but not in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:49, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Week2) - Kim Yeonhee (김연희)

Dear Proffesor

I’m Kim Yeonhee(김연희), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B. I have completed the trainingand registered the dashboard. Please check. Thank you. ~~~ Kyeon0425 (talk) 06:14, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Ok. Please make sure to complete other assignments on time. Completing them late results in score reduction. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:52, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3)- Chachaeyoung

Dear, professor. Hi, I'm Lee chaeyeong who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' at pm01:00. I chose this article to translate from English to Korean individually, not as a team. Please check. "Climate debt" Chachaeyoung (talk) 06:14, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung Good choice. Approved. But you need to select two articles to translate to Korean. What is your other choice? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:55, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3)-ZHANG FANGYU(장방우)

Dear professor, I'm a student in class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I want to translate the following two articles into Chinese. 중국의_대마초 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/중국의_대마초 and 중국의_낙태 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/중국의_낙태 Please ask the teacher to check if it is possible.We look forward to your reply. Ullu77 (talk) 06:31, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ullu77 Dear students. Your links above are broken. You should generally translate topics from English, not Korean. Please choose your articles from English Wikipedia, and double check whether they haven't been translated already _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:05, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) -- CUI ZAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

For Deadline 4, I would like to report my translation progress. I am working on four translation articles in total. Two of them are being developed in my sandbox, and the other two have been directly translated and added to the main articles on Chinese Wikipedia.（en to zh）

Here are the links:

Sandbox translations

sandbox1 sandbox2

Direct translations on Chinese Wikipedia

link1 link2

Please let me know if I should also copy the content into my sandbox for easier review. Thank you for your understanding!

Cuicuizan (talk) 06:35, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Good progress. You do not need to copy more content into the sandbox; you can work on the public articles.

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:06, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)--HE ZIXUAN

Deadline3(week4)--HE ZIXUAN Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the task of adding references.Please check. Link:1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=TFBOYS&diff=prev&oldid=86636541 2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E8%8C%85%E5%8F%B0%E9%85%92&diff=prev&oldid=86600230#cite_note-5 ZixuanHE (talk) 06:51, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)--YANJINJIN

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I have completed the task of adding references.Please check. Link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E4%BA%91%E5%8D%97%E7%9C%81&diff=prev&oldid=86636625 JINJINYAN (talk) 06:53, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

week1，Collective Intelligence in Practice—WEIYUXIN위우신

week1，Hello, Peter! I have completed all the tasks in the sandbox. Please check.[45] Qizicheng (talk) 07:43, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Qizicheng Good. Please make sure to complete other assignments on time You can submit assignments late, but for a reduced score. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:14, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Collective Intelligence in Practice--LYUKE려가

Week1.Hello, Peter! I have completed all the tasks in the sandbox. Please check.[46] Kk778 (talk) 07:53, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kk778 Good. Please make sure to complete other assignments on time You can submit assignments late, but for a reduced score _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Kim Nahee (김나희)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(10:30-12:00). I add citation to this article. For extra credit, here is my diff link. Please check it, thank you. Naheekim2025 (talk) 08:30, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:17, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)-WANG YIKE(왕흘가)

Hello, professor. I'm a student who taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' course. This is my selected article(ch>en), this is my sandbox, please check it. Thank you Alexk27 (talk) 08:38, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good progress. You can add your content directly to the public article. Keep the following in mind:

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:19, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 ：TANG YINI

Dear professor

I am a student of “Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure”.I would like to choose to translate the topic of “Lookism” into Chinese.Please check this. Thank you. Tyuni06 (talk) 09:50, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

@Tyuni06 I am afraid that has already been chosen by another student. How about Physical attractiveness stereotype instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:45, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

I will translate this one. Thank you! Tyuni06 (talk) 11:49, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Tyuni06 Ok. Remember that you should choose two topics. Have you selected your other one? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:28, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Sorry professor, I don't know which one to choose. Could you please find another one for me? Tyuni06 (talk) 13:20, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@Tyuni06 Sure. There's a related topic that can be translated and expanded on zh wiki: Physical attractiveness -> zh:外貌吸引力 . How about it? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:32, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

ok，I will translate this one. Thank you! Tyuni06 (talk) 10:41, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3)-ZHANG FANGYU(장방우)

Dear professor, I'm a student in class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I want to translate the following two articles into Chinese. 중국의_대마초 and 중국의_낙태 . Please ask the teacher to check if it is possible.We look forward to your reply. Ullu77 (talk) 06:24, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ullu77 These articles are already translated to Chinese. Instead, chose some topics from lists like this one, but check first that they are not translated to Chinese or not translated well: Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Women's_health articles , Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Women's_health articles, Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Feminism articles, Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Feminism articles.

For example, you could choose Feminism in Russia and Feminist economics _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:01, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

OK, Professor, thank you for your advice. So I will translate the two topics you gave me into Chinese.One is Feminism in Russia and the other is Feminist economics Ullu77 (talk) 11:06, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

deadline2（week3）HU ENFAN

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I have chosen articles to translate with my group member. For Everyday Life and Social Structure:（group member is LI ZIKANG）English to chinese：Female infanticide in China and 《Anti-Korean sentiment in China》。 Collective Intelligence in Practice （group member is LI ZIKANG）English to Chinese:《Prisoners of war in World War II》and 《Prisoners of war in World War I》 Are they available? Please check. Thank you. 호인본 (talk) 02:24, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 I am afraid Female infanticide in China has already been translated and Anti-Korean sentiment in China has been chosen by another group so you need to choose some other topics. How about these topics instead: Son preference in China or Racism in South Korea . The other topics (prisoners) can be translated to Chinese. However, if you are working in a group, you need to translate at least one article (per class) from Chinese to English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:19, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, we have chosen two new articles as the topics for the Chinese-English translation: For Everyday Life and Social Structure, we chose the 中國式病毒, and Collective Intelligence in Practice, we chose 當中國統治世界。 호인본 (talk) 09:37, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 I am afraid both articles are already translated to English, so they are not eligible for additional translation. Please select topics are well developed in Chinese but not in English. For some ideas, browse this list: 维基百科:典范条目 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 Please note that some of the articles there have been translated already - you need to compare both versions before choosing. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:58, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

How about this two articles 2013 Secret Vajrayana Election Conferenceand Second Civil War between the KMT and the CPC, I searched for these two articles on the English wiki and found no corresponding English versions.

hope professor will check if it is feasible. 호인본 (talk) 06:09, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Second Kuomintang-Communist Civil War can be translated - you can expand it from Chinese Wikipedia. But the papal conclave seems no better in Chinese than in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:07, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

We ultimately chose this article 1 for the Chinese-to-English translation. Please check. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 02:44, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 The topic is approved, good choice _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:40, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 However, since we discussed many topics above, please let me know what are your current choices for each class, and I'll double check and let you know if they are approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:42, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

For Everyday Life and Social Structure English to chinese：Prisoners of war in World War II and Chinese to English： Second Civil War between the KMT and the CPC

Collective Intelligence in Practice English to Chinese：Prisoners of war in World War I and Chinese to English： Tibetan land reform movement Lzk15038863666 (talk) 05:48, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 Your everyday life topics are recorded as

Prisoners of war in World War II to zh and Second Kuomintang-Communist Civil War from zh to en

Your Tibetan land reform movement is also approved.

However, in the meantime another student has already reserved Prisoners of war in World War I to zh. How about this article instead? Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:35, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Sure professor, I think this is a great article. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 12:36, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week 3) -LIU XINRUI(유신예)

Dear professor. I'm taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.I chose to translate 2 articles into Chinese. These are two articles I chose:Anti-Korean sentiment in Japan,Abortion in North Korea, Please check it. Thank you. 유신예 (talk) 14:49, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@유신예 Anti-Korean sentiment in Japan to zh is approved. However, Abortion in North Korea has already been selected by another person, so you'll need to choose another topic. How abuout Beginning of human personhood? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:18, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I am willing to accept your suggestion to translate these two articles, Anti-Korean sentiment in Japan and Beginning of human personhood.Thank you for your reply！ 1.241.68.131 (talk) 15:47, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)—XIXIANGRUI

Hello Professor, I have translated part of my article and added links and citations. Please check. Thank you, Professor. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/sandbox XIXIANGRUI (talk) 05:56, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI For deadline 3, you need to add reference to a mainspace article, not to your sandbox, and not to your main project. Also, if you are translating to Chinese, your sandbox should be on Chinese Wikipedia, not English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:21, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok professor, so do I need to translate this again on the Chinese Wikipedia? Is there still a time limit? XIXIANGRUI (talk) 02:01, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have added a link to an article I edited on my main page. Is that correct? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:46, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Nanking?wprov=sfti1# XIXIANGRUI (talk) 07:37, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Please see our syllabus for explanation what is required for each deadline, as well as time limit. You can submit assignments late, for a reduced score.

I am unsure why you linked your userpage and the other page (University of Nanking)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:16, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI Professor, is the reference added to my user page for this assignment correct? The link from Nanjing University might be incorrect. XIXIANGRUI (talk) 01:47, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor: Professor, I apologize that I didn't understand that assignment. Thank you for your hard work. Is this correct? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lathe_of_Heaven_(film)?wprov=sfti1 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 02:18, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor: I'm very sorry, professor, to bother you to check for me so many times. I understand this time. Please review. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_country,_two_systems?wprov=sfti1#Potential_extension this diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=One%20country,%20two%20systems&diff=1283062108&oldid=1283061942 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:34, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI I do not see any edits from your account at Lathe of Heaven (film). Your edit at one country two system was incorrect - the reference was not formatted properly, and it did not seem to be relevant to the sentence it was appended to. Please follow the instructions from the syllabus carefully, including providing a quotation in the reference metadata that shows it is directly relevant to the sentence being appended to. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:02, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor: Professor, it should be all right this time. Please check. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_China XIXIANGRUI (talk) 04:06, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Good. When using a foreign language reference, please add the English title while keeping the original Chinese one; use the "translated_title" parameter. You should also provide a quotation - which part of the article supports the claims made in the preceding sentence? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:26, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor: Professor, I have added an English title. Where can I add a citation to prove the previous sentence? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_China XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:45, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI For the support text, there should be a parameter called "quotation". If you don't know how to do it, stop by my office and I'll help you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:45, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor:professor, is this right? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_China XIXIANGRUI (talk) 11:02, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Yes, good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:34, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Kim Gyuri (김규리)

Dear professor, This is Gyuri Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I have completed at least 50% of the translation for the article Ansan Street Arts Festival as required for the Week 5 deadline. You can find my progress in my sandbox here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EA%B9%80%EA%B7%9C%EB%A6%AC05/sandbox. Please let me know if you have any feedback or if further revisions are needed. Thank you! 김규리05 (talk) 04:03, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 When translating, your sandbox should be on the Wikipedia for a given language; here - Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Additionally, since the target article already exist, it is recommended that you edit that article directly and add your referenced content there.

I.e. you should be expanding ko:안산국제거리극축제 (you can also add referenced content to English article for extra credit) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:28, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Yes, I have expanded the ko:안산국제거리극축제. Could you check it?

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%88%EC%82%B0%EA%B5%AD%EC%A0%9C%EA%B1%B0%EB%A6%AC%EA%B7%B9%EC%B6%95%EC%A0%9C 김규리05 (talk) 01:26, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 Very good. Keep up the good job and monitor that article to see if Korean reviewers have any comments. Remember that all content added should have a reference to count for course credit and to prevent it from being removed.

Also, when a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:38, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week 3) JIN CHUYEU(근추월)

Dear professor,

I'm a student in class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I would like to translate these two articles into Chinese . Opera in South Korea and Women in South Korea Please ask the teacher to check if it is possible.We look forward to your reply. 小太阳888 (talk) 05:16, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@小太阳888 Women in South Korea to zh has already been translated by another student last year, but they forgot to copy the references. You can do it for extra credit (add references), but you will need to choose a different topic for translation. The other topic is already selected by another student.

Here are my suggestions: take a look at articles from these lists and choose topics you find interesting: Category:FA-Class Opera articles - Wikipedia , Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Feminism articles _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:40, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay teacher, I have re selected two topics from these two lists to translate into Chinese. Rhinemaidens and Maria Trubnikova Please check if the translation is possible, teacher. Looking forward to your reply. 小太阳888 (talk) 15:33, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@小太阳888 Very good, topics approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:39, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Week3) - Kim Yeonhee (김연희)

Dear professor, I'm taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(1:00-2:30).

I chose to translate 2 articles into Korean.

These are two articles I chose

1. The Elephant in the Brain
2. Controlling behavior in relationships

please check. Thank you.

Kyeon0425 (talk) 06:59, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Controlling behavior in relationships is a good choice, but the article is very short and would count as only half a topic for our purpose. The Elephant in the Brain has the same problem (as most of its content is unreferenced, and unreferenced content does not count for our class workload). I can accept the above two choices as sufficient for a single project, but you would need to choose another topic (or another two short topics). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:13, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I found one more article.

Can I add this article and translate a total of 3 articles into Korean?

These are articles I chose

1. The Elephant in the Brain
2. Controlling behavior in relationships
3. Prospective memory (Additional Article)

Kyeon0425 (talk) 14:23, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Kyeon0425 (talk) 14:27, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Very good, all topics approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:40, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4） ---FAN XINRU

Hello Professor, this is my completed editing citation assignment, please check it out. Here is the link. Jzhdylb (talk) 11:51, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:43, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4:(Week5):ZHANG XIAOTONG

Hello professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have completed the partial translation of the two articles Welcome to the Video Case and 阳关林场风波 as required. You can check the progress in my Sandbox 1：Zh to En and Sandbox 2: En to Zh. Please check and let me know if there are any changes that need to be made. Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 12:55, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 Good progress.

The zh-to-en article uses some books. Please try to add relevant page numbers, and format citations so that they all use Wikipedia:Citation templates

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week5)- Kim jong min(hanyang)김종민

Dear Professor

Hi professor, I'm taking a class on collective intelligence. I'm translating a non-sandbox Korean Wikipedia public article myself, and I was wondering if I could post a link to a draft of the non-sandbox article.

Here's a draft of the entry I'm translating, please check it out and leave a comment.

*Question

Other students post their weekly revisions on their blogs, but I don't post my weekly revisions on my blog, I read the videos and articles on the syllabus and post them on my blog, and I'm wondering how my professor is managing my 10 weekly revisions. Will my 10 weekly edits be visible through the wiki dashboard? Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 13:20, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang)

Good progress. You can add your content directly to the public article, while montoring its history and your talk page to see if you get any feedback from Korean reviewers. Keep the following in mind:

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

Regarding your 10+ weekly edits, I can see them in your user contributions. 1) User contributions for Kim jong min (hanyang) - Wikipedia 2) User contributions for Kim jong min (hanyang) - 위키백과 3) global

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:35, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week5)- WU SHUHAN

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed part of the translation of my first article: 日本摇滚.I have a question. I found that the workload of my two project articles（Lawrence Lessig and Japanese rock） is a bit heavy. Can I get extra points if I complete them? WSH0927 (talk) 15:34, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Yes. As explained in the syllabus: The minimum size of your article is 1,500 words (translation) or 750 words (research) per student. This means that for a group of two students, the numbers are 3,000 and 1,500, respectively. You can choose multiple shorter articles to translate to reach the required word quota. Longer projects will generate extra credit (about 1 point for every 500 words). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:40, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）-- LIU ZIYE

Dear professor. I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. For the week4 assignment, I have added some citations to the article. And here is my diff link. Please check. Thank you! Poeyal (talk) 02:20, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@Poeyal Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3) YANG CHAOHAN（양초함) &LIU MINGHAN(유명함)

Dear professor, hello. Me and my team membersYANG CHAOHAN .I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. I want to translate Ceilidh and Scrimshaw's English articles into Chinese. Please check if it's feasible! Thanks. Liuminghan (talk) 15:44, 22 March 2025 (UTC)

@Liuminghan See above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:34, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Sorry professor, I found that Li Yu (1611–1680) already has an English page. So I want to translate 洪素珠事件（Hong Suzhu incident） this article from Chinese to English.

Please check it.Thank you so much. Liuminghan (talk) 05:39, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@Liuminghan While Li Yu (1611–1680) does indeed have an English article, that article is inferior to the Chinese one, so you can expand the English one so that it is similar to the Chinese one.

As such, you do not have to change topics unless you prefer the new topic. Both are ok - you can choose either. Or work on both for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2(Week 3) - Kim Myeongjun(김명준)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(1:00-2:30). I chose to translate 2 articles into Korean. These are two articles I chose: Censorship by Facebook, Censorship by TikTok

I would like to know if I can edit these.

Thank you. Myeong220 (talk) 12:47, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220 Censorship by Facebook to Korean is ok. But Censorship by TikTok has already been chosen. How about Gender differences in social network service use instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:05, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, I'll go with this article. Myeong220 (talk) 06:56, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5): SHU YING

Dear Professor,

I'm taking the course "Everyday Life and Social Structure".

I have created my personal sandbox .

Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 04:30, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good. But that looks like a translation of self-censorship, while the articles I've recorded as chosen by you are Gift economy and Media bias? Please let me know which two topics you have decided to work on in the end. Self-censorship is ok as well, but in that case you should be improving zh:自我審查 directly, without the need of a sandbox (unless you want to practice).

In either case, now you should be merging the content of your sandbox to 自我審查. Remember that you should integrate your content with existing (referenced) material there, not replace it. You can of course remove unreferenced content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:36, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

OK, I understand what you mean.i still choose gift economy and media bias those two articles ,and here is a new sandbox for  media bias,and also I will improve the zh：自我检查 as practice. Syouziiye (talk) 05:33, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Very good. You can get extra credit for working on additional (or longer) topics, as explained in the syllabus.

Also, when a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link to English articles that do not yet exist in Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:45, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

OK,I got it. I'll pay attention to it. Syouziiye (talk) 07:15, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (Week 3)：LAOXINYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I will complete the Wikipedia project assignment by myself.

Everyday Life and Social Structure：American defense of Taiwan（This entry is not available on the English Wikipedia, because I will translate it from Chinese to English and create it on the English Wikipedia.）Chinese link: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%BE%8E%E5%9B%BD%E5%8D%8F%E9%98%B2%E5%8F%B0%E6%B9%BE

Collective Intelligence：1）Road safety in Europe 2）Breaching experiment. （The above two Wikipedia entries are translated from English to Chinese.）

Please checkLaoxinyi (talk) 12:34, 20 March 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Good, approved and recorded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:52, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello, Professor. Can I change the topic of collective intelligence? The original topic of this course on collective intelligence is two english translations into chinese （Collective Intelligence：1）Road safety in Europe 2）Breaching experiment）. But now I want to change the topic. I suddenly found that there is no English entry for the article "Defense of Taiwan". Can I create and translate it into English? thank you! Laoxinyi (talk) 08:39, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi I have you registered as taking two of my classes. For Everyday Life, your assignment is recorded as American defense of Taiwan( chinese from to english). For Collective Intelligence, it is 1）Road safety in Europe + 2）Breaching experiment）. I am not sure what you are asking? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:12, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) -- JIANGJIASHAN(강가삼)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）. I have completed the citation addition for this article. Please check it.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=刀削面&oldid=86599263 thank you Ttkx11 (talk) 06:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 That link does not seem to reference the information in the article; instead it is just a homepage of some random restaurant. Please find a better reference that contains information mentioned in the article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have added new content. Please check. Thank you.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=刀削面&diff=prev&oldid=86635462 Ttkx11 (talk) 04:27, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Your first reference is in the wrog place - it should follow a sentence. It is unncessary to reference the first word (title) of the article. For your second one, it seems to be a link to a governmental website. It is a reliable source, but which part of the text on the website supports the claim in the cited part of the article about the noodles? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:57, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have revised the content. Please check it. Thank you.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=刀削面&diff=prev&oldid=86658684 Ttkx11 (talk) 00:49, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 It's ok now _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:19, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Dear professor,

I am taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure

I added a quotation to the article

This is the diff

Please check it. Thank you. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 07:25, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy While your references use correct citation templates, you need to format them so that they are footnotes. See Help:Footnotes for more information or ask me for help during office hours. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I found that my article has been revised by someone else tonight. What else do I need to make changes to? WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 10:11, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy You need to complete that assignment, either by adding the correctly formatted citation to this article, or to another. See the helpful comment by the reviewer Skylisan who removed your edit in Northeastern University (China): Revision history - Wikipedia _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:36, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I have re-added the reference. Could you please check it. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 09:37, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy That's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:20, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)-kwak dain

Professor, I am taking a course on understanding daily life and social structures. I have added https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_axe_murder_incident Here is the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Korean_axe_murder_incident&diff=1283093482&oldid=1283093108 link for the additional points. Kwak dain (talk) 12:30, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain The reference is missing author metadata, but more crucially, it should be added to the end of a sentence or paragraph that has no references, to verify claims made in it. Right now your reference has been added to the end of the article, where it serves no purpose. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:29, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, I re-written it. I have added https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EB%B3%B5 Here is the diff https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%ED%95%9C%EB%B3%B5&diff=39033740&oldid=39026122 link for the additional points. Please check it. Thank you. Kwak dain (talk) 02:30, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain It's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:22, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Jung Yuna(정유나)

Professor, I am Jung Yuna. I am attending the A class of the Everyday Life and Social Structure course. I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. You can check the progress here in the sandbox. Please let me know if any further revisions are needed. Thank you always!

If you need any more help, feel free to ask! Jungyuna (talk) 04:40, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna It is good to start early.However, if you are translating content to Korean Wikipedia, you should be using a sandbox on Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Please move your content to Korean Wikipedia and see what formatting issues need to be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:04, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

"Hello, Professor. As you mentioned, I have moved it to the Korean Wikipedia. Please check it and let me know if there are any corrections. Thank you." Jungyuna (talk) 02:00, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good. Now keep on translating and fixing code errors, particularly in links and references. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:23, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）LI QINGLU

Hello Professor, my name is Li Qinglu. I participated in a course on understanding daily life and social structures (Class B). I have included a citation in this article for your review. Thanks! 이청로 (talk) 14:41, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Obviously not your professor, but I reverted the addition. This student's diff can be found here. Yue🌙 04:30, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@이청로 Please see why @Yue removed your edits, as explained here: Liberate Hong Kong, revolution of our times: Revision history - Wikipedia

You can readd your text with reference in a more relevant part in the article make body, but please make sure you add it to a relevant part.

Otherwise, try to add a reference to unreferenced content, which is an easier activity than adding new text with reference to a complex article. For our assignment, you don't need to to the latter, the former will suffice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I re-added the reference. Please check it. 이청로 (talk) 10:09, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@이청로 The formatting is good, but you should add a reference to content that has no reference. Adding a reference to already reference content is not very helpful. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:24, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5) - Yewon Lee (이예원)

Dear Professor,

Hello professor, I'm Yewon Lee who is taking the morning class to understand daily life and social structure. I'm leaving a message after completing the deadline 4 to some extent. Is there anything else I should add?

My chosen topic is this and my sandbox link.

It's translated from English to Korean, so I wrote it in a Korean sandbox.

I'd appreciate it if you could check it out. Nowey22 (talk) 12:08, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Good job. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) - Yang yejoo(양예주)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Yejoo Yang, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays(Class B). I added a reference to Jennie (singer) wiki article. I'm also attaching diff link here. Please check them out at this link.

Best regards,Yangyejoo (talk) 13:42, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:27, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5)：CAI ZHIHANG

Dear professor, I am in the class Everyday Life and Social Structure.

This is the link to the article I am currently editing in the sandbox.

Please check, thank you. Caizzz (talk) 01:01, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good job. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:31, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5):ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am a student of the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life.This is the Chinese extension [47] and Chinese translation [48] I made this week, please check it. Thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 03:36, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Good job.

Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

deadline4(week5): YeonWoo Jung (정연우)

Dear Professor,

Hello professor, I'm YeonWoo Jung who is taking the 13:00 class to understand daily life and social structure.

My chosen topic is this and my sandbox link.

I translated it based on the English content from Wikipedia. I'd appreciate it if you could check it out. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 04:14, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo It's a good start but make sure to proofread it to remove errors made by ChatGPT. Remember to read zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:36, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

deadline4(week5): BAI LINHAN

Professor, I have completed the outline of the article, please check it out. I explained to you in class that it is not possible to add a link to the sandbox, so I expanded the content directly in the original draft. Because a lot of the content in the original article did not cite the source, I deleted some of it. Is this okay? Bai0926 (talk) 08:40, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Interesting. You are using good sources, but you need to use more academic ones (you can find very good ones here). When you cite books, you need to cite the relevant page numbers. Also, you need to work on your English translation - many sentences are very confusing. The structure should be improved too. For example, the first part of the article is a Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, and not a discussion of Chinese language characteristics.

Remember to provide citations for each paragraph and/or each sentence if the paragraph is based on different sources.

Compare your draft carefully to content in articles like Superstition in India and Superstition in Islamic tradition to see how your article should evolve. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:43, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

deadline4(week5): An soyul (안소율)

Hello, Professor, I'm Soyul An(2024013072), who is taking a class on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Class B - Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30).

Translation progress: 50% or more translated an original article in translation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_religion_in_India My Sandbox Link: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:An_soyul/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

Please check and give me your feedback. Thank you! An soyul (talk) 11:02, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:45, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5):HE ZIXUAN

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. This is the link to my sandbox translation：https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZixuanHE/华人移民悉尼 Please check, thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 12:00, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5)：ZHONG RUIQI

Dear professor, I am in the class Everyday Life and Social Structure.

This is the link to the article I am currently editing in the sandbox.

Please check, thank you. ZHONGrich (talk) 13:30, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZHONGrich Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5):ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Mr. Piotr.

My name is ZHANG MINGSHUO and I am attending your Daily Life and Social Structures 2025 course (Class B) on Mondays and Fridays at 1pm.

I finished the weekly edits please check

Due to the duplication of articles I have not yet selected the articles to be translated please give me a little more time Thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 13:45, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Good job with your weekly edits, but remember that the later you choose your translation/expansion projects, the lower your score for meeting deadlines on time will be. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5)&Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

I have finished the first translation article for both two classes. Already put them in my sandbox, please check here(translate from Web novels in South Korea) and here( translate from Florian Znaniecki).

Also finished my weekly wiki editing for week5, total more than 10edits. Please check here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 00:49, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Very good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:49, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Hello, Professor. I'm Seo Young Kim, 2024096508 who is taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structures class B (Mon 13:00-14:30, Fri 13:00-14:30.) I have completed the Week 5 task of translating the article and adding the necessary citations and references, so please check. Thank you. [49] 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 06:32, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5) - Venne Couwenberg

Dear professor, I finished translating more of the following atricle:

https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koreaanse_keuken

VenneCouwenberg (talk) 10:55, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@VenneCouwenberg Good job. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. In Ducth, try Sjabloon:Interlanguage link - Wikipedia . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:55, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）JIA YUAN

Dear professor, hello. I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. I have completed the creation and translation of the Wikipedia article. Please check it out. Thank you. Jiayyyyy (talk) 14:17, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to monitor the feedback you get in Chinese Wikipedia by looking regularly at the history of your article and on your talk page, and address issues raised by the reviewers. 韩国的气候变化：修订历史 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书

You should add Wikipedia:Categorization to your article. - 维基百科:頁面分類 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(weak5) Park Chanhee (박찬희)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure". This is the link to my sandbox translation. Thank You. User:Yhnahc/sandbox - Wikipedia Yhnahc (talk) 14:32, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yhnahc I see. But I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Korean Wikipedia sandbox and update me when it is ready.

Make sure to add links and/or references if you want more feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:28, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(weak5) Kim Yeonhee (김연희)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure".

Translated this article into Korean. Here is my sandbox link.

Please check. Thank you.

Kyeon0425 (talk) 17:22, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:29, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5) - Yinna van der Vliet

Dear professor, I have completed the translation of the following article:

https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koreaanse_keuken Lotte Young (talk) 23:57, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lotte Young Good job. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. In Ducth, try Sjabloon:Interlanguage link - Wikipedia . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:30, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5) - Hyunji Shim(심현지)

Dear professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A).

I translated the English article into Korean. Please check this sandbox. Thanks. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 01:44, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:31, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5)-Kim Seo Young(김서영)

Professor, I am SeoYoung Kim. I am taking Everyday Life and Scial Structure(10:30-12:00). I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. Please check the progress here in my sandbox. And please let me know if any further reworks are needed. Thank you! Seoyoung0710 (talk) 02:15, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710 I see. But I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Korean Wikipedia sandbox and update me when it is ready. Make sure to add links and/or references if you want more feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:32, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5) Destiny Samuel

I translated the Food section of this article, you can find the translation in my sandbox.

--Michéle Vera (talk) 02:34, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Michéle Vera Good job. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. In Ducth, try Sjabloon:Interlanguage link - Wikipedia . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:32, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 : Jisu Lee

Hello professor,

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I have completed the task for that parking.

I added a quote to this article.

Thank you. Xisuux (talk) 04:23, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:33, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - Yoon Hongman

Hello professor. Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.I add citation Upper class and Women in South Korea. Please check and let me know if there is a problem. Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 07:23, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Good, but your edits to Upper class had to be removed as Wikipedia cannot use itself as a reference. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:56, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your checking. I added a link and citation at Upper class more. Please check. Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 04:30, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki The reference is reliable but is serves no purpose in the place you've added it to. A reference should be added at the end of a sentence, and verify all claims made in it. So in the sentence "in the years since Irish independencein 1922 the upper class has all but vanished in the Republic of Ireland. Aristocratic titles within the Peerage of Ireland granted by the British monarch have no recognition in the Irish Constitution [HERE]." it should be added to the space marked as HERE - and, I repeat, it should verify all claims made in that sentence. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:36, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5)-Youn Hyunseok

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.I translated middle class into Korean and this is my sandbox link.Please let me know if there is a problem.Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 00:50, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 I see. But I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Korean Wikipedia sandbox and update me when it is ready. Make sure to add links and/or references if you want more feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:31, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello,professor.I moved my sandbox to here.Please check my sandbox again.Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 05:22, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 Good. Now try to add hyperlinks (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking).

Here's another suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:30, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(Week3): Dana Jung (정다은)

Dear professor, I am in the class Everyday Life and Social Structure(A). The article that I chose to translate is 'Freedom of Speech' 218.235.241.134 (talk) 02:33, 24 March 2025 (UTC)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech. also the article I've decided to create and improve is 'Ansan Reed Mushy Park'. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 02:33, 24 March 2025 (UTC)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ansan_Reed_Marshy_Park. could you please check it. thank you.

Daer student. Please log in and sign your post properly. Freedom of speech is ok. The other topic has been translated, however. How about Stanisław Lem instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 24 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

Indeed, I will do Stainslaw Lem as you said as my second topic. Thank you.

as for logging in, I am currently logged in with the ID Dj0131dj. Dj0131dj (talk) 02:22, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dj0131dj Ok. Please tell me if you are translating to Korean or Chinese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dj0131dj Freedom of speech to Korean is approved, but the other topic already seems well covered in Korean, so you'd need to choose another. Since your first choice is long, how about a short article like Wawel Dragon? PS. Please remember to sign your wiki messages _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:45, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I am trying to translate it to Korean. Thank you.

Deadline3(weak4) - LEE YENA (이예나)

Hello, Professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 10:30 AM. I add citation to this article. And for extra credit, I submit my diff link. Thank you for read my work, professor! Leeyena528 (talk) 08:43, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:05, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have revised the article by inserting the English title. Please check the diff link. Thank you. Leeyena528 (talk) 13:44, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) -- Lee Jaehyun

Hello, professor. I'm a student who taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' course.

I have completed Sociology of religion translation(En->Ko) as required for the Week 5 deadline. You can check the progress here in My Korean Sandbox.

My project is translating article from En to Ko, so I attatched My sandbox page of Korean wikipedia.

Please let me know if any further revisions are needed.JHyunlee (talk) 06:39, 31 March 2025 (UTC)JHyunlee (talk) 06:40, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Your progress is good. You can now integrate your work with ko:종교사회학

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:08, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

FIrst, I revised from bold text to general text.

Second, I used ko:틀:임시링크 of my articles,(red link)

- Information overload

- Sociology of religion

-> This links are connected to English articles, but my projects are written in Korean articles. (en to ko)

Furthermore, I reformed all the problems that professor said. Check those please! JHyunlee (talk) 06:37, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Very good job.

Since you finished early, you can try to promote your content on the Main Page of Korean Wikipedia by following the guide here: 위키백과:알고 계십니까 - 위키백과 . If your work is displayed there, you can get extra credit too. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(Week4) - Kim Yeonhee (김연희)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM.

I add citation to this article. For extra credit, here is my diff link.

Please check. Thank you

Kyeon0425 (talk) 07:37, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good, but the reference you have added is to a blog. Blogs are not considered reliable sources, see Wikipedia:Reliable sources / 위키백과:신뢰할 수 있는 출처 - 위키백과 . Can you find a more reliable reference (like a newspaper article) for this information? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:53, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 I've corrected it. Here is my diff link. Kyeon0425 (talk) 06:25, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Extra article-XIXIANGRUI

Dear professor: Hello professor This is an extra article I edited in English Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/sandbox But it was edited in my sandbox How can I put it in my user interface? Please check XIXIANGRUI (talk) 13:04, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI I am not sure what you are asking. Do you want to add it to your Wikipedia:User page? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor： Yes, Professor, can this extra article be edited in sandbox？ XIXIANGRUI (talk) 08:10, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI To complete this project, you should update your user page. Sandbox is for experimenting with code.

That said, posting a travel guide on your userpage is not particularly useful. Check the guide here on how to design a nice user page: Wikipedia:User page design guide - Wikipedia _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week5) - Lee Sihoon(이시훈)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished translating one of the two topics I chosen, I have attached the link to it here, please check it out.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 05:14, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Very good. When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4（week5） Kim, Kyung min

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed the Deadline 4. Please check.

Link: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kkm.hanyang22/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 08:19, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Very good progress. You can publish your article if you think you translated everything. Make sure to proofread it and read the guides at ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 if you haven't. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 PS. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:02, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week5) - Kim Nahee (김나희)

Professor, I am Nahee Kim. I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(10:30-12:00). I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. Please check the progress here in my sandbox. And please let me know if any further reworks are needed. Thank you! Naheekim2025 (talk) 09:02, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Very good progress. You can publish your article and then monitor the history of the page as well as your talk page on Korean Wikipedia for messages from the local reviewers.

After publishing the article, try to add WP:CATEGORIES to it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:03, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5):YANJINJIN

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. This is the link to my sandbox translation https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JINJINYAN/sandbox_Proto-globalization Please check, thank you. JINJINYAN (talk) 23:58, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN I see. But I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when it is ready. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

I have modified it in the Chinese Wikipedia sandbox, please check it.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JINJINYAN/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E5%8E%9F%E5%A7%8B%E5%85%A8%E7%90%83%E5%8C%96 JINJINYAN (talk) 10:13, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN Very good. You'll need to copy the Proto-globalization#Sources section to Chinese article to complete the reference section.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:03, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5)LIANG ZHIWEI

Hello professor.I am Liang Zhiwei who is taking the class Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30a.m.I have finished my deadline4 task(one article of my translation work).This is my sandboxand this is my chosen article,please let me know if there are any mistakes I need to correct.Thank you!-- LIANG06 (talk) 21:39, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

And this is my Chinese sandboxCould you tell me which is better?Thank you very much!!-- LIANG06 (talk) 22:36, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 If you are translating to Chinese, then you should work on Chinese Wikipedia, in your sandbox at User:LIANG06/沙盒 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书

Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:30, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

I see professor This is my Chinese sandbox,and i have already linked the english Wikipedia to the red link.Is there anything wrong?please check again Thank you!!-- LIANG06 (talk) 05:53, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Very good. When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:52, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:04, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5) LI MENGCHEN

Dear professor,I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure. I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. Please check the progress here in my sandbox. Limengchen2777 (talk) 05:15, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Very nice. The first short paragraph in the "participated in the Diaoyutai Islands protection movement" section needs a reference. Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service).

If the Chinese article has any links that link to topics that do not exist in English, here's a solution: when a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:01, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5) HONG HAOTIAN

Dear professor,I'm taking Everyday life and Social Structure.I have already created the sandbox and completed the Chinese-to-English translation. Please check it. Honghaotian (talk) 05:16, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Good progress. Double check that your references have all metadata (such as author name). Correct publisher info to proper organizations names, not links like history.nju.edu.cn. Remember to use Chinese titles for Chinese works (like the ones in Bibliography).

Comparing the links in your article to the Chinese, I see that one has more blue links. If the Chinese article has any links that link to topics that do not exist in English, here's a solution: when a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to use it.

In case of people, organizations or such that do not have an article in English or Chinese that we can link to, I recommend adding their Chinese name following English.

Your article should also have an infobox, and provide the Chinese name of the organization in the lead. See for example the formatting here: Revive China Society _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:37, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (week4) Chaebin Park(박채빈)

Dear professor,

I’m Chaebin Park (2021069516) taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia.

I add citations to this article.

In addition, I haven't been invitated an blog, so I leaved my email address on the LMS blog invitation page. please check it.

Thank you so much! CHAEBIN99 (talk) 05:52, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Good. For the blog invitation, stop by my office after class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:39, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week 3) - Haein Lee

Dear professor, I'm an B class student on "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I hope to translate the following two articles into Korean. 1: Collective_action_problem https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collective_action_problem 2: Base_and_superstructure https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Base_and_superstructure Please check this thank you! Haein Lee (talk) 05:55, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee The topics are good but you need to talk to me after class, as I cannot locate your name in our spreadsheet, where all the projects are recorded. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:40, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3(Week4) - Dana Jung (정다은)

Dear professor, I am taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure(Class A)'lecture.

I have added citations to an article about Chang Kiha. Please check it, thank you. Dj0131dj (talk) 05:56, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Dj0131dj Please format your citation to use Wikipedia:Citation templates and fill in required metadata, as explained in the syllabus. Make sure to use the Wikipedia:VisualEditor to make this easier. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:42, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5) Yoon Hongman(윤홍만)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure". This is one of my article and this is my sandbox link. Although the translation is not yet complete, I'm sharing one of my articles that is about 50% finished. Please check. Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 05:59, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki It's a good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:51, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5)JIANGJIASHAN(강가삼)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）I have translated it. Please check it out.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ttkx11/亚洲皇家学会韩国分会

Thank you Ttkx11 (talk) 06:08, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Very good. When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Make sure to review zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:52, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

week2，Collective Intelligence in Practice—WEIYUXIN위우신

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I chose to complete the translation task alone. I have selected the following two articles for translation into Chinese. Please check them, thank you. 1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leif_Enger 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Style:_Lessons_in_Clarity_and_Grace Qizicheng (talk) 06:24, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Qizicheng The articles are ok but they are very short, totaling only ~500 words, which is, for that class, 2,000 words (translation). You'll need to select additional article(s) to meet the word quota (exceeding it is ok, and results in extra credit awarded). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:55, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

week2，Collective Intelligence in Practice-LYUKE려가

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I chose to complete the translation task alone. I have selected the following two articles for translation into Chinese. Please check them, thank you. 1. Concision2.Joseph M. Williams Kk778 (talk) 06:48, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kk778 Concision is ok, but Joseph M. Williams is undercited, so you'll need to choose another article or articles. Concision is 306 words long so you need to translate ~1700 more words in your other articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:57, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (Week4) Chachaeyoung 이채영

Dear professor, I'm Lee chaeyeong who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' at pm01:00. I added citation to this article, here is diff. Thank you very much. Chachaeyoung (talk) 09:47, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung Good attempt, but you need to try again - see explanation on your talk page. In addition, next time, please format your citation using citation templates, as explained and requested in the description of the activity in the syllabus _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:00, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Project Articles—WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I am a student of the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the translation of my first article in the sandbox. Can I move it out of the sandbox? WSH0927 (talk) 14:01, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Very good. When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to review zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:00, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:02, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (Week5) Kwon Hyunji (권현지)

Dear professor,

I'm taking a collective intelligence in Practice class. I translated this article into my sandbox.

Please check this link. Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 14:21, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Good start. The article seems light on blue links. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to reviewread ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5)ZHOUZIYU

Hello professor.I am zhouziyu in the class Everyday Life and Social Structure class .I have finished my deadline4 task(one article of my translation work).This is my sandbox.this is my chosen article.Thank you very much for your check. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:46, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu

Very good. When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to review zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 as well.

PS. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:04, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5)LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, this is an article translated from English to Chinese for my course Daily Life and Social Structure.Political cartoon#cite note-1My translationhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

This is a collective intelligence course article My translationhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue

Please review it, thank you professor Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:41, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue It's a good start. Work on translating and adding references next. Then work on blue links. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:08, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5) - ljhwa(이진화)

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure (10:30–12:00) and Collective Intelligence classes. I am currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure (10:30–12:00) and Collective Intelligence classes. I selected two articles from each course, making a total of four articles, and translated two of them for Assignment 4.

• English: Censorship by Apple Korean: 연습장 2
• English: Censorship by Copyright Korean: 연습장

Ljhwa (talk) 07:26, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Good progress. Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to reviewread ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)-김다영(kim da young)

Hello Professor,I'm taking your "Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure."(10:30~12:00). I have completed approximately 50% of the Korean translation of the article "Animal welfare and rights in India."

Here is the link to my sandbox

While working on the translation, I encountered an issue when trying to copy the image and table from the first part of the English article using wiki code. An error occurred, and I was unable to complete that part. If you happen to know a solution, I would appreciate your guidance. Day123kk (talk) 09:52, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Good progress.

The table from the top part cannot be translated as the relevant code does not exist in Korean (Template:Infobox country animal welfare). You can use the image, however, as it exits on Commons and can be used in all language versions. File:Gaushala in Sector 45, Chandigarh.jpg - Wikimedia Commons

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to reviewread ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 as well _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:13, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5) - Kim Myeongjun(김명준)

Dear Mr. Piotr,

This is Kim Myeongjun, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished translating one of the two topics I chosen, I have attached the link to it here, please check it out. Myeong220 (talk) 10:09, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220 Good progress.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to reviewread ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 as well _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:14, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5) -LI QINGLU

Hello Professor,I am liqinglu from 2024052588. Understanding daily life and social structures (Class B).

I completed the translation task of the article text.You can check it out via this link .

Thank you. 이청로 (talk) 10:30, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@이청로 It's a good start. Work on translating and adding references next. Then work on blue links. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:14, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5)LIU JUNYU(유준오)

Dear professor, This is a translated article from the course "Understanding Everyday Life and Social Structure".

This is a translated article from the course "Collective Intelligence".

Both articles are partially completed. Please check them. thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 10:49, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455

Good progress.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to review and read zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:15, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) - ZHANG JINGYANG (장정양)

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30)

I chose the"One country, two systems" article for my Wikipedia assignment. You can find my edit through the diff link below:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_country,_two_systems#Macau_and_Mainland_China_relations Zjy402 (talk) 11:55, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:17, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5)-LIU MINGHAN

Hello professor, my name is liu Minghan and I am a student in Class A.

I have completed the assignment for the fifth week.

Please check it. Thank you. Liuminghan (talk) 13:15, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Liuminghan It's a good start. Work on translating and adding references next. Then work on blue links. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:18, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

deadline2 (Week3) Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Hello, Professor! I'm a student in the morning class of understanding daily life and social structure. I would like to translate the article into Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beibei_Library Please check if it is possible. Thank you! Lee0616 (talk) 02:44, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 That article is too short to count for a class project, but you can translate it for extra credit. For your class project, you should chose articles that have at least 1,250 words and are well referenced. For example, if you are interested in libraries, I'd recommend articles like Biblioteca Marciana or Private Case _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:51, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Aha, can this article be done?

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Oil_noodles&oldid=1241145831 Lee0616 (talk) 01:51, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 That article is again too short to count for a class project. If you cannot locate a better article yourself, please use the suggseted topics above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Will this topic be okay?

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Line_Friends Lee0616 (talk) 04:38, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

Thank you. Then, is this topic okay?

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Line_Friends Lee0616 (talk) 04:40, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 That article would be ok for extra credit the Korean one already has enough content, and expansion from English would be unlikely to reach the required word count for the project, as described in the syllabus.

If you are unable to choose a top and you don't like my suggestions above, talk to me during office hours. But keep in mind you have already missed deadlines for choosing your project and completing the outline, so your score is reduced, and the longer you take, the lower it will. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Okay! So, is there any topic that can be translated among these topics?

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Civil_society

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cognitive_psychology

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmopolitanism Lee0616 (talk) 04:23, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Civil society to Korean would be a very good choice. Given its size, it's more than enough, coupled with your small planned expansion of Line Friends. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:19, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5)- Kwak dain (곽다인)

Hello professor, I am Kwak Dain. I am attending the A class of the Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. You can check the progress here in the https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kwak_dain/sandbox. Please let me know if any further revisions are needed. Thank you Kwak dain (talk) 14:02, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain It's a good start. Work on translating and adding the rest of the text and references next. Then work on blue links. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:22, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5)-홍수정(HONG SOOJUNG)

Professor,I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure B class. I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. Please check the progress here in my sandbox. Thank you. Sooraon05 (talk) 15:19, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 You did not link your sandbox correctly; the link above does not work. Please try again _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:28, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5)-Jung Uijun(정의준)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure". This is one of my article and this is my sandbox link. The translation is done, and you can see it in the article's history.. Please check. Thank you. Koolujman (talk) 23:41, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@Koolujman Good progress.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:31, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - HU ENFAN

Hello Professor,I'm taking your "Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure.This week our team translated two articles: Prisoners of war in World War II and Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II. This is the article I was responsible for.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%ED%98%B8%EC%9D%B8%EB%B3%B8/sandboxI haven't added any references yet, please check 호인본 (talk) 07:09, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Regarding the (single) article linked above at User:호인본/sandbox - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 - good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Add references :)

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:59, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - CHEN SIWEN

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"，I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and this is the link to my sandbox outline. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you. Chensiwen (talk) 08:17, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen

Regarding the (single) article linked above - good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Add references, as some parts of your translations are still missing them.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:00, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5)-YUE SHUYU(유서윤 )

Dear professor, I am in class at 10:30 AM. This is the article I chose. This is my editing in the sandbox. If you have any questions, please let me know. Thanks Professor. 0701ysy (talk) 08:20, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@0701ysy You should report a change in Wikipedia username to me. Why did you abandon your previous account at 930ysy?

If you are translating to Chinese, your sandbox should be on Chinese Wikipedia, not English.

Move your draft to your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox, and then add blue links and references.

References should be in the footnote format.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:04, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)- LI ZIKANG

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"， This week our team translated two articles: Prisoners of war in World War II and Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II， and this is the link to my sandbox， Currently, only some references have been added. Please let me know if there are any issues. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 08:26, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666

Regarding the (single) article linked above - good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Add references, as some parts of your translations are still missing them.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:06, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)- YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"，I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and this is the link to my sandbox outline. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 09:37, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:06, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5)-gaoxiaoxia/chensiting

Hello professor, this is our deadline4 for the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia.link,link Babaibiaobin (talk) 09:39, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Good job. In your English article, there are some Wikipedia:Disambiguation links. Use this to identify and fix them: Go to your preferences and enable the gadget that "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". Then check your article for orange links and fix them.

For both your English and Chinese articles, check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Your history section is good. I'll be looking forward to seeing how you can improve other sections (economy, transport, cuisine...). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:11, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5) - Lee Ga Eun (이가은)

Professor, I am submitting this week's assignment. My Wikipedia sandbox page is: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:2024064839LeeGaeun/연습장 Thank you. 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 09:51, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:12, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5)-CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" （13：00～14：30）and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"（14：30~16：00），I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and this is the link to my sandbox outline. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 09:52, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:12, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

German atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II

Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II

Online hate speech

American Sociological Association

I translated these four articles into Korean.

사용자:Yeonseo Koo/제2차 세계대전 중 독일군이 포로들에게 저지른 잔혹 행위

사용자:Yeonseo Koo/제2차 세계대전 중 포로에 대한 소련의 잔혹 행위

사용자:Yeonseo Koo/온라인 혐오 발언

사용자:Yeonseo Koo/미국사회학협회

This week I have finished translating all the texts, except linking and citation.

Please check. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 10:06, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:13, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - LAOXINYI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

Everyday Life：I have edited the Wikipedia topic in the Sandbox and published it in the main space. 1）Sandbox link 2）Main space link

Collective Intelligence：I have only edited one of the Wikipedia topics in the sandbox,This week I have finished translating all the texts, except linking and citation.1）Sandbox Link Please check, thanks! Laoxinyi (talk) 10:19, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Additionally, in your English translation: 

• remove unncessary bolding (see Wikipedia:MOSBOLD
• there are some Wikipedia:Disambiguation links. Use this to identify and fix them: Go to your preferences and enable the gadget that "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". Then check your article for orange links and fix them.
• add references to the places missing them, such as the sentence beginning with "Hence, during the presidencies " and the paragraph beginning with "On June 16, 2022"

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:17, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. Note that some content was removed due to Global Times being disallowed on Wikipedia (due to high percentage of fake news and propaganda). You can restore it, if better sources are found. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:19, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)- SHAO TIANYI & ZHONG QI

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"， This week our team translated two articles: Opera in South Korea and History of feminism， and this is the link to our sandbox and sandbox .This is just an initial translation; new content will be added later. Please let me know if there are any issues. ––Yeomll (talk) 10:52, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:28, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I apologize for the interruption. Regarding the Wikipedia entry on Korean opera,https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yeomll since there is currently no Chinese version, a new page would need to be created. However, Wikipedia’s guidelines do not allow a direct full translation of the English version, and the approval process for a new article can be quite lengthy. Would it be acceptable if I share the translated content with you through my personal sandbox instead? Look forward to your reply. ——Yeomll (talk) 04:25, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)-MINA ZHUANG

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"，I have completed half of my translation work, and this is the link to my sandbox 1 and sandbox 2. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 11:06, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 Regarding User:Minazhuang777/东南日报 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书, since this is supposed to be a translation to English, please move it to your sandbox in English Wikipedia, fix any errors resulting from moving from zh wiki to en wiki, then ask me again for a review.

Regarding your User:Minazhuang777/Historiography of Korea - Wikipedia article:

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:30, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)-LIU YINGTONG

Dear Professor. I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" .I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and here is my sandbox. Please check. If you need to make any changes, let me know. Thanks. Ryuthefang (talk) 11:25, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:30, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)-WU JIACHEN

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice"，I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and this is the link to my sandbox outline. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you. A1246632822 (talk) 12:11, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:31, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Dedline4（Week5）-WU KANGHUI(오강혜)

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and this is the link to my sandbox outline. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KANGHUIWU2005/sandbox KANGHUIWU2005 (talk) 12:19, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@KANGHUIWU2005 Since you are supposed to translate content to Chinese Wikipedia, please move your sandbox there, and ask me for a review then. Make sure to review and read zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese). Make sure to add blue links and references to it. Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:32, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5）-ZHOU XINRU929(주흔여)

Dear Professor,I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" .I have completed my homework for the fifth week, and this is the link to my sandbox outline. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know. Thank you.https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZHOUXINRU929/sandbox ZHOUXINRU929 (talk) 12:26, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZHOUXINRU929 ince you are supposed to translate content to Chinese Wikipedia, please move your sandbox there, and ask me for a review then. Make sure to review and read zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese). Make sure to add blue links and references to it. Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:33, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5）-WU XIAOTONG

Dear professor,

I am taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed the translation of the text.

Please check it. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 12:36, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:33, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5) -kiwoong kim (김기웅)

Hello Professor, I am Kim Kiwoong (Student ID: 2024040046), attending the B class of the Everyday Life and Social Structure course at 1:00–2:30 on Mondays and Fridays.

I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. You can check the progress here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kimkiwoong/sandbox

Please let me know if any further revisions are needed. Thank you! — Kim Kiwoong Kimkiwoong (talk) 12:49, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong Since you are supposed to translate content to Korean Wikipedia, please move your sandbox there, and ask me for a review then. Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 . Make sure to add blue links and references to it. Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:34, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week5) - Jeongwoo Rhee (이정우)

Dear professor,

I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM.

I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox.

Please check my work.

Thank you! Leorhee04 (talk) 12:49, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:35, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week5) --XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have completed about half of the translation work and have added links and references based on the translations.

Here are the articles I have translated:

Everyday Life and Social Structure: Link 1

Collective Intelligence in Practice: Link 2

Please review them at your convenience. Thank you very much! Xjx921 (talk) 13:10, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Good progress. Here is the detailed feedback for your first article:

• Some parts of your article echo official CCP framing without critical distance, e.g., phrases like “clean and bright cyberspace,” “toxic celebrity worship,” or “creating continuous deterrence.” These may be direct translations, but without attribution, they risk violating WP:NPOV. Suggestions: Attribute loaded language to the issuing body. E.g., According to the Cyberspace Administration of China, the initiative aims to create a “clean and bright” cyberspace. Avoid reproducing propaganda-like language verbatim unless clearly framed as such.
• There is a partially broken link in “Notice on Launching t[https...” — looks like an editing oversight.
• Your article currently stops at 2020. If the campaign has continued into 2021–2024, even in a modified form (e.g., under new names), that information should be at least noted or addressed.
• Format citations with metadata. They should contain information on author, date, publisher, and both the Chinese and English translated title (the later using the translated title parameter)
• Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Regarding your second article:

• there is some technical problem with the infobox formatting - it is simply too big. Ask for help at Wikipedia:Teahouse or Wikipedia:Village pump (technical) and make infobox smaller
• There are again parts of the article that reflect internal CPC framing, even if unintentionally. For example: "Successful Operation: Downfall of the Gang of Four" sounds celebratory or one-sided. Phrases like “to crush the plot of armed rebellion in the city” and “downfall of the Gang of Four” need to be qualified with attribution or rewritten for neutrality. Suggestions: Use phrasing like: “The CPC later described the event as a decisive move to restore party unity…” Avoid military or triumphalist language unless quoting or citing official descriptions.
• If you're drawing from a memoir, be sure to clearly indicate that it's a primary source and balance with scholarly interpretation.
• fix metadata issues like in the other article
• continue translating content

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:43, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5）-WANG SISI

Hello,professor.

I am Wang Sisi in the class B of Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed this week's assignment, please check it out. Wangsisi031012 (talk) 13:18, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Wangsisi031012 The link is broken, please fix it and ask again. Make sure it works before asking. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:44, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5

Professor, I have completed fifty percent of my progress. Please check. Wanhink (talk) 14:37, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Wanhink

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:46, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week 5) Dana Jung(정다은)

Dear Professor. I am taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' lecture, in class A. This is my translation article about Stanislaw Lem. This is my sandbox edit. So far, I have translated about 50 percent of it. Please check it. Thank you. Dj0131dj (talk) 14:50, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Dj0131dj Since you are supposed to translate content to Korean Wikipedia, please move your sandbox there, and ask me for a review then. Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 . Make sure to add blue links and references to it. Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:47, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4（Week5）- Park suhyun

Hello, professor.

I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure".

I have done half of my translation work. Here is my work. [50], [51],

Please check it. Thank you. Park suhyun (talk) 14:57, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Park suhyun Regarding your second link (to Korean Wikipedia sandbox):

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:47, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5)

Dear professor, This is Minjoo Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I have completed at least 50% of the translation for the article Napster https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Kiim_Miin_Joo/sandbox&action=edit, Thank you !! Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 15:01, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo Since you are supposed to translate content to Korean Wikipedia, please move your sandbox there, and ask me for a review then. Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 . Make sure to add blue links and references to it. Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:48, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4 (week5) Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Professor, hello!

I'm a student taking the morning class to understand daily life and social structure.

I translated the next article halfway. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Civil_society

Here's my writing. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Lee0616/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

Please check it! Thank you. Lee0616 (talk) 15:08, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:48, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - 남현서 NAM HYUNSEO

Professor,I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure B class. I have completed the article translation as required for the Week 5 deadline. Please check the progress here in my https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/위키백과:연습장 Thank you Hyunseo050907 (talk) 15:24, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 This does not appear to be the right link, please try again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:49, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - JIA YUAN

Dear professor, hello. I am taking a course to understand everyday life and social structures. I have completed the creation and translation of two Wikipedia articles. And cross-language links were added. Please check them out.Individual action on climate change and Climate change in South Korea.Thanks! Jiayyyyy (talk) 06:13, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Very good. The following fixes are needed:

Change the alignment of your images so that they are on the right or left. Images should not be in the center, creating blanks in the text on left and right.

Check whether all blue links are identical. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Make sure to review and read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 (when translating to Korean) or zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (when translating to Chinese).

Please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:56, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, the image layout has been changed to allow monitoring of page history.Subsequent improvements will continue.Thanks！ Jiayyyyy (talk) 02:32, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Very good. For extra credit, you can try to have your work displayed on Chinese Wikipedia's Main Page using this procedure: Wikipedia:New article recommendations/candidates - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4)---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, professor. I added 2 references to the article, Please check it. Thank you.Zhuo1221 (talk) 00:57, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:21, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello Professor, I have drafted a project outline in my personal sandbox and completed part of the Chinese-to-English translation. Please check it out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 01:08, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

"Please check what is the official English name of this organization; if unsure you can send them an email. In your article in the first paragraph you use the term " China National Comprehensive Fire and Rescue Team" but in the second, you use "National Comprehensive Firefighting Team". Then later, you use the term "State Comprehensive Fire and Rescue Service".

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons. See 国家综合性消防救援队伍 - Google Search

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the Chinese version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:27, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week5) - TRAN THUY NGA (짠 튀 응아)

Hello, Professor. I am TRAN THUY NGA who is taking the Every Life and Social Structure (class A). I have translated the article about 50 percent of it. Please check the progress here in my sandbox: https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Th%C3%A0nh_vi%C3%AAn:%EC%A7%A0_%ED%8A%80_%EC%9D%91%EC%95%84/nh%C3%A1p

Thank you. 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 01:57, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 This is a good start. Please translate the references, and add links next.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. In Vietnamese, that would be Bản mẫu:interlanguage link – Wikipedia tiếng Việt . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4)-heo jongyeol

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM. I add citation to this article For extra credit, here is my diff Please check it, thank you Gjwhdduf123 (talk) 14:33, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

@Gjwhdduf123 Good. When using a foreign language reference, please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:13, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I have made the changes as requested: when referencing works in a foreign language, the original Korean title is preserved, and the English title has been added using the translated_title parameter.

Please let me know if any further revisions are needed.

Thank you. Gjwhdduf123 (talk) 04:06, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Gjwhdduf123 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:17, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4：（week5）----MUYE

Dear professor. I am currently taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'，I have finished translating the first article of each lesson. Everyday Life and Social Structure:Journalistic objectivity （en to zh） Collective Intelligence in Practice：Operationalization （en to zh） Please check it. PS.I would like to confirm that the length of the translation of these two articles has reached the word count standard.If I finish the rest of the content, does it count as extra points? MUYW (talk) 07:02, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Excellent progress. Please monitor the history of the articles (https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%93%8D%E4%BD%9C%E4%B8%BB%E4%B9%89&action=history and https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%96%B0%E9%97%BB%E5%AE%A2%E8%A7%82%E6%80%A7&action=history) as well as your talk page on Chinese Wikipedia for messages from the local reviewers.

The translation of the journalistic article does not appear to be finished yet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:34, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

For the "Journalistic objectivity" article, my edit record shows that 10,000 words were successfully translated and not deleted, so can you tell me exactly what was not done? Thank you MUYW (talk) 04:05, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Incomplete translations can be deleted, so to ensure no problems you should translate the entire article. Extra points will be awarded for exceeding word count. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:25, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

I have translated two articles in full, please check, thanks.Journalistic objectivity、Operationalization MUYW (talk) 04:43, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Very good. For your next steps:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use the following tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add zh:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. What is needed is at a minimum in an edit summary on the page where you add translated content, identifying it as a translation and linking it to the source page. Sample wording for this is given here. If you forgot, attribution must be given retroactively. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Additionally, please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week5) - JongYeol Heo(허종열)

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM. I have completed more than half of my translation work for Deadline 4. Here is the link to my sandbox

I would appreciate it if you could take a look and provide feedback.

Thank you! Gjwhdduf123 (talk) 04:41, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Gjwhdduf123 Good progress. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

At the bottom of the article, you can see that Template:Trade route has not been translated to Korean. You can do so for extra credit. Ditto for Template:Ancient seafaring

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add zh:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. What is needed is at a minimum in an edit summary on the page where you add translated content, identifying it as a translation and linking it to the source page. Sample wording for this is given here. If you forgot, attribution must be given retroactively. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Additionally, please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:09, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week4) - LONG ZILN

Hello, professor. I'm LONG ZILIN, 2023070828 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30)

I chose the"Hangzhou Cultural Radio and Television Group" article for my Wikipedia assignment. You can find my edit through the diff link below:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hangzhou_Cultural_Radio_and_Television_Group#General_situation LONG ZILIN (talk) 05:04, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@LONG ZILIN While your reference is reliable, you've added strange text that does not seem to fit the article "This article discusses China’s cultural reform after 2000..." - which article??

Instead, your reference should have a quotation parameter, where you'd show that it contains facts related to these in the preceding sentences. I could not locate, in the cited articles, content related to that present in the Wikipedia article. Please add a reference that is relevant to the topic and contains the same information, for Wikipedia:Verifiability _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:14, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week 5) - Bae Jinsu(배진수)

Dear professor. I am Bae Jinsu who taking collective intelligence course.

I have completed the Week 5 task of translating the half of article and leave it to the blog.

Thank you for reading. Kind regards. Jameseugene (talk) 12:22, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jameseugene This assignment is supposed to be completed in your wiki sandbox. Please link to your work in progress in your Korean Wikipedia sandbox, not to your blog post. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Oh, I appreciate to let me know. here is the link of my sand box Please check this. Thank you. Jameseugene (talk) 06:45, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jameseugene Good. Please continue your work by translating the rest of the content, then ping me for another review when all content has been translated.

Make sure all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

My progress on the Wikipedia deletion debate - Kim jong min (hanyang)

Dear Professor, I would like to perform the assignment mentioned in the syllabus to report on the progress of the deletion debate. (Extra Credit)

Deletion debate page made by me

The syllabus says that the assignment is due on March 31, so maybe I am already late for the period.

Thank you Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:38, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) It's ok, that activity is for extra credit in class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:48, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week 3) - Lee Dong Gyu(이동규)

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure A(10:30-12:00). I chose to translate 2 articles into Korean. These are two articles I chose: Censorship by copyright, COVID-19 lab leak theory

I would like to know if I can edit these.

Thank you.

Dong Gyu Lee (talk) 13:55, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dong Gyu Lee Censorship by copyright has already been reserved by another student. COVID-19 lab leak theory is ok. For your second topic, how about Conspiracy theory? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:11, 23 March 2025 (UTC)

Okay, Thank You for your recommendation, professor! 218.235.241.132 (talk) 09:26, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure A(10:30 ~ 12:00) I'm sorry, but can I change the translation topic. The changed topic is Origin of Speech and Sednaya Prison. Dong Gyu Lee (talk) 09:13, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3(week4) - 김예림(Kim Yerim)

Hello professor, I'm 2024009943 Kim Yerim, taking Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure B class. I have added a citation to this post. And here is my diff. Please check it. Thank you. Yrmisoee (talk) 18:34, 29 March 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee Good. Please add the English title while keeping the original Korean one; use the "translated_title" parameter. Ask me for help in class or during my office hours if you are unsure how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:48, 30 March 2025 (UTC)

Professor, sorry for the late reply. I added it as you asked. Please check my diff and if I'm wrong, I'd appreciate your response. Yrmisoee (talk) 10:30, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee That is not correct. You should edit your existing reference add the translate title to its metadata. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:34, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5)-Kim Seongil(김선길)

Hello Professor,I'm taking your "Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure."(10:30~12:00).

I have been working on the translation assignment and have translated the article en:Anti-Japanese sentiment in the United States into Korean. You can view my draft in the sandbox linked below:

• Original article: View on English Wikipedia
• My translated draft: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:%EA%B9%80%EC%84%A0%EA%B8%B8/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

While working on the translation, I encountered a few issues that I would like to ask about:

1. Some of the images in the original article are not available on Wikimedia Commons, so I could not include them in the translated version. 2. For links in the original article that do not have a corresponding page in the Korean Wikipedia, I used the temporary link template and also included the English article title in parentheses. I would like to confirm if this approach is acceptable.

I would appreciate your feedback on these points. Thank you very much! 김선길 (talk) 09:00, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Very good. You are correct in observing that not all images can be moved. Your code appears to be well formatted.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / 위키백과:문서 이동 - 위키백과 / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. Make sure to reviewread ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:10, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor,

I’ve successfully moved the article Anti-Japanese sentiment in the United States from my sandbox to the mainspace. However, I’m currently encountering an issue with the categorization. Although I’ve correctly added the appropriate category codes at the bottom of the article, the system still shows the message:

“This page has no categories. Please add appropriate categories and remove this template.”

I’ve double-checked the category formatting and even purged the page cache, but the message remains. I’d like to ask for your advice on how to resolve this issue properly.

Thank you in advance! 김선길 (talk) 09:20, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

This is the link to the article I created:

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/미국_내_반일_감정 김선길 (talk) 09:24, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Very good. Please monitor the article's history regularly to see if any issues are raised. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. What is needed is at a minimum in an edit summary on the page where you add translated content, identifying it as a translation and linking it to the source page. Sample wording for this is given here. If you forgot, attribution must be given retroactively. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Additionally, please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

You should also add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week5) - LEE YENA (이예나)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox. Please check my work. Thank you! Leeyena528 (talk) 08:37, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Very good!

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. What is needed is at a minimum in an edit summary on the page where you add translated content, identifying it as a translation and linking it to the source page. Sample wording for this is given here. If you forgot, attribution must be given retroactively. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Additionally, please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:47, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week5) LONG ZILIN

Hello Professor,

I'm LONG ZILIN, 2023070828 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30) .I have completed about 50% of the translation of the article "Nepotism" for Deadline 4. You can view my translation here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LONG_ZILIN/sandbox

Thank you! 218.101.249.177 (talk) 09:16, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor,

The previous version of my sandbox had formatting issues (section headings were not displaying correctly). I have now fixed the formatting and pasted the revised version. Please find the updated link below:

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LONG_ZILIN/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 LONG ZILIN (talk) 08:37, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@LONG ZILIN Indeed, the first sandbox was on English Wikipedia. You correctly fixed this problem by restarting your work in the Chinerse Wikipedia, where your work should exist.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Ping me again for a new review once your translation is finished, and references and blue links (or links to English using the tooil above) are added. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5) Lee Dong Gyu(이동규)

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure A(10:30 ~ 12:00). I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox. Please check my work. Thank you! Additionally, I changed the topic to "Origin of Speech" because I didn't like the topic when translating, so please check if this is a problem! Dong Gyu Lee (talk) 10:21, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Dong Gyu Lee Which of the two topics selected you'd like to chsange? COVID-19 lab leak theory or Conspiracy theory?

Your new topic (origin of speech) can be approved.

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Ping me again for a review when you have done so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:52, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5（week9） Kim, Kyung min

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed the Deadline 5. Please check.

1) Link: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%9D%EB%AC%BC%EB%8B%A4%EC%96%91%EC%84%B1_%EA%B0%90%EC%86%8C

2) Link: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B1%EB%B3%84%EC%9E%84%EA%B8%88%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8

Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 10:34, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Excellent progress.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your the content you have added is declined (deleted) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to restore it.

Pplease add ko:틀:과제 문서 to the talk page of your articles.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. You can do so by adding the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:55, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) MA CHENXIAO

Dear professor, I have completed the translation of the article. Please check whether the content of the article is sufficient. If it is sufficient, I will start the subsequent optimization work.User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 11:26, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good start. Your translation is good, and the topic is structured well, although the legend should be in the origin section, not in the lead, which should only summarize the rest of the content (a short summary of the origins and related legends can be then re-added there). However, there are some important adjustments to make before this can meet Wikipedia’s quality and policy standards, especially in terms of tone, sourcing, and neutrality.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Certain statements make interpretive claims (e.g., the symbolic meaning of each tea course, connections to moral philosophy or apprenticeship). These should not be written as your own interpretation, but rather attributed to reliable sources. Example (there are others, this is just an example - please read your text carefully) needing revision: "A happy life is hard-won. Go forward and you will have a bright future." This is unclear. Is this a proverb? Maybe try something like this instead: "According to Bai oral tradition, the second tea symbolizes the sweetness of success after enduring hardship." [source]

Your article has no blue links yet. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:01, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) YANG CHAOHAN

Dear professor, I am YANG CHAOHAN, attending your 2025 Daily Life and Social Structure course every Monday and Friday at 10:30. I have completed 50% of the translation of Boudica's article, thank you! Yhan0619 (talk) 13:47, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Very good.

Since there is a short article on Chinese about this topic, double check that all links mentioned in it are present in your article, so that when you merge your content, no useful information is lost. You can reuse the content already present in the zh wiki article as part of your lead if you like it.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:03, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week5) - yejoo Yang (양예주)

Dear professor,

I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure" at 1 PM.

I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox.

I would appreciate it if you could take a look and provide feedback.

Thank you! Yangyejoo (talk) 14:25, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Regarding blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you have added references and corrected any issues with blue links, ping me again for a new review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:05, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Wikipedia Edit：BAILINHAN

Professor, hello. These are the 40 edits I made last month，please check it Bai0926 (talk) 14:36, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Very good, but I noticed some content added in your first article has no references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(Week5) - Gayeong Cho(조가영)

Dear professor, I am a morning class student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. Here is my sandbox. Please check it. Thank you. Gayeong Cho (talk) 14:56, 7 April 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho Good progress.

Next, complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you have added references and corrected any issues with blue links, ping me again for a new review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:07, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5) - NGUYEN KIM CHI (응웬김찌)

Hello, Professor. I am NGUYEN KIM CHI who is taking the Every Life and Social Structure (class B). I have translated the article about 50 percent of it. Please check the progress here in my sandbox. Thank you. NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 06:50, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12 Good start.

But first, you need to move (copy) your work to Vietnamese Wikipedia, since you are translating from English to Vietnamese. Then you need to make sure your references and links work in that project.

Next, complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Vietnamese, use Bản mẫu:interlanguage link – Wikipedia tiếng Việt. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you have added references and corrected any issues with blue links, ping me again for a new review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:10, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5) - Kim Jaejun(김재준)

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 10:30 AM.

I have done more than half of my translation work.

Here is my sandbox. Please check my work. Thank you!

Kimjaezzang (talk) 09:07, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Best - use this tool: ko:틀:번역된_문서 (in Korean). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:11, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(5주차) - Choi yun ji (최윤지)

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 10:30 AM. I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox. Please check my work. Thank you! Yumdanggg (talk) 10:53, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yumdanggg Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you have added references and corrected any issues with blue links, ping me again for a new review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:12, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)-WU WENHAO

Dear Professor

I hope you're doing well. I am currently enrolled in Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I’ve completed approximately half of my translation project, and I’d like to share my progress. Please find the links to my sandbox pages below: [Sandbox 1]， [Sandbox 2]

As mentioned in my previous email, my account was blocked in China, which has caused a two-day delay in submitting the assignment. Thank you for your understanding. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 14:53, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Good job getting your account unblocked; I'll treat your work as on time. You can move your content (copy) to the public article shortly, but first, there are some issues to fix:

• Wikipedia content should be neutral. Your work is mostly neutral but occasionally uses economic determinism or interpretive framing without attribution. For instance: “The long-standing low-rent housing policy imposed heavy financial burdens…” ← Needs source or phrasing like: “According to policy analysts…” “Urban housing pressure grew increasingly severe.” ← This is accurate but needs quantification or reference. In general, it is good to use phrases like: “According to the Ministry of Housing…” “Researchers argue that…” “Official reports indicate…” to make it clear to the reader whose opinion we are presenting
• Be cautious about combining multiple events or trends into interpretive claims unless they are supported by secondary analysis. Example: “This amendment marked a constitutional recognition of the market-oriented nature of land use rights in China.” Instead, I recommend: “Scholars such as George C.S. Lin have interpreted the 1988 amendment as a shift toward marketization of land rights.”
• Be cautious that your work does not reads like a statistical appendix or government report than an encyclopedic article. Wikipedia requires a neutral, coherent, and well-sourced narrative structure that allows readers to understand the significance and interpretation of data—not just the data itself. Nearly all references are statistical communiqués from the Chinese government. These are primary sources; Wikipedia prefers secondary sources that interpret and contextualize data. Also, there's no critical viewpoint or coverage of alternative interpretations or limitations of the data. You rely too much on statistics, and too little on scholarly analysis, which we should be summarizing (summarizing statistics is ok, but is needs to be accompanied by summarizing of scholarly analysis). For example, in your industry article, there is no synthesis or interpretation of the trends—just a massive dump of year-by-year data. Wikipedia is not a data repository; it requires encyclopedic prose that explains what these figures mean. For example: What are the key industrialization phases? How did the sector respond to political or economic reforms? What structural transformations occurred post-1978?
• Phrases like “China has achieved remarkable milestones that have attracted global attention” read as lifted from promotional materials or government sources. Wikipedia requires attribution, neutrality, and paraphrasing. Avoid copy-pasting, especially from official sites or other Wikipedia articles. Translation does not remove copyright. If the text is in Chinese, translated without major changes to English, it is not allowed for us to host it, since Chinese government does not release its content under a free license. Note that such content, when identified as a simple translation from a non-free source, will be removed, and your account could be blocked. Read WP:COMPLIC
• In your industry article, Introduce subsections that break down different phases, such as: "1953–1978: Central Planning and Soviet Assistance"
  • "1978–2000: Reform and Opening Up", "2000–2010: Export-led Industrial Boom", "2010–2024: High-Tech Shift and Environmental Constraints"
• In your first article, headings such as “The Commercialization of Housing Began” could be simplified to “Commercialization of Housing (1979–1989)” for consistency with Wikipedia’s style.
• In your first article, use a summary table or timeline to complement the large data set from 2014–2024. This would reduce bulk and improve readability
• In your second article, there is no section on reform-era changes. Add a section on post-1978 changes (market reforms, township enterprises, export-led growth). Likewise, I see no environmental/energy contex. Briefly include how pollution or energy crises shaped industrial development.
• Lastly, Your article can use more blue links. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese language articles that are relevant but do not yet exist in English. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:28, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5) - TANG BIYAO(당벽요)

Dear professor, I am in class at 10:30 AM. This is the article I chose. This is my editing in the sandbox.I am very sorry for the late snbmissiom. If you have any questions, please let me know. Thanks Professor. Tby0204 (talk) 12:20, 9 April 2025 (UTC)

@Tby0204: Good start, but to meet Wikipedia’s quality and notability standards, several key improvements are needed

• The current title is grammatically awkward and redundant (“Kaicheng Temple Chenghuang Temple”). Consider renaming to either: Toucheng Kaicheng Temple or Toucheng City God Temple (if that’s the common English name) Verify with reliable sources how this temple is usually referred to in English. Make sure to use English sources to demonstrate how this temple is referred to in English
• Lead section is too short (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section). The lead should be a concise summary of the most notable features of the temple: location, main deities, historical background, and significance of the orphan-grabbing festival. Currently, it jumps into details too quickly. Add 2–3 sentences of general overview at the top
• Your references are not properly formatted.
• Please make sure to add properly formatted references (footnotes), using Wikipedia:Citation templates
• Many sections (especially folklore, Dou Shou structure, and rituals) lack clear sources. Wikipedia requires verifiability. Even if the content is accurate, it must be supported by reliable secondary sources. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).
• Suggestions for good sources 1) John Lagerwey or Paul Katz – both have published extensively on Taiwanese religious traditions and ritual practices. 2) Taiwan Folk Religion: Identity and Cultural Politics – any academic text discussing Yilan’s regional rituals. 3) Suzuki, Seiichiro’s ethnographies on Taiwanese customs (already cited – use his 1934 book properly with full citation). 4) Religion in Modern Taiwan: Tradition and Innovation in a Changing Society (edited by Philip Clart and Charles B. Jones) 5) search for academic works in databases like JSTOR, Project MUSE, and Taiwan’s own National Digital Library (https://ndltd.ncl.edu.tw/), or use sources from Taiwan Government and Cultural Bureau Sources Cultural Bureau of Yilan County (宜蘭縣文化局), orTaiwan’s Ministry of Culture Open Data site: https://data.culture.tw/ , or look up Lanyang Museum Publications - since they have documented this temple and its rites, cite their museum bulletins or publications.
• Your article has no blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to relevant Chinese articles that do not exist in English. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you have added references and blue links, ask me again for a new review _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 &Deadline 4(week 5)-GUO YING

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 14:30 PM. Here is my editing in the sanbox. Please check it. Thank you. Guoying1 (talk) 12:29, 9 April 2025 (UTC)

@Guoying1 Very good. To meet Wikipedia’s quality and notability standards, several key improvements are needed

• adjust the layout of images to make sure they are on the left or right, and not in the center, with blocks of empty space next to it
• regarding blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Your reference should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_referencesPlease make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service).
• Please double check your work with a grammar and vocabulary tool (AIs can be very helpful). The opening sentence is ungrammatical and overloaded: "At 9:57 am on January 8, 1976, Zhou Enlai , one of the main founders and leaders..." Instead, it should read like this: "Zhou Enlai, one of the main founders and leaders of the Chinese Communist Party and the People's Republic of China, died at 9:57 a.m. on January 8, 1976, at the age of 78, from bladder cancer at the 305 Hospital in Beijing." Also, the lead should summarize key developments—Zhou’s final illness, public mourning, political consequences, and the Tiananmen Incident. As written, it's too brief.. Read more at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section
• The infobox titled "Zhou Enlai passed away" has inaccurate structure and headings. For example, “Part of = Portrait of Zhou Enlai” is not appropriate. title = Zhou Enlai passed away is also wrong. Compare to Death of Diana, Princess of Wales or Death of Marilyn Monroe
• Wikipedia articles need to be neutral (read Wikipedia:Neutral point of view). Phrases like “Zhou Enlai shouted loudly, ‘I am loyal to the Party and the people!’” and “Deng Yingchao cried so hard that her voice was broken” verge on dramatization. Fix this by paraphrasing emotionally charged descriptions using more neutral language (e.g., “reportedly stated,” “was visibly emotional”).
• Related to the above, the section linking Zhou’s death to the April 5 Movement is valuable but needs clearer causal framing, Make it evident that this was a broader political shift, not a direct consequence of his death alone. Neutral language when describing slogans, e.g., "Bring out Zhang Chunqiao..." should be marked clearly as protest slogans and contextualized.
• The level of medical detail—e.g., urine output in milliliters, microbiota imbalance, chemotherapy schedules—is too granular for an encyclopedia article. Consider summarizing some of this. Keep key facts (diagnoses, major procedures, metastasis) but trim repeated cystoscopy notes and minute clinical details unless clearly relevant to political context.
• Only one image is included. Consider adding a photo of Zhou Enlai from his later years., and/or archival images of mourning crowds or the funeral procession, if freely licensed.
• Consider adding a short “Legacy” section summarizing how Zhou’s death influenced views of him in later decades and in official historiography. Include a brief “Controversies” subsection (with NPOV) regarding the secrecy of his illness and the tension between him and the Gang of Four. Cross-reference related pages like Gang of Four, Deng Xiaoping, Tiananmen Incident (1976), and Zhou Enlai where appropriate; this could result in extra credit.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4（Week 5）- XU YAN（서염）

Dear Professor, I am learning about Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed more than half of the translation. This is my sandbox. Please check it. Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 14:47, 9 April 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Very good. To meet Wikipedia’s quality and notability standards, several key improvements are needed

• Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).
• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to relevant Chinese Wikipedia articles that do not have English equivalents yet. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• The lead should summarize key facts: what U17 was, when it operated, why it was important, and when/why it closed. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. Try something like "U17 Original Comic DreamWorks (有妖气原创漫画梦工厂), commonly known as U17 Comics, was a Chinese webcomic platform founded in 2009 by Zhou Jingqi and others under Beijing April Star Network Technology Co., Ltd. It became one of China’s most influential original comics communities, hosting tens of thousands of comics and millions of users. In 2015, it was acquired by Alpha Group, and in 2022, it was shut down and merged into Bilibili Comics."
• Wikipedia articles need to be neutral (read Wikipedia:Neutral point of view). Some parts read too much like a promotional article or press release (e.g., “winning authors can get bonuses, certificates, and trips to Japan”). Avoid first-person or platform-centric phrasing like “you can freely publish.” Fix by for example changing to passive or third-person formulation, in correct tense. "Users could upload original works, which, upon approval, were displayed on the platform." “Now redirected to Bilibili Comics homepage” should be phrased as: “As of 2022, the original U17.com domain redirects to Bilibili Comics.”
• Proofread your work; use tools like AI to help. I see for example inconsistent capitalization and section titles- fix capitalization for "history" → "History". “Comics to other fields” is awkward—should be renamed to something clearer like: Expansion into animation, gaming, and film”. Sentence like: “U17 does not sign comic authors, but signs comic works and the operation rights of the works.” would be more clear as “U17 signed licensing agreements for comic works rather than exclusive contracts with authors.”
• Final sections: "References" vs. "See also" The current "reference" section should be "See also". Add actual references under == References == and list all URLs currently in use. Read more at Wikipedia:Manual of Style

Once you fix the above, ping me for a new review _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week6. Please check here.

Thank you Pineappleq (talk) 02:43, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Dead4(week5)-XIXIANGRUI

Dear professor: Professor, I have finished the translation. Please check. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:57, 3 April 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Good start. Here's a suggestion for improvement: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor:professor,I corrected two maybe one that I still understand.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 11:07, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Good. Here are futher comments.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add zh:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. What is needed is at a minimum in an edit summary on the page where you add translated content, identifying it as a translation and linking it to the source page. Sample wording for this is given here. If you forgot, attribution must be given retroactively. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Additionally, please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:37, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor:There is no "move" key under the Chinese Wikipedia tool key.how do I move the article? XIXIANGRUI (talk) 11:33, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI It is possible your account is too new to move a page. In that case, follow the instructions for asking for help as described here: Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:07, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (week4) Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Dear professor, I'm taking Monday morning class of "Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure."(10:30~12:00)

I have added citations to an article about Siheung. Please check it, thank you.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Siheung#External_links This article! Lee0616 (talk) 16:21, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Your citations were added in the wrong place (there is no need to add citations to the external link section) and while they are formatted well, they follow some Korean text ("본문 내용"). On English Wikipedia, any text added should be in English, outside exceptional cases like original titles of the publications. You need to move the citations to the correct part of the text. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:07, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

I revised the quote in the reference column and added it again! Please check it! Lee0616 (talk) 11:03, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 You repeated the same error as before - the footnotes were added to a wrong location. Please read what I wrote above carefully. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:20, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

I've modified it! Please check it! Lee0616 (talk) 06:09, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 You keep repeating the same error. Please ask your friends, who completed this assignment successfully, for help, or come to my office hours for a demonstration.

Your references should be added, in the footnote format, to the end of a relevant sentence that has no reference, and they need to contain a quotation that confirms they are relevant to the sentence being added to. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:09, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Fatima Paulina Lopez Diaz

Dear Professor,

I'm taking the classes "Everyday Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Intelligence in Practice", this is the link to my sandbox outline. Please let me know if there is anything I need to change. Thank you. Fatimald (talk) 02:10, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald A very good start. The following fixes are needed:

• remember you can and should reuse useful content from Korea and the United Nations
• remove unnecessary bolding. See MOS:B
• add more blue links. For example, 38th parallel north should probably link to Circles of latitude between the 35th parallel north and the 40th parallel north - Wikipedia, Korea section
• history.com is not a Wikipedia:Reliable source (if you want to know why, read this), so you'll need to use a different source to verify claims made by that source
• your reference number 3 is broken, please fix it (see title - "Not Found". ?). And obviously, the author's name is not "Canada, Service", and double check other refs, as I see some similar errors in other places in the references metadata
• you should expand your article using academic sources, such as the ones seen here: South Korea and the United Nations - Google Scholar
• Some language veers into nationalistic or valorizing territory (e.g., “demonstrating its commitment to peace and security”). Wikipedia articles must maintain a neutral and impersonal tone, see WP:NPOV. Rephrase evaluative claims to simply state facts (e.g., "South Korea contributed X troops to Y mission as part of the UN peacekeeping effort"). Attribute assessments to sources, not your own narrative (e.g., "According to the UN Human Rights Council…").
• It would be good to find independent (non-Korean) sources for the claims made in the "Key areas of South Korea's engagement with the UN include:" section. Governments will often claim they do a superb job at everything - in fact, this is true for all organizations and individuals. Which is why we should confirm whether independent sources agree with assessments such as " South Korea is a strong advocate...South Korea has significantly increased... South Korea actively participates"
• can you add some images to the article?

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:54, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I did the suggested, could you tell if it's okay?

Thank you. Fatimald (talk) 04:49, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Yes, your references are better. Now, please work on the other issues I've pointed out. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (week 3) - JUNG YOUBIN(정유빈)

Hello, professor. Wikipedia's reply function is not used as a system error, so I'm writing a new article like this now. I'll solve my task with the two documents you recommended. I'm going to translate from English to Korean. Thank you for reading it, and I'm sorry for the late response. JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 07:48, 9 April 2025 (UTC)

@JUNG YOUBIN Which articles have you selected? War poetry and hyperspace, as suggested? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

That's right! Is it possible? JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 10:14, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@JUNG YOUBIN Yes, they are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4（Week 5）- ImYeonJin

Dear professor, I am taking "Everyday Life and Social Structure I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox. Please check my work. I'm sorry for the late upload. Thank you! ImYeonJin (talk) 06:21, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin That's a good start. Now, you need to fix the following issues:

• Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).
• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(Week5) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor,

I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. I have done more than half of my translation work. Here is my sandbox. Please check my work. Thank you! Gayeongkim0 (talk) 07:51, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 That's a good start. Now, you need to fix the following issues:

• Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).
• Regarding blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 .

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（week5）-BAISHIQI

Dear Professor I hope you're doing well. I am currently enrolled in Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I’ve completed approximately half of my translation project, and I’d like to share my progress. Please find the links to my pages below: 修理权公民社会 白诗棋 (talk) 08:10, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 Good progress. Please double check the quality of your work, as the translation has been criticized by a reviewer: User talk:Shiqi Bai - Wikipedia @暁月凛奈 You need to address this and ensure the Chinese Wikipedia reviewers are happy with the quality of your work. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on your translations for feedback from reviewers.

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Please use this tool: zh:Template:Translated page _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:19, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity (related to a Korean writer (김호연))

Dear Professor, I created and developed the Korean Wikipedia article on author Kim Ho-yeon. Among the many Kim Ho-yeon articles, is this the correct one (author Kim Ho-yeon, born 1974) that I developed?  Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 08:13, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good job - it looks like a good start. It certainly merits extra credit. See if you can expand it for more credit. You could add, for example, summary of his works, and links or summaries of their reviews in reliable sources.

Hopefully during the ERICA event you and/or other students can take some good pictures and add them to the article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:21, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(Week5) - Kim Yerim(김예림)

Dear Professor

My name is Kim Yerim(2024009943) and I'm taking Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure B class. I have completed 50% of the translation of the article.

In addition, I have two questions I would like to ask you.

1. when I add the footnotes that are embedded in the sentences, am I adding the footnotes from the original article? Or find a new Korean article and add it to the footnote?

2. there is something called a ‘frame’ inside the article I am translating. When I try to edit a sentence in the frame, the number of footnotes at the end of the sentence changes. How can I fix this? Yrmisoee (talk) 19:05, 10 April 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee It is fine to use references (footnotes) from the original article (English). You can add additional Korean references for extra credit, if you find relevant ones.

For the "frame" issue, please show it to me during the office hours, and we will try to solve this.

Here's additional feedback on blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:26, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)-An soyul(안소율)

Hello, Professor, I'm Soyul An(2024013072), who is taking a class on Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Class B - Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30).

I've left feedback, you can find it in the link below: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Yangyejoo#Feedback_on_the_document-Anti-Western_sentiment_in_China/_An_soyul An soyul (talk) 04:28, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul I hope your friend finds the feedback from your AI tool helpful, and that you receive feedback that's at least as useful as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:27, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5-WANG YIKE(왕흘가)

Hello, professor. I'm a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have published my article on the public article according to your request. Please check it. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 05:34, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good, but please double check my previous feedback - some issues have not been fixed.

Several of your links still point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

And the zh article has more blue links, for example to zh:马家园战斗, that you should add to your article, using the tool I mentioned before.

In addition, it seems some content was not translated - for example, the third paragraph of the "Early Red Army career" section is missing. Please double check all content was translated, or explain here why it was skipped? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week5) - ZHANG JINGYANG (장정양)

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30)

I’ve completed my Deadline 4 work. Here is the link to my sandbox:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/Sandbox Zjy402 (talk) 07:44, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402 Good start! Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:35, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 &Deadline 4(week 5)-ZHANG LINYUE

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 13:00 PM. Here's a record of the link I added（deadline3）and editing in the sanbox(deadline4). Please check it. Thank you.AYAO32269 (talk) 08:34, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

@AYAO32269 Good progress.

Regarding your translation. Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:36, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 &Deadline 4(week 5)-BAE JINSU(배진수)

Dear professor. I am Bae Jinsu who taking collective intelligence course.

I have completed the translating to Korean from English. Here is the link of both articles.

-Planned obsolescence(계획적 구식화)

-Urban sociology(도시사회학)

Kind regards. Jameseugene (talk) 07:18, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jameseugene Very good! You are nearly finished.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers.

Please add ko:틀:과제 문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 to the talk pages of your articles.

For extra credit, you can suggest your work to be displayed on Korean Wikipedia's main page: 위키백과:알고 계십니까 - 위키백과 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:40, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(Week5) - CUI ZAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

For Deadline 4, I would like to report my translation progress. I am working on four translation articles in total.

For the four translation projects,（link1 link2 link3 link4） I’ve already moved them to public articles, and for all the red links, I’ve used the template: Interlanguage link multi.

In the two articles I translated, the page for "hat" shows a tag saying it has no references (dated 2015.08.03), and the page for "online shopping" shows tags about possible original research（dated 2019.02.11）and the need for more references(dated 2013.11.11). However, these issues already existed before I started translating. All the content I added includes proper references. Will these tags affect my translated articles? Cuicuizan (talk) 05:44, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Great progress!

Regarding the old "tags" about problems with the old article, I recommend you ask experienced editors to review your new articles and remove the "tags" if they are no longer needed.

You can ask for help using 维基百科:Discord交流群 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 or another method listed in the top of that page _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:34, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Thank you, professor! I followed your suggestion and consulted experienced editors in the Wikipedia Discord group. They confirmed that as long as I have addressed the issues, I can remove the tags myself without needing administrator approval. I have carefully reviewed the articles and ensured that the problems are resolved. I will proceed with removing the tags, and I’ll make sure to include clear edit summaries. Thank you again for your guidance! Cuicuizan (talk) 05:07, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:44, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Question About Translation Task Overlap --GUAN YUE

Hello Professor, this article is my main translation work[Cognitive warfare], but I just noticed from the edit history that another student is also working on the same article. I’m not sure why he or she is working on my assigned article, as I had already confirmed with you during Deadline 2 that I would be translating this article. Could you please advise me on how to proceed in this situation? Thank you very much! Uuueol (talk) 10:02, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol I see. There seems to have been some miscommunication about the topics, I apologize for that. Since the other student has already started, I recommend you choose a different topic, and I will treat all of your late submissions as on time until June, to compensate you for this error. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:38, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

I’d also like to clarify one point: although another student was also making edits to this article, after reviewing the edit history, I found that he did not contribute any effective translation. Before I started my translation, his edits were mainly focused on deleting the original content, without actually adding any proper translated text. So the formal translation of the article was first completed by me. Uuueol (talk) 08:21, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Good, as discussed in class, you can work together with the other students and complete this as a team project. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have finished my weekly wiki editing(week2-week6) . Please check here.

Thank you A15928872517 (talk) 08:15, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5)- JUNG YOUBIN(정유빈)

Dear Professor, I am Jung Youbin (2024083681), who is taking daily life and social structures at 10:30 a.m. I have completed more than half of the translation work of the war poetry article that you recommended. The Hyper space article is already set up in Korean language, so I did not work on it. This is my sandbox. 'https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:JUNG_YOUBIN/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5'. Please check my work. Thank you! JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 09:03, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@JUNG YOUBIN Good progress. Things to fix:

• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.
• When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Please add the following template to the article's talk page: ko:틀:번역된_문서

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5)-ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor, I am studying “Everyday Life and Social Structure”.I apologize for being so late in selecting the articles to be translated, please check them out!

Ray L. ChesebroEN>CN 忐忑 (歌曲) CN>EN

I'm sorry that the professor only chose to translate the article now but I'll try to finish the translation as soon as possible thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 11:07, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Ok. Topics are approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor, I am studying “Everyday Life and Social Structure”Here's my weekly edit, check it out, thanks! Shuo1103 (talk) 11:30, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5(week6)-gaoxiaoxia/chensiting

Hello Professor.This is our deadline5 for the Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia.link1,link2，I modified the disambiguation link and added some interlanguage links as requested Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:35, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(Week5) - Chaebin Park(박채빈)

Dear Professor, I’m taking ‘Collective Intelligence in Practice’.

For the deadline4 task, I created my sandbox. You can check it through that link!

Thank you so much. CHAEBIN99 (talk) 16:54, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99

Good progress. Things to fix:

• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.
• When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Please add the following template to the article's talk page: ko:틀:번역된_문서

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:59, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week5)- XU XINRAN

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the translation of my first article.《21 世纪的 21 堂课》，Please check it.

I have a question: Does the references section also need to be translated? XXUXINRAN (talk) 05:38, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Very good. I see your article has blue links to English Wikipedia - this is not correct. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

After fixing the above, you can publish your article (move it to mainspace) and see what the Chinese reviewers will say. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:43, 1 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have made the changes according to your request. Please confirm my sandbox. XXUXINRAN (talk) 11:34, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN I see. But I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when it is ready. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:25, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have made the changes according to your request. Please confirm my sandbox. XXUXINRAN (talk) 10:08, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Very good. When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page / Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

PS. After moving, please add WP:CATEGORIES and monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the English version - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have completed the translation. And I made modifications and moves according to your request, but after the volunteer review, he told me that my translated article already had Chinese entries, so I was unable to create new entries and had to modify the existing ones. I have now merged as you requested.This is the merged article.This is my editing record.This is my sandbox.Please check and tell me what I should do next?Thanks. XXUXINRAN (talk) 11:47, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Good job. Only one thing should be fixed: check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. on Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:04, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have updated the link according to your request.This is the article.Please check again and tell me what to do next. Thanks Professor. XXUXINRAN (talk) 06:37, 15 April 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Good. Monitor the article for feedback from reviewers. See some fixes done here: https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E4%BB%8A%E6%97%A5%E7%AE%80%E5%8F%B2&diff=prev&oldid=86812172 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing---HE ZIXUAN

Dear Professor, I am studying “Collective Intelligence in Practice”Here's my weekly edit, check it out, thanks! ZixuanHE (talk) 09:09, 15 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Good. Please carefully review the feedback you got at zh:User_talk:ZixuanHE#2025年4月 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Some of your edits have been rejected by Chinese reviewers. Please study the reasons and try to make better edits. Ask me for help if anything is unclear, but first, talk to the local reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:59, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - LIN YUYANG (임유양)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

Cognitive warfare

Ngan Shing-kwan

I translated these two articles into English.（50%） Please check. Thank you. L01yy11 (talk) 14:22, 15 April 2025 (UTC)

@L01yy11 Good progress. Talk to your new groupmate about cognitive warfare; I provided her with detailed feedback in my office.

Review fixes to your article at https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ngan_Shing-kwan&action=history to learn how to do it better in the future.

In particular, check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Additionally, in your article, there are some Wikipedia:Disambiguation links. Use this to identify and fix them: Go to your preferences and enable the gadget that "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". Then check your article for orange links and fix them.

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:02, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4( Week 5) Chachaeyoung (이채영)

Hi, professor, I am 이채영 who is taking Everyday life and social structure at 01:00. I have completed the translation of two articles from English to Korean. Can you check it?

1. Climate debt-> 기후부채

2. Blank space-> Blank space(to ko)

Chachaeyoung (talk) 09:15, 16 April 2025 (UTC) --Chachaeyoung (talk) 09:19, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung Good job. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers and address any issues raised. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:08, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Jo YeSeul

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure at 10:30 AM.

I added citation to this article.

here is the diff link for extra points. Jo YeSeul (talk) 08:16, 17 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul Good attempt. However, your edit was rejected by the reviewers because that website has many low quality articles and is not allowed on Wikipedia. See WP:SOOMPI. Can you find a more reliable reference?

Also, next time you add Korean reference to English article, remember this best practice: Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:10, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 : Jisu Lee

Hello professor,

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I completed the 4th week of assignment

I created and created each sandbox because of the large amount.

<Everyday Life and Social Structure>

- Hoax

- International human rights law

<Collective Intelligence in Practice>

- Bronisław Malinowski

- Hacker Culture

Thank you :) Xisuux (talk) 07:17, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux If you are translating content to Korean Wikipedia, you should be using a sandbox on Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Please move your content to Korean Wikipedia and see what formatting issues need to be fixed.

Ask me again for a review once your content is on Korean Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

I have rewritten it in the sandbox of Wikipedia in Korea, please check it.

thank you.

<Everyday Life and Social Structure>

- Hoax

- International human rights law

<Collective Intelligence in Practice>

- Bronisław Malinowski

- Hacker Culture Xisuux (talk) 10:29, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good. In the next step, please work on the following:

• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• also, remove unncessary bolding from your article

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:32, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4[Week5}-LIUYIKANG[유역강]

Dear Professor I have created a sandbox.And briefly summarize two articles,I hope you can check them.Thank you,teacher. LIUYIKANG (talk) 00:29, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

@LIUYIKANG You forgot to link your work for review here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:26, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

Professor. This is my translation.://w.wiki/DoLM LIUYIKANG (talk) 00:54, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

https://w.wiki/DoLZ LIUYIKANG (talk) 01:00, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

@LIUYIKANG If you are translating to Chinese, please post your work in your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox, not here (not on English Wikipedia).

Then ask me again for a review, once you have translated at least 50% of the content, as required by the deadline. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Thank you,professor LIUYIKANG (talk) 01:21, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

https://w.wiki/DoLZ Hello,professor.Can you take a look at this? LIUYIKANG (talk) 12:34, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

User:LIUYIKANG/sandbox LIUYIKANG (talk) 13:11, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

@LIUYIKANG I see. But I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when it is ready (translated in at least 50%). Make sure to add blue links and references to your work, so I can review these as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:33, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（week5）-QIAN ZIYI

Respected Professor:

I am currently learning about understanding everyday life and social structures.

During Deadline 4, I want to report on my translation progress. This is my link. Please check it out. Buryab0ne (talk) 08:00, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne It's a good start, but some of your content appears unreferenced. Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

One of your references is to a low quality source: Wikipedia:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia (for reasons explained in the linked guideline). You will need to replace it with a more reliable source that verifies the claims made. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:37, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5 (Week9) - Chaebin Park(박채빈)

Dear Professor, I’m taking ‘Collective Intelligence in Practice’. You can check it through this link!

Article1 / Article2

Thank you so much. CHAEBIN99 (talk) 10:16, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Good progress. Here are next steps:

• Look at your blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 to its talk page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:39, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

student contributions?

Two accounts who appear to be your students, judging from the messages they have left on your talk page, are adding large amounts of uncited material that is often non-neutral and promotional in tone, some of it appears to possibly be copied from elsewhere:

• CHAEBIN99 (talk · contribs) - [52][53][54] and many more
• JHyunlee (talk · contribs) - [55][56][57] and many more

If these accounts are not your students then I apologize and please ignore this. But if they are would you please speak with your class about citing from reliable sources, the importance of writing neutrally without effusive language, and the importance of not copying text from other sources. fifteen thousand two hundred twenty four (talk) 11:59, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

@Fifteen thousand two hundred twenty four Thanks for the ping. They are my students. I do talk to students about the issues mentioned - we even have related modules, see for example User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2 . That said, there will always be some students who will not listen, or understand, or who will, well, cheat. I apologize for the trouble. If the students repeat problematic edits, please block them for a week or such - sometimes it's the only thing that will make them notice there's a problem (and realize someone is looking at their activities). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:42, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor, I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week7 . Please check here. A15928872517 (talk) 16:20, 19 April 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:44, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - CHEN YUNLIN

Dear professor, I am taking everyday life and social structure Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I added citation to this article.

here is the diff link for extra points. Songyi77 (talk) 08:33, 20 April 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:44, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week7 and week8 total than 20 edits. Please check here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 12:09, 20 April 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:45, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) —CHEN YUNLIN

Dear Professor

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

l have completed an article translated from Chinese to English. This is the page I finished.

张星特→zhangxingte

Songyi77 (talk) 16:56, 20 April 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Good start. Here are the fixes needed:

• Double check your blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Many of the links in your article are to outside Wikipedia. Remove them and replace them with links to Wikipedia articles. This is particularly common in the Venue section of the tables. Read also Wikipedia:External links - in particular, second point of WP:ELBODY
• Fix the errors in your metadata (references). If you need help, ask me about it during the class activities or my office hours
• There is an error in the beginning: "(Template:Country data February 11, 2003)" - please fix that error.
• There are other code errors, like "Career" heading not working.
• Look at how articles about similar people in English Wikipedia are formatted and make yours look similar
• please remove non-neutral language like "sweet-voiced... warm-hearted music artist".

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:53, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2(week3)-WU JIACHEN

Dear professor,  I'm WU JIACHEN, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I want do my main project individually.  For Everyday Life course, I choose translate "Corruption in Russia" and "Freedom of information" to Chinese. For Understanding Wikipedia course, I choose translate “Hacker culture” and “United States non-interventionism” two articles to Chinese.  Dose it available? Looking for you reply.  Thank you sir！ A1246632822 (talk) 12:10, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 3 are good but “United States non-interventionism” has already been taken _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor，can i change to translate“ Abortion in Japan”to Chinese.Looking for you reply，thank you sir！ A1246632822 (talk) 06:36, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 That topic seems already sufficiently translated to Chinese. How about Gender inequality in Japan instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the recommendation, professor. I have decided to accept this topic and begin preparing. A1246632822 (talk) 10:46, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 I am afraid we need to change one of your topics, as it has been already selected by another student before I gave you permission, sorry: hacker culture. You can select a shorter topic instead to replace it; talk to me after or during class. All your work up to now on this will be recognized for full credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:14, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

Sorry professor, I didn't see the message, so I'm replying now. I wonder if the topic "Men's T20 World Cup" could replace it? I apologize again for my late reply. A1246632822 (talk) 05:14, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Yes, that would be ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:22, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-ZHANGMINGSHUO

Dear Professor, I am studying “Everyday Life and Social Structure”Here's my weekly edit, check it out, thanks! Shuo1103 (talk) 14:31, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Looking good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:57, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Project article-WU SHUHAN

Hello, Professor. My request to move the article out of the sandbox went unanswered. Please help me. WSH0927 (talk) 10:00, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 You don't need to ask for help with a merge - you can do it yourself, by copying, pasting and merging content into an existing article. You only need help if you want to create a new article.

But if you still need help, you can ask for it from Chinese experts here: 维基百科:Discord交流群 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:01, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadine3（week4）QIAN ZIYI

Dear Professor: I added citation to this article.Please check Buryab0ne (talk) 12:56, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

Here is my diff link.1.2 Buryab0ne (talk) 13:04, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

The link is incorrect. Link 1 should be this one. Buryab0ne (talk) 13:06, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne I had to revert your addition. Your reference link did not work - it produces an error. Your paragraph reads like a second Wikipedia:LEAD.

You did add a new useful information - that it was founded in 1968 - but you should add it to the lead, and you should ensure your reference works correctly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:42, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Sumin Park

Dear professor, I added a quote. Please check. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bahnus&oldid=1287026361 Cpr0329 (talk) 13:08, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

Your reference was formatted correctly but it was in a wrong place. Your reference should be added to the end of a sentence or paragraph that has no references, to verify claims made in it. Right now your reference has been added to the end of the article, where it serves no purpose. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

@Cpr0329 Ping for the above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week8 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 14:47, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:40, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Week 9-FAN XINRU

Dear professor,  I'm FAN XINRU, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.These are five Wikipedia articles that I have edited, totaling 50 times, to earn extra points. Thank you for taking a look!1.2.3.4.5 Jzhdylb (talk) 09:11, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9 - ZHANG JINGYANG (장정양)

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30) I’ve completed my Deadline 5 work. Here is the link to my sandbox: Alcohol in France https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/Sandbox

The World Is Curved https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/sandbox2

The World Is Flat https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/sandbox3 Zjy402 (talk) 11:59, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402

Good progress. Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Ask me for anther review once your articles are fully translated, with all links and references _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-CHEN SIYU(진사우)

Dear Professor, I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week2~week8. Please check here.Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 13:41, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) -WU SHUHAN

Hello, Professor.I am Wu Suhan, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life. I have completed the translation of two project articles, please check, thank you. 1.日本摇滚乐 2.劳伦斯·莱斯格 WSH0927 (talk) 16:13, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Very good. Please monitor the history of your pages as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Project Two: Public Space Observation Machenxiao

Hello Professor, our group plans to study how people choose seats and interact in campus cafeterias.

Specifically, we are interested in:

Do people prefer to sit against the wall, by the window, or in the central open area?

How do people who eat alone and those who eat with others choose seats differently?

Is there a relationship between the time of meal and seat preference?

Does the spatial environment (such as proximity to the food pick-up area, proximity to the entrance and exit, lighting, noise) affect people's choices?

2. Observation Site

School cafeteria

All group members can enter freely without attracting too much attention.

3. Implementation plan

Observation period: two consecutive weeks

Weekly observation frequency: at least 3 days a week, twice a day

Each observation duration: 30 minutes

Time period arrangement:

Noon peak (12:00-12:30)

Afternoon peak (18:00-18:30)

Recording frequency: record the seat distribution every 5 minutes

Observer position:

Choose a corner or hidden position in the cafeteria to sit down, so that you can observe most of the space without attracting attention Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 02:31, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good design, project approved, good luck _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5: LAOXINYI

Dear Professor I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. 1）Everyday Life（Chinese to English）: I have done my homework, here is the sandbox link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/sandbox_-_American_defense_of_Taiwan and here is the mainspace link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_defense_of_Taiwan

2）Collective Intelligence：I have done my homework, here is the sandbox link: 1）https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%9222）https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%921 and here is the mainspace link: 1）https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%AC%A7%E6%B4%B2%E7%9A%84%E9%81%93%E8%B7%AF%E5%AE%89%E5%85%A8 2）https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%A0%B4%E5%9D%8F%E6%80%A7%E5%AE%9E%E9%AA%8C

please check, thank you Laoxinyi (talk) 05:06, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Good. Here's my feedback.

Regarding the "defence of Taiwan"

• Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.
• there is some unnecessary use of bolded text. Review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting and fix this - mostly just remove bold font
• Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). I see occasional places in need of citations such as the end of the 'After the severance of diplomatic' section or in the first and last paras of the 'Non-Military Measures' one

Regarding your work on zh wiki, check feedback visible in https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%AC%A7%E6%B4%B2%E7%9A%84%E9%81%93%E8%B7%AF%E5%AE%89%E5%85%A8&action=history and https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E7%A0%B4%E5%9D%8F%E6%80%A7%E5%AE%9E%E9%AA%8C&action=history . Learn from the fixes by more experienced editors, and try to fix such errors in the future.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:02, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5 (Week9) - Lee Jae-hyun

Hello, professor. I’m taking a course named‘Collective Intelligence in Practice'. I think my article is ready for review by professor. So please give me a feedback of my articles!! (All articles translated En to Ko.)

Sociology of religion(En to Ko) Information overload(En to Ko) JHyunlee (talk) 06:05, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Very good.

Regarding your work on zh wiki, check feedback visible in https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%A2%85%EA%B5%90%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99&action=history and https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4_%EA%B3%BC%EB%8B%A4&action=history. Learn from the fixes by more experienced editors, and try to fix such errors in the future.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:13, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Okay! if other reviewers give me feedbacks in my talk page about my articles that I edited, I'll accept and revise my article later! Thanks for your feedback professor. JHyunlee (talk) 06:38, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Project article：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am Zhang Zehua, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life. I have completed Chinese development and Chinese translation.Please check it.[58] [[59]]Thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 07:59, 26 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Your draft at zh:User:ZHANG0822ZH/公民新闻 seems good and can be published; but your other draft was incorrectly developed on English Wikipedia rather than Chinese Wikipedia - you need to move it there, fix any code problems after move (and ensure blue links work), then ask me for a review again.

Before publishing, please review the following:

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:45, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor

I have moved the extended Chinese articles from the sandbox to [60], and the Chinese translation articles have recreated the Chinese sandbox and moved the articles to the Chinese sandbox User:ZHANG0822ZH/朝鲜战争中的苏联. Please check.Thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 07:23, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Good. Once you finish the translation of the second article, let me know. Several of your links in the translation point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:44, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- WU WENHAO

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions during Week 5. I have completed the revisions accordingly. Could you kindly review my updated content?

Please find the links below: Link 1: [link] Link 2: [link]

Thank you again for your time and guidance.

Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 11:14, 26 April 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507

Very good. You can add your work to the public space shortly. First, review the following issues:

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,I have completed all the requested revisions regarding the disambiguation links and reference formatting.

For non-English sources, I’ve included both the original titles and their English translations using the appropriate title and trans-title parameters. I’ve also added missing metadata such as author, publication date, and corrected the publisher information — replacing web.archive.org with the actual original publisher where applicable.

Please note that a few references are official national policy documents that do not list a specific author, so that field has been left intentionally blank in those cases.

Feel free to review the updated version. I’d appreciate any further feedback you may have. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 08:14, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Very good. You can now merge your content into the existing articles that you are expanding. See Wikipedia:Merging . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:46, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5 (Week9) -HE ZIXUAN

Dear professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence practice course. Below are two articles I translated from Sandbox, please check. 1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZixuanHE/华人移民悉尼 2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZixuanHE/_网上仇恨言论 ZixuanHE (talk) 06:20, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Please review the message you got at User talk:ZixuanHE - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia and improve your weekly edit activities to address the problem raised.

As for your translations, the are progresing well.

Before publishing them, please review the following:

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:07, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Professor, when you said that you need to add text to the article discussion page before publishing, do you mean add it to the front of the translated article page? ZixuanHE (talk) 10:22, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE I am afraid I do not understand your question. Can you quote the part of my instruction above that you would like to see clarified? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9）-CAI ZHIHANG(채지항)

Dear professor

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure

Here is the sandbox link for my first sandbox (Climate change in North Korea)

Here is the sandbox link for my second sandbox (Minorities in North Korea)

Please check, thank you. Caizzz (talk) 08:55, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check your blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:49, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9）-ZHONG RUIQI(종예기)

Dear professor

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure

This is the first link of my sandbox

This is the second link of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. ZHONGrich (talk) 12:32, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@ZHONGrich Very good. There is a red link error at the top of zh:User:ZHONGrich/沙盒2 that you should fix.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references, as well as pictures.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:52, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9）-TANG BIYAO

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure in Practice.Formed a group with YUE SHUYU. I have completed the translation of one article in Sandbox. zh to En: Sandbox Please check and give corrections, thank you. Tby0204 (talk) 13:28, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

@Tby0204 Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

The link to Wusha in your lead needs to be disambiguated.

Comment section should be renamed to "Notes". See MOS:NOTES.

Remove improper bolding from headings. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting. Remove redundant or malformed markup (e.g., broken references, stray periods). Some formatting artifacts remain in the text body (e.g., “the seventh lunar monthref name.”).

You need to translate references. Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). That also implies to works mentioned in text, like "In his 1934 book "Taiwan's Old Customs of Weddings, Funerals and Festivals During the Year", Suzuki Seiichiro". If this book is in Chinese, provide its Chinese title. (Or is it Japanese?).

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. I fixed some for you, but check if there are any others. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Please double check your translation. A Chinese speaker I consulted pointed to literal translation errors or awkwardness in many places lead to errors like misleading meanings (e.g., "Grasping Orphan activity" for 搶孤) - it should probably be “Orphan Snatching Festival” or just “Qianggu Festival”. Inconsistent or confusing terminology appears (e.g., “fictive name” for “pseudonym”, or . "Paper-made figures" instead of “paper effigies”). There are also redundant and grammatically broken sentences like at the very begining, "The Toucheng Kaicheng Temple Chenghuang Temple, It is a Guanyin Temple and City God Temple...". "isCity God of Anxi，See the revolving lantern display of temple photos." doesn't make sense. Why is the word structure capitalized in the heading "Organizational Structure"? “Main meeting, main altar, main Jiaoju” this should be explained or translated into standard English equivalents. What is Jiaoju? What is Qianggu? Such concepts need to be linked or explained. “Dou Shou” (斗首) is never explained (you should link it or add explanation in a comment like “The ‘Dou Shou’ were community leaders responsible for organizing ritual tasks during the festival.”)

You can use new tools like advanced AI platforms to receive personalized feedback on the quality of your translation and its adherence to Wikipedia policies. Come to my office if you'd like a demonstration _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5: WU JIACHEN

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have completed the translation of four articles in Sandbox. En to zh: 1 2 3 4Please check and give corrections, thank you. A1246632822 (talk) 11:59, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Good progress.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:24, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9)-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the translation of four articles in Sandbox.

This is the first link of my sandbox“Sustainable agriculture”

This is the second link of my sandbox“Censorship by Facebook”

This is the third link of my sandbox"Censorship by TikTok"

This is the fourth link of my sandbox"History of macroeconomic thought"

Please check , thank you.

A15928872517 (talk) 13:43, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517

Good progress.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:25, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - Yewon Lee (이예원)

Dear Professor,

Hello professor. I'm taking the morning class of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I've completed my Week 9 task. It is my first article and second article, and I have translated English into Korean. Here's my first sandbox link and second link. Let me know if there's anything else I need to modify or do more. Thank you. Nowey22 (talk) 15:40, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Very good. Next:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:27, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Lee jisu

Hello professor,

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I have completed the task for that parking.

<Everyday Life and Social Structure>

- 국제인권법

- 속임수

<Collective Intelligence in Practice>

- 해커문화

- 브로니스와프 카스페르

Thank you. Xisuux (talk) 06:44, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good, but you need to fix your hyperlinks. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:28, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kim jong min (hanyang)

Dear professor, I'm taking a class called Practicing Collective Intelligence. These two posts are not finished, but definitely I have more than half of the translation done. I would appreciate it if you check it out

Atlanta Falcons -> 애틀랜타 팰컨스

Graham Potter -> 그레이엄 포터

Thank you

Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:18, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Very good.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:29, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week9)-XIXIANGRUI

Dear professor: Professor, my two articles have been translated. Please check. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/Sandbox1 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:09, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI I see the reviewers have raised some issues concerning one of your articles. Please read their comments carefully and work with them to address them.

Regarding your first article, here's a checklist of things to do:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Ok professor XIXIANGRUI (talk) 01:34, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have finished translating these articles.

For Everyday Life and Social Structure:

German atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II to Korean version

Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II to Korean version

For Collective Intelligence in Practice:

I previously chose Online hate speech and American Sociological Association, but there were already Korean versions.

So I worked on these two articles related to this class but not yet translated into Korean.

Propaganda through media to Korean version

Mass media and American politics to Korean version

I reflected the change in our spreadsheet and my dashboard.

All my Korean articles are complete and ready to be published. Am I allowed to move these to the mainspace?

Please check. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 01:42, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo Excellent. You can move them. Here are the next steps:

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page: ko:틀:번역된_문서 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:03, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)-jung yuna

Dear Professor,

I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes. These are links to the sandbox translated into Korean: sandbox1, sandbox2

Please check. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 02:14, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good. For your next steps:

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Then ask me for another review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:04, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)-JIANGJIASHAN(강가삼)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

I have completed the translation of two articles. Please check, thank you.[61] [62] Ttkx11 (talk) 04:20, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Good progress.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:07, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- LIU YING TONG

Dear Professor,

I am currently studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed the English-to-Chinese translation.

This is the first link of my sandbox This is the second link of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. Ryuthefang (talk) 04:55, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang Very good!

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:10, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- ZHUANG MINNA

Dear professor

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence

Here is the sandbox link for my first sandbox （The Southeast Daily）

Here is the sandbox link for my second sandbox (Historiography of Korea) Please check, thank you.

My Southeast Daily article seems to be in the wrong sandbox. Can you tell me how to move it to the English sandbox？Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 04:29, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 To move your sandbox, copy all content from one sandbox to another. When moving it from one language to another, you may have to fix errors in links, references and other advanced elements - this is why you should always work in the correct project (Wikipedia/language) from the beginning. Stop by my office if you need help, otherwise ping me here when your work is in the correct language project, and I'll review it again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:12, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week9）--LIANG ZHIWEI

Hello professor I have already finished my second article's translation work.You can check it in my sandbox.Please tell me if I have any wrong!Thank you very much!!^^-- LIANG06 (talk) 09:27, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Very good. You can publish it after you finish the translation, just like you did with your first article on sport fandom.

Check how Chinese reviewers improved few things in your first translation here:體育迷：修订历史 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:59, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Hi professor.My translation has already published.You can check it in here Thank you!!-- LIANG06 (talk) 17:17, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Very good, it looks solid. Please make sure to check for any feedback from reviewers over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:13, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

DEADLINE5-BAILINHAN

Hello professor, I have created my article, please check Bai0926 (talk) 13:28, 23 April 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926: Good, but your article needs many fixes. Please study my feedback from last time carefully - there are many things I pointed out back then that are not fixed: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_5#deadline4(week5):_BAI_LINHAN

Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Please review the policy on how to use Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking. You have next to no blue links in the body, but you have (incorrect) links in the headings (which should have no links).

Your article needs a proper lead: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section". Right now instead of a summary of the article, you have a discussion of the meaning of superstition in Chinese, and it is rather poorly written. Interpretation of linguistic meaning of "superstition" in Chinese reads like an essay, not a Wikipedia article. It is also cited to a book - without page number. Discussing a dictionary (?) definition of a word is not encyclopedic. This entire section should be deleted, unless you can show me that the book has a useful discussion on the meanings of the word superstition in Chinese language. Here is a suggest draft of a lead - but make sure the information is repeated and referenced in the article body! "Superstition in China refers to a set of traditional beliefs and practices centered on the supernatural, including gods, ghosts, fate, and ritual magic. These beliefs have evolved from ancient totem worship and ancestor veneration in early dynasties to a complex system of folk religion influenced by Confucianism, Taoism, and Buddhism. Despite the rise of modern science and education, superstitious practices continue to influence aspects of Chinese culture, particularly in festivals, daily customs, and healing rituals.

Poor grammar and phrasing are in issue too. Sentences like "Superstition, refers to the belief..." are grammatically incorrect and read awkwardly. I see frequent errors (e.g., missing spaces, comma splices, lowercase proper nouns). Use concise, formal tone, and avoid overuse of figurative language. Please use a tool like Grammarly or similar to revise your work.

Section headers are inconsistent. Use sentence case, not all lowercase (e.g., xia, zhou, qin) → should be “Xia dynasty” etc. Avoid long section titles, as they don't look nice in the Table of Contents. Consider a consistent structure like: “Beliefs in the Xia, Shang, and Zhou dynasties”. Avoid empty or underdeveloped sections: Sections on Wang Mang, Yang Guifei, and Cixi are titled but lack content. Either expand or remove them temporarily until they're properly developed. Ensure every section adds encyclopedic value and has a comprehensive overview, not just anecdotal examples.

Use of non-neutral or interpretative language is bad. Phrases like “This gave people the illusion of death and resurrection” or “strong function of public opinion guidance” should be rewritten in neutral tone, such as “This hibernation cycle was interpreted by early observers as symbolic of death and rebirth.” and “These prophecies were used as political tools to influence public perception.” Avoid drawing personal conclusions or stating what "people thought" without reliable, secondary sources - read also Wikipedia:No original research.

Sites like Sohu.com or QDU university student articles are not ideal for supporting historical claims. Prefer peer-reviewed journals, academic books or official museum or heritage sites You may use Chinese-language academic works, but they must be from reliable publishers (e.g., CNKI articles, university press books).

You can also ask for feedback on your article to AI or other Wikipedia editors (in the Wikipedia:Teahouse). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:39, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I changed my article according to your suggestion and added a new editor, and added the same section with reference to superstitions in Russia: Customs regarded as superstitions. Please check. Bai0926 (talk) 14:24, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Good progress. Please fix the following:

• what is the 'Summarize' section at the bottom? It appears to be another version of the lead. Please merge it there, keeping in mind that the lead should be just a summary of the article and should not contain any new content
• Page numbers are still missing for cited books like GU ZHEGANG (1999). Remember that each and any book cited should make it clear which pages contain the relevant information. You should provide quotation for the key facts
• Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).
• some headings are still lowercase (e.g., “xia”). Others could still be simplified (e.g., “Qin and Han Dynasties to Tang and Song Dynasties: Fusion of…” - consider splitting or shortening)
• Don’t rely on sites like Sohu or student articles. Prefer CNKI, books, or reliable academic web sources.
• Please explain to me how is this a correct reference. You write: ""Fuxi, one of the Three Sovereigns and the cultural progenitor of the Chinese people in ancient legends, was also known as 'Huangxiong', making him the earliest recorded creator god in Chinese history."" but according to my translation, the Sohu article does not mention Fuxi or the term “Huangxiong.”; it also does not state that any figure is the “earliest recorded creator god.”
• Similar problem -you write: "Moreover, the ancestors of Xia—Gun, Yu, and Qi—were all said to have transformed into bears after death." This claim is not found in the referenced article. The only thing mentioned is the general importance of bear totems, not any specific mythological transformations of Gun, Yu, or Qi. This claim needs a solid academic source (preferably mythological or historical texts) or should be deleted.
• "In the Classic of Mountains and Seas... descriptions of ‘closing in winter’ and ‘opening in summer’ actually record the hibernation behavior of bears... giving them an illusion of 'death and resurrection.' This cyclical behavior gradually endowed bears with divine significance in the minds of early humans." The article references a general bear myth and seasonal changes, but does not mention hibernation, death/resurrection metaphors, or symbolic interpretations. This violates Wikipedia:No original research — unless there’s a scholarly citation connecting bear hibernation to "resurrection" beliefs in ancient China, this needs to be removed or properly sourced.
• The first paragraph of the 'Yangshao' section is unreferenced.
• As far as I can tell from my translation of that source, the general cultural importance and archaeological features of Yangshao Culture are well-supported — but the claim that these artifacts “contain rich traces of totemic beliefs” is unsupported by this reference. Please double check and add a better reference, remove that claim, or explain to me how the text supports it

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:45, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Ljhwa (이진화)

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure (Class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have completed the translations of the respective documents.

Everyday Life and Social Structure

Censorship by copyright  : EN / KR

Web novels in South Korea : EN / KR

Collective Intelligence in Practice

book consorship in United States : EN / KR

censorship by Apple : EN / KR

I have completed all the work on the respective documents, and I plan to transfer them once I receive confirmation from you that there are no issues.

Please review them at your convenience. Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 04:48, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Very good. Can you add some more pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

After that, when your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:09, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I have accepted the feedback and added images to the document.

However, the article titled Korean Web Novels includes a novel cover image, which has not been uploaded to Wikimedia Commons and is a commercial image; therefore, it cannot be uploaded to the Korean Wikipedia.

As a result, I updated the document by excluding that image and worked only with the remaining ones. Once it is confirmed that there are no issues with this part of the work, I will proceed with categorization and other tasks.

Please review it at your convenience. Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 14:24, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa You are correct that image cannot be used. Good job; let me know when you publish your work or if you have any questions and need help _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:05, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Dear Professor,

I am currently studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed the English-to-Chinese translation.

This is the second link of my article.

Please check, thank you. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 05:10, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

See feedback below. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Subject: Observation Project Confirmation

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30)

I would like to confirm the details of my observation project for the physical environment and behavior study. I have chosen to observe a public space in the subway. Location: Line 4 subway, from the 한대앞 to 사당 Station Time: Daily at 5:00 PM (after school) Duration: Approximately 40 minutes per session Method: Observations will be recorded in a structured table format Focus: How passengers choose seats How do they pass the time on the subway How they manage physical distance between strangers and acquaintances Please let me know if this project is acceptable or if any changes are needed. Best regards, Zjy402 (talk) 05:18, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402 That's ok - good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing---진사우 CHEN SIYU

Dear Professor, I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week9.Please check here.Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:29, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) -진사우 CHEN SIYU

Dear professor,I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the translation of two articles in Sandbox.This is the first link. This is the second link. Check it for me, thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:49, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004

Very good!

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:27, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5 (Week9) - Jo HyeonSeong (조현성)

Hello, professor. I’m taking a course named‘Collective Intelligence in Practice'. I think my article is ready for review by professor. So please give me a feedback of my articles!! (All articles translated En to Ko.)

Corruption in Japan

Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world

Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:49, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong

Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:32, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- YANJINJIN

Dear professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence practice course. Below are two articles I translated from Sandbox, please check.1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JINJINYAN/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E5%8E%9F%E5%A7%8B%E5%85%A8%E7%90%83%E5%8C%96 2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JINJINYAN/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E6%88%91%E4%BB%AC%E6%9C%AC%E6%80%A7%E4%B8%AD%E7%9A%84%E5%96%84%E8%89%AF%E5%A4%A9%E4%BD%BF JINJINYAN (talk) 09:10, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@JINJINYAN

Very good!

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:04, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) - Kim Myeongjun(김명준)

Dear Mr. Piotr,

This is Kim Myeongjun, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished translating two topics I chosen, I have attached the first link and the second link to it here, please check it out. Myeong220 (talk) 11:59, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220

Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:05, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kim Nahee(김나희)

Dear Professor, I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes. These are links to the sandbox translated into Korean: Sandbox1 and Sandbox 2

Please check my sandbox . Thank you. Naheekim2025 (talk) 13:31, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025

If you are translating content to Korean Wikipedia, you should be using a sandbox on Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Please move your content to Korean Wikipedia and see what formatting issues need to be fixed.

Ask me again for a review once your content is on Korean Wikipedia.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:06, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week9) - Jeongwoo Rhee

Dear professor,

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

Here is the articles I finished tranlsating: my sandbox for income equality metrics // my sandbox for Opera in South Korea

Please review these articles. Thank you. Leorhee04 (talk) 14:09, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04

Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:07, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week9) - CHEN SIWEN

Dear professor, I am learning about studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I completed the translation of four articles from En to zh in the sandbox. Below is my fourth article 1，2，3，4，please check and correct it. Thank you. Chensiwen (talk) 15:19, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen

Very good!

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:08, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week9 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 09:54, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:14, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)-JUNG YOUBIN

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 10:30 AM(class A).

Here is the articles I finished tranlsating: sandbox

Please review these articles. Thank you. Hane a nice day. JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 15:47, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@JUNG YOUBIN

Very good. You are almost ready to publish your work. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:16, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kim Yerim(김예림)

Dear Professor,

My name is Yerim Kim 2024009943 and I am taking the afternoon class Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I have completed the translation of three articles (Cannabis and religion, Cannabis in Hong Kong, and Cannabis in North Korea). I have added footnotes to words for which Korean Wikipedia exists. I have also found sources and added citations to sentences that need sources. Please check them.

Yrmisoee (talk) 16:03, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee

Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:17, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - CUI ZAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I want to briefly report on my translation progress. So far, I have translated four articles.

These four translation projects (link1, link2, link3, link4) have already been moved to public pages, and I confirmed with you in Week 5 that there were no problems with them.

In addition, I have completed five additional translations for extra points.（link1 link2 link3 link4 link5）

Thank you. Have a nice day! Cuicuizan (talk) 17:41, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Excellent job! Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:18, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, I am taking two courses, Social Structure of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. The two articles I translated are not yet finished, but I have translated more than half of them. Could you please help me take a look?https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HanyangdaxueSecond article link,https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Below is my weekly edit, please check it outhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/HanyangdaxueThank you professor, assistant professor, have a nice weekend Hanyangdaxue (talk) 23:58, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue

Very good!

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:19, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) Jung Uijune

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure. These are links to my article.

article 1 article 2

Thank you professor, have a nice weekend. Koolujman (talk) 04:27, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Koolujman Good. Please check the history of your articles to see how experienced volunteers fixed some issues: Music (플레이보이 카티의 음반): Revision history - 위키백과 , 마이크 딘: Revision history - 위키백과 . Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:21, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week9) -Park Chanhee (박찬희)

Dear professor, I take a collective intelligence in practice class. I've finished both the first article and second article. Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified. Yhnahc (talk) 13:18, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yhnahc Your first translation is very rough, with no code translated (where are the hyperlinks, references, etc.?). Your second translation has more code, but there are plenty of errors (such as - why are there two reference sections in the article?). Clean this up and ask me for feedback when you have translated all the content, and fixed obvious omissions and errors like the ones above.

Regarding blue links (hyperlinks): make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(Week 9)-Qu Hongyu 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

I have completed the translation of four English articles into Chinese. Please check it here~article.1 article.2 article.3 article.4

I also have finished my weekly wiki editing for week9 total more than 10edits. Please check here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 13:23, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq

Very good!

When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Lee Sihoon(이시훈)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I've finished translating both articles, One was moved page for everyone to see based on the feedback you gave me in week5. The other one is in my sandbox with the status of translated.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 14:41, 4 May 2025 (UTC) Skymir1127 (talk) 14:39, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Very good. You can now publish your second article, following the same procedure as before.

Also, review the history of your first article at 2024 중앙 유럽 홍수: Revision history - 위키백과 to see how experienced Korean volunteers fixed some minor errors in it, and try to fix them in your second article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:41, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) - TRAN THUY NGA (짠 튀 응아)

Dear professor, I'm TRAN THUY NGA, who taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A: 10:30-12:00).

I've finished translating both articles. These are links to my article: my sandbox 1 and my sandbox 2

Please check. Thank you! 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 15:17, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아

Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크 On Vietnamese, Bản mẫu:interlanguage link – Wikipedia tiếng Việt. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. (There is no Vietnamese equivalent AFAIT)

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). On Vietnamese, use [63]

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:43, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) :ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am Zhang Zehua, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life.

My Chinese translation has been completed, please check it [64]. Thank you ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 16:16, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next stepss.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:45, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) :응웬김찌 NGUYEN KIM CHI

Dear professor, I'm NGUYEN KIM CHI, who taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure (class B)

I've finished translating both articles. These are links to my article: sandbox1 and sandbox2

Please check. Thank you! NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 09:59, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12

Very good. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크 On Vietnamese, Bản mẫu:interlanguage link – Wikipedia tiếng Việt. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. (There is no Vietnamese equivalent AFAIT)

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). On Vietnamese, use [14]

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:47, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Hyunji Shim(심현지)

Dear Professor,

I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes. These are links to the sandbox translated into Korean: sandbox1, sandbox2

Please check. Thank you.

*English article: article1, article2 2024099889심현지 (talk) 03:22, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Good, but you need to fix your hyperlinks.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:30, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I have finished editing the blue links and added both the ko:틀:과제 문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 templates to the talk pages. I would appreciate it if you could check whether the sandbox articles are now ready to be published to the mainspace.

+ Also, I would be grateful if you could review the message that was sent to my email (hyunji0907@) regarding Project 2.

Thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 06:00, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Very good, you can now publish your work following my guide above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:34, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

An attempt to translate the Wikipedia entry on science fiction

Dear Professor:

I have completed the translation of two articles. During the translation process, I noticed that the Chinese Wikipedia lacks some relevant content. Since I am very interested in science fiction, I hope to try to translate an English article into Chinese. On the one hand, I can practice my translation skills, and on the other hand, I hope to contribute to enriching the content of the Chinese page. If you can give me guidance or feedback, I will be very grateful. I look forward to your reply and thank you for your time! WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 05:30, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy I am glad to hear it. In fact, I am also very interested in science fiction, and I work with many volunteers here to improve this topic area. Time travel in fiction is an important topic, but it is not a very good article right now (it's not bad, but it's not good - which is why it is assessed on talk as a C-class). You can translate it - but it will need to be fixed and improved eventually, as the original English article will need to be revised.

In related context, just few weeks ago we created a better (if pretty short) entry on Time machine, which seems to be missing from zh wiki and would be a good and easy topic to translate.

For another short article, here are few things I wrote up recently: Artificial planet and Inner space (science fiction)

You can find lists of very good sf-related articles to potentially translate at Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Science_fiction FA articles and Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Science_fiction GA articles .

Feel free to stop by my office if you'd like to chat more about improving SF content on Wikipedia. Live long and prosper :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:21, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Oh, I forgot about this article I wrote a while back that you may find very interesting and that could use translation as well: Space travel in science fiction _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:28, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the professor's reply. I will try to translate the article on Artificial planet given by the professor. Thank you, professor. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 02:57, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Ok! Check the Polish version of the article for some additional images you can use _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:34, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5(Week9) - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Hello Professor, I'm Seo Young Kim, 2024096508 who is taking Every day life and social structure class B (13:00-14:30 Mon, 13:00-14:30 Fri). I've done the 9th week task of translating the article and adding citations and references, so please check. Thank you.

[65] [66] 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 05:55, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:32, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello, professor, I received your feedback well. I added 'frame: task document' and 'frame: translated document' to match the feedback. Please check. And I didn't use the frame: temporary link, but I wonder if I should use the blue link as well. I know you are busy, but please check it. Thank you.

[67] [68] 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 05:10, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Very good, but the templates should be placed on article's talk page, not in the text. After fixing this, you can publish your work following my guide above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:37, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Week 9---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I am FAN XINRU,  taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.This article was chosen by me as the final task for the course expansion, but I have now found that I have encountered difficulties in expanding, such as difficulty in determining where to add more content or what sections to add. There is one more thing I would like to ask the professor. The task I have chosen is to be done alone rather than in groups of two people, but I remember my form was filled with two articles as the final task. May I ask Professor, do I need to expand both articles according to the form or choose one of them as my individual task? Sorry for raising so many questions, thank you for the professor's review and guidance. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:14, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb It's ok to change topics - you can stop by office and we can discuss it

As for the number of topics, for a solo project, it's usually two articles in Chinese (or Korean), or one in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:14, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

OK professor, I would like to come to your office after class on Friday to discuss changing the subject, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 04:26, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Sure _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:38, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)-MA CHENXIAO

Dear professor, our group has completed project 2, and my personal Wikipedia translation has also been completed. Please check it.User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:52, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good progress. Here are things to fix:

• review WP:LEAD and consider how you need to change your lead section to meet Wikipedia guidelines (you can ask AI for advice as well, regarding this issue and others)
• when citing books, please provide page range used and relevant quotations from the cited pages
• Some expressions are too casual, folkloric, or culturally internal. For example: "A happy life is hard-won. Go forward and you will have a bright future." Is this a proverb? It does not make much sense in the article. Perhaps you meant something like "The sweet taste is traditionally interpreted as symbolizing the rewards of hard work.”?
• “It must be savored well” → avoid metaphorical advice; stick to description and cultural interpretations.
• The legend about the apprentice and master must be introduced clearly as folklore or oral tradition, e.g.: “According to Bai oral tradition…” And it must be attributed to a reliable or published source—not just "there is a legend…".
• Phrases like “Bai ethnic group’s three-course tea, also known as three-course tea” are redundant.
• Please read WP:NOTGUIDE. The article comes close to being a “how-to” guide (e.g., “add cinnamon, pour hot tea…”). Summarize these processes concisely without making it instructional.
• Mention whether similar multi-course tea traditions exist in other regions of China or in other ethnic groups, if sources allow.
• Many statements are presented as general facts without attribution: “It is said that...” → Who says this? “It is generally believed...” → According to whom?
• “There is an old saying that goes ‘A first course of tea is for courtesy, a second for taste, and a third for reflection.’” → This quote is likely folk wisdom and needs proper sourcing or framing as a saying.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:49, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) LIU MINGHAN

Hello professor, I am Liuminghan, a student in class A.

I have completed the editing task of the Wikipedia article.

Please check it. Thank you. Liuminghan (talk) 17:25, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@Liuminghan Very good. You can publish your article shortly, following my checklist below:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:01, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) LI QINGLU

Hello professor, I am Li Qinglu, a student in class B.

I have completed the editing task of the Wikipedia article.

Please check it. Thank you. 이청로 (talk) 19:17, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@이청로

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:02, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am Zhang Zehua, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I added the main means by which the Soviet Union manipulated information during the war and its impact on the Soviet Union. Because the English article recently deleted the war process, I also deleted it. Please check it, thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 02:43, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Chinese or Korean, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia or Korean Wikipedia, respectively. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Wikipedia Edit-BAI LINHAN

Professor, these are my 40 Wikipedia edits, please check it.

Also, regarding my major assignment, I have read your suggestions in detail and will make detailed changes, but it will take some time. Bai0926 (talk) 08:49, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Ok - keep up the good work! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:04, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kim Gyuri (김규리)

Dear professor, This is Gyuri Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. Most of the articles I've written titled '한국어 속담','중국어 속담','일본어 속담' are complete. I'm so sorry for the late completion of the assignment. Thank you 김규리05 (talk) 14:01, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05

Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:05, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Project 2 – Topic Confirmation (Individual Work)

Dear Professor,

I’m writing to confirm my Project 2 topic.  Although this assignment was originally described as group work, I’ve been working on it individually.  I hope this is acceptable.

In class, I briefly mentioned that I was planning to observe behavior in the campus café, and I’d now like to formally confirm that as my topic.  Specifically, I’m focusing on how students choose their seats at different times of day.  I’ve been observing patterns related to location (e.g., window seats, near the entrance), whether people sit alone or in groups, and how long they stay.

I’ve been conducting regular observations over the past two weeks, and I’ll soon begin organizing the data and preparing the analysis and presentation.

Please let me know if this direction is acceptable, or if you suggest any changes.

Thank you very much for your time and understanding. Syouziiye (talk) 07:22, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye This is fine. Good luck _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:06, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week9）：BAI SHIQI

Respected professor, I am taking two courses: "The Social Structure of Daily Life" and "Collective Wisdom." The four articles I have translated are complete.

the social structures of everyday life are two articles translated by me and group member Linyuyang: English-Chinese: 修理权, Chinese-English: Cognitive Warfare.

Collective Wisdom: The two English-to-Chinese articles I have translated are: 中共十八大后的反腐败and 公民社会

Please check. 白诗棋 (talk) 07:41, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 Good progress. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:08, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(week 10) - Ljhwa(이진화)

Dear Professor,

I have completed the feedback as part of the requirements for Deadline 6.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the feedback and let me know whether it has been written appropriately.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Ljhwa (talk) 08:23, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Good. But the page numbers written in that style are ok. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5(week9): ZHOUZIYU

Hello professor, I am in studying Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have finished translating my first article and after obtaining your approval, I submitted it to Wikipedia. But after I revised the article many times based on the suggestions of the volunteers, he told me that my translated article you chose for me was not suitable for publication on Wikipedia. Now I don't know what to do and I really hope to get your help. The fact that the first article couldn't be published has led to the second article I translated also being unable to be posted on my sandbox.

This is my sandbox and this is my article.I really need your assistance. I would be extremely grateful if I could get your help. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 08:43, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu I see. I will be happy to help.

First, note that you can have multiple sandbox. Post your second translation in your second sandbox - it doesn't have to be in your first sandbox.

Regarding your translation problems. I see you received reviews from Chinese Wikipedia reviewers. Did you attempt to talk to any of the reviewers, as they have themselves suggested you? I looked at your edits on Chinese Wikipedia at User contributions by Zzzzzhouziyu - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia and I do not see discussion posts made by you.

One of the problems you are likely facing, as evidenced by the most recent comment from the reviewer, is that you have some content in your article that is unreferenced. As noted in the syllabus and the description of our project: "Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability)." You need to find references for the unreferenced section of your translation, or delete them.

Wasn't this already explained to you by the reviewer SuperGrey in his comment on April 23, 2025? Was something unclear? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:22, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have revised my translation as per your request. I have ensured that each paragraph of my article has more than one citation and re-submitted it after checking these citations. However, the volunteers still believe that my translation does not meet the Wikipedia guidelines. I have also left messages on different discussion pages for them. The volunteers think that the English version of this article itself is not suitable for publication on Wikipedia because it is too subjective and of low quality. Therefore, my translation cannot be published on Wikipedia either. Maybe can I change to another article and then I'll retranslate it?My second article is already under review by the volunteers. This is my first article, and it has been unable to pass the review. I sincerely hope to receive your help. Thank you! Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 08:57, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu You can change the topic, yes, but you put a good amount of work into your current translation, and I think the fixes needed should not be major. Did you attempt to add references or remove the unreferenced parts? Can you point me to the place you have discussed this issue with the reviewers, particularly since my feedback and suggestions above? I will take a look. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:59, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, following your advice, I have made extensive improvements to the article. Due to the scarcity of references on abortion in India, I was unable to find additional sources. However, I have carefully reviewed all the existing references, checked them and removed the unsuitable ones, ensuring that each paragraph of my article now has appropriate references. As for the volunteers, I left my questions on their discussion page, but no one replied. Moreover, they prohibited me from resubmitting the article, stating that it did not meet Wikipedia's inclusion standards. They informed me that if I wanted to contribute to the topic of abortion in India, I would need to rewrite the article completely. This is Discuss This is my first article,this is my sandbox,and my second one is currently under review. I think I might really need to choose a different article to complete your assignment. So, could you please recommend a third article for me to translate? Thank you very much! Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:28, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

I truly believe that I have done my utmost to make this article conform to the standards of Wikipedia. But it still didn't pass the review. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:32, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu I see. In this case, how about translating this article - Bosnian genocide denial? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:33, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I'm very sorry to trouble you again. Could I change to another article? Because this one shows Parsoid error many times when published.This article seems unable to be published. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:41, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu This seems like a technical error we can fix in my office; stop by it on M or F and we will see about it, or choose another topic if all else fails. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:37, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- Kwon Hyunji(권현지)

Dear professor,

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I've finished both the first article and second article.

Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified.

thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 12:19, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Very good. Here are the next steps:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:00, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

I've finished all the work on the Cannabis in Australia article. But when I first chose Interstellar travel, there was no Korean translation, but when I tried to add it, the translation existed. What do I do in this case? Khji0620 (talk) 13:31, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Indeed, it does appear that an unrelated volunteer translated that article just a week or so before you begun your work (compare the dates: 성간 이동: Revision history - 위키백과 ; 사용자:Khji0620/Sandbox2: Revision history - 위키백과). It is always a good practice to check on the status of the article before starting. I will recognize your effort for extra credit, and you can work on a shorter article for your project. How about List of artificial objects leaving the Solar System? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed a new article. Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified. Khji0620 (talk) 15:46, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Very well done, good job. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kwak Dain(곽다인)

Hello, professor. I'm Dain kwak in Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays class

I've finished all of these articles. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kwak_dain/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 / https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%83%8C%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%95%EC%8A%A4 Please check it out. Thank you Kwak dain (talk) 13:11, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain That's a good start, but make sure to finish translating. Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Ask me for another review once the above is fixed _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - yejoo Yang(양예주)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is yejoo Yang, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). Here are the first and second tasks that all completed the translation. Thank you!Yangyejoo (talk) 00:42, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo

That's a good start, but make sure to finish translating. Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Ask me for another review once the above is fixed

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:42, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5- LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor,

I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes.

These are links to the sandbox translated into Chinese.

Please check. Thank you. Peter011008 (talk) 02:19, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Peter011008 Very good. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

Ask me for another review once you complete the translation and double check the issues above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:06, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Some English articles do not have Chinese producers yet,

I used a cross-language linking solution, checked for omissions, and added pictures.

Here is link

Hope your give me guidance.

Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 02:52, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)- kiwoong kim(김기웅)

Dear Mr.Piotr, This is kiwoong kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). Here are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kimkiwoong/sandbox tasks that all completed the translation.Thank you! Kimkiwoong (talk) 03:53, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on that wiki and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Project 2 Topic Confirmation - BAI SHIQI

Dear professor, my project focuses on the university's first cafeteria, studying students' queuing behaviors and seat preferences during peak hours, and analyzing how these behaviors are influenced by space design, social needs, and personal habits. Over the past two weeks, I have been conducting regular observations and will soon start organizing the data and preparing for analysis and presentations. Please let me know if this direction is acceptable, or if you suggest making any changes. 白诗棋 (talk) 04:23, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 It's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

데드라인 5 (9주차) - jungyuna(정유나)

Dear Professor,

I'm a student who takes morning classes on daily life and social structure. I got your feedback in Week 9 and reposted it. Here is a link to the sandbox translated into Korean: sandbox1, sandbox2

Please check. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 04:31, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9）—LI ZIKANG

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is LI ZIKANG, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class Mondays and Fridays (Class A). Here is team work the first tasks that all completed the translation.Thank you！ Lzk15038863666 (talk) 05:44, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5(week 9):SHU YING

Dear Professor,

I am taking the course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I've completed most of the Week 9 Wikipedia assignment: Article 1 Fully finished 媒体偏见 .Article 2: 礼物经济 Main content translated, but needs internal links added (for red-linked topics available in other language versions).

Due to the length, I couldn't complete both fully by deadline - my apologies. I'm submitting current progress to meet requirements but will finish the remaining links shortly. I'll update you once everything is polished. Syouziiye (talk) 15:42, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye You are doing well.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the detailed publishing instructions！I'll give a feedback once the article is fully published according to these guidelines. Syouziiye (talk) 09:49, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Fatima Paulina Lopez Diaz

Dear Professor,

These are my two Wikipedia articles ready for review.

South Korea and the United Nations.

North Korea and the United Nations.

Thank you. Fatimald (talk) 12:20, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

Good progress. Here is some feedback:

For both articles:

• Clarify the context of simultaneous admission of both Koreas in 1991 and its significance. Why both Koreas were addmitted only in 1991?
• Incorproate relevant content from Korea and the United Nations
• there is some unnecessary use of bolded text. Review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting and fix this - mostly just remove bold font
• The current lead is short and somewhat vague; it should be a concise summary of the entire article, not just a brief note. It should succinctly summarize the article’s key points. For example, for the South, it should summarize the UN’s role in Korea’s establishment, the Korean War, observer status, full membership, and major areas of UN engagement. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section.
• Use shorter, standard Wikipedia section headings (e.g., "History," "Membership," "Contributions to UN," "Peacekeeping Operations") for clarity and alignment with similar articles, which you should review to compare your work with
• use of <big> and bold in the title is unnecessary. Wikipedia article titles are automatically formatted. Use standard heading syntax (== Heading ==).
• Avoid overlinking: Link only the first occurrence of major terms (e.g., "Republic of Korea," "United Nations," "Korean War").
• Mention when Korea's served as a non-permanent member of the Security Council, or held other important positions.
• Mention inter-Korean cooperation at the UN (ex. Panmunjom Declaration). (It's ok if some content is the same in both your articles; if it is relevant to both)

For the South:

• Many references are from South Korea’s Ministry of Foreign Affairs. This is okay for dry facts about South Korea's policies, but Wikipedia prefers mixing sources: academic articles, independent journalism, or UN reports, to enhance neutrality by showing how independent sources discuss this topic
• Convert the link at the end of "Development and Humanitarian Aid" to a proper footnote
• Use bullet points sparingly. For "Key areas of engagement," consider prose or a concise table for clarity.
• Ensure images have appropriate captions and are relevant. The current map image is generic; consider one more specific to Korea’s UN involvement if available.
• Expand coverage where necessary, especially regarding peacekeeping (you should mention the Sangnoksu Unit, for example), hosting of major UN events in Seoul (e.g., GGGI headquarters), Security Council roles, etc,
• Incorporate all relevant content from Korea_and_the_United_Nations#South_Korea_and_the_UN_(1991–present)
• Add a "See also" section linking to related articles (e.g., "Foreign relations of South Korea," "North Korea and the United Nations," "United Nations Command") to

For the North:

• middle of your article has no references, please add them
• Format your references. "Document Viewer" as a title is too vague — readers should know what the document is; each citation should specify the resolution title (e.g., UN Security Council Resolution 1718 (2006), not just “Document Viewer”).
• Using ==== (four equal signs) for small sections like "Humanitarian Cooperation" is usually unnecessary unless the structure is very complex. Stick to ===Subsections=== under each major ==Heading==.
• use academic references, not just UN documents. Ex. https://ciaotest.cc.columbia.edu/journals/ijoks/v1i1/f_0013371_10868.pdfYou can also cite independent reporting (e.g., BBC, Al Jazeera, etc.)
• incorporate relevant content from Korea_and_the_United_Nations#North_Korea_and_the_UN_(1991–present)
• It's important to discuss how North Korea did not seek UN membership for decades, insisting it was the sole legitimate government of Korea, and only shifted its position in 1991 as Cold War dynamics changed
• Discuss the challenges UN agencies like WHO face in North Korea. What makes operating there difficult? How long have WFP, WHO, and UNICEF been active? Add examples of projects (e.g., emergency nutrition support, disaster response?)
• Discuss why North Korea has not contributed troops to UN peacekeeping missions Interesting article here
• ?No mention of UN human rights reports The UN Commission of Inquiry on Human Rights in North Korea (2014) is a major part of North Korea–UN relations and is missing here.
• Try to list the most important North Korea-related resolutions, and link to the relevant lists such as List of United Nations Security Council resolutions concerning North Korea
• See Also: Add links to related articles (e.g., "Foreign relations of North Korea," "Sanctions against North Korea," "North Korea and weapons of mass destruction").

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I applied the changes, please let me know if they are ready to publish. Thank you!

South Korea and the United Nations

North Korea and the United Nations Fatimald (talk) 05:18, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

Excellent progress. Here are the things to fix now:

for the SK article:

• Lead needs slight expansion and polish. It should better summarize: UNTCOK and the role in post-WWII division, Korean War & UN intervention, Observer status, Full membership, Major areas of UN engagement
• Minor grammar/wording edits are still necessary throughout (e.g., “helped funding the support needed by the UNDP on 2024” → “provided funding to support the UNDP in 2024”). Long sentences (e.g., about Security Council service) should be broken into shorter, clearer prose. The sentence: “... although a formal peace treaty has never been signed, there are other efforts among the Korea's...” should be split and rephrased. Also, correct: Koreas not Korea's.
• Image caption: “Participation of South Korea in the United Nations” is too generic. Specify the context of the image (e.g., the “Women, Peace, and Security Symposium in 2023” or similar).
• Most references are still South Korean government sources. Consider adding at least: A UN report or data dashboard (e.g., UN Peacekeeping factsheet), some independent news coverage of Korea's UN engagement, and preferably, at least one scholarly paper about Korea’s international diplomacy through the UN
• replace reference 7 - Wikipedia cannot cite itself. If reusing content from another Wikipedia articles, just use the same citations (copy them)

for the NK article

• the lead should briefly summarize: Historical stance of DPRK on the UN (initial rejection of dual membership) UN’s role in humanitarian and sanctions measures, and the current state of relations (limited cooperation, ongoing tensions)
• “Among 2006 and 2017” this is unclear. Should probably be something like this: “Between 2006 and 2017, the Security Council adopted multiple resolutions...”
• reference 9 has some strange formatting errors, please check and fix
• replace reference 6 - Wikipedia cannot cite itself
• some references have incomplete metadata, missing author, publisher, and/or date.
• optional: the following is missing and would be very good to add, if you can find references for this: DPRK’s use of UN forums for propaganda - A few sentences could mention how North Korea has used the UN General Assembly or Human Rights Council to make political statements, often denying human rights allegations or criticizing the U.S.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:55, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I applied the changes that were recommended, please let me know if it's ready to publish now or if I need to improve anything else.

South Korea and the United Nations

North Korea and the United Nations

Thank you! Fatimald (talk) 13:59, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Please double check whether all issues above were fixed. I still see many issues above still unresolved (ex. Wikipedia used as a source). Please reply, one by one, to each of my remarks and tell me how you addressed those issues. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:27, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, here are the changes I made:

South Korea and the United Nations:

- Lead includes the UNTCOK, Korean War & UN intervention, Observer status, Full membership, Major areas of UN engagement.

- Divided the longer sentences and simplified them (eg. “South Korea (officially the Republic of Korea) has had a longstanding relationship with the United Nations since the end of World War II.” ---> “South Korea (officially the Republic of Korea) has engaged with the United Nations since the end of World War II.

- Specified the context of the image caption.

- Deleted Wikipedia as source and included four independent news on the Engagement section. For the scholarly papers I included reference 5, 13 and 14.

North Korea and the United Nations:

- Lead mentions the historical stance of DPRK on the UN, UN’s sanctions measures, and the current state of relations (limited cooperation, ongoing tensions).

- Changed “Among 2006 and 2017” to “Between 2006 and 2017, the Security Council adopted multiple resolutions...”

- Deleted Wikipedia citation and put more information on the citation I did manually.

I had some issues cutting the long sentences since the translating tools I was using didn't help so I used AI to help me. Also, from reference 15 to 19 in the NK article I added as much information as I could find in the documents, please tell me if it's enough to meet the Wikipedia guideliness.

Please let me know if this version is ready to publish. Thank you! Fatimald (talk) 13:07, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Good. Once you have ensured that you fixed all issues I mentioned above, you can publish your changes in the mainspace; then we will see what the reviewers think. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- GUAN YUE

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I've mostly finished the two main articles for the course — Maxim's Bakery and Cognitive warfare — both translated from Chinese to English.

I also worked on five articles for extra credit: Wu Shun Tak, Maxim's MX, Maxim's Bakery, Traditional Chinese sausages, and Stir-fried glutinous rice. You can see all my edits here.

Feel free to take a look whenever you have time！

Thanks! Uuueol (talk) 07:25, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Very good. Here are my comments:

• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), or zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

Regarding Maxim's Bakery - the zh article has images - can you add them to the English translation? Also

• it would be good to add Template:Infobox company to it. Ask me for help in my office or in class if you have trouble with that
• Expand the lead to briefly mention its founding year, parent company (Maxim’s Caterers), notable distribution model (e.g., MTR presence), and any milestones. A 2–3 sentence paragraph is expected per Wikipedia:Lead_section.
• Avoid "Currently" in “Currently, there are 148 outlets…” — Wikipedia avoids time-sensitive language. Use "As of [year]" or provide a specific date. What is current today may not be tommorrow
• Use either “Maxim’s Cakes” or “Maxim’s Bakery” consistently. Consult official materials from the company or English source coverage to check which one is better. Double check your capitalization is consistent.
• Consider separating incident reporting into a more standard titled section (e.g., ==Controversies== or ==Notable incidents== rather than just ==Incident==).
• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Add navigation aids, such as ==See also== with internal links (already done nicely in the Chinese version).

One of your articles was merged to another by another volunteer. You may want to discuss this at Talk:Chinese sticky rice - Wikipedia

Regarding Wu Shun Tak - the lead is too short. It should explain why Wu Shun Tak is notable. Mention: his role as co-founder of Maxim’s, his business impact, and his educational philanthropy. Read and follow WP:LEAD (Manual of Style/Lead section).

Don't list relatives unless sourced and relevant. Encyclopedias are not genealogies.

Some phrases are too honorific or subjective for Wikipedia: “Renowned industrialist” → better as “Chinese industrialist” “A respected and honorable legacy” (from a source) should not be echoed in Wikipedia’s voice. Replace phrases like “devoted to public welfare” with factual content, e.g., “He donated to Tsinghua University and founded a school in Taishan.” Follow WP:NPOV (Neutral Point of View) and WP:TONE for encyclopedic writing.

In Memorials section, citations should not be in the heading, but at the end of each bullet point or paragraph (if relevant to it).

For Maxim's MX - add images. That translation includes many paragraphs marked with tags in the Chinese original. These indicate unsourced or unverifiable claims. On English Wikipedia, such material should be removed per WP:V unless a reliable source can be found. Examples include the “御膳” project, the microwave meals in 7-11 and Wellcome, and rebranding efforts from 2015 or 2022. Suggested fix: remove these paragraphs entirely or mark them clearly for future citation (e.g., in your sandbox) if you plan to add sources later.

The current translation uses some non-neutral language such as “brought a refreshing dining experience” or “remarkable success.” This violates WP:NPOV (Neutral Point of View). Suggested fix: rewrite with factual and neutral phrasing, e.g., “introduced Japanese set meals alongside Chinese and Western dishes” or “following positive customer response.”

As for Traditional Chinese sausages: The translated article omits the entire "Health concerns" and "International variants" sections, both of which are present in the Chinese version. While most of the article is factual, some parts lean slightly into promotional or subjective phrasing. For example: "giving it a distinctive aroma and taste" would better phrased as: "infusing the rice with the sausage’s characteristic flavor." The lead could be expanded with a short sentence on regional variants or international recognition (e.g., its use in Southeast Asian Chinese diasporas). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:00, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback! I’ve gone through all the points you mentioned and made the necessary changes. For the parts in the Chinese version that were marked with [citation needed], I left them out of the English article since I couldn’t find reliable sources, following Wikipedia’s verifiability policy.

I’ve also made sure to use “Maxim’s Cakes” consistently throughout the article, based on the company’s official materials. Since I can’t move the article myself, I’ve posted a message on the talk page to ask an admin for help with renaming it. Uuueol (talk) 08:52, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

About one of my additional articles — it was merged into Chinese sticky rice by another editor. I’m fine with the merge and my content is still part of the article. Just wanted to check if this can still count toward my extra article. Uuueol (talk) 09:14, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Regarding moving Maxim's Cakes, please follow the procedure for requesting a move as outlined at Wikipedia:Requested moves.

Regarding the merged content, yes, it counts for your credit. You may want to join the discussion at the talk page of talk:Chinese_sticky_rice#Merge_from_Stir-fried_glutinous_rice and tell us whether these two dishes are the same or not. If they are the same, you can get extra points for proposing a merge on zh wiki by following procedures at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:%E5%90%88%E5%B9%B6%E9%A1%B5%E9%9D%A2 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:17, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)-Youn Hyunseok

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure. These are links to my sandbox translated into Korean:sandbox1 sandbox2 Please let me know if there is a problem. Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 12:35, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:16, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor.I added the citation to remaining content and remaining paragraphs.Please check my sandbox again.Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 02:53, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 That's progress but you are far from complete. Comparing https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Youn1002/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 to Middle class shows that you still need to translate much, much more. For example, your draft has 6 references; the English original, over 60. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:38, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)SHAO TIANYI1&ZHONG QI

Dear professor, I am taking Social Structure of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence with Zhong Qi. Here is the article we have completed translating: https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%A5%B3%E6%80%A7%E4%B8%BB%E7%BE%A9%E6%AD%B7%E5%8F%B2 https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/China_Movie_Channel https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lei_Feng https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yeomll Please review these articles. Thank you. ––Yeomll (talk) 13:17, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Good job!

Regarding your link 1 (translation to zh), please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Regarding your link 4 (User:Yeomll - Wikipedia) shouldn't this be at zh wiki? It's in Chinese.

Regarding your two English projects, not that at Lei Feng some content was removed as it was unreferenced. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability)..

Avoid mid-sentence Chinese conjunctions like "和" being translated as "and" without proper integration. Example: “...by the Chinese Communist Party和Government of China” should become “...by both the Chinese Communist Party and the government of China.”

Consider using tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT to correct prose and vocabulary to be more fluent and natural English, while reflecting Wikipedia's encyclopedic style and Manual of Style.

Regarding the TV article: Per WP:LEAD, the lead should summarize the entire article in 2–4 paragraphs. Currently, the lead is one paragraph, and fails to clarify what CCTV-6 is as a channel (not just its legal host institution), mention its dual nature (as both a government channel and entertainment broadcaster) or describe scope: reach, major programs, affiliations (e.g., CHC channels). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:36, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

The introduction has been modified according to Wikipedia's requirements. Please check.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/China_Movie_Channel Kylo09 (talk) 10:27, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Good, it is much better. Now, how about other issues I've noted? Did you fix them too? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9) :남현서 NAM HYUNSEO

Dear Mr.Piotr, This is Hyunseo Nam, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I've been completed translating. Here is my link https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Hyunseo050907/연습장 Hyunseo050907 (talk) 16:55, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead. Please ask me for a review before that stage. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:47, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello, I read your translated article and found it overall natural and easy to read. I’d like to offer a couple of suggestions: some paragraphs are missing references, so it would be great if you could add those. Also, a few blue links don’t seem to lead to Korean Wikipedia articles—please double-check them. Keep up the good work! Kimkiwoong (talk) 01:04, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong I assume you tried leaving a feedback for a fellow student, but this is not the right place for it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)- Kim Seongil (김선길)

Hello, professor. I have completed translating and editing the following two English Wikipedia articles into Korean:

1. **"Anti-Japanese sentiment in the United States"** → [미국 내 반일 감정](https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/미국_내_반일_감정) 2. **"The Coming War with Japan"** → [다가오는 일본과의 전쟁](https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/다가오는_일본과의_전쟁)

The original English versions I translated from are: - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti-Japanese_sentiment_in_the_United_States - https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Coming_War_with_Japan&oldid=1268946625

I would appreciate your feedback on these articles. Thank you very much! 김선길 (talk) 04:48, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Very good, but please follow the following steps to finish your project:

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page ko:틀:번역된_문서

In your second article, please fix the reference errors reported at the bottom (or stop by my office and we will take a look at them together).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:40, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor,

Thank you for your previous feedback. I have carefully followed your instructions and completed all the necessary steps:

I added appropriate categories to both of my articles based on the original English versions.

I included the {{과제 문서}} template on the talk pages of the Korean articles.

I also added the {{번역된 문서}} template to indicate that these are translated works, in accordance with WP:TFOLWP.

For the second article (The Coming War with Japan), I reviewed and fixed the reference errors that were appearing at the bottom.

Please let me know if there is anything else I should address. Thank you again for your guidance! 김선길 (talk) 15:10, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Good; please monitor your articles to make sure they are not rejected by the reviewers. Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 WANG HONGDA

Hello professor,I am Wang Hongda a student who is taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have finished the text translation of the Wikipedia article, please check it out.

Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 04:23, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@WANG HONGDA

I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in Chinese Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to English, you need to move it to English Wikipedia . Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Sorry, I have moved the article to the English Wikipedia.User:WANG HONGDA/User:WANG HONGDA/三姐弟布丁事件 WANG HONGDA (talk) 06:29, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@WANG HONGDA Much better. Next:

• Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.
• proofread your work to remove stray code like "and 13, 2016.[1] The incident"
• Format your article according to WP:MOS, for example, the title of the article should not be in italics but in bold
• ensure that every paragraph has a reference
• the section on 'Public Commentary' seems like a collection of trivia (random quotations). Reliable ones can be used as sources in other places; but the section is not encyclopedic and needs to be deleted
• Some of your references are unreliable and need to be replaced by better ones 2, 5-9, 26 - the first is a wiki, the others are youtube. YouTube can be used only if the reference is to a reliable news source or such, but right now your citations don't provide info on author, date, etc. 26 - Facebook - is also not reliable, as social media.
• Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). In particular, correct all formatting errors to " web.archive.org." which is not the correct publisher

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Review the wording for compliance with Wikipedia:Neutral point of view

The article heavily relies on tabloid-like news (Apple Daily, SETN), YouTube videos, and PTT posts, which are generally considered unreliable or self-published. Supplement coverage with more reputable outlets. Strengthen evidence of notability in the lead and early sections. Show that mainstream media and public institutions addressed the case significantly.

The lead lacks summary of key facts: Who, what, when, why it matters. It should be 2–4 paragraphs and summarize the full article. Review WP:LEAD and write a better lead section

Use standard Wikipedia section headings (e.g., “Background,” “Controversy,” “Aftermath,” “Legacy”).

Do not analyze or interpret events beyond what sources state. For example, avoid phrases like “this intensified public backlash” unless a source explicitly says so.

Use consistent date formats (e.g., “January 8, 2016”).

Avoid excessive use of blockquotes; paraphrase where possible. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:09, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Dead6(week10)XIXIANGRUI

Dear professor: The following are some personal views on the students' articles (only a small part of them can be seen due to the limited level) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Xjx921/Campaign_to_Clean_Up_Cyberspace&action=edit&redlink=1 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:18, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Please move your comments to the main talk page of that editor - User talk:Xjx921 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) -Xu Xinran

Hi Professor,

I’ve provided feedback to Zzzzzhouziyu on her article. Here is the link to my feedback.Please check it. Thank you！ XXUXINRAN (talk) 06:44, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Good. On Chinese Wikipedia, it's ok to leave comments in Chinese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9）—WANG HONGDA

Hello professor,I am Wang Hongda a student who is taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed the translation of Wikipedia and added citations and links to the article. Please check it out.

Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 07:01, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@WANG HONGDA See my feedback above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) -LAOXINYI

Hi Professor,I am taking two courses: "The Social Structure of Daily Life" and "Collective Wisdom." I’ve provided feedback to Zzzzzhouziyu on her article. Here is the link to my feedback.Please check it. Thank you！ Laoxinyi (talk) 07:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) ---HE ZIXUAN

Hello professor, I reviewed YAN JINJIN's article （ 原始全球化）, here is the link.please check it. ZixuanHE (talk) 07:26, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:04, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6(week10): ZHOUZIYU

Hello professor,I am a student who is taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.I’ve provided feedback to XXUXINRAN on her article. Here is the link to my feedback.And this is my sandbox2. Could you give me some suggestions? It has already been submitted for review by the volunteers. Please check it. Thank you！ Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 08:07, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu Your feedback is good.

As for the article in your sandbox, it seems that the Chinese reviewers have some concerns about two issues. First, is the quality of the translation - I cannot help with this, as I don't speak Chinese, but you can ask for help, either from AI, or from the reviewers themselves (ask them to show you specific examples of bad translation to help you understand).

The latest comment translates as Wikify, which usually means you need to use more blue links and/or other wiki code. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . I see some definitely not linked content in see also section - link those articles or remove the text. Second example in 'In popular culture' needs a reference - add one, or remove it.The last few sentences in the Causes section needs a reference, again - add one or remove the unreferenced sentences. And remember, again, if you don't understand why the reviewers are unhappy with your work, you should talk to them directly and ask them what needs to be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:10, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) —— CUI ZAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have completed the requirement for Deadline 6. I left two comments on the user talk page of Uuueol—one giving positive feedback on their overall contribution to the article, and another offering constructive suggestions. Here is the link to my feedback:link

Cuicuizan (talk) 09:28, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) —— GUAN YUE

Dear professor,

I'm currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I've completed Deadline 6 by leaving feedback on two articles — both comments are posted here.

Please check. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 09:34, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Project 2 topic confirmation

Hello Professor, I am FAN XINRU, a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. BAI LINHAN and I formed a group to undertake the task of Project 2. Sorry to bother you, but my topic is "How often do students use electronic devices (laptops/tablets/phones) during self-study in the library? Will it affect their focus time?" We believe that multitasking on electronic devices can reduce learning efficiency, so we conducted a related investigation on this topic. May I ask if this topic is acceptable? We are currently observing according to this topic and will carefully complete it. We hope to receive confirmation from the professor. Jzhdylb (talk) 12:20, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb It's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Item 2 Theme Confirmation

Dear professor, hello, I am LYU Yangcheng. I am a student of Daily Life and Social Structure, and I am studying and completing the task of Project 2. I am in a group with Xi Xiangrui. After class in the 9th week, Xi Xiangrui told you face to face about the plan for Project 2, the school cafe observation topic: the impact of spatial layout on seating selection and social interaction. You agreed at the time, and I want to confirm it with you again. Thank you very much, professor, and wish you a happy weekend. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 13:05, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Yes, it's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(week 10)- Kim Seongil(김선길)

Hello Professor,

I have completed Deadline 6 by reviewing another student's article. I provided feedback on the article “2024 Central Europe floods”, and left my comments on the user’s talk page.

Here is the link to my feedback:

https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=사용자토론:Skymir1127#Hello!I'm_reviewing_your_article_titled“2024_Central_Europe_floods”_as_part_of_our_Wikipedia_assignment. 김선길 (talk) 15:04, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@김선길 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:13, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)：XU YAN(서염)

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions. I have made the corresponding revisions and completed the translation of the article. Please check it. Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 15:14, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Very good, you are almost done.

At least one of your links point to a disambiguation page. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget, then fix it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6(week10)-LIANG ZHIWEI

Hello professor I have left my feedback in Zzzzzhouziy’s user page Here is the link Please check it Thank you!—- LIANG06 (talk) 15:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@LIANG06 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(week 10)LYU YANGCHENG

Dear Professor,

I am currently studying Collective Wisdom in Everyday Life and Social Structure and Practice.

I have completed the requirements of Deadline 6. I left a comment on the user discussion page of XIXIANGRUI - here is my feedback link:https://w.wiki/E4Nq Thank you very much, Professor，Have a nice weekend! Hanyangdaxue (talk) 00:46, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good, and well done using an URL shortener for linking :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:28, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week10) - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Hello Professor, I am Seo Young Kim, 2024096508 who is taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure B class (13:00-14:30 Mon, 13:00-14:30 Fri). I have completed my Week 10 assignment to review other students' articles and provide constructive feedback, so please check. Thank you.

User talk:2024099889심현지#Article Translation Task Feedback - 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 03:41, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:29, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week9）YUE SHUYU

Hello, teacher.I am YUE SHUYU for the 10:30-12:00 course. I apologize for submitting my homework late due to some errors. This is the article I edited.User:0701ysy/Racism in South Korea Thanks. 0701ysy (talk) 06:45, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@0701ysy I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia, fix any errors in links and references and other code, and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

After the move, check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Kwon Hyunji(권현지)

Dear professor,

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I've completed my Week 10 assignment.

Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 06:48, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week9）-XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

Here is my translation progress. So far, I have completed the Chinese-to-English translation of two articles. These articles are related to Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. please check. Thank you! Xjx921 (talk) 09:22, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Have you seen my feedback from few weeks ago at, now archived at User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_5#Deadline_4(Week5)_--XI_JIAXIN ?

Because I just checked two random errors I pointed out back then and they are still present in the article. Please fix all the issues I've pointed out, and report your progress to me. Please explicitly tell me how you fixed each and every error I reported. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:33, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) -XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have completed this week’s assignment. I left a constructive comment on the user talk page of Xuan6699.

Here is the link to my feedback: link. Xjx921 (talk) 09:36, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 10:19, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week9)_Kim da young(김다영)

Dear Professor, I am enrolled in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the Korean translations for the two topics I selected: Animal Welfare and Rights in India and China’s Gender Imbalance. However, I encountered continuous errors when trying to create citations for the China’s Gender Imbalance section. I was unable to resolve the issue, so I am submitting it as is. If you know a way to fix this, I would appreciate it if you could let me know. Thank you. Day123kk (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Come to my office and I'll show you how to fix the reference errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:38, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - Park suhyun

Dear Professor, I am studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed my all translations. [69] , [70] , [71] Thank you.

Park suhyun (talk) 18:12, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Park suhyun Good, but there are still some errors to fix. Some Korean reviewers have complained about the unnatural (machine) quality of your translations. There are code and reference errors that need to be fixed (broken templates and references).

Also, check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it or how to fix other errors _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:40, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week10) - Park suhyun

Dear Professor, I have completed the requirements of Deadline 6. I provided feedback on Article Translation Task Feedback - Park suhyun. Thank you. Park suhyun (talk) 18:36, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Park suhyun Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:40, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Park suhyun

Professor, I’m reposting my Week 3 assignment confirmation because there was an error in my previous message. This is the work I did at that time. User:Park suhyun Park suhyun (talk) 18:45, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

@Park suhyun See my feedback above; this is a very early draft and it needs to be finished. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:41, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10) - Youn Hyunseok

Hello, professor, I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.I made feedback on here.Please let me know if there is a problem.Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 02:58, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Youn1002 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Jung Uijun

Dear Professor, I have completed the requirements of Deadline 10. I am taking a class to understand everyday life and social structure.I made feedback on here.Please let me know if there is a problem.Thank you. Koolujman (talk) 04:06, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Koolujman Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User:Ljhwa on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 05:36, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - YANG CHAOHAN

Hello professor I have already finished my second article's translation work.You can check it in my sandbox.Please tell me if I have any wrong!Thank you very much Yhan0619 (talk) 05:37, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Very good.

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Since you are expanding an existing article, please WP:MERGE it to the original one.

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - WU JIACHEN

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User:A15928872517 on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. A1246632822 (talk) 07:03, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User:A1246632822 on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 08:34, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)----CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time. I evaluated this translated article.I have left my feedback for "Chensiwen/沙盒/Climate change in North Korea" on the user talk page. Please check. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 09:13, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Please move your comment to that user's main talk page at User talk:Chensiwen _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:45, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing---진사우 CHEN SIYU

Dear Professor, I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10.Please check here.Thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 09:16, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:45, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Project 2 Topic Confirmation-YANG CHAOHAN

Dear teacher, my research project focuses on the use of open spaces on campus (such as the central lawn, the fountain area, the bench area under the shade of trees, etc.), and explores how people choose to stay in different types of leisure areas and their changing patterns. In the past two weeks, I have continued to carry out systematic field observations and am about to enter the preparation stage of data collation, analysis and results presentation. I would like to ask you to give me some guidance on my research method. Is this method appropriate? Or do you have any suggestions for improvement Yhan0619 (talk) 09:19, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 My suggestion is that next time you ask for suggestions earlier than just before the final deadline. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)—LIU YINGTONG

Dear Professor,

I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10.Please check here.Thank you Ryuthefang (talk) 10:37, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)-jung yuna(정유나)

I am currently enrolled in both Everyday Life and Social Structure (Grade A) and Practicing Collective Intelligence. I have provided feedback on another student’s article on their user talk page: User talk:Day123kk Please kindly confirm. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 12:00, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna On Korean Wikipedia it is best to leave feedback in Korean _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:47, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Kim Da Young

Hello Professor,

I am a student in the course Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have provided feedback on the article draft by Kim Seo-young.
Here is the link to my feedback: [insert link]
Thank you for checking. Day123kk (talk) 12:51, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week10)&weekly edits - QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I left my feedback for User_talk:Day123kk on her talk page.

And I also have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10 and week11, total more than 20edits.Please check here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 14:42, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) Hyunseo Nam

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B). I left my feedback on https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자토론:Jungyuna/연습장 here. Please check it. Thank you Hyunseo050907 (talk) 15:19, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 Please move your comment from a subpage to the main talk page of your fellow student (사용자토론:Jungyuna). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)---- ZHONG QI

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have left my feedback for User talk:L01yy11 on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. Kylo09 (talk) 16:41, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(week10) kiwoong-kim

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B). I left my feedback for https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자토론:Yrmisoee#피드백 on her https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Yrmisoee/연습장 Please check it. Thank you. Kimkiwoong (talk) 02:01, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)---- JIANGJIASHAN（강가삼)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

I have completed my comment. Please check it.[72]

Thank you. Ttkx11 (talk) 04:11, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Kim Gyuri (김규리)

Dear professor, This is Gyuri Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I have completed my Week 10 assignment to review other students' articles and provide constructive feedback, so please check. Thank you. You can find it here: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Jungyuna/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 김규리05 (talk) 04:16, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@김규리05 Please move your comment from a subpage to the main talk page of your fellow student (사용자토론:Jungyuna). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9)Translation article supplement--진사우 (CHEN SIYU)

Dear professor,I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the translation of four articles in Sandbox.This is the first link. This is the second link.This is the third link,and this is the fourth link.Check it for me, thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:46, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Your blue links do not appear to be correct. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:53, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing---진사우 CHEN SIYU

Dear Professor, I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week11.Please check here.Thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Ok, just a reminder that weekly edits should be done on public articles, not in your sandbox _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:54, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

deadline5(week9): YeonWoo Jung (정연우)

Dear professor

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure 1:00 p.m.

This is the first link of my sandbox This is the second link of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 07:47, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when your work is moved and ready for review in the correct platform. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I moved to Wikipedia in Korean because I was going to translate it into Korean. I'll leave a link again below.

This is the first link of my sandbox This is the second link of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 11:07, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo Ah, yes, Korean, not Chinese, you are correct.

Your work is now in the correct place.

Next, complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Ask me for another review once these steps are completed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

dear professor

I've finished it with all the reference documents attached. I'd appreciate it if you could check it 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 04:07, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - Jeongwoo Rhee (이정우)

Dear professor,

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I left my feedback for User:Yeonseo Koo on her talk page.

Please check it. Thank you. Leorhee04 (talk) 13:06, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 On Korean Wikipedia it is best to leave feedback in Korean _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I thought I had to leave comment in English so that you can understand. Here is talk page which I wrote my comment in Korean. Leorhee04 (talk) 09:58, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 Thank you for your consideration. In such case I recommend leaving a comment both in Korean and English, if you want it to be read by me and your fellow student (on Korean Wikipedia). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:36, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have completed the translation of two articles in Sandbox. zh to En: Sandbox1 En to zh: Sandbox2 Please check and give corrections, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 07:04, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318

Good progress.

Regarding your English article. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service).

When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

Your Chinese article is also ready for publication, good job.

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:52, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

I have finished revising the article and added the interlanguage links：En to zh:Sandbox 1，zh to En:Sandbox 2，Please check if you can publish it, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 14:30, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Please check if I can publish it, thanks Hyodong318 (talk) 14:32, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 You can publish them, but a fix is needed in the English article regarding references. Reference 10 is unreliable (WP:BAIDU) and needs to be replaced. If Baidu is just copying text from another source, cite the original newspaper or magazine instead. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:39, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Also, fix the disambiguation link to Central Plains _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:40, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Jo HyeonSeong (조현성)

Dear professor

I commented to my colleague Lee jisu's project article named'해커문화'.

Here is my comment please check it.

Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:36, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Please move your comments to the main talk page of that editor - 사용자토론:Xisuux - 위키백과 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Thank you for your feedback. I moved my comment to the main page of Xisuux. Please check it Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 00:26, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:41, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)---- CHEN SIWEN

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User talk:Ryuthefang on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. Chensiwen (talk) 10:38, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen On English Wikipedia, your feedback should be in English. If you want to leave feedback in Chinese, do it on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:47, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Professor, hello. Following your suggestion, I have left an English suggestion on his English Wikipedia user page. Please check here. Chensiwen (talk) 08:53, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:42, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

LI ZIKANG

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time . I'm currently encountering a problem. This is the second article in my group's translation task, but this translating from Chinese to English is quite challenging for me. Can I switch to a different article? Perhaps you could recommend a Chinese to English article for me. Thank you very much！Professor. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 06:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 You can chose a different topic. Please review the lists here 维基百科:优良条目 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书

and check which articles don't have English equivalents, and choose something from them to translate.

Other suggestions are available at Wikipedia:WikiProject China/Requested articles _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:59, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Can this article be translated? I have checked that there is no corresponding English version. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 08:58, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 Yes, looks like a good topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:42, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Questions about project2：BAI LINHAN

Hello professor, I have some questions about project 2. Classmate FANXINRU and I completed the assignment as a group, and the content of the PDF we submitted is the same. She also left a message here on behalf of both of us about the topics we chose. Why are our scores different? I got 8 points and she got 10 points. I look forward to your reply, thank you Bai0926 (talk) 12:21, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Please stop by my office and I'll review your work again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:44, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) -CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear professor， I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.I revised the comments again. I have left my feedback for User:A1246632822 on her user talk page. Please check. Thank you～ Chensiyu2004 (talk) 13:53, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:44, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（Week 9)-CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I rearranged the links. I have completed the translation of four articles in Sandbox. En to zh: 1 2 3 4Please check and give corrections, thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 14:00, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good, although your last translation has a template incorrectly located at a top - move it to the bottom (and for extra points finish translating the content inside of it).

Another major problem concerns your blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Right now, many of your links point to en wiki in an incorrect way, you need to fix them to point to links at zh wiki or use the interlanguage template instead before you can publish your work.

Ping me again when you fix the links and I'll review your work again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:47, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing(supplementary editor)--진사우 CHEN SIYU

Dear Professor, I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week11.Please check here.Thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 14:09, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:48, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6(week10) - Kim Yerim(김예림)

Dear Professor

My name is Yerim Kim (2024009943) and I am taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure class (Class B). I have completed the assignment for week 10, please check it at this link. Yrmisoee (talk) 04:15, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:48, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10)-LIUJUNYU(유준오)

Dear Professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed my comment. Please check it.Thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 05:51, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10)-WANG YIKE(왕흘가)

Dear Professor

For the Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I’ve left some feedback on this sandbox article My comment I thought the article was really informative and clearly written. It handles a complex historical topic with a neutral and thoughtful tone. Great work by the contributor! Alexk27 (talk) 06:02, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9)-WANG YIKE(왕흘가)

Dear Professor For the Collective Intelligence in Practice class,My team@LJY2455 and I have completed these two articles: Allied prisoners of war of Japan and Tan Zhenlin. Thank you for your patience. Alexk27 (talk) 06:07, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Ok - see my feedback to your groupmate a few posts above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Project determined —XUKEYING

Professor, I apologize for being late. This is the article I have chosen.   English to Chinese ：Social class. Racism in Japan.The theme of my Project Two is the first-floor lobby of the university library, studying people's posture choices, stay durations, interaction frequencies, and path movements within this space. Can it pass? Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 06:10, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098 Regarding Project Two, it has already finished and grades have been posted.

Regarding the Wikipedia project, I have you recorded in my spreadsheet as working on different topics: 城市绿心森林公园 to en, 澳門城市藝穗節 to en for the Collective Intelligence class. I have no record of you completing any assignments for the Everyday Life class on the Wiki. You need to sign the spreadsheet for it - come to my office to do so. The good news is that yes, the topics you have chosen can be translated to Chinese (small articles exist on zh wiki, you can expand them with referenced content translated from en wiki). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - Kwak dain(곽다인)

Dear professor, This is kwak dain, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays. I have completed my Week 10 assignment to review other students' articles and provide constructive feedback, so please check. Thank you. You can find it here: https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0%3A%EA%B9%80%EA%B7%9C%EB%A6%AC05%2F%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#Deadline_6_(week_9)_-_kwak_dain(%EA%B3%BD%EB%8B%A4%EC%9D%B8) Kwak dain (talk) 07:18, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10) - Hyunji Shim(심현지)

Dear Professor,

I am a student who takes Everyday Life and Social Structure morning classes (class A). This link is my feedback left on another user's Talk page.

Please check it. Thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 01:10, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Good, but if you leave feedback on English Wikipedia, make sure to include a copy of it translated to English as well, not just Korean. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:49, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

OK. I added English translation to the previous one. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 01:56, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@2024099889심현지 Good _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:08, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

week10 ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, these are the five Wikipedia articles I recently edited, a total of 50 times, hoping to get extra credit. Please help me check, thank you.1.2.3.4.5. Jzhdylb (talk) 10:51, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Good. When you add Chinese language references on English Wikipedia, in addition to the Chinese title, please use the translated title metadata parameter to add English translation of the title as well. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:09, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9)-LEE YENA(이예나)

Professor. I completed the translation of the first topic and uploaded it to the Korean version of Wikipedia. I would appreciate it if you could check it. And now I will translate the second English document into Korean. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%A1%9C%EB%9F%B0%EC%8A%A4_%EB%A0%88%EC%8B%9C%EA%B7%B8 Leeyena528 (talk) 13:00, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Very good. Please make sure to monitor the history of that article and your talk page for feedback from the reviewers _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:10, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10)-LEE YENA(이예나)

Hello professor, I read someone else's writing and left a feedback comment about it. Please check. Thank you. User talk:Yrmisoee#2024082560 LEE YENA(이예나) Leeyena528 (talk) 13:55, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

@Leeyena528 Good _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:10, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3（week4）&deadline4（week5）-QIAN ZIYI

Professor, hello. The original comment has been deleted, so I can only modify it and send it again. I have added the author's date and other details to the citation, which is not the complete translation. Please check.link1 link2 Buryab0ne (talk) 00:26, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne I don't know what you are trying to do in the American Academy of Clinical Toxicology, but I have reverted your edits there as well as they did not add any constructive or helpful information.

As for your work on User:Buryab0ne/sandbox10, it is a good start. Here's my feedback:

• Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).
• Wikipedia articles must be written in a neutral, encyclopedic tone. Avoid promotional or overly poetic language. Right now, it reads like a local promotional brochure rather than a balanced encyclopedia entry. Examples of issues: “Weishan Lake is one of China's famous six freshwater lakes, featuring picturesque scenery...” sounds promotional. “The lotus flowers, known as the 'Fairy of Flowers', stand out the most.” subjective and non-neutral. Use factual language like: “Weishan Lake is one of six major freshwater lakes in China and includes scenic features such as lotus ponds and reed beds.”
• Avoid unclear or awkward translations and fix formatting issues that make the text hard to follow. Proofread your work with a tool like Grammarly or an AI. Examples: 1) “Weishan Sihu is the largest freshwater lake...” → unclear term ("Sihu" unexplained). 2) “Rare earth elements... currently discovered in China.Additionally...” → missing spacing and punctuation.
• Only link the first occurrence of commonly known terms, and avoid irrelevant links. Examples:

Don’t link Kilometre, Latitude, or Longitude – these are too general. Linking to "Blackfish" is incorrect—it refers to a music album, not the fish.

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Remove html code (big) around the headings, use wiki code, not html. Ask AI for help or consult WP:CHEATSHEET.

_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:22, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - yejoo Yang (양예주)

Dear professor, This is yejoo Yang.

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I read the user's document and left feedback. You can find here: User talk:Skymir1127#Deadline6(week10)-yejoo Yang

Thank you.Yangyejoo (talk) 01:37, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo Very good _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:22, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)XU XINRAN

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the translation of my second article.历史的使用与滥用：或者如何教授过去，Please check it. XXUXINRAN (talk) 08:21, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:22, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have added the quoted content as per your request. Please check if it can be moved now. My sandbox XXUXINRAN (talk) 13:08, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Almost. You should use a proper infobox instead of a simple table, at the top: try this tool: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Infobox_book _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have made the necessary modifications according to your requirements. This is my article. Please double-check it and confirm if I can move it. Thank you. XXUXINRAN (talk) 11:57, 17 May 2025 (UTC)

@XXUXINRAN Ok, you can publish it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:27, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - YeonWoo Jung (정연우)

Dear professor, This is YeonWoo Jung.

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I read the user's document and left feedback. You can find here: User talk:Naheekim2025/sandbox#Deadline6(week10)-YeonWoo Jung

Thank you 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 10:52, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo Please move your comments to the main talk page of that editor (User talk:Naheekim2025). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week11 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 11:31, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity

Deer professor,

I have completed the Wikipedia activity for extra credit.

Please check it. Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 13:07, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Good (I fixed a small error for you here). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:34, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly Edit LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor,

My name is Lv Yangcheng, and I am studying the course "Structure of Daily Life and Collective Intelligence". I have completed the 11th week of editing Wikipedia.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/Hanyangdaxue This is my translation task. I have translated most of it. Please check it.

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxueanotherhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Thank you professor, have a nice weekend Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:51, 18 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good. Please review my comments from before (at #Deadline 5(week 9) LYU YANGCHENG) after ensuring you address my points, publish your articles, so they can be reviewed by the Chinese reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:35, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week9）--YU XIYUE

I'm YU XIYUE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have completed the assignment of translating the English Wikipedia article on Elmer Belt into Chinese and have successfully published it.

Here are the links for your review:

1. Published Chinese Wikipedia Article: [73] 2. My Sandbox (Draft Workspace): [74]

I would be grateful if you could take some time to review the content. Thank you very much!

Best regards, YU XIYUE 2023012388Y (talk) 09:27, 18 May 2025 (UTC)

@2023012388Y Good.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:39, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - WU WENHAO

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

Link1. Link2.

These two links contain my feedback provided to two different article authors via their respective Talk pages.

Thank you. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 11:53, 18 May 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:42, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - SHAO TIANYI

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

I have completed my comment. Please check it.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:%E7%99%BD%E8%AF%97%E6%A3%8B ––Yeomll (talk) 12:36, 18 May 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:42, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10)：XU YAN(서염)

Dear Professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. I read the user's document and left feedback. You can find here. Please check it, thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 14:49, 18 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:42, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11) - Kim Da Young

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure （10:30-12:00） I have resolved the reference errors in the article on Sex-ratio imbalance in China that I uploaded last week. Please check it. Day123kk (talk) 16:12, 18 May 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk Good. Next, your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Project Three- Technology Assignment

Dear Professor ,

Regarding Project Three – Technology, I would like to kindly request to complete the assignment individually. Although it is a group project, the nature of the task involves experiencing a setting without any electronic devices. I believe that working independently would allow me to engage more authentically with the experience and provide a more accurate reflection of the intended objective.

I understand the importance of collaboration, but in this particular context, the presence of group members may inadvertently affect the authenticity of the technology-free experience. Therefore, I would greatly appreciate your approval to proceed individually. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 02:49, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Ok, permission granted _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6 (Week 10)——SHU YING

Dear Professor,

I have completed the task of Deadline 6.

I did a feedback on ZHANG ZEHUA's article: 公民新闻

Please check. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 02:49, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Ok, but if you leave feedback on Chinese Wikipedia, make sure to include a copy of it translated to Chinese as well, not just English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

I have added Chinese feedback. Please check it again. Thank you Syouziiye (talk) 04:47, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye OK _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:23, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Dear Professor,

I am currently studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed the English-to-Chinese translation.

This is the link of my article.

Please check, thank you. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 19:05, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:08, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, hello. According to your suggestions, I have made comprehensive revisions to the second article. At present, the article has been improved and stored in my user page. However, due to permission restrictions, I cannot move it from the user page to the main namespace, and thus cannot add cross-language links. Therefore, I sincerely request your assistance in moving the page to the main space so that the entry can be officially published. Your help will play a vital role in further improving and optimizing the content of the article. Thank you again for your guidance and support! Here is the link to my revised article. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 13:29, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG Bancy For help regarding moving the article on zh wiki, see Help:页面重命名 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 . Please let me know if you need more help _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:41, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have made some modifications based on your suggestions. Please check if it can be moved now. This is my second article. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 08:14, 20 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week10) - ZHUANG MINNA

Dear professor, these are the two articles I translated：The Southeast Daily and 朝鲜史学. If there are any changes that need to be made, please let me know. Thank you！ Minazhuang777 (talk) 06:26, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 Good progress. Things to fix in the English article:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Right now you are not doing this correctly. I have fixed some for you: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Minazhuang777/sandbox&action=history Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.
• Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). For example, the sentence that begins with "In April 1928, the Zhejiang" needs a reference. There are other similar cases.
• Some captions are not translated (国民党中央黨部)
• The reference section is not finished. You use some short citations like 王文科；张扣林 2010, pp. 125–127. but the reference is not expanded. What is 王文科；张扣林?
• Add English title to 张梦新 2011, 第五章·第二节 解放战争时期杭州的新闻事业.

For your zh article, please double check the links as well.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4（Week5）-WANG SISI

Hello,professor.

I am Wang Sisi in the class B of Everyday Life and Social Structure.

You said the previous link was broken, so I'll post it again.Please check it out. Wangsisi031012 (talk) 07:02, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

@Wangsisi031012 Good progress. Things to fix:

• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• Ping me for another review after you add links. Adding images would be good too, if free ones can be found

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5(week9)---MUYE

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

The translation of two articles in the class Everyday Life, Journalistic objectivity and Evolution of morality, has been completed. （to zh） The translation of two articles in the class Social Structure and Collective Intelligence , Upper class and Operationalization ,has been completed. （to zh）

 Please check. MUYW (talk) 08:13, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Good progress. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

When you publish your article in Chinese , please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Dealine5-XUKEYING

Dear Professor, I apologize for being late, I have completed the translation of two articles in everyday life：社会阶层，日本种族主义 . For this lesson on collective wisdom, I have completed it:城市绿色森林公园 and I want to change another article translation English to Chinese ： Bourgeoisie, please refer to it. Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 06:08, 20 May 2025 (UTC)

@Xukeying2022039098

The first two links above lead to the English articles, not to your work.

Your contributions at zh wiki have been rejected due to low quality. Please review comments at https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%9F%8E%E5%B8%82%E7%BB%BF%E5%BF%83%E6%A3%AE%E6%9E%97%E5%85%AC%E5%9B%AD&action=history and https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%9F%8E%E5%B8%82%E7%BB%BF%E5%BF%83%E6%A3%AE%E6%9E%97%E5%85%AC%E5%9B%AD&action=history

You need to understand your mistakes and learn how to create content at the level that will be acceptable the local reviewers.

For changing the translation topic, talk to me after class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:05, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Btw, @AlexLeeCN, I see copyvio concerns, but the student should be just translating content from en wiki to zh wiki. There should be no copyvio involved? They are also required to use zh:Template:Translated page although many don't do this until I remind them to do so in the final review which hasn't happened yet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:07, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

The content Xukeying2022039098 added was clearly by-character copied from various sources and had 96% similarity reported by turnitin. Due to the revision has been deleted, the turnitin report may be refered. Regards.--Kasaki Miozre^Talk 05:37, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

@AlexLeeCN Thank you. Upon further review, it seems the student misunderstood the assignment, as the article on 城市绿心森林公园 is supposed to be translated from zh wiki to en wiki. Expansion of the zh wiki article is not required. Now I understand the problem better. My class of course includes a module on Wikipedia:COPYVIO, but not everyone understands it.

Could you or someone else (@Rastinition) explain the problem with https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E7%A4%BE%E4%BC%9A%E9%98%B6%E7%BA%A7&diff=87369444&oldid=87351954 ? The translated edit summary talks about low quality sources, but this is supposed to be a translation of a much longer and better referenced article from en wiki. It's possible a few sources there are inferior, but many are solid (academic books and papers), and I think the en wiki article is superior to the much shorter zh wiki article, so the translation is a step in the right direction. What's the problem? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:45, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

I cannot access the revdel versions, so I cannot give more detailed feedback to the student outside asking them to publish his work in a sandbox and ask me for a review before it goes to mainspace. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:38, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12) - Fatima Paulina Lopez Diaz

Dear Professor,

Here are my articles, United Nations and South Korea and United Nations and North Korea. I already requested the titles to be moved as you instructed me here. Please let me know if I did it correctly and if I should change anything in my articles.

Thank you! Fatimald (talk) 12:00, 20 May 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Very nice. For extra credit, you can try to have your work featured on Wikipedia's main page in the Did You Know section. Articles included there will be read by thousands of our viewers. To do so, add your article to the list by clicking the big blue button at WP:DYKNOM . Make sure to pay attention to comments by reviewers _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

PS. In the NK article, some paragraphs need references (in Sanctions). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12)-BAI LINHAN

Professor, I changed the content according to your comments last time. I deleted the paragraph "Summarize" which was originally included. I checked the page numbers of Gu Zhegang's book and added a lot of reference information. The title format was unified and all the wrong references were deleted. I corrected some unreliable references, but there are still some references to school papers, because the content of the paper is consistent with what I want to write. If this is completely impossible, I will try to change the content, please check. thank u Bai0926 (talk) 13:17, 20 May 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Good progress. There are some technical errors in references, talk to me during or after class and I'll show you how to fix them.

Add a reference to the sentence "The origin of Chinese superstition can be traced back to ancient times and is closely related to primitive society's nature worship, belief in spirits and deities, and shamanistic culture."

Add more blue links to important concepts like Four Pillars of Destiny.

Ref 8 needs better metadata (author name, date, etc.). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12)-Qu Hongyu 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

For deadline7, after being reviewed by the relevant administrators of the Chinese Wikipedia, all four articles I translated have been successfully published. I also left translation templates on each article discussion page in accordance with the requirements of Wikipedia for translating articles and linked them to the original articles.

You can check here:

• Article 1:即将到来的对日战争（translated from The Coming War with Japan);
• Article 2:韩国的网络小说（translated from Web novels in South Korea)；
• Article 3:三种战争（translated from Three_warfares)；
• Article 4:弗洛里安·兹纳涅茨基（translated from Florian Znaniecki).

I also have finished my weekly wiki editing for week12.Please check here and here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 02:52, 21 May 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Excellent job. For extra credit, you can nominate your work to be displayed on zh wiki main page. See instructions here: zh:Wikipedia:新条目推荐/候选 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6: LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor,

I have completed the task of Deadline 6.

I did a feedback on MA CHENXIAO

BTW I have modified the deadline 5 according to your feedback, Modified cross-language links and added images but you may not have seen my message.

PLS check，Thank you. Peter011008 (talk) 02:22, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

@Peter011008 In that article, you need to use Chinese language categories, not English.

The links have been modified in a way that I am not familiar with, but it seems ok. If the reviewers are not criticizing it, I am fine with that. Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:10, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9)-LIUJUNYU(유준오)

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

The translation of two articles in the class Everyday Life, Ghostwriter and Sociology of race and ethnic relations, has been completed.

In the class Collective Intelligence in Practice, the two articles that the group worked on, Allied prisoners of war of Japan and Tan Zhenlin, have also been completed. Please check. LJY2455 (talk) 05:26, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Very good.

Your English article still has some unreferenced parts. (For example, the first and last paragraph of "Early Red Army Career" section have no references, while the reference to "谭震林为何被毛泽东当众称为"谭老板"？" sems broken and needs to be fixed to a working link). Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). Double check all links to make sure they work, and if they do not work and cannot be rescued with the Internet Archive, find a better one

You can publish your Chinese articles now. See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English) zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:53, 15 May 2025 (UTC)

OK, Professor. I think I have completed your request. Is there anything else I need to modify? Alexk27 (talk) 13:42, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 See above. Tan Zhenlin, for example, still needs more references. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:30, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) & Deadline 7 (weeks 11-12) - Lee Jae-hyun (이재현)

Hello, professor. I;m a student who takes course named 'Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia'. I've already reviewd an article by another student in his talk page. (Deadline 6)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User talk:Jo HyeonSeong

Here is an link, The last feedback is mine.

Also, I already finished my article. (Deadline 7)

정보 과다

종교사회학

Lastly, few days ago, my weekly obligatory wiki edits(1st week~8th week) were reverted by one of the English WIkipedia Manager, Because I broke the Wikipedia rules. In the 9th week, I asked the professor for a solution to this problem, and I got permission to replace it & to earn extra credits with editing a new article. I've already made 3 new articles, and if I have time, I'm going to make another one. I think I personally spent a lot of time editing these articles. I hope you can give me some feedback on these articles as well. And really lastly, I have a personal question about these articles next Monday. Thank you so much always, and I hope you have a great day today.

마가렛 시벨라 브라운

NSCAD 대학교

물이끼속JHyunlee (talk) 07:21, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Yes, I think your translations to Korean Wikipedia are very good. You can extra credit if you successfully nominate your work for front page exposure on Korean Wikipedia's Main Page. See here: 위키백과:알고 계십니까 - 위키백과 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:33, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity:ZHANG BINGYI

Deer professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed the Wikipedia activity for extra credit.

Please check it. Thank you.

Zhangzhang111 (talk) 10:29, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

L@Zhangzhang111 Good job, but some fixes are needed.

Much content has no references - please remember that only referenced content counts for extra credit. The Political Career section should be rewritten from a bullet point style to regular prose, see WP:PROSELINE

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

References 8, 9 and 11 are low quality (see WP:EPOCHTIMES). Can you replace them with more reliable soruces?

For extra credit, ask AI like ChatGPT to review your article on whether it confirms with English Wikipedia manual of style, and give you suggestions what to fix - then let me know if they are useful :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)- Hong soo jung

Professor, I will check all technical errors and find the link again and re-upload the 2 sandboxes I organized by translating Korean. Please check it. 1,2. Sooraon05 (talk) 15:09, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

@Sooraon05 You are quite behind the schedule. First, I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia, respectively. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform. Make sure it contains links and references. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12)LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, my name is LYU YANGCHENG. These are two articles from my collective wisdom course translated from English to Chinese. I have translated most of them. Please check them out. Thank you for your hard work.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/sandbox2 originalhttps://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Friedrich_Nietzsche_and_free_will&action=edit Part IIhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/draft1originalTruth and Method Ten edits per weekhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/HanyangdaxueThank you professor, have a nice weekend Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:50, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue The second one does not seem close to being finished (Truth and Method).

The first one is progressing well but there are lot of code artifacts that need to be fixed (like 【１０】).

Please carefully proofread your work to make sure all code is fixed and that it reads well in Chinese. You can also ask an AI to review your work and tell you how to fix it so that it adheres to Chinese Wikipedia's Manual of Style. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12) - Kwon Hyunji(권현지)

Dear professor,

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I have completed two of my articles.

오스트레일리아의 대마초

태양계를 벗어난 인조물 목록

If there are any parts that need to be revised, please give me feedback.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 12:25, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Excellent. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:13, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kim Yeonhee(김연희)

Dear Professor,

These are my Wikipedia articles ready for review.

Prospective memory

Controlling behavior in relationships

The Elephant in the Brain

please check.

Kyeon0425 (talk) 16:56, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good progress. Things to do:

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• When you publish your article in English, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:15, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week12 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 16:58, 24 May 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:15, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing--CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear Professor, I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week12.Please check here.Thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 06:33, 25 May 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:16, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am Zhang Zehua, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life. I have completed the second translation [75]. Please check it. Thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 18:32, 25 May 2025 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Good. Next steps:

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• After that, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.
• When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:18, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- 계해운

Dear Professor,

Regarding the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" class (Class A, 10:30–12:00), the two articles I chose — Zheng Peimin and Touching China — are now mostly completed. If there are any issues or mistakes, I’ll continue to revise them. Thank you again for your confirmation and guidance! Lrxx123 (talk) 09:00, 20 May 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Please note much of the content in the latter article was removed as unsourced. If you want it to count for our class credit, you need to find sources for it before restoring it.

You will get extra credit for work on Template:Touching the Heart of China (which @RCSCott91 has properly finished, thank you; I'll try to link it to zh wiki now). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your reminder! I have re-added the relevant content with proper sourcing as suggested. Please feel free to let me know if any other issues or areas need improvement.@Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 04:36, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6（week10）：BAI SHIQI

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have left my feedback for User talk:China Movie Channel on her user talk page. Please check. Thank you. 白诗棋 (talk) 04:19, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 Please copy your comment to the talk page of your fellow student _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:21, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

ok，professor， I have left my feedback for User talk:China Movie Channel on her user talk page. Please check 白诗棋 (talk) 04:32, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Additionally, Professor, the article on anti-corruption after the 18th National Congress of the Communist Party of China has been rejected. Can I choose another article? 白诗棋 (talk) 04:37, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@白诗棋 It seems the problem is your poor command of Chinese, see zh:User_talk:白诗棋#2025年4月 and comments at https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E4%B8%AD%E5%85%B1%E5%8D%81%E5%85%AB%E5%A4%A7%E5%90%8E%E7%9A%84%E5%8F%8D%E8%85%90%E8%B4%A5&action=history . You need to carefully proofread your work (maybe AI can help). And yes, you can choose another topic, but if you don't proofread your work the same problem may happen again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:45, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9): GUO YING

Dear Professor, this is the article I have already published. I also want to do additional articles. Could you help me find some? Guoying1 (talk) 05:07, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@Guoying1 Good job. Few final touches: When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} and Template:Translated page to its talk page.

As for other topics, talk to me during or after class and we can find topics for you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10)-CAI ZHIHANG

Dear professor

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.

My comments on Zhang Xiaotong’s article:欢迎来到视频案例Made a review

Please check, thanks Caizzz (talk) 04:26, 22 May 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Please copy your comment to that user's talk page: User talk:Hyodong318 from the wrong place - User talk:Hyodong318/Welcome to Video case _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:02, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

I have fixed it, here is the link Caizzz (talk) 06:26, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) ——JIA YUAN

Dear Professor, Regarding the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" class (Class B, 13:00–14:30), Here are my additional bonus points:Jean Baptiste Beaubien、Adam Shaheen、American Flyers Airline、Paracrine regulatorPlease check, thank you. Jiayyyyy (talk) 01:48, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy You need to finish formatting your articles, otherwhise they'll be rejected by the zh wiki articles.

让·巴蒂斯特·博比安, for example, has a badly formatted table instead of a proper infobox, and has next to no wikilinks and no categories. References are not properly translated, either (some are notes in English, and should be translated to Chinese).

Please note that content declined for publication will not receive extra credit. It's better to do fewer entries, but ensure they are high quality, than many low quality ones which will be declined.

If you need help, stop by my office. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:07, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have revised it. Please recommend more articles that can be translated for me, thanks. Jiayyyyy (talk) 06:29, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Lin Chih-Sheng moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Lin Chih-Sheng, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Dan arndt (talk) 06:33, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10)-ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I commented on this article about 'climate change in North Korea' by CAI ZHIHANG, please check it here, thanks. Hyodong318 (talk) 06:36, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 It's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Lin Chih-Sheng has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Lin Chih-Sheng. Thanks! Dan arndt (talk) 06:34, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

You realize that both people linked from it are known as Lin Chih-Sheng? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@Dan arndt _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

As there is only one primary topic, this could easily be addressed by a HATNOTE rather than a disambiguation page. Dan arndt (talk) 07:16, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7(Week 11-12):SHU YING

Dear professor,

I am taking the class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I have almost finished the translation and made some revisions according to the suggestions on the discussion page. Could you please take a look and see if there are any areas that need improvement. Here are links: Article1, Article2.

Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 05:41, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye very good. In article 2, remove the broken templates like Template:Economic anthropology . They look good otherwise.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

If moved, you should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia . Also, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in English, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page- zh:Template:Translated page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

OK, I'll do that. Syouziiye (talk) 16:38, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10)- Kim jong min (hanyang)

Dear Professor,

I am @Kim jong min (hanyang) taking Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User talk:Ryuthefang on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 07:27, 27 May 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:29, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week13.Please check here and here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 04:39, 28 May 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good progress _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:29, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9):YUE SHUYU

Dear Professor, this is my revised article on Wikipedihttps韩国的种族主义, and I look forward to your reply. 0701ysy (talk) 10:20, 28 May 2025 (UTC)

@0701ysy Good progress!

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page .

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:30, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week9）--YU XIYUE

I'm YU XIYUE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have completed the assignment of translating the English Wikipedia article on Mullion, Cornwall into Chinese and have successfully published it.

Here are the links for your review:

1. Published Chinese Wikipedia Article: link1 2. My Sandbox (Draft Workspace): link2

I would be grateful if you could take some time to review the content. Thank you very much!

Best regards, YU XIYUE 2023012388Y (talk) 15:22, 28 May 2025 (UTC)

@2023012388Y Good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

See fixes made to your article since you published it here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:31, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week9）--YU XIYUE

I'm YU XIYUE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have completed the assignment of translating the English Wikipedia article on"Mullion, Cornwall" into Chinese and have successfully published it.

Here are the links for your review:

1. Published Chinese Wikipedia Article: [1] 2. My Sandbox (Draft Workspace): [2]

I would be grateful if you could take some time to review the content. Thank you very much!

Best regards, YU XIYUE 2023012388Y (talk) 15:28, 28 May 2025 (UTC)

Replied above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:33, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity:ZHANG BINGYI

Deer professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed the Wikipedia activity for extra credit.

Please check it. Thank you. Zhangzhang111 (talk) 06:49, 27 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Good. To finish your work:

• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page
• The 'Controversial Articles' section needs to clearly say who considers them controversial.
• Many parts of your article have no footnotes. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:27, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, I have corrected the problem. Since there are not many footnotes in Chinese Wikipedia, I am still looking for more reliable footnotes. Please check other modified parts first.

Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 07:39, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Please format your book citation using citation templates (Wikipedia:Citation templates): - Shan-tian Lin, *General Principles of Criminal Law*, Sanmin Book Company, Taipei, 2013..Don't forget to provide Chinese title (if the original is in Chinese) in addition to the translated title, ISBN, and the page numbers of the pages you are citing. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 30 May 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 12)- GUAN YUE

Dear Professor,

I’m currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I’ve now completed the two main Wikipedia translation assignments for the course:

• Maxim’s Caterers
• Cognitive warfare

Both were translated from Chinese to English.

In addition, I’ve worked on the following six articles for extra credit:

1. Wu Shun Tak (zh → en)
2. Maxim's MX (zh → en)
3. Maxim’s Bakery (zh → en)
4. Traditional Chinese sausages (zh → en)
5. Stir-fried glutinous rice (zh → en)
6. Judy Wajcman (en → zh)

For the Ukraine Cultural Month activity, I also translated two articles from English to Chinese:

• Porcelain War
• Slovo House

Regarding your earlier comment about the page move for Maxim's Cakes — I followed the procedure outlined at Wikipedia:Requested moves and submitted the request accordingly. An administrator has since moved it to the appropriate Talk page section, and it is now officially listed for discussion and under review. I’m currently waiting for feedback or a decision.

Please feel free to take a look when convenient. Thanks! Uuueol (talk) 06:55, 30 May 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Very good. Double check Porcelain Wars - Wikipedia, the encyclopedia of freedom (zh) since there are some concerns about the style in this article (see the guides for writing in zh that I recently posted on LMS). You are doing excellent job otherwise _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:17, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

I also invite you to join the discussion at Talk:Chinese sticky rice about whether it is the same topic as Stir-fried glutinous rice or not _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:18, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)-JIA YUAN

Dear Professor, Regarding the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" class (Class B, 13:00–14:30), This is my translated article:Climate change in South Korea、Individual action on climate change。Here are my additional bonus points:Cheong Hyungsik、Jacob W. Gruber、Paracrine regulator、American Flyers Airline、Jean Baptiste BeaubienPlease check, thank you. Jiayyyyy (talk) 07:21, 30 May 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy You are doing very well, good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:19, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 12)- CUI ZAN

Dear Professor,

I hope this message finds you well. I’m currently taking the course “Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice”, and I’d like to give you a brief update on my translation progress.

So far, I have completed four main translation projects (from English to Chinese), all of which have been successfully moved to public Wikipedia pages. Here are the links:

• 帽子
• 网络购物
• 转蛋
• 冰淇淋

In addition, I’ve done five more translations for extra credit, and also participated in the Ukraine Diplomacy Month by contributing two new Chinese articles. Here are the links to those seven entries:

• 薄荷糖
• 每日电讯报
• 肌肉记忆
• 利口乐
• 蛇羹
• YUNA (音乐奖)
• 噩梦的倒影

As of now, none of my submitted articles have been reverted or moved to draft space.

If you have any feedback or suggestions, I’ll be happy to make further improvements. Thank you very much for your guidance! Cuicuizan (talk) 07:33, 30 May 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Very good job. Excellent work _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:22, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8(Week 13)LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, these are my four articles translated from English to Chinese. Please review them. Thank you, professor.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/draft1originalhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/sandbox2andhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/sandbox2originalFriedrich Nietzsche and free willandhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92&action=editoriginalPolitical cartoonand

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HanyangdaxueoriginalProtest songHere is my weekly edit:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/HanyangdaxueThank you professor, have a nice weekend Hanyangdaxue (talk) 10:05, 31 May 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Check them one by one.

First, complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Second, check your blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multiStop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:24, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week13 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 11:12, 31 May 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:24, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Lee Sihoon

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). First, I apologize for not meeting the assignment deadline. It was my fault for not reading the relevant announcement carefully. Better late than never, I have completed Assignment 6 and am leaving a comment. Here is my feedback link.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 17:36, 31 May 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Better late than never - it's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:25, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week11-12)：XU YAN(서염)

Dear Professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. Thank you for your suggestions. I have completed the revision. This is my finished article: U17 Comics. Please let me know if I did it correctly and if I should change anything in my articles. Thank you！ Xuan6699 (talk) 08:01, 1 June 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Well done. Few things to fix:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

Check the tense. If the company is defunct, it should not describe its services in the present tense. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:27, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

I certainly see many links that should be added; I've just added one. Others - ex. Shenzhen Stock Exchange. Please add more blue links to important concepts (or links to zh wiki if en article is missing but zh exists). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:30, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week11-12)：YeonWoo Jung(정연우)

Dear professor, This is YeonWoo Jung.

I have added a reference to my sandbox.

This is the first link of my sandbox This is the second link of my sandbox (about deadline 5) And, I moved feddback (about deadline 6) in User talk:Naheekim2025 - Wikipedia

Please check, thank you.

2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 04:12, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

@Oimaisazo

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles. Check them one by one.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:36, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week11-12)：BAI LINHAN

Hello professor,

1. This is my article. I have modified it according to your suggestions. Please check it.

2.These are the 43 Wikipedia entries I edited, please check them out

Thank you！ Bai0926 (talk) 11:24, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926

Your weekly and extra credit edits are very good.

Your main project is also good. Here are some suggestions on how to make it better:

Can you find a better picture on Wikimedia Commons - one that illustrates the superstitions?

References 3 and 9 need to be formatted better (date, author name, publisher name, etc.). Many other references have missing information. Books should contain page numbers, as well as quotation that proves you are citing relevant content. References to academic papers like 5 and 6 should provide the name of the journal. Etc.

Currently, the article has only a short lead. According to WP:LEAD, the lead should summarize the entire article, providing an overview of key points. Right now, it’s just a general statement about superstitions in daily life. Expand the lead to 2–3 paragraphs summarizing: Origins of Chinese superstitions (primitive beliefs, totemism), Historical development across dynasties, Modern perspectives on superstitions, Examples of common superstitions (e.g., feng shui, Ba Zi, sacrifices).

More blue links to important terms are needed: ancestor worship for example. The term Mandate of Heaven is mentioned in a heading only. Add it to the section, and blue link it.

The article does a good job tracing ancient beliefs but says little about how these beliefs function today (except for a brief mention in the lead). There’s no section on contemporary Chinese society, urban/rural differences, or how the government or academia view these beliefs today.

To complete your article, add a final section on Modern Views and Practice: How beliefs have evolved in the 20th–21st centuries. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:09, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9)-LEE YENA(이예나) (Topic 2)

Hello Professor, I finished the translation of the second topic in the exercise book and posted it on Wikipedia in Korean. Please check. Thank you. Leeyena528 (talk) 12:33, 5 June 2025 (UTC)218.235.241.135 (talk) 05:54, 22 May 2025 (UTC) 218.235.241.135 (talk) 05:53, 22 May 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. Remember to sign in.

Review fixes to your article at https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EA%B0%80%EC%A7%9C%EB%89%B4%EC%8A%A4&action=history

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:04, 23 May 2025 (UTC) Leeyena528 (talk) 12:33, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline7(Main project)——gaoxiaoxia

Hello professor.

I have completed one of my translated articles, please check it Wuhai

Babaibiaobin (talk) 08:51, 3 June 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Very good. Can you find references for the parts of the article that still need references (have text but no footnotes)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:12, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor,I looked for more references, but I can't find some of them. I'm not sure what Mn-Mye is, and I can't find any information about this food. It may be because of the wrong English transliteration. I want to ask the person who wrote this paragraph at the beginning, but I can't find this person. Should I keep this paragraph or delete it? Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:37, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin If you cannot confirm such content, it's ok to delete it, just make sure to explain the reason in the Help:Edit summary _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:57, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly edits-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week14 and week15 .Please check here and here.

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 07:07, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Good. See how your edits were revised by experienced editors, for example here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:02, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear professor.I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week13 ~14. Please check here and here .Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 07:10, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

About translated article

Hello professor, I am a draft reviewer from zhwiki. Recently, I found that some students translated en articles into zhwiki. It's good to contribute from other languages, but some of the transision is lack of quality.

Like zh:Special:Diff/87503143, it's criticized as translationese. Or zh:公民新闻 wrote by @ZHANG0822ZH, I think it is Machine Translation without revising. Additionally,the transision of references' title or author are sometimes unnecessary.

As a reviewer, I hope students can realize zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔 and understand linguistic differences involved in translation. By doing so, we can work together to minimize low-quality translations and improve the overall standard of contributions.

Thanks for reading and please let me know if I can help provide further examples. Sincerely. Kanshui0943 (talk) 16:21, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

I have finished revising the article and I would like to ask you to review it. I initially used direct translation and ignored the differences in expression habits between Chinese and English. I am deeply sorry for this. ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 05:50, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kanshui0943 Thank you. I ask the students to follow Chinese guides at : zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 but students being students, not all will do so or do so well. Thank you for your feedback, it is very appreciated. You can see many students reporting their work in this talk page; I expect some will be finishing shortly as the semester is about to end. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:15, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 - Jeongwoo Rhee

Dear professor,

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I have finished my wikipedia works. Here are the links: opera in south korea(ko), opera in south korea(en)// income inequality metrics(ko), income inequality metrics(en).

Please check it.

Thank you! Leorhee04 (talk) 04:09, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:20, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6(week10)--QIAN ZIYI

Professor, hello. I have left feedback on another student's user discussion page. Please check, thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 13:03, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:30, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Blog invite request: SHU YING

Dear proferssor, I am taking the course Everyday Life and Social Structures. I would like to write an extra blog about the project3, but I found that I haven't been invited to the blog yet. Please send me an invitation email to my google email address.Thank you! Syouziiye (talk) 08:41, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye The blog for that class is optional, and has been cancelled due to little interest. If you need extra credit, you can do extra edits to Wikipedia instead. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:29, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

ok,i got it .I'll do Wikipedia instead. Syouziiye (talk) 15:30, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - WUXIAOTONG Bancy

Dear professor, hello! My article is still under review and has been revised several times based on feedback. I sincerely ask you to take the time to review it despite your busy schedule. If there are any areas that need further improvement, I will make adjustments in a timely manner. Thank you for your guidance and help. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 00:39, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@WUXIAOTONG BancySince the article is in Chinese, I will ask @Mirfaek to take a look and provide feedback here. I hope we can publish your work before the course ends in late June.

In the meantime, please read the guides on translating to Chinese here: zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. and double check that your article follows their recommendations. The translation problem is what has been noted by the previous reviewers, like @Kanshui0943 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:15, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for letting me know. I would take a look when I have time. Hopefully the student should receive it this evening in Korean time.--Mirfaek 03:31, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Done. The complete feedback is given at the student's talk page on zhwiki in Mandarin. If there's anything I could do, let me know! I am at California right now (UTC-7 timezone), so may not be able to reply when it's late night or early morning here--Mirfaek 04:27, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Thank you for your helpful feedback! I have revised the article according to your suggestions. Please feel free to take a look when you have time. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 03:30, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Accepted. The article is now at the main namespace. --Mirfaek 20:16, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have completed the translation task. Here is my article. Please check it.@Hanyangprofessor2 WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 03:16, 6 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Thank you. @WUXIAOTONG Bancy Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:38, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 10)- Kim Yeonhee 김연희

Dear Professor,

I have left my feedback for Cannabis in Australia on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you.

Kyeon0425 (talk) 17:37, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:41, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11~12) - Kim Yeonhee(김연희)

Dear Professor,

These are my Wikipedia articles ready for review.

I have corrected the part I received feedback.

Prospective memory

Controlling behavior in relationships

The Elephant in the Brain

please check.

Kyeon0425 (talk) 18:26, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good, Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:41, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Optional weekly project: Kim Yeonhee(김연희)

Dear Professor,

It's a weekly project that I've done.

Please check it out.

English editing

here is my diff link : [1] [2] [3] [4] [5]

Korean editing

here is my diff link : [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8]

Kyeon0425 (talk) 18:38, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kyeon0425 Good but some of your edits to English Wikipedia were rejected, as you blue linked terms that are too common. Please read Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Linking#What generally should not be linked _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:44, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week14. Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 11:03, 6 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

translate

Hello professor, my two articles have been published.

1. 2. Caizzz (talk) 14:20, 6 June 2025 (UTC)

@Caizzz Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:50, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly Edit LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, hello:

I am Lu Yangcheng, and I am studying the course "Daily Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence". I have completed the weekly Wiki editing work for the 14th week. Thank you professor, and I wish you a happy weekendhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/Hanyangdaxue Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:27, 7 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:50, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Continued disruptive editing from a student

Hi @Hanyangprofessor2, I've previously messaged you about CHAEBIN99 here, but unfortunately since then they've continued to make large uncited additions like this, and have violated copyright at least three times which you can see in a discussion on their talk page here.

Their edits are their own responsibility, but I'd like to ask that you try to reach out to them one last time. The only alternative at this point would be a report, which may end up with them being indefinitely blocked from Wikipedia. That's a result I'd like to avoid if possible. Thank you. fifteen thousand two hundred twenty four (talk) 02:04, 6 June 2025 (UTC)

@Fifteen thousand two hundred twenty four Thank you for the ping, and I apologize for my students substandard editing. Unfortunately, while I tried to reach out to them, they have not responded here or in class. If they keep making edits that are problematic, they will need to be blocked, just like any other problematic editor would. This may "wake them up". Or not (I've had occasional cases like this before; some students just shrug and give up, some improve their edits, others discover socking...). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

No need for an apology, your students' edits are their own responsibility. Thank you for your help. fifteen thousand two hundred twenty four (talk) 06:17, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Main Projects - Fatima Paulina Lopez Diaz

Dear Professor,

Here are my two articles with the corrections adressed, article 1, article 2.

I also translated this article to Italian as extra credit.

Thank you!! Fatimald (talk) 11:53, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald Very good. I suggest adding brief mentions of the following topics to your articles:

• SK: International Vaccine Institute and United Nations Asian and Pacific Training Centre for Information and Communication Technology for Development (UN bodies located in SK) and
• NK: Report of the Commission of Inquiry on Human Rights in the Democratic People's Republic of Korea and Permanent Mission of North Korea to the United Nations

As for Antonio Ramón, I don't see your Italian(??) translation. Where is it? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:12, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

Unfortunately my Italian translation is under revision. But I also made this article about a famous mexican anthropologist Marisol Pérez Lizaur.

Thank you. Fatimald (talk) 12:13, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

@Fatimald It looks good. To finish your translation:

• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline7(Main project)--ZHUANG MINNA

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the translation and publication of two articles, please check here--Article1, Article2, thank you！ Minazhuang777 (talk) 10:23, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

@Minazhuang777 Good job. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

As for your English article, it is good, but small fixes are needed:

• Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:08, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

About translating the article WANG HAO

Hello Professor, this is my second article translated. There are many translation issues, so please instruct me. I have tried my best to get close to the original text, but there are still some differences from it. Please approve it.https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Wanhink/sandbox&oldid=1293000575 Wanhink (talk) 01:41, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

@Wanhink Next time, I recommend you pay attention to deadlines - you missed most of them, which delays catching errors. First, I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform (with corrected code - links and references).

Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:10, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

tranlate

dear professor I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time .I have completed the translation of two articles as a group task.1 and 2 218.235.241.137 (talk) 05:46, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear student. You forgot to log in and sign your post, so I cannot ping you with notification.

Regarding your zh wiki article, there are some problems to be fixed:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• You are missing the heading section for references
• After fixing this, you can publish your article, following these guidelines:
• See Wikipedia:Moving a page / Help:页面重命名 for how to move (publish) your article.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

Regarding your English article, I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in Chinese Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to English, you need to move it to English Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia, fix links and references as needed, and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

Your reference in English Wikipedia should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:17, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) : YEWON LEE

Hello, professor. I'm Yewon Lee who takes the morning class for Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. First of all, I'm sorry for being late for the assignment.

This is my feedback link.

Thank you. Nowey22 (talk) 03:19, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Please copy your comment to the talk page of the student you are leaving feedback for. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:11, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

I moved the feedback as the professor said. Thank you. The link is this. Nowey22 (talk) 06:52, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

@Nowey22 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:02, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12)-jungyuna(정유나)

I am a student taking a morning class on daily life and social structures. I re-uploaded this after receiving feedback from the professor. Here are the links to the sandboxes translated into Korean: sandbox1 , sandbox2 Jungyuna (talk) 04:39, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna The first article has no blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

The second article, in addition to blue links, needs proper references; currently its using some broken code. You need to redo the references there.

After fixing the above issues, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:23, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello, Professor. I've revised my criticism of Apple as you gave me feedback. Is it now at a point where I can finish it and upload it? Jungyuna (talk) 04:50, 10 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Yes. Please follow the steps outlined above and publish your article, then monitor feedback from the reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:03, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Kim Minji

Hello, professor. I'm Minji Kim who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. I've translated 1 article. Please check and feedback. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/1980_(%EC%95%A8%EB%B2%94) Kaldwl (talk) 08:15, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kaldwl Good, but one problem needs to be fixed. Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:10, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week15. Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 08:39, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:10, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing last week-CHEN SIYU진사우

Dear professor.I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week15.Please check here .Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 06:17, 10 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:11, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Ju Yewon

Hello, professor. I'm Yewon Ju who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. I finished translating one paper into Korean. Please check it. I'm so sorry for the delay in submitting. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/4_Minutes Yxvvxn (talk) 07:03, 10 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn Good job. Please fix the errors (in red) in references (you may have to redo a few from scratch) and monitor your article for feedback from Korean reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:36, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week16. Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 12:58, 10 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) : Park Chaebin 박채빈

Hello, professor.

I'm Chaebin Park, taking Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. I have left a message on another student's talk page. Please check, thank you.

Feedback link

Thank you CHAEBIN99 (talk) 09:36, 11 June 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11~12) : Park Chaebin 박채빈

Hello, professor. I'm Chaebin Park, taking Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. I have completed the translation and publication of two articles. Please check here.

북한에 있는 일본인들

현대 중국의 결혼

Thank you CHAEBIN99 (talk) 09:44, 11 June 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:58, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

week15--FAN XINRU

Hello professor, i'm taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. here are the five Wikipedia articles I edited 50 times in total for extra credit, please check them out, thank you.1.2.3.4.5 Jzhdylb (talk) 13:03, 11 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:03, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Sum up-QU HONGYU 굴홍우

Dear professor,

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have once again summarized the four articles I translated this semester and weekly edits.

• Article 1:即将到来的对日战争,Translated from The Coming War with Japan
• Article 2:韩国的网络小说,Translated from Web novels in South Korea
• Article 3:三种战争,Translated from Three warfares
• Article 4:弗洛里安·兹纳涅茨基,Translated from Florian Znaniecki

Also I have did Weekly edits total more than 180times,please check by this(for wikipedia) and this(for wikivoyage).

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 02:42, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@Pineappleq Yes, you are doing very good. Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:03, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Wikipedia Edit：Bai LinHan

professor， I have added forty Wikipedia entries; please review them. Bai0926 (talk) 05:03, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Very good! You are adding useful content with refs, that's good editing. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:19, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Weeks 11-12):정유나(jung yuna)

Hello, Professor

I improved the link's shortcomings according to your message. Is it okay to finish it now? Article 1, Article 2 Jungyuna (talk) 05:21, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good, you are almost ready. Please follow these steps to publish your articles:

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:21, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week9)- yejoo Yang(양예주)

Hello, professor. My name is Yang Ye-joo, and I am taking a class at 1 o'clock to understand daily life and social structure. I received your feedback and revised it to complete all the translation tasks. Please check.

The first topic task and the second topic task, respectively. Yangyejoo (talk) 07:08, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yangyejoo Good, you are almost ready. Please follow these steps to publish your articles:

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Weeks 11-12) : 곽다인(kwak dain)

Dear, Professor. My name is kwak dain, who takes classes to understand everyday life and social structure at 10:30 a.m. I'm done translating the article. Please check it out

Article1: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kwak_dain/sandbox

Article2: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kwak_dain/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Kwak dain (talk) 11:17, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kwak dain Good, you are almost ready. Please follow these steps to publish your articles:

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional points-WU SHUHAN

Hello, professor. I have reviewed other students' articles：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Bai0926.Please check it, thanks. WSH0927 (talk) 14:49, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 The link above is broken, please try again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Article translation tasks--FAN XINRU

Hello professor,I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.This is the article translation task I completed for this class. I translated the article from English to Chinese. Please help me check it. Thank you, professor. Jzhdylb (talk) 13:39, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Good. Your article looks fine, but please monitor it to ensure that any reviewers comments are addressed promptly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:13, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

OK, I'll do that, thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 11:40, 7 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, this is the second article I translated. Here are the English and Chinese versions. Please help me check them. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:10, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 --MA CHENXIAO

Dear Professor, I have revised my wiki article, please checkUser:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 12:19, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good progress, but you have not finished addressing the issues I mentioned last time.

Please ensure that the article has a proper WP:LEAD, which is a summary of information in the later sections. Right now your lead contains unique information, such as a legend, or information on its UNESCO recognition.

The first two paragraphs under 'Historical Origin' need footnotes. Also, why historical origin? Is there a non-historical origin?

The heading 'content' is unclear. Content of what? What is the content of this section?

Content from 'content' seems to duplicate that of 'preparation'; both talk about three courses. Merge them.

More blue links are needed: Lunar New Year, Wuyi Mountain, etc.

In Social Impact, it's confusing to hear that the same list was announced twice? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:26, 29 May 2025 (UTC)

OK, Professor, I have revised the article. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 11:36, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good, but you did not finish. Blue links have not been added. Your references are missing much metadata (dates, author and publisher names) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:56, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

OK, Professor, I have added a new blue link, the references have added the author and time, I have found all the information of the references, but I cannot find the editor for some of them. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:17, 6 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 That's fine, you are almost finished. Can you find some relevant images on Wikimedia Commons to add, or freely licensed/public domain images on the net to upload and add to the articke?

When your translation is finished, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:37, 8 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have completed the Wikipedia edit and I changed a new image as required and uploaded the photo to Wikimedia Commons as per the rules. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 03:08, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good, but as discussed in class, you need to prove that this picture was taken by you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, where can I prove that this photo is mine? I took it 2 years ago when I was traveling. This is the only photo that exists. I don’t have any information on my phone. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 09:04, 10 June 2025 (UTC)

Are you referring to File:Three-Course Tea.jpg? Very good. You should show me the photo's original in your media collection, in your photostream. And tell me how your photo ended up here: [76]. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:08, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Sorry professor, the editor of this article is a friend of my brother, and he used my photo. I can't prove that this photo is mine now, because I don't have the original photo, so I replaced it with a photo of the Bai people in Wikimedia Commons. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 05:36, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 I see. Then you can use the original photo, after following this guide - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Commons:%E9%9B%BB%E5%AD%90%E9%83%B5%E4%BB%B6%E6%A8%A1%E6%9D%BF You can get extra credit if you complete it (record permission for the use of the photo in the Wikipedia system). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:26, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 : Jo Hyeon Seong

Dear professor,

I am taking Collective Intelligence at 2:30 pm.

Corruption in Japan (Article 1 Eng -> Kor)

Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world (Article 2 Eng -> Kor)

I finished our semester project that is translation of two articles. Please check it.

If I can get some feedbacks before the end of semester, please give some feedbacks for my articles.

Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 02:48, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jo HyeonSeong Well done. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity - Jeongwoo Rhee

Dear professor,

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I did extra credit activity (Cultural Diplomacy Month 2025).

Here is my content page.

Please check it.

Thank you! Leorhee04 (talk) 04:24, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Leorhee04 Very good, extra points awarded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7-LIUJUNYU

Hello professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand and Collective Intelligence in Practice .my article that I translated from English to Chinese failed to upload. The description said there was a [:en:Foo|Foo] part. But when I checked, I found that there was no such link.种族和民族关系社会学Please check it out.

In addition, two other translated articles have been uploaded successfully. Please check.幽灵作家日本盟军战俘thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 05:33, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 For this technical issue I think it will be faster if we ask @Mirfaek for help. TIA! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:45, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

I did not encounter that issue when I tried to upload. However considering the quality of translation needs further improvements I have moved it back to your sandbox. If you need any helps on the translation let me know.--Mirfaek 07:08, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5：MUYE

I have revised four of my articles. Please check them. thank you.

Everyday Life and Social Structure：1.Journalistic objectivity 2.Evolution of morality 

Collective Intelligence in Practice： 1.Operationalization 2.Upper class  MUYW (talk) 05:46, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@MUYW Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:58, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Final review(week14) - Kim Jong Min (hanyang)

Hello, professor, my name is Jongmin Kim and I'm taking a collective intelligence class, and I think my final project is complete,

ENG to KOR 그레이엄 포터

ENG to KOR 애틀랜타 팰컨스

but please let me know if there's anything I should add or improve. Also, I'm not sure if my grade is good enough, and if not, I need some advice on what I should do more. Thank you as always for your great teaching Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:20, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

You can see your grade in a week or so, and if you need extra credit, there'll be few more days to do more wiki edits. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:58, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Ju Yewon

Hello, professor. I'm Yewon Ju who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. I revised the reference to the translation I posted last time. Please check it. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/4_Minutes Also, I finished translating the other papers. Please check and give me your feedback. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B9%B4%EC%9A%B0%EB%B3%B4%EC%9D%B4_%ED%8C%9D Yxvvxn (talk) 06:20, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn Good, but please note that Korean reviewers marked your translation as of poor quality. Please read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 and ask the reviewer who expressed concern if the problem is fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:00, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6: Lee Jisu

Hello, professor.

I have left a message on another student's talk page.

Everyday Life and Social Structure: User talk:Nokmalwiki#Hello

Collective Intelligence in Practice: User talk:CHAEBIN99

Please check, thank you. Xisuux (talk) 06:22, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good, but a bit late for the deadline _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:01, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity - Park Chaebin 박채빈

Dear professor

Today in class, I edited the English Wikipedia article related to LGBT topics by translating and expanding content from the Korean version. I added a more detailed summary, updated information on the Jeju Queer Festival (2023–2024), included sources, and noted the changes on the Talk page.

Jeju Queer Culture Festival

Please review the edits and let me know if any corrections are needed.

Thank you! CHAEBIN99 (talk) 07:48, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Very good. Reviewers noted one problem which you can fix by following this guide: Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

Another item to fix: please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

Last suggestion: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:03, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline7(Main project)--ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the translation and publication of two articles, please check here--Article1, Article2, thank you Hyodong318 (talk) 05:09, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 Good job. Some fixes are needed to your English article. Please read and reply to feedback you received at Talk:Shelterbelt destruction at Yangguan Forest Farm, provided by the experienced Wikipedia volunteer (@Mathglot). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:29, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have completed the revision of the English article according to the reply requirements. Wikipedia volunteer have not raised my questions again. You can view the discussion interface of the article here. Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 06:22, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hyodong318 Good, I've asked the reviewer to check your article again, let's see what they say. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:42, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)---WANG SISI

Hello,professor.

I am Wang Sisi in the class B of Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the translation of the article and moved it to the main space.

Please check it, thank you Wangsisi031012 (talk) 06:51, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

@Wangsisi031012 Good. There are a number of fixes needed:

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.
• After publishing your article please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:56, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)---KIM MINJOO

Hello, I have provided feedback to Chensiwen on their article Belle's ball gown. Here is the link to my feedback.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Chensiwen#%22Feedback_on_your_article:_Belle's_ball_gown%22 Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 14:52, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:05, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)---JIA MENGZHUO

Dear professor. My translated article is ready for review. Please check it out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 09:55, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 I see some progress - good. Please see my feedback from two months ago, I don't see half fixes I've asked for implemented. The links to articles on zh wiki have not been added; the images have not been added, etc.

In addition, you need to find at least one English source that refers to this entity under the title "China Fire and Rescue", or otherwise tell me why you chose this name variant? Is it official? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:48, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor. According to your suggestions, I have added some relevant images and citations for the English name. However, I’m a bit confused. In official documents, the organization is referred to as "The National Fire and Rescue Administration," while "China Fire and Rescue" is used on official insignia, flags, and related materials. I would like to ask which version would be the correct one to use. Please check.Zhuo1221 (talk) 07:41, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit blog - laoxinyi

Hello professor, I'm taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. This is a blog I wrote for extra credit：https://www.blogger.com/blog/posts/6200238162061299902?pli=1&q=laoxinyi. please check it out!! Thanks!!! Laoxinyi (talk) 05:06, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:43, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Piotrus at Hanyang Wrote 6 extra credit blogs, not one (translation error). Sorry. The other blogs were blog assignments for the Collective Intelligence class. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laoxinyi (talk • contribs) 11:07, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 -Kwon Hyunji(권현지)

Dear professor,

I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice.

Additional edited article 1

Additional edited article 2

I've finished editing additional articles, please check and let me know if there are any modifications.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 01:16, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Good. Some concerns have been raised regarding your second translation, but I see they have been raised by a bot. Ask the Korean reviewers (@Sangjinhwa, @Ykhwong) if they have any concerns.

For extra credit you can translate the article on Korean science fiction that I just wrote few days ago, if you want. Surprisingly. it does not exist on Korean Wikipedia (or at least I could not find the relevant article to link). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:29, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

I have finished editing the new article, please check it.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 08:21, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Excellent, I am sure it will be of interest to many Korean readers! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:52, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)---KIM MINJOO

Hello Professor, I finished the translation of the topic of napster and posted it on Wikipedia in Korean. Please check. Thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kiim_Miin_Joo Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 14:28, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo It's a good start, but it is not finished yet - and it has not been published yet (it is not in the main space - you should be expanding the ko:냅스터 entry).

Please fix the following issues:

• Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• You should add some pictures to the article
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:02, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

"I’m not sure how to revise it based on your feedback. Could I come to class on Monday to get some help?" Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 09:40, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo Of course, you are always welcome to come to class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10)---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, professor. I responded under the panelists' discussion page. [talk:AYAO32269|Please check], thank you.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:19, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 The link above is broken, please try again if you want me to review your work. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:52, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello, professor. Here's the new link, check it out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 07:12, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:00, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Jo YeSeul (조예슬)

Hello professor,  

I have completed more than 50% of my translation for "Bande dessinée" and uploaded it to my sandbox.  

Here is the link. Please let me know your feedback when possible. Thank you Jo YeSeul (talk) 10:23, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul This is more like 10% if not 5% of that article (of the Bande dessinée), not 50%. Also, you are missing all advanced elements (links, references). There is not much feedback I can give you considering this is a very early stage, except that you should've followed my instructions earlier, which you clearly did not do. You are very much behind the deadlines for this project (which, as a reminder, means that your maximum score for this project is only 50%). You need to finish it ASAP. Time is running out, that includes time to do extra credit work. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:03, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week11-12)：XU YAN(서염)

Dear Professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. Thank you for your suggestions. I have completed the revision. This is my finished article: U17 Comics. Please let me know if I did it correctly and if I should change anything in my articles. Thank you！ Xuan6699 (talk) 10:45, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Very good, your article looks nice. For extra credit, I encourage you to create articles about Chinese webcomics (webtoons), it's a very interesting field. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:04, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline5（week12）-DENG YAZHI등아지

Deadline5（week12）-DENG YAZHI등아지 Hello Professor, I finished the translation of the topic in https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DENGYAZHI/sandbox and I posted it on Wikipedia in Korea. thank you for your checking. DENGYAZHI (talk) 12:30, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@DENGYAZHI You are behind our deadlines for this project. I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform. Your draft is also missing blue links, references, images, and so on. Please add them after you move your content to the Korean sandbox. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Correction Regarding Extra Credit Card Submission-ZHONG QI

Dear Professor, I am writing to kindly request your assistance in correcting an error I made in my recent extra credit card submission.

I accidentally submitted all 14 cards under "Everyday Life and Social Structure" , but 7 of them should have been allocated to "Understanding Wikipedia" instead. I sincerely apologize for any confusion this may have caused.

Could you please help me transfer the seven cards to the correct course? Thank you for your understanding and support! I truly appreciate your time. Kylo09 (talk) 13:53, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kylo09 Yes, I'll do it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (week 11)- WANG YIKE LIUJUNYU

Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence in Practice. The administrator can upload this article, @LJY2455Sociology of Race and Ethnic Relations, but I tried again and still couldn't upload it, so I can only submit it to the sandbox. This is my article Tan Zhenlin. You want me to add more references, but I have added all the references in the original language entry except for one reference that has expired. Alexk27 (talk) 15:01, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Regarding your translation to Chinese, please see zh:Help:页面重命名 . If you still have trouble moving, ask @Mirfaek for help.

Regarding your work in English, it is pretty good. The only element to improve now would be the lead - it is too short. Can you expand it a bit? ChatGPT can help you, but make sure to double check the AI output, to ensure it is correct. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:09, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week5) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

Dear Professor,

Hello professor, I'm Kim jUHEE, taking a class on collective intelligence.

I'm leaving a message after completing the deadline 4 to some extent. Is there anything else I should add?

My chosen topic is this and My sandbox link

It's translated from English to Korean, so I wrote it in a Korean sandbox.

I'd appreciate it if you could check it out. Jujuheee0408 (talk) 03:08, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 I see your work was published at ko:러시아의 부패. Good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:15, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Piotrus at Hanyang Yes, I’ve read it!

I’ll keep checking for further feedback. Jujuheee0408 (talk) 03:18, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week9) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed the Deadline 5. Please check.

1) Corruption in Russia

2) Corruption in China Jujuheee0408 (talk) 03:15, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:28, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Piotrus at Hanyang Understood, professor. I will make sure to check regularly. Jujuheee0408 (talk) 05:56, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11~12) ：Bai LinHan

Hello, Professor

1.According to your message, I added some photos to my article and improved the shortcomings of the links. However, links 3 and 9 are not references to papers, but to websites, and some information is missing. However, the website is also a relatively authoritative website in China. Is this okay?At the same time, I added some blue hyperlinks to the article.I also added the section How beliefs have evolved in the 20th–21st centuries and found relevant papers to supplement the references.

Please check it

2.I have reviewed articles written by others, please check them out

Thank you！！ Bai0926 (talk) 11:50, 11 June 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Good, you are almost ready to publish. Please format your final citation correctly - it's an academic paper, not a website. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references. Then add the quotation to the correctly formatted citation.

After that you can publish your article following these steps:

See Wikipedia:Moving a page for moving (publishing) your article.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (since the translation is to English).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

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Regarding (2) your feedback, please copy your feedback to the talk page of the student who wrote it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:02, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I changed the citation format. Is this correct? Bai0926 (talk) 04:14, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@Bai0926 No. Please follow the guide I linked, or watch some guides on YouTube. You are using ChatGPT and it seems to be failing to do this correctly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:16, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have made all the changes according to your requirements. Can I publish it? Bai0926 (talk) 10:45, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week10) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

Dear professor,

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I've completed my Week 10 assignment.

Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified.

Thank you. Jujuheee0408 (talk) 03:40, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 It's correct now, good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:39, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional edits on Wikipedia---JIA MENGZHUO

Dear Professor,

I'm JIA MENGZHUO, I made a total of 164 additional edits.

I made 123 additional edits on the English Wikipedia. Please check it out.

I made 41 additional edits on the Chinese Wikipedia. Please check it out.

Thank you.Zhuo1221 (talk) 04:58, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:43, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

week2，Collective Intelligence in Practice—WEIYUXIN위우신

Dear Professor, I am a student of your collective intelligence and Wikipedia. I chose to complete the translation task alone. I have selected the following two articles for translation into Chinese. Please check them, thank you.1.Guilin Scenic Area 2，Maijishan Grottoes Qizicheng (talk) 06:20, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Qizicheng Those articles already exist in Chinese. You should translate articles that do not exist in Chinese. How about Korean science fiction and Howard S. Becker? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:49, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week2):LIU YINGTONG

Dear Professor,

I'm LIU YINGTONG，taking Everyday Life and Social Structure.  I have completed 2main translation projects (from English to Chinese), all of which have been successfully moved to public Wikipedia pages. Here are the links:

第一次世界大战中的战俘（en-zh）

韩国少数民族（en-zh）

Please check. Ryuthefang (talk) 06:46, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuthefang Good, although they have not been published correctly - it is a technical error and I think it will be fixed soon by senior reviewers. After that, please fix the following:

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Also: Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:53, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week2-week16. Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 06:58, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:06, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Jo YeSeul (조예슬)

Hello, I have provided feedback on KIM MINJOO post '냅스터(Napster)'. Here is my feedback link Jo YeSeul (talk) 07:59, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:07, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-CHEN SIYU 진사우

Dear professor,I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week2-week16. Please check here.Thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 09:02, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:18, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline7(Week11-12) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor, I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A.

문화 충격(Ariticle 1 En -> Kr)

데이터 마이닝(Article 2 En -> Kr)

I've finished editing additional articles, please check and let me know if there are any modifications. Thank you Gayeongkim0 (talk) 09:52, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 Good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:18, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing-WANG YIKE（왕흘가）

Dear professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. One of them is an editor in Chinese Wikipedia, and the other is an editor in English Wikipedia. Please check.Thank you for watching Alexk27 (talk) 10:42, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:19, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week11-12)：S0yul An(안소율)

Dear Professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. Thank you for your suggestions. I have completed the revision. Below is the link to the article I revised.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:An_soyul/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5/Freedom_of_religion_in_China https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:An_soyul/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

Please check and give me your feedback. Thank you! An soyul (talk) 12:18, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@An soyul It's progress but your translation needs a number of fixes. I see a lot of missing references, and instead, badly copied code like [3].

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:23, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

deadline8 HU ENFAN

Dear Professor,

I’m currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I’ve now completed the two main Wikipedia translation assignments for the course:

Land reform movement in Tibet

第二次世界大战期间的战俘

호인본 (talk) 05:44, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Regarding your Chinese translation, you should convert the red links in the list at the bottom using this tool: zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi After that you can publish it following this guide:

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:53, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Regarding your English article, a few fixes are needed.

1) remove unnecessary bolding from the word After.

2) Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

3) Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

4) Some concepts you mention should be linked, like the Tibetan Uprising Day (which in your article you incorrectly called the "Tibetan People's Uprising Day" ). Add more blue links to important terms in your article.

5) Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

After that, you can publish your article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:57, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello! I figured it would be appropriate as Hu Enfan's instructor to let you know I've done a bit of cleanup at Land reform in Tibet. jellyfish ✉ 17:24, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jellyfish This is very appreciated. If you have any suggestions for the student, please let me know. I would of course ask @호인본 to review changes made by you, so they can learn from them.

Additionally, @호인본, please complete the following:

• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

The only thing off the top of my head would be making sure there's no unnecessary spaces between punctuation (. and ,) plus making sure straight quotes (") are used instead of curly ones. :) Jellyfish (mobile) (talk) 21:11, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jellyfish Thanks! @호인본 Please take a look at the comment above and implement the fixes. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:46, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

번역 관련 문제-jung yuna(정유나)

Hello Professor, I have completed the translation as follows. Please check it. 1. Apple Criticism 2. Twitter Criticism Jungyuna (talk) 15:09, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Good. Please see below for final feedback

Note that one of your articles has been marked by reviewers as having an inferior translation. Please read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 and fix any issues.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 : Lee Jae-Hyun

Dear professor,

I am a student who taking course named 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'.

정보 과다(Ariticle 1 En -> Kr)

종교사회학 (Article 2 En -> Kr)

I finished our semester project that is translation of two articles. Please check it.

Also, As a weekly assignment exists, I created translation for myself en to ko. (These articles were not existed in Korean article, so I made and added all of it.)

마가렛 시벨라 브라운

NSCAD 대학교

물이끼속

붕규산 유리

취약한 남성성

초남성성 -> This article is translation ongoing, I'm going to complete this article by next week.

Also, (Second), This is my other translation for weekly assignment (Already existed in Korean article, I edited / added several writings)

고리무늬물범

물담배

어머니 (소설)

어머니 (1926년 영화)

마더!

어머니날

대지모신

Thank you. JHyunlee (talk) 06:29, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@JHyunlee You are doing an excellent job. I do not see any problems with your work; it will net you a lot of extra credit, and is a good example on how to improve your digitial portfolio. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:02, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you!

Professor, I already completed article translation -> https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B4%88%EB%82%A8%EC%84%B1%EC%84%B1 ('초남성성').

And I ongoing edit for weekly wiki assignment for this week. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%B4%EB%A1%9C%EC%9A%B4_%EB%82%A8%EC%84%B1%EC%84%B1#%EC%84%B1%EB%B3%84_%EA%B7%9C%EB%B2%94 ('해로운 남성성')

Please check it! JHyunlee (talk) 07:12, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Weekly editing- CHEN SIWEN

Dear professor,I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week2-week16. Please check here.Thank you Chensiwen (talk) 06:25, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Good, but please study the feedback you got at User talk:Chensiwen - Wikipedia . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:18, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Move Article-HE ZIXUAN

Dear Professor，I have moved the article 1. Link 2. Link ZixuanHE (talk) 07:13, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Good, but few more fixes are needed:

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:20, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Lin Chih-Sheng(Taiwan)

A tag has been placed on Lin Chih-Sheng(Taiwan) requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section R3 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is a recently created redirect from an implausible typo or misnomer, or other unlikely search term.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. CycloneYoris ^talk! 09:07, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation- CHEN SIWEN

I'm CHEN SIWEN taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.Four major translation projects (from English to Chinese) have been completed, and all projects have successfully moved to the public Wikipedia page. Here is the link:贝儿的舞会礼服 第二次世界大战期间德国对战俘犯下的暴行 漫画史 美国不干涉主义 Please check it, thank you!!!! Chensiwen (talk) 06:35, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Good. Few touchups are needed:

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:19, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

As you said, I have added these two related templates to the discussion pages of each Wikipedia article. Please check here for 贝儿的舞会礼服，

第二次世界大战期间德国对战俘犯下的暴行

漫画史

美国不干涉主义 Chensiwen (talk) 07:46, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:09, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Weeks 11-12)-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have completed four main translation projects (from English to Chinese), all of which have been successfully moved to public Wikipedia pages. Here are the links:

可持续农业

脸书的审查制度

抖音的审查制度

宏观经济思想史

If you have any feedback or suggestions, I’ll be happy to make further improvements. Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 04:37, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Very good.

A few fixes are needed:

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:41, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE,As you said, I have added these two related templates to the discussion pages of each Wikipedia article. Please check here for 可持续农业脸书的审查制度 抖音的审查制度 宏观经济思想史 Please check it, thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 08:17, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Also: Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. OOn Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . For example, your censorship by Facebook article mentions censorship of Facebook, without a link. That needs to be linked. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:42, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE,I have re-added the link. Please check it. 脸书的审查制度 thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 08:26, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6(week10)--YANG CHAOHAN

Professor, hello. I have left feedback on another student's user discussion page. Please check, thank you. Yhan0619 (talk) 10:09, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation- LINYUYANG&WANGRUITONG

Hello Professor, we are studying the Understanding Wikipedia course. We have completed the final translations of two Wikipedia articles顏成坤Hoax, but the English-to-Chinese version of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hoax?wprov=sfti1# was deleted by others. Could you please help us restore it? --WANGRUITONG (talk) 11:19, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@WANGRUITONG @L01yy11 Your work was rejected from zh wiki by the reviewers (@Aronlee90; also pinging @Mirfaek so they can watchlist that if they want and/or offer further feedback) due to low quality. You can try again but you need to translate it properly to avoid another rejection. Looking at your work I see many code errors such as references to templates that do not exist on zh wiki, and bad links (red links, where red or blue-red links to en wiki should have been used instead).

Please consult the advice below first, then try again:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:51, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6(week10)--ZHANG LINYUE

Hello Professor. Im 2021036480 ZHANG LINYUE. Im studying Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have left feedback on another student's user discussion page. Please check, thank you. AYAO32269 (talk) 11:34, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@AYAO32269 Better late than never _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:53, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

translation project - 정유나(Jung yuna)

Hello Professor, I have completed the translation as follows. Please check it. 1. Apple Criticism 2. Twitter Criticism Jungyuna (talk) 05:46, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jungyuna Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:00, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Finals Week) - Kwon Hyunji (권현지)

Dear professor,

I am taking Collective Intelligence in Practice.

오스트레일리아의 대마초

태양계를 벗어난 인조물 목록

I am submitting the final assignment.

Thank you.

Khji0620 (talk) 11:39, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 Good.

Note that one of your articles has been marked by reviewers as having an inferior translation. Please read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 and fix any issues.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:20, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

I've reviewed and corrected the issues previously pointed out regarding the translation.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 08:19, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Khji0620 I hope so. @Mirfaek, could you double check? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Unfortunately I could not read or write Korean, so that's something out of my scope.--Mirfaek 14:47, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

My bad, here I meant to ping @Sadopaul who previously offered to help with student work on Korean Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:43, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Finals Week) KIM JUHEE (김주희)

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.

I am submitting my final project for your review.

1) Corruption in Russia

2) Corruption in China

Thank you for your guidance throughout this course. Jujuheee0408 (talk) 06:19, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Very good. Minor touch ups are needed, see below:

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:01, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Piotrus at Hanyang

I’ve added both the assignment template and the translated article template to the talk pages of both articles.

Thank you for your feedback! Jujuheee0408 (talk) 23:20, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:50, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Retry about Deadline3 (Week 4) 윤홍만 (Yoon Hongman)

Hello Professor, I just realized that I hadn't completed Deadline 3 earlier, so I’ve now completed the task. I have added a citation to this article. I apologize for the delay. Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 20:09, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Better late than never. You should add a quotation to your reference - sentence or several sentences that confirm that that the source you've added supports the claim in the preceding sentence.  _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:55, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) Yoon Hongman (윤홍만)

Dear Professor, I’m sorry for being late with Deadline 5. I’ve completed the translation from English to Korean for the two articles I’ve been working on, Upper class and Women in South Korea. Please let me know if you have any feedback. I apologize again for the delay, and thank you as always. Nokmalwiki (talk) 20:16, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Very good. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:56, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Translation-related issues---JIA MENGZHUO

Dear professor.

According to your suggestions, I have added some relevant images and citations for the English name. However, I’m a bit confused. In official documents, the organization is referred to as "The National Fire and Rescue Administration," while "China Fire and Rescue" is used on official insignia, flags, and related materials. I would like to ask which version would be the correct one to use. Please check.

Thank you!Zhuo1221 (talk) 12:33, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 National Fire and Rescue Administration (zh:国家消防救援局) is a DIFFERENT entity from your topic (zh:国家综合性消防救援队伍). So the sources here and here are probably not relevant to your article.

In my quick query I could not find any source using "China Fire and Rescue", capitalized. Can you show me a picture of the official insignia, documents or such that uses this variant in English? Try asking about the proper name here: Wikipedia talk:CHINA and see what advice you will receive from other editors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:03, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

The National Fire and Rescue Administration is the leading and commanding body of the national comprehensive fire and rescue force, "China Fire and Rescue" (Articles I translated.). Within the National Fire and Rescue Administration, the designation for this force is the same as that on the team flag: "National Fire and Rescue Administration (国家消防救援局) (NRFA), is an agency under the ministry of emergency management in charge of the China Fire and Rescue (国家综合性消防救援队伍), China's firefighter force."

Please refer to the team flag for the specific name used. Please check.

I have conducted an official search regarding the designation of this force, but was only able to find the name of the National Fire and Rescue Administration, not the specific official designation for the team itself.

The comparable information that can be found is under a different name: "China's comprehensive fire and rescue force." Please check.

Thank you!Zhuo1221 (talk) 11:28, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

I looked into Wikipedia talk:CHINA and found relevant information about the name of this team there. Articles on Chinese firefighting are awfully inadequate and confusing—in this section, the team is also referred to as 'China Fire and Rescue'.

Thank you!Zhuo1221 (talk) 11:45, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Good research. I'll ping @Thehistorianisaac who recently posted on this very topic there. In the meantime, based on the image you found, I think that "China Fire and Rescue" seems to be the best name for the article you wrote, which you can publish under that name Here are instructions on what to do now:

• Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.
• After publishing your article please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.
• Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

The situation is extremely similar to the relations between People's police and the ministry of public security. I think just like chinese wikipedia, a split is the best. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 08:50, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

As I was preparing to upload my work, I noticed that today, on June 18th, another editor has already translated the article “China Fire and Rescue.”

In this case, what should I do next? Will this affect my final grade?Zhuo1221 (talk) 09:19, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Sorry for making it first; FYI the NFRA article was originally about the China Fire and Rescue(ironically making it older than the agency itself), so what I mostly did was copy the content onto China Fire and rescue and deleted some from the NFRA article. However, there is still tonnes to translate so feel free to do so.

By the way, it's always nice to see other Chinese on english wikipedia, considering it's lacking tonnes of articles relating to China. Also, how is Shandong province? (sorry if this is the wrong place to talk) Thehistorianisaac (talk) 09:24, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Thehistorianisaac, I guess you did not notice that my student has already translated that article in his sandbox, linked above, and we were preparing for the publication. Perhaps you could see if there is something to merge or improve based on their work? @Zhuo1221 Your grade will not be affected, you will get course credit, but it is a good reminder that it is best to finish on time - the deadline for finishing was a while ago. If someone makes an article first, the real-world credit goes to them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:36, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

I'm currently working on adding stuff like the oath, though I would appreciate adding stuff like inter language links, maybe changing the format, ranks of volunteers etc. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 00:40, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2@Zhuo1221

So far I think the sandbox is pretty similar to the current article for now.

For the line of duty death part at the end it's covered in the LODD article and might not be the best on the China Fire and Rescue article since that statistic also includes its predecessor's of the China Fire Services (公安消防部队, covered in the Ministry of Public Security Active Service Forces) and People's Armed Police Forestry Corps (武警森林部队, covered in the People's Armed Police#Forestry Corps), not just the China Fire and Rescue.

However, just like I said above, maybe it would be better to add inter-language links to the articles. Additionally, it would be nice if someone could review the translated oath since I'm pretty sure I may have mistranslated a thing or two. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 00:56, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Thehistorianisaac @Zhuo1221 There's scope to merge some stuff, I merged a tiny sentence, but I recommend Zhuo reviews the content line by line and copies anything else that is missing. I'll also say that the picture layout from the student sandbox seems better to what is in the article (where the pictures are displayed at the bottom next to/under references). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:50, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Dear Professor,

I have added supplementary content to the existing article and adjusted the image layout on the page.

I also tried to fix the red interlanguage links in the article, but unfortunately, they still don’t work as intended.

Please take a look at the content I added.

Could you kindly confirm whether I should continue adding more content to meet the goals of the translation assignment?

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your guidance and support throughout this semester. You've worked hard! Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:21, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Thehistorianisaac I'm glad to be working with you on editing this article. I added some content to the original article and made adjustments and additions to the image formatting.

I also tried to modify the interlanguage links, but unfortunately, I wasn't able to achieve the desired result.

Regarding the translation of the oath, since English is not my native language, I'm unable to ensure the accuracy of the content. I'm sorry that I can't provide effective assistance.

Please feel free to take a look at the edits I made. If there’s anything that needs improvement, I’d really appreciate your suggestions.

If you notice any mistakes, you’re also welcome to make changes directly to my edits.

Thank you!Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:16, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

You're welcome! Thehistorianisaac (talk) 10:23, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(week 9)TANG BIYAO

Professor, I’m learning Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure.This is the article I want to translate, and this is my sandbox.I apologize for submitting so late. Can I upload it?Tby0204 (talk) 10:58, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Tby0204 Good progress, but your references are all broken. Please fix them so that they display properly. It seems that none of the referenced copied properly from zh wiki - you will need to copy the code properly or redo them from scratch.

You also need to proofread your article carefully and remove or improve bad parts like "Main article: Grab the orphan event"

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

Please let me know when you fix these issues; if you need help I may be in my office tomorrow or on Friday from 2-4pm. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:44, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I fixed some issues. Please check.This is the article I want to translate, and this is my sandbox.

Thank you! Tby0204 (talk) 13:31, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Tby0204 Good progress. Please remove or fix the broken image(?) code at the top. Try to add a proper Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Infoboxes to your article. Correct the title of the headings to English Wikipedia standard (see Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Layout#Order_of_article_elements) - the ones you have at the bottom are incorrect.

After that you can publish your work following the instructions below:

When your translation is finished, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

After publishing your article please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:48, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Additionally, please note that your group mate does not seem to have completed their part of your group project; but I can dissolve your group and have both you scored individually. Nonetheless, you have also not completed the weekly editing assignment, which lowers your score. I strongly recommend translating additional content for extra credit to improve your score. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:53, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline7（week11-12）

Professor, hello. I am ChenYiling，a student from 1:00 PM to 2:30 PM who understands everyday life. These are my two assignments translated from English to Chinese.

1. This is "Rumors" https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cylingling/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

2. This is "Freedom of Speech"

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cylingling

Please review this, thank you！ Cylingling (talk) 05:31, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Cylingling Your work seems to be in pretty early stage - this is what you should have done months ago. Your content is missing hyperlinks, and the references are not properly coded.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:21, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Retry about Deadline3 (Week 4) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor,

I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A.

I just realized that I hadn't completed Deadline 3 earlier, so I’ve now completed the task. I have added an inline citation to a Korean article that previously had no references.

I apologize for the delay. Thank you. Gayeongkim0 (talk) 06:20, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 I am afraid I do not see any edits by your account there. Please make sure to complete activities on Wikipedia while logged in. Only edits connected to your account can be graded. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:34, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6 (Week10) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor, I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. I've already reviewd an article by another student in his talk page. (Deadline 6) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Nokmalwiki I apologize for the delay. Thank you. Gayeongkim0 (talk) 06:24, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:35, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Finals Week) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor, I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A.

Based on your response to Deadline 7, I have monitored the history of my page as well as the talk page for the project to check for feedback from reviewers. After confirming that there were no further issues, I am submitting my final project.

문화 충격(Ariticle 1 En -> Kr)

데이터 마이닝(Article 2 En -> Kr)

Thank you Gayeongkim0 (talk) 06:36, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 Very good. Here is some feedback:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Since you have no discussion activity points, I recommend doing some extra credit translation for extra points. You can choose any topics to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:38, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

About translated article—TANG YINI

Dear Professor， These are the articles I have translated.[77] [78] [79] Thank you. Tyuni06 (talk) 08:11, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Tyuni06 Good. Here is some feedback:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Since you have no discussion activity points, I recommend doing some extra credit translation for extra points. You can choose any topics to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:43, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation - Lee jisu

Hello professor,

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I have completed the translation of the document, please check it.

<Everyday Life and Social Structure>

날조 (En -> Kr)

국제인권법 (En -> Kr)

<Collective Intelligence in Practice>

해커 문화 (En -> Kr)

브로니스와프 말리노프스키 (En -> Kr)

thank you. Xisuux (talk) 10:15, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good, but fixes are needed for your translations. In particular, your articles seem to have very few correct blue links (some instead incorrectly use bolding). See below for details of fixes needed:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:46, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation - HUENFAN LIZIKANG

Ww are taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （10.30-12.00）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.These are the two articles I translated. Land reform in Tibet 第二次世界大战中的战俘For the other two articles, please see the reply submitted by LIZIKANG 호인본 (talk) 13:13, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@호인본 Good, but some fixes are needed:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to English, please read User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator and Wikipedia:Translation. Excellent and in-depth guide to translation and how you can even earn money for this (if you want to continue with this after the course is finished) is also available here. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Your zh wiki article is tagged as being poorly translated. If you have already fixed it, please ask the reviewers who tagged it for that reason to double check (@Mirfaek?).

See also feedback regarding your English article from few days ago (above). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:58, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. I don't see any evidence that you completed the obligatory weekly editing for the Collective Intelligence class; coupled with no discussion activity score this will significantly reduce your grade. I recommend doing some extra credit translation for extra points. You can choose any topics to translate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:01, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation - ZHANG BINGYI

Dear Professor,

I’m currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I’ve now completed the main Wikipedia translation assignments for the course:

2025 Taiwan Exercise (ZH-EN)

In addition, I’ve worked on the following seven articles for extra credit:

Liang Wen-chieh (ZH-EN)

Two_airlines_incident (ZH-EN)

Lin_Chih-Sheng_(politician) (ZH-EN)

Criminal_Code_of_the_Republic_of_China (ZH-EN)

Zuo_Qi (ZH-EN)

Wang_Gui-de (ZH-EN)

Huang_Kuo-chu (ZH-EN)

Please give me the final grade. Thank you for your teaching this semester. Have a great summer.

Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 15:23, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Very good.

Your additional translations are worth many extra points :)

Some fixes are needed in your articles:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:15, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Ju Yewon

Hello, professor. I'm Yewon Ju who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. I received feedback on the translation and completed additional modifications. Please check. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/4_Minutes https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B9%B4%EC%9A%B0%EB%B3%B4%EC%9D%B4_%ED%8C%9D Yxvvxn (talk) 15:37, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn Well done. Final feedback:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:17, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) Yoon Hongman (윤홍만)

Dear Professor, I’m Yoon Hongman(2022028640), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B. I've already reviewd an article by another students in their talk page. User talk:Xisuux - Wikipedia and User talk:Gayeongkim0 - Wikipedia. Thnak you.(Deadline 6) Nokmalwiki (talk) 15:44, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki Good, but a bit late _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:21, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals Week) Yoon Hongman (윤홍만)

Hello professor, I am taking class 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed the translation of my articles, please check it.

Upper class (En -> Kr)

Women in South Korea (En -> Kr)

Thank you. Nokmalwiki (talk) 15:56, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Nokmalwiki

Well done. Final feedback:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:23, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Finals Week) - Park Chaebin (박채빈)

Hello Professor, I’m taking ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’.

I have completed translating two articles. Please check it.

현대 중국의 결혼 (En -> Kr)

북한에 있는 일본인들 (En -> Kr)

Thank you for your kind guidance. CHAEBIN99 (talk) 15:43, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@CHAEBIN99 Very good. If you provide me here with links to your blogs, I can give you a quick final grade estimate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:21, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. Final feedback:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:24, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Finals Week) -ZHANG MINGSHUO

Hello Professor, I’m ZHANG MINGSHUO , taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B.

I have completed the translation of two articles. Please check

Ray L. Chesebro>雷·L·切斯布罗

忐忑 (歌曲)>Tantan (song)

If you have any questions, please tell me in time. Thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 11:10, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Good. Here is some feedback for the final fixes needed

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. In English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese) and Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Since you have no discussion activity points, I recommend doing some extra credit translation for extra points. You can choose any topics to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:54, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Ok, Professor. I will do additional article translations to ensure that I get a passing grade for this class. Shuo1103 (talk) 19:38, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation---YANG CHAOHAN

Professor, hello. I have completed the part I am responsible for. English to Chinese task. This is the link. Please ask if it can be uploaded. Thank you for watching. Yhan0619 (talk) 10:20, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 There seem to be some translation artifacts such as "关于这个词的其他用法（以这种方式拼写，如 Boadicea、Boudicca、Boudicea 等），参见 Boudica （消歧义）。" Please proofread your article carefully, then follow the instructions below:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• See Wikipedia:Moving a page / Help:页面重命名 for how to move (publish) your article.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

As you said, I have added these two related templates to the discussion pages of each Wikipedia article. Please check here for Yhan0619 (talk) 16:40, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Good, but you did not fix other issues I've pointed out, such as the first sentence, which needs to be removed or rewritten to match Chinese Wikipedia's structure. @Mirfaek - could you take a look at this? The translated article here is a Good Article from en wiki, but there may be some other artifacts in the translation that need fixing that I may not be seeing? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:45, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

The translation is overall good, but the student made a few minor mistakes:

• “西班牙第九军团” in the introduction is not linked to the correct article(Should link to 第九“西班牙”军团, not the zh:第六西班牙军团)
• "尽管这些演说是虚构的，但它们旨在让读者对比双方（罗马人与布狄卡一方 ）的诉求及作战方式，并将罗马人刻画为在道德上优于敌人的一方，这有助于塑造一种爱国主义形象，使布狄卡成为传奇人物 。" Such word-by-word translation makes the entire sentence very awkward, I would translate it to "这些演说虽为史学家所杜撰，但其足以向读者提供关于布狄卡的诉求与战术的信息，进而将罗马人塑造成道义上占优的一方而将布狄卡描绘为传说中的反派，以营造爱国主义氛围。"
• The historian "Cassius Dio" should be translated as “狄奥”, not “迪奥”;
• Scapula is better translated “斯卡普拉” not “丝卡普拉”, “丝” for "/s/" in people's name generally implies that the person is female;
• “迪奥在她去世一个多世纪后进行写作，详细描述了这位爱西尼王后”: this sentence is better translated to “狄奥在布狄卡去世一个多世纪后的作品中详细描述了这位爱西尼女王”: The main focus should be Dio's descriptions of Boudica, not him writing about that; Also, the word "queen" here should be “女王” not “王后”, as she's the de facto leader instead of the consort of a male leader;
• “阿尔伯特亲王（Prince Albert ）鼓励了他” is another awkward translation, I would write it as “他的创作受阿尔伯特亲王的鼓励，后者还把自己的马借给他以供参考”;
• “战士装备”: There's a better word for "warrior trappings" in Chinese -- “戍装”
• Bibliography should not be translated into Chinese. --Mirfaek 04:28, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Thanks, the changes have been made based on the issue. If there are any issues, please provide suggestions. Yhan0619 (talk) 12:10, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Very good. How's your group other translation? Li Yu (1611–1680) from zh to en. I cannot locate it? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:27, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Another piece from our group is from zh. The translated article is here. Changed to a different article Yhan0619 (talk) 16:23, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

This is the translation version. Yhan0619 (talk) 16:41, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yhan0619 Ok - that article is good too. Check whether all blue links in it are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:32, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9)--QIAN ZIYI

Dear professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure.And I have completed the article translation. Here is the link. Please check it, thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 19:30, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I added a quote in this article (Deadline 3 (Week 4)). Can you see it? Buryab0ne (talk) 19:57, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne No. Just like I've said several times before, it is pointless to reference the name of an organization. Please read Wikipedia:You don't need to cite that the sky is blue _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:16, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne Regarding User:Buryab0ne/sandbox10, remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). Much of your article is unreferenced, and as such won't count toward the course credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:18, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:18, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Reference #8 is to a low quality source. WP:BAIDU contains many errors and is not allowed on Wikipedia; it needs to be replaced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:19, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I have cited each paragraph based on the original text and added some citations and links. Please check. Buryab0ne (talk) 08:11, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne No, you did not. The first paragraph in Geography section has no reference, and neither do some others.

You still need to fix the disambiguation pages, and replace the low quality reference to Baidu. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I made some modifications.1.2 Buryab0ne (talk) 03:54, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I made some modifications.The link just sent was wrong; it should be link1.link2 Buryab0ne (talk) 03:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne This is not correct. All three references are wrong. Wikiwand is not a reliable source as it just copies from Wikipedia, and Wikipedia cannot cite itself. The other two references did not support the claims made in the preceding sentences. It is too late for you to complete that assignment now - deadline has passed MONTHS ago.

As for your translation, I see no evidence that you fixed the disambiguation links or replaced the low-quality ref (Baidu). You have also added a Wikiwand reference, which, as I just noted, is not good and needs to be removed.

You should also add a heading for References at the bottom. After you fix the above issues, follow the instructions to publish your article and report back to me.

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.
• See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to move (publish) your article.
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).
• You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:17, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Ps. Please note that due to failing to participate in in class-activities and complete weekly obligatory editing, your score is very low. If you post links to your blogs here, I can give you a grade estimate, but I strongly advice you to finish your translation ASAP and translate additional content for extra credit if you wish to receive a passing grade. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:21, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 : Ju Yewon

Hello, professor. I'm Yewon Ju who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. I left feedback on articles related to 1980 (album). Here is my feedback link. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Kaldwl#Feedback_on_the_1980_(album)_article Sorry for the delay. Yxvvxn (talk) 17:54, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yxvvxn Good, but the deadline was a while ago. Assignments submitted late receive a reduced score, per our syllabus. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:45, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Kim Minji

Hello Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. For my final project, I translated the articles https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/1980_(%EC%9D%8C%EB%B0%98), https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/HBO_%EB%8B%A4%ED%81%90%EB%A9%98%ED%84%B0%EB%A6%AC_%EC%98%81%ED%99%94, https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rehab_(%EB%A6%AC%ED%95%9C%EB%82%98_%EA%B3%A1). (En -> Kr) I apologize that I still have not been able to resolve the issues with the blue and red links. I would appreciate it if you could leave me some feedback along with instructions on how to fix them. Thank you. Kaldwl (talk) 17:59, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kaldwl Good, your articles look very good, except they could use some blue and red links (interlanguage links). Please see below for my advice how to improve your work. I've also awared you extra credit for your third translation

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:49, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation_ Chachaeyoung

Hi professor, I'm Lee chaeyeong who is taking a class 'Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure' (01:00pm)

I already completed the translation a few months ago, and I'm posting the link for the last confirmation.

Blank Space -> https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blank_Space

Climate debt -> https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B8%B0%ED%9B%84_%EB%B6%80%EC%B1%84

Both eng to kr Thank you! Chachaeyoung (talk) 02:08, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung Well done. Please see below for final feedback on minor fixes needed:

Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:06, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dead line 6_ Chachaeyoung

Hi professor, I'm Lee chaeyeong who is taking a class 'Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure' (01:00pm)

I attached feedback to the Wikipedia translation of the two students.

-- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Kaldwl#Feedback_on_the_1980_article.

-- https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/토론:국제인권법#Feedback_Chachaeyoung Chachaeyoung (talk) 02:23, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chachaeyoung Good, but the deadline was a while ago. Assignments submitted late receive a reduced score, per our syllabus. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:06, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional translation-ZHANG MINGSHUO

Hello Professor, I’m ZHANG MINGSHUO , taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B.

Professor, this is my additional translation. I hope to earn extra credit.

新板万坪都会公园>New Board Wanping Metropolitan Park

Please tell me if I have reached the passing score now. Thank you.

Shuo1103 (talk) 09:10, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Regarding your total grade, it is being calculated - I have not yet graded the finals. But it should be passing (at least D, possibly higher). So you are not failing. You can indeed improve it by translating more Wikipedia content, but it has to be of good quality, which your most recent submission is not.

Your draft has been rejected by the reviewers due to low quality (mostly unreferenced, poor quality of translation, inconsistent name). See Draft:Wanping Metropolitan Park for your work and the history page here for reviewer's (@Fram's) comments: Draft:Wanping Metropolitan Park: Revision history - Wikipedia

Remember that for our class policy, all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). For that reason, when you choose an article to translate, ensure that it has plenty of inline references (and that they are reliable).

Additionally, please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to English, please read User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator and Wikipedia:Translation. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:00, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Retry about Deadline3 (Week 4) - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor, I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A.

I recently received your feedback stating that there were no visible edits from my account on Wikipedia. I believe this was because I had previously added citations without being logged into my account, which caused my contributions not to be linked to my username.

To correct this, I have now made sure to log in properly and have added an inline citation to a Korean Wikipedia article that previously had no references. The edit is now clearly associated with my account.

I apologize for the earlier oversight and for any confusion it may have caused. Thank you for your understanding, and please let me know if you need any further information or confirmation regarding my recent edit.

Thank you. Best regards, Gayeong Kim (김가영) Gayeongkim0 (talk) 09:40, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 That is correct, well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:02, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translations

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG JINGYANG, 2024049089 who is taking class B of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure (Monday 13:00-14:30, Friday 13:00-14:30) I’ve completed my final translations work. Here is the link to my sandbox: Alcohol in France https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/Sandbox

The World Is Curved https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/sandbox2

The World Is Flat https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zjy402/sandbox3 Zjy402 (talk) 10:53, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zjy402 Your articles are not yet ready to be published. You did not translate references (footnotes); there are some incorrectly formatted links as well. Please let me know once this is fixed; in the meantime, here are few more things to do:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .
• Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:50, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

translate ZHONG RUIQI

Professor, I’m learning Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure.

I translated two articles from English to Chinese

1.

2.

Because the Chinese translation of the first article already exists in the Chinese Wikipedia, the administrator helped me change the title translation, so it is not displayed in a standard way. Please check, thank you ZHONGrich (talk) 14:00, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@ZHONGrich Very good. I see a request to improve the links on your first article - perhaps @Mirfaek could offer more detailed feedback what to do there? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:56, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

I have changed it ZHONGrich (talk) 13:04, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8(kimkiwoong)-김기웅

Dear Professor,

I am Kim Kiwoong, attending the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" course (Class B, 1:00–2:30 PM). I have completed my final translation project for Deadline 8.

Here is the article I translated from English to Korean:

- 사용자:Kimkiwoong/연습장 (En → Ko)

Please review the article when convenient. Thank you for your guidance throughout the semester.

Sincerely, Kim Kiwoong — (talk) Kimkiwoong (talk) 12:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimkiwoong In the spreadsheet you have signed for both Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence classes. Are you taking both of them? You have submitted your in-class card points for the Collective Intelligence class.

It is also poorly formatted (missing blue links and footnotes). This is where your draft shoud've been in April or so.

Things to fix:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언. Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:10, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Translations

Extended content

Hi Piotrus, in general, it probably isn't the best idea to let students create new articles. But in any case, can you please check that all these creations have the correct attribution? It seems to be missing in nearly every case, but is a basic requirement for translated articles. Fram (talk) 10:37, 20 June 2025 (UTC) @Fram Yo. Thanks for stopping by. Attribution is also a requirement for my students, as you can see from my feedback here or from our class instructions. Of course, some students will not complete the tasks correctly (our clunky interface and reliance on unfriendly templates doesn't help...). The best thing we can say about new user experience is that it is better than it was x years back :P As for new articles, I've been doing this for 10+ years, they can handle that (particularly when translating; I think the ratio of rejects - articles deleted or otherwise declined from mainspace - in my classes is <10% (which I assume beats the average a lot). Anyway, feel free to offer more feedback, particularly to any student you run in. I am handling ~150 students this semester, pretty much by myself. Life, eh? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:50, 20 June 2025 (UTC) That's, well, your choice, and you are getting paid for it. A class with paid supervision by an experienced enwiki editor should be held to higher standards for basic things like attribution. And I see no reason why you can't direct your students to post their translations in AfC and go through the review process there. Or at the very least tell them to not unilaterally move a draftified page back into the mainspace and things like that. Fram (talk) 12:07, 20 June 2025 (UTC) I guess you have little experience teaching. Anyway, if you see someone, student or not, not attributing stuff, leave them the appropriate message. Carry on. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 12:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC) That makes no sense at all. You are supervising this class, you know who your students are. I have no way, when watching the new pages feed, to know that e.g. Shoulder Pole Dance is part of that class or that it is a translation. You have that knowledge, you have added Wikiproject tags to the talk page, but you can't be bothered to add the attribution. That makes you, as the teacher/supervisor here, responsible for putting unattributed translations in the mainspace. for you, knowing which pages need the attribution is easy: for other editors, it is nearly impossible. Don't shift the burden. Fram (talk) 13:02, 20 June 2025 (UTC) Mhm. This is the student responsibility, as I have already explained to you. They are directed to provide attribution in the how-to explanation of the assignment, and graded on the completion of this task (among others).. Don't shift the burden on me, I am not going to be doing my students work for them. That's not teaching (at least, not responsible one). :P All that said, I totally agree that our flagging of educational assignments is inadequate. I've said so before, in various places. Student accounts should be clearly flagged as belonging to course X, and such flags should be visible to new page patrollers and everyone else. WMF, however, clearly has other priorities. Maybe in few years their experiments with AI, which they seem to be focusing on instead, will provide something useful, like detection and flagging of unattributed translations. That has been a problem since Wikipedia's beginning (although it's pretty theoretical, at make-work level. Not attributing translations is pretty low on the list of issues one has to deal with, which, as a new page patroller, you surely know (since it does not merit deleting or declining the article). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:21, 20 June 2025 (UTC) I'm moving pages to draft space as being clearly deficient. Please, PLEASE, in the future direct all your students to create pages in draft space and to use AfC, and please help in assessing these articles instead of just adding project tags but not bothering about the much more serious issues. Fram (talk) 13:24, 20 June 2025 (UTC) If you move any page of my student to draftspace, ping me so I can review the situation. TIA Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:30, 20 June 2025 (UTC) You're joking, right? Fram (talk) 13:32, 20 June 2025 (UTC) No, I am asking you to be courteous. I am not going to be replying to you anymore here, until you cool down. As I said, I am plenty busy - that includes fixing various inadequacies in the articles I am reviewing, too (that includes telling the student to add attributions, which is what you asked me to do - and in case I wasn't clear, I've been doing it already, before you asked). Which I encourage you to do as well, rather than continue this pointless discussion, which I am going to hat now. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:34, 20 June 2025 (UTC) PS. As I am going to be grading into wee hours for the next few days and barely sleeping, I'd appreciate it if you'd put this discussion on hold. I don't have time for discussing minor improvements to the wiki right now. If later you make a suggestion to the WMF to better flag educational content, or make detecting and attributing translations easier, ping me anytime and I'll support it. Cheers, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:23, 20 June 2025 (UTC) These are not minor improvements. Many of these articles should not be in the mainspace at all. "make detecting and attributing translations easier" You are taking the piss now? You direct your students to create translations, it is trivially easy for you to detect these: you don't want to be doing the student's work but have no issue with shifting that burden to the volunteers here. This really is unacceptable behaviour. Fram (talk) 13:27, 20 June 2025 (UTC) Your behavior on my talk page is getting unacceptable - please stop "taking the piss" here, to quote you. If you don't have anything nice to say, well, you know. Wikipedia:No personal attacks, Wikipedia:Civility, Wikipedia:A nice cup of tea and a sit down... you know. Bye for now - this is my talk page and I don't need your attitude here, neither do my students. Chill out, please. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:32, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Please don't instruct your students that they can use AI to write article leads

"It needs a proper Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, however (you can ask AI to write one for you, but proofread it carefully and ensure it has no errors). " Despite the advice at the end, the general mood at enwiki is to tell editors not to use AI to write or summarize articles. We have just stopped the WMF from doing a test with AI generated summaries, it's not a good idea to teach new editors to do this. Fram (talk) 14:32, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Fram Fair point, although the students (and new editors) will do it anyway. As I said earlier - you are not a teacher, are you? The students these days are using AIs for everything. It's the sign of times (end times?). But you are right that it should be done with more supervision, I'll refrain from offering that advice at this point. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Admin discussion

I started WP:ANI#Issues with a student project because this is getting a bit too big for me, and some fresh eyes, help, guidance is welcome. You are welcome to comment there as well of course, as it deals with your edits and those of your students. Fram (talk) 16:14, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)- LI ZIKANG

We are taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （10.30-12.00）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.These are the two articles I translated. Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II and Central China Building。 To improve my score on Collective Intelligence, I would like to complete an additional article, which I will submit by this weekend. Thank you, Professor. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 09:05, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 It is a good idea to improve your score. Translating more Wikipedia articles over the next few days is a very good idea. You can choose any topics you want.

Please send me links to your blogs - right now I cannot locate any searching for your name. Once you send me links to your blogs, I'll grade them and tell you your current grade estimate.

I don't see your zh wiki article published, and the link above is broken. Please send me a working link so I can review and grade your work.

As for your English translation, it's a good start. Here is a list of fixes needed for it:

Please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:54, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Perhaps this link can be used. My blog account is 1 Lzk15038863666 (talk) 11:43, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 I'll check it shortly. In the meantime, please improve the quality of Central China Building, which has been declined by the reviewer and moved to your draft space. If you are unsure why, please ask the reviewer who declined it for detailed feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:40, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

No, this is not the link to your blog account, it's a link to all blogs in our class. Please link to your blog list, which you can get by searching for your blog username or tag. I cannot locate your blogs based on the name or username you provided to me in our spreadsheet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:42, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

sorry professor。this‘ my blog Sha Lzk15038863666 (talk) 16:40, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 I was able to locate two blogs (out of 14 required). . Your current grade is low since as I said you missed the weekly homework activity (wikis and blog).

Your translation of Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II has not yet been published on zh wiki. Please publish it there, after addressing concerns of the reviewers there. Once you do so, you should have a passing (D) grade.

Your extra credit submission (Jianye Building) has been declined from publication and is being considered for deletion. I see you tried to write a message at Talk:Jianye Building but you failed - your message is unfinished. Try again. Completing sentences will help. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 17:02, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

About being unable to release

my id is Wanhink and name WANG HAO https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Wanhink/sandbox&oldid=87844703 Hello, Professor, this is my final draft. I decided to release it, but encountered issues during the process. He told me that the hazards of my movement have been banned and asked the professor for help. Wanhink (talk) 17:14, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Wanhink I am afraid I cannot understand your message. Your article cannot be moved as you should be merging it to the tiny zh:美國世紀. Please follow the instructions at zh:Wikipedia:合并页面#方法 and merge your work there. Perhaps @Mirfaek , @Kanshui0943 or @Thehistorianisaac can take a look at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wanhink/sandbox to double check the quality of the translation (the code looks fine to me). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 17:32, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

zh:美國世紀 has been created before, and you should revise the draft before merging. I'll review the draft later. Kanshui0943 (talk) 18:20, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Blogger and Americas Editor --HE ZIXUAN(하자선)

Dear Professor, this is my weekly editorial link and all the links of my blog. Please check it. Thanks ZixuanHE (talk) 02:42, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Blog and Weekly Edit--HE ZIXUAN（하자선）

Dear Professor, this is my weekly editorial link and all the links of my blog. Please check it. Thanks ZixuanHE (talk) 02:46, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@ZixuanHE Very good. Your current score is B, since you completed all tasks except in-class activities. You can get extra points by translating content, as outlined in the syllabus, but the deadline for any submissions is this Tuesday. You can choose any topics you like, and you can translate to any language. (Remember however that only translating referenced content counts for course credit) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (reposted) - Kim, Kyung min

Dear, Professor.

I don't know what the reason is, but I'm attaching a new one for Deadline 6, which is not listed. Please check, thank you.

1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Leeyena528.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Jo_HyeonSeong Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 03:53, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Very good, I'll update your score. However, completing assignments after deadline comes with reduced score, as outlined in the syllabus. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:01, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation - GUOYING

Dear Professor, this is my blog 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11 and wiki assignment [80] [81].[82][83] [84] [85] l want to know what my grade for this course is. thank you Guoying1 (talk) 04:38, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Guoying1 Very good, your score should be A+. Please double check that all of your articles have translation attribution and educational project templates on talk. Your Bank of Dongguan (which you completed last year for the previous class) is missing the former, for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:14, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

final. XIXIANGRUI

Hello, professor, because I can't upload to Chinese Wikipedia, two articles I translated were put into my sandboxie for inspection (I'm sorry I can't pass Wikipedia) 

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIXIANGRUI/Sandbox1 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 02:05, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI Like we discussed before, you have to work with the Chinese reviewers, to understand and address their objections.

Did you talk to them? If so, please show me where such a discussion has taken place. I see some discussion at zh:User_talk:XIXIANGRUI#例子 although I gather it was not enough, since you did not fix the issues raised? In either case, thank you @尘埃之歌 for your feedback to my student. Feel free to offer more advice to them!

@Mirfaek has also offered to help - read their feedback, which I hope you can receive in few days (thank you, Mirfaek). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:14, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Regarding on the first one (the fashion of China, I've given a detailed feedback on first few paragraphs here). TBH the student's behavior in zhwiki is borderline disruptive as this person repeatingly seeked for helps and ignored essentially all feedbacks received. Also, these drafts needs signimifant amounts of improvements. Not only the issue of translations, most texts do not even logically make sense. That's why we refused it for further submission cuz it'd be an easier task to completely rewrite it than improve the current draft. --Mirfaek 06:16, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

With regard to the fact that I ignored the feedback, I didn't ignore it, and I translated it again later, so it's my fault that I can't do it. I won't submit it again. I don't have the ability to correct.thankyou XIXIANGRUI (talk) 09:34, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

I later revised this article on pollution in Korea. XIXIANGRUI (talk) 09:45, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Since it is the purpose of the class to teach you how to correct such mistakes, it may be a good idea for you to take this class again next semester, if you cannot publish content in on the Wikipedia in your native language. The feedback you received from Chinese Wikipedia editors seems very good and should be sufficient for you to improve your work. Practice makes better. But we still have time to try to improve your work over the next week or so.

@Mirfaek Is the pollution article better now? The student did work on it since it was last reviewed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:26, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

The translation is definitely improving. The newly added section about pollutions in DPRK looked much better, but I feel the issue on the pollution one is that the ROK section of the original article (Pollution in Korea) is not of decent quality at the first place: Too much general infos that are not correlated with the issues on Korean penisula, questionable structures (such as the abrupt addition of international impacts on air pollutions during the discussion of major pollutants), and some minor incidents that maybe not noteworthy enough to be specifically mentioned. That's said, I do not think it's a matter of translation, more like a poor choice on the article to work on at the first place. My recommendation at this moment is that instead of writing about the pollution in the entire penisula, maybe just doing "Pollution in DPRK" or something like that.--Mirfaek 14:44, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Thankyou Professor, will I fail this course? XIXIANGRUI (talk) 09:32, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@XIXIANGRUI I am pretty sure you will not fail, but to get A+ it is important to succesfully finish your Wikipedia project and publish it. Please try to finish your work (translation) on zh wiki and publish it ASAP, and send me links to your content. If the Chinese reviewers prefer, it's ok to split out North Korean content into a separate article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:38, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you so much, Professor.😭 XIXIANGRUI (talk) 06:31, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final —ZHOUZIYU

Hello, professor. I am in the class of Everyday Life.I have completed the translation of three articles in the class Everyday Life.This is my sandbox.Please check them,thank you.

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zzzzzhouziyu/沙盒

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zzzzzhouziyu/沙盒2

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zzzzzhouziyu/沙盒3 Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 06:21, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zzzzzhouziyu Unfortunately, your work suffers from major translation problems, and you need to resolve them in order to complete the assignment.

Please read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引, as well as messages you got from the numerous reviewers (@Kanshui0943, @Mirfaek, @August.C and others). They have offered you a number of examples of what needs to be improved. Please follow their advice.

In addition to their advice, here's feedback from me: check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia: zh:Template:Internal link helper . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final-YU JIE 여결

Dear Professor,

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.This is my blog1 2 3 4 4(extra credit) 5 5(extra credit) 6 7 7-Class Discussion 8 9 9 9(extra credit) 10 10(extra credit) 11 12 13 13(extra credit) 14 15 I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week2-week16. Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 07:16, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@A15928872517 Very good. Your grade for the Collective Intelligence class is A+. Score for the other class is being calculated. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:51, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7(Week 12) - WU JIACHEN

Dear Professor，

For the course Everyday Life and Social Structure, I have completed my Wikipedia editing assignment. My main translated articles include:

• Corruption in Russia（en-zh）
• Freedom of information（en-zh）
• Gender inequality in Japan（en-zh）
• Men's T20 World Cup（en-zh）

Additionally, I have translated three more entries as extra contributions:

• FlexiRide（en-zh）
• Mercy（en-zh）
• Royal Academy Summer Exhibition（en-zh）

All of these articles have been linked to their counterparts in other languages (via interlanguage links), and none of my edits have been reverted by administrators. You can find my full editing and weekly editing history at the following link:

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:用户贡献/A1246632822

I would really appreciate it if you could take a look and share any feedback or suggestions for improvement. A1246632822 (talk) 05:39, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Well done, but I see that many of your articles have been tagged with MoS/linking problem. I'll ping @Mirfaek who may be able to offer more detailed feedback to you (TIA). Please read what Mirfaek writes and follow their advice to improve your work _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Unfortunately I am right now at San Francisco Airport and about to board a transcontinental plane, meaning I won’t be able to look at them for next 24 hours or so. I would try looking at it when I have time. —-Mirfaek 16:31, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Have a safe trip! The class still has almost two weeks before the final grades are due, so there's time (and I expect some more troubles will arise soon, as some folks will try to do the assignment now, having ignored most of the prior deadlines... :>). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

I finally got a chance to look at these.....The major issue is that the use of crosswiki links. DO NOT DIRECTLY DO CROSSLINKS. In order to encourage creations of local versions, zhwiki only allowed either red links ([[张三]]) or greenlinks ({{link-en|张三|Zhang San}}). Currently most of them seemed to be automatically fixed by a bot running on zhwiki but there's a few of them not fixed (mainly in"Royal Academy Summer Exhibition"). Also, there's a few formatting suggestions I would like to give:

• “Gender inequality in Japan”: Japanese terms like "kōmin" should not be exclusively in romanized scripts, adding the original ones (those of kanji / kanas); Chinese does not use italics for terms like "德川"; Though not required, crosswiki links of these related to non-English objects like “明治政府” are better connected to their Japanese wiki articles.
• Ideally, all texts should be translated into Chinese for the convenience of reading. --Mirfaek 06:02, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Currently, my advice for students is to use red-blue links through zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi. As far as I know this is an acceptable way as well? I have not seen the greenlinks in use, but but I don't browse zh wiki much. On en and pl wiki, green links are used for redirects (at least in gadgets I use), and I've never seen them used for interwiki links (the red-blue system is what I see instead). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:50, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Yes, red-blue links are acceptable but not widely used in zhwiki (green links are the default interlanguage links). --Mirfaek 11:00, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Facepalm In fact, I didn't even realize that the red-blue links exist. --Mirfaek 11:03, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I have made some modifications to the internal links in the Chinese Wikipedia article I edited.

Corruption in Russia

Could you please take a look and let me know if the changes I made are appropriate? I’d be happy to revise them if needed.

Thank you very much! A1246632822 (talk) 12:22, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 I hope so; please double check the advice above and make sure you implement it in your work. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:50, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2@MirfaekI have finished revising all the internal links in my translated article, following the template you provided. Now, all the links to pages that don’t exist on Chinese Wikipedia are shown in green.

Regarding the term “明治政府,” I could not find a corresponding article on Japanese Wikipedia, so I left that link unchanged.

As for the guideline about Japanese terms—Japanese terms like "kōmin" should not be exclusively in romanized scripts, adding the original ones (those of kanji / kanas)—I’m not familiar with Japanese scripts. However, I may try to improve this aspect with the help of AI tools.

Please let me know if there’s anything else I should work on. A1246632822 (talk) 08:03, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Good progress. Green links are ok too. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:11, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2Dear Professor, I have completed the revisions on the Wikipedia article "Gender Inequality in Japan" according to your suggestions. A1246632822 (talk) 07:15, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@A1246632822 Very good. The only very minor item to fix is to move talk page templates you've added to the very top (at zh:Talk:日本的性别不平等 and similar). Your grade for the course is A+. Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:46, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2Dear Professor, Thanks so much for your kind feedback! I’ve just moved the talk page templates to the top.I really appreciate the A+ — it honestly means a lot. Also, thank you for all your support and thoughtful teaching this semester. I’ve learned a lot and really enjoyed the class. Wishing you a have a relaxing and well-deserved break! A1246632822 (talk) 08:18, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - GUAN YUE

Dear Professor,

I’m currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

For the main Wikipedia translation assignments, I worked on the following two articles (Chinese → English):

• Maxim’s Caterers
• Cognitive warfare

In addition, I’ve worked on the following eight articles for extra credit:

1. Wu Shun Tak (zh → en)
2. Maxim's MX (zh → en)
3. Maxim’s Bakery (zh → en)
4. Traditional Chinese sausages (zh → en)
5. Stir-fried glutinous rice (zh → en)
6. Judy Wajcman (en → zh)
7. Porcelain War(en → zh)
8. Slovo House(en → zh)

I’ve revised the Porcelain War article based on the feedback and the style guide.

And here is the link to all of my blog posts: link

Please let me know if anything is missing. Thank you for the class this semester!

Uuueol (talk) 08:07, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Uuueol Very good. Please ensure that all your articles have correct attribution templates; it seems to be missing at zh:朱迪·瓦奇曼 Your grade for the Collective Intelligence course should be A+; the grade for the other course is being calculated. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for the reminder! I've added the attribution template to the Judy Wajcman article's talk page. Please let me know if anything else needs fixing. Uuueol (talk) 08:24, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Lee Dong Gyu (이동규)

Hello Professor, I finished the translation of the second topic in the exercise book and posted it on Wikipedia in Korean. And I also finished editing the first topic after interpreting it. Here is the link. I attached the editing history of the two articles separately.

Subject 1's history Subject 2's history

I'm sorry for the late submission, professor.

Dong Gyu Lee (talk) 15:34, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

@Dong Gyu Lee Good, but you need to fix the issue below.

Your translated content has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:07, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Dong Gyu Lee Additional feedback:

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:15, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation---JIANGJIASHAN（강가삼)

Dear Professor,

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.I have completed the final translations of five articles. Please check them. Thank you very much for your guidance this semester. [86] [87] [88] [89] [90] Thank you. Ttkx11 (talk) 05:26, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Good job. Minor fixes are needed for your translations, see below:

• Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.
• You are missing the heading section for references
• After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).
• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

In addition, it seems you missed weekly wiki editing, obligatory for the Collective Intelligence class, and I have no record of any activity points you turned in, which means your grade for that class will be low, even after successfully completing the main wiki project. If you link your blogs here for me, I can give you a precise estimate quickly (grade for the other class will be calculated early next week). I'd recommend translating some other articles on wiki for extra points (you can choose your topics freely). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:05, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed my weekly Wikipedia editing and published my blog. Please check it out. Thank you very much.[91] [92] Ttkx11 (talk) 16:52, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Thank you for the link to your weekly editing. I will update your grade.

You did not provide a link to your blogs, but to all blogs. All blogs will be graded in few days; if you want to know your grade earlier, please link to all your blogs using your name/tag or link them individually. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't understand how to operate it. Here is my blog, named JIANGJIASHAN. [93] I publish a blog post on this page every week.I publish a blog post on this page every week.[94] Thank you Ttkx11 (talk) 08:13, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Good. I located and graded all of your 14 blog posts; your grade now is B. I recommend translating some more content to improve it to A+. If you translate four reasonably sized articles to zh wiki this should generate enough credit, assuming they are accepted by the reviewers. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have completed translating four articles to improve my score according to your suggestion. Please check. Thank you very much for your guidance.[95] [96][97][98] Ttkx11 (talk) 09:43, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ttkx11 Good. Some fixes are needed (apply them to your older articles as well as needed):

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:47, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. Your grade is now A (the articles you translated were very short) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final -LIUJUNYU

Hello, professor. I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.I have completed the translation of two articles in the class Everyday Life. [1][2].I also completed two articles in the class Collective Intelligence in Practice with Alexk27.[1][2] I would like to inquire about my grades. Thank you. LJY2455 (talk) 11:39, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 You have never signed my spreadsheet for the Everyday Life, and never recorded your project there. Are you taking the morning or the afternoon class?

Your article on zh:幽灵作家 is not acceptable, as it already exists under zh:捉刀, you can however merge it there to get credit.

The zh:日本盟军战俘 article has been recorded as your work for the Collective Intelligence class, not Everyday Life. The following fixes are needed there:

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. I will also ask Chinese reviewer @Mirfaek to double check the quality of your translation, if they have time.

For the Collective Intelligence class, I do not see any evidence you completed the obligatory weekly homework editing. If you completed any blogs, please link them here and I'll provide you with the grade estimate. For both classes, you have no in-class activity points. All of this will affect your score negatively, I am afraid - although you can try to translate content for extra points over the next few days (but if it is declined by the reviewers, it will not be scored).

Regarding zh:种族与民族关系社会学 you have never asked for permission to translate it as as a main project, but I will credit it as extra points for the Collective Intelligence class.

What is your second article for the Everyday Life class? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:01, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

My class "Everyday Life" was in the morning. At that time, this class recorded two articles, Allied prisoners of war of Japan and Ghost Writers. In the class "Collective Intelligence in Practice", I translated one article from Chinese to English and one article from English to Chinese with the group of @Alexk27, namely, Tanzhenlin and Sociology of Race and Ethnic Relations. LJY2455 (talk) 13:26, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 I see. Please add the fixes to your articles, as I outlined above. I see this has not been done yet.

Please note that while the grades for Everyday Life are being calculated, your grade for Collective Intelligence is F. While I have marked your Wikipedia project as completed successfully, you have no activity points, no weekly homework (weekly editing or blogs) recorded for that class. You should try to translate additional content to receive a passing grade. Please note that the deadline for such work is Tuesday, and your work should be of good enough quality not to be rejected by the reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:03, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation-XU YAN(서염)

Dear Professor, I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is my translated article: U17 Comics. This is my extra bonus points article：Non-Human，Haier Brothers. Thank you so much for your guidance throughout the semester. Xuan6699 (talk) 18:33, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Very good. For Haier Brothers add the translation attribution and our course templates to its talk page, just like you've done so for the other two articles earlier.

For Non-Human, it does not establish its Wikipedia:Notability (media) much. To prevent it from being deleted or declined, you should add information on reception - such as reviews from reliable outlets, or awards won. Can you do this?

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:40, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions. I have carefully revised and expanded the content of the extra credit article based on your feedback. Haier Brothers, Non-Human. I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly take a look. Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 08:01, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Very good. The reception section would make Haier Brothers much stronger too. That article also needs Wikipedia:Categorization. You can get extra credit by translating the reception sections back to zh wiki, if the articles there don't have it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:13, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the expansion and revision of the extra credit article as you suggested, and I’ve also updated the corresponding content on Chinese Wikipedia. Non-Human，非人哉，Haier Brothers，海尔兄弟. Please kindly review it. Thank you! Xuan6699 (talk) 13:00, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Good job, extra credit awarded _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:08, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals Week) - Lee Sihoon (이시훈)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I completed two translation assignments: One moved from sandbox and posted for inspection in Week9, and another one also moved from sandbox and posted for inspection, as feedback was given in Week 9.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 17:34, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Good. Please complete the following steps now:

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (in Korean).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here}

01:35, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Piotrus at Hanyang

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B).

As you mentioned, I've added ko:틀:과제 문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 to the talk page for each translated article.

I've also taken the feedback from other students and made changes.

Check it out and let me know if you have any further feedback.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 14:03, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Skymir1127 Very good, I'll be calculating your grade shortly but it looks good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Finals Week) -YIN CHANG

Hello Professor, I’mYIN CHANG , taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class B.

I have completed the translation of two articles. Please check

Book censorship in the United States>美国的图书审查

Korea Deposit Insurance Corporation>韩国存款保险公司

this is my additional translation. I hope to earn extra credit.

Art Center Nabi>纳比艺术中心

Katrín Sigurdardóttir>卡特琳·西于尔达多蒂尔

Lyodura>利奥杜拉

If you have any questions, please tell me in time. Please tell me , Thank you.

Yc01319 (talk) 14:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yc01319 I see. You should've talked to me long ago, as you have missed many deadlines, including ones months ago where you'd choose your topic. But you have chosen acceptable topics. You need to fix the following issues before publishing them:

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - ensure they have author, date, and title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Some errors are indicated by red warning messages in your existing references.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. I will also ask Chinese reviewer @Mirfaek to double check the quality of your translation, if they have time.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:10, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I've read all of the works over here and their quality is not decent. Unfortunately I won't have enough time to leave a comment until tomorrow afternoon by Korean time. I recommend the student to read these articles again, as many mistakes are rather obvious to me and could be easily catched by just browsing through the lines.--Mirfaek 16:20, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yc01319 Please read the feedback above and improve the quality of your translations. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 -LI MENGCHEN

Dear professor,

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).I have addressed the issues you mentioned on Wikipedia and finalized the publication. Qiu Hongda The Xi Shangzhen Suicide Case. This task is a bonus item：Hong Kong historiography Please check, thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 06:57, 10 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Good progress. Here is feedback for your work.

For all articles: When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

Your articles need more blue links. For example, Qiu Hongda mentions important places like National Taiwan University but does not link them. The Suicide... article mentions May Fourth Movement, but there is no blue link. Add more blue links to your articles. Check whether all blue links are identical to the original you translated them from. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

For Qiu Hongda, please add Template:Infobox scientist.

Many headings in your articles are too long, and some begin with quotation marks (e.g., "The Founding of the Shanghai Shangbao"). These should be removed unless quoting a specific title. Avoid "floating" headings that look like section epigraphs. Use Wikipedia-style section headings without extra formatting (e.g., no <big> or bolded headings unless required).In the suicide article, better headings would be something like this: Background, The May Fourth Movement and women’s emancipation, Shanghai Press and Tang Jiezhi, Life and role at Shangbao , The iIncident, Legal proceedings and public response, Media and scholarly coverage, Legacy. In the HK historiograpy, your headings are short (good) but they should begin with capital letter. "History", not "history".

Your reference should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references. They also should provide URL links if the source is online, and for books, ISBN numbers. This is particularly a problem in the Suicide... article.

Use Grammarly or such to check your articles. There are a few typos and other problems, such as missing full stops at the end of paragraphs. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:35, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

I have already made the above changes. Please check. Thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 05:29, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777

I see some progress, good. But not everything was fixed.

Please fix the issues carefully.

For example, many links to zh wiki have not been added, such as to zh:陳布雷. Please go over links one by one and ensure each and every link from zh wiki is present on en wiki.

Qiu Hongda's lead now repeat the first sentence twice, and has Chinese characters with a broken red link.

Most of the references in the Suicide... article are not using citation templates yet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:23, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

I have addressed all the issues you pointed out, and both articles have been fully published. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:40, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777

Very good. Few final touches:

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:27, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the additions as you requested. Please check. Limengchen2777 (talk) 07:02, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, these are two extra credit assignments I have newly completed: 1958 Air Battles Around Fujian Province and History of the Island of Taiwan Perspective. Please have a look—perhaps they might help me earn an A+? Limengchen2777 (talk) 17:12, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 If you'd like me to estimate your grade quickly, please list here your blog posts. I will be able to give you your current grade estimates after I see your blogs.

Your extra credit translations are a good idea, since you need extra points to compensate for not doing the weekly editing activity (as described in the syllabus) and missing some class activity points (you have only 10 out of 15 required).

Note that the templates you have added to the talk page are missing parameters - please update them with info such as links to our course and information on the original article you translated your work from.

Regarding your new articles, some fixes are needed.

Since the name "1958 air battles around Fujian Province" does not appear used in the English sources, nor did you cite any, you need to provide the Chinese name of this event in the lead, using Template:Lang.

As discussed before, please double-check the links. For example, entities like Nan’ao Island should be linked to zh:南澳岛 and other topics too, such as zh:九八澄海空戰. You use two interlanguage links but with Chinese names in the text, like 陳偉寬 - those should be translated. I've provided additional feedback at Talk:1958 air battles around Fujian Province (the main problem here, I think, is not with your work, but with the zh wiki article, which is not complete, nor structured very well).

History of the Island of Taiwan Perspective suffers from a major problem of unclear conceptualization. The current title is in bad English and does not make sense - what is this article about? How is it different from History of Taiwanese historiography? I see zh wiki has separate articles, but the difference in their titles and scope does not translate to English properly. This kind of content requires advanced fluence in English and right now your article does not make it clear it shouldn't be simply merged and redirected to History of Taiwanese historiography. See discussion at Talk:History of Taiwanese historiography. (While this is about en wiki content, perhaps @Mirfaek would have some thoughts? Which might be best left at the talk page of these articles, rather than here. In either case, I've notified WT:TAIWAN of this, but I am unsure when or even if someone from there will comment).

That said, your recent activity is already generating extra credit. Try to fix the issues I've mentioned, comment on the talk pages of the articles in question, and I encourage you to translate more content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Here is the link to my biog Please help me estimate my grade. Thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:07, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 You linked to only a single blog. Your current grade, taking it into account, is D, since you are missing 5 out of 15 in class activity points, and I could not locate any evidence of you completing the obligatory weekly editing. I recommend more extra credit translations. If you completed other blogs please link them here directly or through a search for your name or tag and I'll update your points total (grade). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:41, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

May I ask if this score includes the bonus points? Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:53, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 It should, but if you explain here which bonus points you mean, I'll double check. Bonus points are usually awarded for in-class activities (those have been already counted) and online ones. Currently I've awarded you bonus points for your creation of extra articles we discuss here, and for creating your userpage. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:09, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

"This is a new piece I wrote about bonus points on the history of the Chinese Air Force — could it possibly earn me extra credit? Also, if I start writing a blog now, can it still be counted toward my score? Thank you!" Limengchen2777 (talk) 05:15, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 At this point I recommend more wiki translation rather than make up blogs, you can get more points that way and build your digital portfolio better. Your new article on History of Chinese Air Force (I've renamed it for better English) will give you extra points. It needs a proper Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, however (you can ask AI to write one for you, but proofread it carefully and ensure it has no errors). In your article, fix the blue-red interlanguage links to zh wiki - the text displayed should be in English or Romanized properly, not in Chinese characters. On the other hand, Chinese characters should be displayed when no zh wiki article exists for names - such as people and texts mentioned in this sentence: "Wei Yuan's Illustrated Treatise on the Maritime Kingdoms and Zhigang's Record of the First Diplomatic Mission to the West".

Add categories, talk page templates, etc. (follow my prior advice). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:35, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. Your current grade has been updated to C, reflecting your efforts. I am sure you can translate more content for A+, we have a few days before the grades are due. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:39, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

These are two new Wikipedia articles I created: Fang Yonggang and Gao Shuzhen. I also wrote a blog post about them—please help me check it. 1 2 3 4. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 07:45, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I’ve completed two new extra credit entries: Gao Yuhan and Du Guoxiang. Thank you for your time and support! Limengchen2777 (talk) 11:27, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Very good, your grade is steadily improving (B+) now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:44, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 However, it's important to not rush. Your recent contributions have been declined by the reviewer and moved to your draft space. If you are unsure why, please ask the reviewer who declined it for detailed feedback, but one of the issues they have identified is that the article - likely the Chinese original you have been translating - fails the Wikipedia policy of Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing . Please read that policy carefully and rewrite your article, then ask for a review. PS. And your articles about Chinese air force have been declined, again, due to underlying poor quality of the original Chinese articles. The reviewer noted the lack of WP:LEAD, as well as broken URLs to many sources. You'll need to fix these issues before republishing the articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

May I ask, in this situation, how many additional bonus articles do I still need to write? Limengchen2777 (talk) 14:08, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Your current priority should be fixing the articles you wrote. If your contributions are declined too much, your account may be blocked and you will not be able to contribute more to Wikipedia. Try your best to fix the issues in the articles raised. Otherwise, I recommend that for your translations you choose only the high quality articles from zh wiki. See here for relevant list: zh:Wikipedia:优良条目 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:14, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

May I ask if I will still get a B+ now? Limengchen2777 (talk) 14:25, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Yes, it is not your fault that the articles you chose had these problems. To improve your grade further, however, you should try to fix them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:27, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I have already asked the reviewer for detailed revisions, but before receiving a reply, may I send you the new bonus articles I have just completed? Limengchen2777 (talk) 14:31, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 For now you can publish them in your sandbox, I'll review them shortly. Please ensure they have no problems with WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASING _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:42, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I’m sorry, I went ahead and published it before this. I apologize sincerely. May I still send it to you for review? Limengchen2777 (talk) 14:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 I assume you are talking about Huang-Tang Uprising and Blindbox. They need improvements similar to the ones I mentioned. Your interlanguage links display Chinese characters - they should display Latin ones. You forgot to add a section heading for references. Please fix those issues.

Additionally, for an article about a concept like Blindbox, you need to provide English-language references that confirm this term is used in English in that context. I've never heard of this term before, for example. PS. The rushed publishing can be seen in the very title: is it "blindbox" or "blind box"? Or maybe "mystery box"? Also, one of the references is unreliable (WP:BAIDU) and needs to be replaced with another, more reliable source. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

The issues in the Huang-Tang Uprisingarticle have been corrected. Please review it. Thank you for your hard work. Limengchen2777 (talk) 15:18, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 I still see Chinese characters like 姜亚勋 without an English explanation what is it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:47, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I've finished the revisions. Could you please check it? Thank you for your hard work." Limengchen2777 (talk) 16:12, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I still see the same errors as before. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 17:03, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I’ve revised the Huang-Tang Uprising section and hope the changes are appropriate. I’d appreciate it if you could review them. Limengchen2777 (talk) 02:42, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

I've revised the first interlanguage link, see here. Please fix the others to the same format in this and your other articles. I've also made some other fixes - please study them carefully (bold the title in the lead, don't bold headings or other terms, etc.). There is no need to link the same term more then once or twice (twice if once in the lead, and once in the body - that's enough). Also, your current section "external links" is wrong. Those are not external links. It looks more like a "See also". You should briefly explain the relevance of those terms to this article, or remove them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:55, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

I have revised and submitted both of my articles, Draft:Du Guoxiang and Draft:Gao Yuhan, for review. Since the review process takes time, I might write a few additional blog posts in the meantime to help raise my grade from a B+ to an A. Thank you so much for all your help. Limengchen2777 (talk) 03:55, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 I recommend you try translating some content from en to zh for a change, to practice other skills. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

The issues raised regarding the article "1958 air battles around Fujian Province" have been addressed; please review the changes.As for the article "History of the Island of Taiwan Perspective," perhaps a better title could be suggested? Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:26, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Please add links to ALL relevant terms, not just the two I mentioned. It is your job to compare your English translation to Chinese and locate ALL links and connect them, not mine. I've pointed the above two as EXAMPLES in a single article (so you need to add more links to that article, and to your other articles). Please update me when it is done. As for the title of the other articles - perhaps, yes. Please do so if you can, in the relevant discussion. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:43, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello Professor! I followed your suggestion and completed a new English-to-Chinese translation as an extra credit project 1. I'd appreciate it if you could take a look. May I ask if this piece will help improve my current grade? Limengchen2777 (talk) 13:20, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Yes, effort is recognized. That article is missing a reference heading, please add it, then publish it following the instructions below:

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:13, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Could you please let me know if my grade is an A or an A+? Thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 03:25, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

I have made the required changes and submitted the move request 1. Thank you for your hard work. Limengchen2777 (talk) 03:49, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7: JIA YUAN

Dear Professor, Regarding the "Everyday Life and Social Structure" class (Class B, 13:00–14:30), This is my translated article:Climate change in South Korea、Individual action on climate change。Here are my additional bonus points:Cheong Hyungsik、Jacob W. Gruber、Paracrine regulator、American Flyers Airline、Jean Baptiste Beaubien.May I ask if I need to continue with my bonus work to improve my grades?Thanks. Jiayyyyy (talk) 01:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Very good. Small touch up is needed for your work:

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Your translations seem very good, assuming there are no translation issues. Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 (here I'll ask @Mirfaek to take a quick look, if they have a moment).

If you post links to your blogs here, I can give you a quick grade estimate. Make sure to link to a search result listing all your blogs, or list them all one by one. Then we will see if you need to do any more extra credit for A+. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:04, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, here is the content of my blog:1、2、3、4、5、6、7、8、9、10、11,There are a total of 11 blog posts. Please check, thank you! And tell me what else I should do to get an A➕. Jiayyyyy (talk) 08:13, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Most of the translations look perfect to me, but the individual action on climate change one is not very good. I would leave a feedback on the talk page of the student about what they could do to further improve the quality.--Mirfaek 09:18, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Thank you

@Jiayyyyy I've graded your blogs; your score is now A. I recommend translating two more articles to Chinese to ensure you have max points for A+. Good luck - you can choose any topics you like _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, here are my two new bonus Wikipedia entries：Illusion of Kate Moss，Isabella BeetonPlease check, thank you. Jiayyyyy (talk) 13:00, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Please let me know if I can get an A➕, and if not, what else do I need to do to improve my score? Thanks. Jiayyyyy (talk) 13:01, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Yes, I think your score is close to A+. One more translation should ensure you have max credit, but please review the feedback from Mirfaek and fix the issues they raised. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have now completed nine Wikipedia articles, eleven blogs, and all other course assignments. And it also revised the question raised by Mirfaek. Do we still need to translate another article to get an A➕? Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:09, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

That's way too long for a thorough feedback, I've given a detailed feedback for fist two paragraphs on the talk page.--Mirfaek 09:48, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 -HONG HAOTIAN

Dear professor,

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).I have addressed the issues you mentioned on Wikipedia and finalized the publication. Nanko Historical and Geographical Society.I have also finished revising the other article.User:Honghaotian/sandbox8Please check, thank you！ Honghaotian (talk) 00:33, 11 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Very good. To finish, please do the following: For all articles (once they are published on English Wikipedia): When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

Regarding your not-yet-published article in the sandbox:

• please find at least one English work that discusses this topic, and use the English name from it for the title of the article and for the lead. And then use that title consistently. Right now, the lead uses "The Surveillance and Registration of Exiles in Taiwan" but the first paragraph, for example, uses a different phrase: "Regulations on the Investigation of Migrants in Taiwan"
• title should be in bold, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section
• The lead paragraph should clearly define the subject of the article and summarize the most important aspects of the topic. Avoid diving too quickly into historiography. Right now, it opens with a misattribution issue. While this is important, start with what the regulation is, then discuss confusion/misattribution. Suggested rewrite of the lead: “The Regulations on the Investigation of Migrants in Taiwan were a set of Qing dynasty administrative rules concerning Han Chinese migration to Taiwan, issued as part of the Imperially Commissioned Revised Regulations of the Six Ministries in the late 19th century. These rules addressed the registration, deportation, and marriage restrictions applied to migrants. Due to later misreadings by 20th-century scholars, especially Inō Kanori, the regulation has often been misunderstood or misattributed.”
• what is "Taiwan bunka shi"? Such terms, not in English, need to be explained, and their Chinese name given (or blue link to English Wikipedia, or interlanguage link to zh wiki). Use italic formatting for book titles: e.g., The Cultural History of Taiwan.
• that article needs many more blue links (or links to zh wiki), like your published article. From the topic mentioned above to Qing dynasty or Six Ministries
• Currently some sections are labeled with unclear headings: ==content== → Should be ==Text of the regulation== or ==Original Qing Regulation== ==The content in the Records of Taiwanese Culture== → Could be renamed to ==Inō Kanori’s interpretation== ==Citation details== → This is really a historiographical impact, consider calling it ==Misattribution and scholarly interpretations== ==Discussion== → Unclear what makes this section different from the previous one. Consider integrating it or renaming it to ==Recent scholarship== or ==Reevaluation by modern scholars==
• Numbers should follow Wikipedia formatting: spell out numbers one through nine, use numerals for 10 and above.
• Replace instances of 1. 2. 3. in body text with Wikipedia-style bullet points (*) unless part of a quoted passage.
• References 3 and 4 seem to be identical?

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed all the revisions based on the issues you pointed out. Please check!Nanko Historical and Geographical Society，User:Honghaotian/sandbox8 Honghaotian (talk) 03:15, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Very good, but the name of your second article remains a concern.

You standardized the name, good, but there is no indication the chosen name is correct (see WP:COMMONNAME and WP:ENGLISHTITLE). You write later: "As a result, it has been mistakenly referred to as “Taiwan Registration on Migrants Regulations in the Six Ministries’ Statutes”, “Registration on Migrants Regulations in Taiwan Statutes”, “Registration on Migrants in Taiwan Regulations”, or “Registration on Migrants Six Ministries Statutes”" - but are any of these names used in English? I assume those are just translations from Chinese, and there is no indication any of them is correct. You can keep that sentence, but for each variant name, you should add Chinese characters. Again, it is important to find at least one English language source that refers to "Registration on Migrants Regulations in Taiwan" , and change the name of that article to whatever term is actually used in English. Then you can publish it.

If you cannot find the English name, you should follow the guideline from the instructions I linked above: "Names not originally in a Latin alphabet, such as Greek, Chinese, or Russian names, must be romanized. Established systematic romanizations, such as Hanyu Pinyin, are preferred. " _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

I have addressed all the issues you pointed out, and both articles have been fully published. Taiwan Biancha Liuyu，Nanko Historical and Geographical Society. Please check! Honghaotian (talk) 04:10, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Very good. Few final touches:

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:25, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the additions as you requested. Please check. Honghaotian (talk) 06:31, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:52, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

I wrote an extra credit article，please check it！ Honghaotian (talk) 01:58, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Well done, extra credit will be awarded. Please remember to do the following for your articles:

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:59, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

The issues you pointed out have been corrected. Please check. Honghaotian (talk) 03:32, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. I recommend translating more content to English or Chinese for extra credit, if you want A+, since it seems you did not complete the weekly edits obligatory homework most weeks (see syllabus). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:04, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

If you want to know your grade estimate quickly, please link your blog posts here and I'll grade them shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:05, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Here is the link to my blog. Please help me estimate my grade. Thank you. Honghaotian (talk) 03:38, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian You have linked only a single blog post. Taking it into the account, your current grade is D (11 in-class activity points, -7 points for missing most weekly editing, 50 points for completing the main project succesfully, 10 points for extra translations and other activities, 2 points for a single blog). If you have completed more blogs, please send me the links to them or two all your blogs by tag or name. You may want to do extra credit translation for additional points to compensate for missing points in class activities and weekly editing homework. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

If I want to get an A+, how many blog posts and bonus essays do I need to complete? Honghaotian (talk) 04:26, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

These are two new Wikipedia articles I created: Dong Yanping，Liu Jintang. I also wrote a blog post about them 1234Please help me check. Thank you！ Honghaotian (talk) 13:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Two more articles should suffice. But take your time to proofread them carefully, and ensure they have reliable and well formatted references.

In Liu Jintang, the final section (Style) is missing references for some content.

In Dong Yanping, the second refs should be formatted better (" [A Centennial Biographical Encyclopedia of the Kuomintang]. xy980.com"). Is this an online encyclopedia or a paper one? If it is a paper one, it needs page numbers, ISBN, publisher, etc. Also, remember, if the source is in Korean or Chinese or another not-English language, please use both the Korean or Chinese (as applicable) and English titles. Use Chinese or Korean title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:57, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

The issues you raised have been addressed and revised. Please check. Honghaotian (talk) 14:29, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed two additional bonus articles. 1，2.Please check them, thank you！ May I ask what my current grade is? Honghaotian (talk) 12:20, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Honghaotian Very good. Your grade is A+ now. Minor issue to fix: in Lü_Gongwang#Further_reading (and similar cases in your other articles), if you cite a book or another source whose original title is in Chinese, that Chinese title with Chinese characters should be in the "title" parameter, while the English title should be moved to the "translated title" parameter. Please update your articles accordingly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:54, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

I have revised the question you raised，please check！ Honghaotian (talk) 04:19, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Final-SHAO TIANYI

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I would also like to confirm my final grade for the courses. This semester, my group and I completed four major translation assignments. 1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yeomll 2.https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/女性主義歷史 3.https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/China_Movie_Channel 4.https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lei_Feng In addition, to earn extra credit, I personally completed three additional translations on collective intelligence. 1.墨西哥LGBT權益 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/墨西哥LGBT權益#对同性关系的承认 2.比屬剛果 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/比屬剛果#殖民者經濟政策 3.非洲奴隸買賣 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/非洲奴隸買賣 This is the link to my personal blog. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06067316191379474362 Please let me know if there's anything I didn't do well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yeomll (talk • contribs) 18:23, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yeomll Here's the feedback for your work:

1) User:Yeomll - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 - you need to publish your article. Please follow the steps below.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to English, please read User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator and Wikipedia:Translation. Excellent and in-depth guide to translation and how you can even earn money for this (if you want to continue with this after the course is finished) is also available here. When translating to Chinese, read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Internal link helper .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this (for help in Chinese, see zh:Help:页面重命名, for Korean, see ko:위키백과:문서 이동). If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE (zh:维基百科:合并页面, ko:위키백과:문서 합치기) instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

2) You may want to complete additional translations for extra credit to compensate for points you lost by not completing the obligatory weekly wiki editing homework for Collective Intelligence class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. The above applies in smaller way to your other projects; for example your English translations don't have any interwiki links to zh wiki, and are missing talk page templates for attributing translation and educational activity. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,I have already published the content in my personal sandbox as you requested, and added interlanguage links. 韩国的歌剧 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/韩国的歌剧I have also added a template on the talk page of the English translated article to indicate the translation.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Lei_Feng.Please check it! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yeomll (talk • contribs) 07:45, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Jo YeSeul (조예슬)

Dear Professor,

I apologize for the delay in submitting my article for Deadline 5.

My article is now mostly finished and ready for your review.

Here is the link. Please let me know your feedback when possible. Thank you Jo YeSeul (talk) 06:48, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul I see progress, but there are still many issues to fix. Most of the article is not translated. The navigational template is at the top - it should be at the bottom. Translation and education templates should be on the talk page (not at the bottom article).

When adding links, ensure that all links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

Please let me know when you fix these issues; I recommend doing it ASAP. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:56, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I sincerely apologize for the delay. I spent a lot of time carefully translating the entire article and making all the necessary corrections you pointed out. I've now completed the full translation, moved the navigational template to the bottom, and relocated the translation and education templates to the talk page. I also checked all the links to ensure they match the original article and point to relevant articles on the Korean Wikipedia wherever available. Please let me know if there’s anything else I should revise. here Jo YeSeul (talk) 16:16, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul Very good, I see substantial progress. You can now publish your work following the instructions below - let me know when you do so:

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I am writing to inform you that I have completed the translation of the article on "Bande dessinée" from English to Korean. Following your feedback, I have made the necessary revisions and have successfully moved the article to the mainspace.

Thank you for your guidance and support throughout this process. Best regards. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B0%B4%EB%93%9C_%EB%8D%B0%EC%8B%9C%EB%84%A4 Jo YeSeul (talk) 05:39, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Additionally, I have also translated the “Dehumanization (expand :ko:비인간화)” article that you previously recommended. You can find it on my sandbox page here

I am striving to earn extra points through my efforts. Thank you for your consideration. Jo YeSeul (talk) 06:09, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jo YeSeul Your contribution was rejected by the Korean reviewer @Ykhwong and has been moved to ko:초안:밴드 데시네. Please ask them what needs to be improved; in the meantime, please follow the advice below:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

You can improve the other article for extra credit, but please do so after fixing the first one. Please try to complete your extra credit work in the next two days, as the final grading deadline is soon. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:17, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final-WU WENHAO

Dear Professor,

I’m currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

For the main Wikipedia translation assignments, I worked on the following two articles (Chinese → English):

·Real estate in China ·Industry of China

Extra credit translations 14 (Chinese → English):

·Chongqing Normal University·Chongqing Jiaotong University·Linyi University·Liaocheng University·Jishou University·Shandong Normal University·Sichuan Fine Arts Institute·North University of China·Guangxi Normal University·Chongqing Medical University·Sichuan International Studies University·Chongqing Technology and Business University·Lanzhou Jiaotong University·Henan University of Science and Technology

Here are the links to the 16 weekly blog posts that I completed on time.：Link

The rest of the assignments have already been submitted on LMS. Thank you for reviewing them, and I truly appreciate your guidance throughout the semester. Wishing you a pleasant and relaxing summer break!

Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 07:24, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Wuwenhao19960507 Very good. I am still calculating grades for the EL class; the grade for the CI class for you is A+, well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:34, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final-WANG YIKE（왕흘가）

Hello professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. My student number is 202104354. Because I am in mainland China, I cannot edit my blogger. This is my editing record,

in Chinese and English.

This is an article I edited

Tan Zhenlin

This is my additional editing article.

Korean Rock.

Battle of Subei;

Light field camera;

Hope to know my score, thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 08:43, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 I've replied above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:57, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation：SHU YING

Dear professor,I have finished translations of two articles：article1 , article2. I have completed the translation of two articles. The titles of these two articles already exist on the Chinese Wikipedia, so I chose to merge the pages instead of moving them. Now, the "merge" operation has been performed for Article 1, but I'm not sure if the operation is correct. Please check! Syouziiye (talk) 04:19, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye I don't think you've done any merge yet, at least not correctly. You should do it yourself, by improving the existing, publish articles on zh wiki using the content you translated. You should copy and merge the content you translate into the existing article. See how to do it at zh:维基百科:合并页面

For example, the media bias - your article 1 - should be at zh:媒體偏見 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:59, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

OK, I tried to merge according to the steps. Article 1 is merged into 媒體偏見 please check if it is correct. Syouziiye (talk) 10:06, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Ok. @Mirfaek, can you double check if this was done correctly? I've identified one problem that I'll ask Syouziiye to fix, but maybe you have some other suggestions? TIA!

Please fix your red links so that they are green or blue-red. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

You should publish (merge) your second article too, after reviewing mine and Mirfaek's comments. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:39, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

The first one is nothing close to decent translation, and is way too long for me to give a thorough comment on how to improve on that (more than 57,000 bytes). I would recommend to read the translation carefully to find any sentences that do not make sense. If you need any helps on that I think it'd be better to reach me on zhwiki.--Mirfaek 04:40, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello, both of these two articles are translated based on the original English Wikipedia. The original articles are quite long. Since "media bias" and "gift economy" already exist on the Chinese Wikipedia and cannot be duplicated when moving, I chose to merge them separately. Regarding the poor translation issues, I have re-edited and revised the first translation. Please check it again. Syouziiye (talk) 06:23, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

I've checked the one in main name page ("Media bias") and it seems pretty good. --Mirfaek 15:39, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

I have changed the red link to blue-red. I have also revised the translation issues raised by Mirfaek. After checking for accuracy, I will operate my second article in this way. Thank you Syouziiye (talk) 06:26, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good; please merge your content (add it to the existing Chinese articles, expanding them) and see what the reviewers on zh wiki say (whether they'll keep your edits or not). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:31, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Ok. I have also revised the translation of the second article at the same time and have merged Article 2 to 礼物经济 as well. Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 16:54, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:13, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional points-LIZIKANG

dear professor To earn additional points for the Collective Intelligence course, I have completed an extra translation of this article. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 10:14, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 Good, but I recommend for your next projects to try to translate content to zh wiki, while I and other reviewers look at the problems with your translations to English. Regarding this translation: it needs WP:CATEGORIES, it needs interlangage connection to its Chinese original, and history should be rewritten from bullet points into prose. Also, much of the article is unreferenced: the lead has no refs, many paragraphs in history have no refs. This article could be rejected as well due to poor references, I am afraid. As the class guidelines clearly state, only referenced content should be translated for our assignment.

For now, I recommend you look at the list of articles at Wikipedia:Good articles and choose something to translate from it to Chinese. If you want to translate to English, then chose an article from the Chinese equivalent of that list instead. They are almost guaranteed to be error-free. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:23, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I found an article in a good one for translation. Please check it out.1 Lzk15038863666 (talk) 14:24, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lzk15038863666 Good. You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia.Then I can review its status on zh wiki. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:04, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. I've updated your Collective Intelligence score to B to reflect your ongoing efforts. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

I apologize for my oversight of this semester's scores, and I will be more careful in subsequent courses. Thank you so much, Professor. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 02:16, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - NGUYEN KIM CHI

Dear Professor,

I am NGUYEN KIM CHI, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished my final assignment. In the translation about influencer maketing that you recommended. I have finished the translation but I can't link to the original. I will add more extra credit translations tomorrow. I would also like to confirm my final grade for the courses. Please check for me.

1. Influencer
2. Influencer Maketing

NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 15:26, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12 I see that your first article is published at vi:Người ảnh hưởng, good. Good, but some fixes are needed:

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page vi:Bản_mẫu:Bài_dịch

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Vietnamese Wikipedia, use vi:Bản mẫu:interlanguage link

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

Your second article needs to be published on Vietnamese Wikipedia; right now it is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:17, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. You need extra credit to reach a passing (D) grade, since you have missed the weekly editing homework entirely, and I could locate only two of your obligatory weekly blogs (if you made others, please link them here). Assuming you can finish your main project (second translation), I estimate you will need to translate at least three more articles to have enough points to get a D. Please not you have only two days to complete and report any extra credit work. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:20, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional translation work - KIM JUHEE (김주희)

I have translated an extra article for additional credit.

Please check it. Thank you.

덴마크 군주제 - 위키백과 Jujuheee0408 (talk) 15:29, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jujuheee0408 Very good, your score for CI class is A. If you want A+, one more translation should be enough. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:22, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

About two translated articles

Hello, Professor, I have completed two translation assignments for this semester and have published them, namely American Century https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%BE%8E%E5%9B%BD%E4%B8%96%E7%BA%AA and Archaeological Anthropology and Interstellar Communications. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%80%83%E5%8F%A4%E5%AD%A6%E3%80%81%E4%BA%BA%E7%B1%BB%E5%AD%A6%E5%92%8C%E6%98%9F%E9%99%85%E9%80%9A%E4%BF%A1 Both articles have been translated from English into Chinese. Please have the professor review them. Thank you. Wanhink (talk) 16:29, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

my name is WANG HAO

wikipedia id is Wanhink Wanhink (talk) 16:31, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Wanhink I still do not see your contend at zh:美國世紀. As I said two days ago: ". Please follow the instructions at zh:Wikipedia:合并页面#方法 and merge your work there. "

Regarding zh:考古学、人类学和星际通信 the following fixes are needed:

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:25, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final----ZHANG LINYUE

Dear Professor,

I am 2021036480 ZHANG LINYUE, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B).

1. I finished expanding my Chinese Wikipedia(The big assignment of article writing), and this is the link to my writing record.

2. This is my group member JIA MENGZHUO's English Wikipedia write-up, this is the link to the write-up record.

3. And I overdid it by editing ten Wikipedias per week, here's the link to my total edits.

Please check it! thankyou!AYAO32269 (talk) 16:37, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@AYAO32269 Very good. Few minor fixes are needed:

• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

Your grade for the class should be A+. Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:28, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation——JIN CHUYUE

Hello Professor, I am a student majoring in Everyday Life and Social Structure。I have completed the following two articles translated from English to Chinese.I'm sorry for submitting so late.I have completed and attached the article now. Please take a look when you have time. If you are still able to accept it, I would greatly appreciate it.Thank you for your guidance and assistance all along.— Preceding unsigned comment added by 小太阳888 (talk • contribs) 08:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@小太阳888 Your work is still unfinished - this is where it should've been one or two months ago. You need to do the following to progress to the next stage and finish it:

First, I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia and fix any code issues that arise from copying.

Second, Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links (see also: zh:维基百科:格式手册/链接). Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Internal link helper .

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this (for help in Chinese, see zh:Help:页面重命名).

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:35, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Maria Trubnikova

Rhinemaidens

Final translation- WANG YIKE & LIU JUNYU

Dear professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence in Practice. My teammate LIU JUNYU @LJY2455and I have completed the article translated from zh to en and from en to zh. Please check it out. Alexk27 (talk) 11:43, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good. I provided some feedback to your teamates above a few days ago. I'll also ping @Mirfaek since at that time they said the translation quality was low. Has it improved now (since it seems the article in Chinese was republished)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:55, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

I have made the changes. Thank you for your teaching this semester. Alexk27 (talk) 04:05, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good. Your score for the main project is very good (max points). However, you have not participated in in-class activities or completed the obligatory weekly editing, which lowers your grade significantly. I recommend doing extra credit translations for extra points. If you want to receive a quick grade estimate, please link your blog posts here, and I'll grade them early. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:38, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Ok professor, because I was invited to a wrong blogger link, so I can't upload my additional editing records in blogger. Alexk27 (talk) 11:54, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 If you were invited to a wrong blog, you could have created blogs there. Please send me a link to any blogs you have created during our course, if any, and I'll update your score accordingly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:45, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Because I added the wrong blogger link, I hope you can check my edit history. Both in Chinese and English.

This is my extra article,

Battle of Subei

Light field camera

I'm sorry, but I'm in mainland China now, so editing is a little difficult for me, but I still hope to get a better score，hope to get your reply. Alexk27 (talk) 07:32, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Here is another bonus article:

Korean Rock Alexk27 (talk) 08:34, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 I am afraid that almost all of the content of Battle of Subei is unreferenced. As our syllabus and assignment instructions stress, remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

The same is true for the content you've added to zh wiki here

I appreciate your effort, and it will be recognized to some extent, but to improve your score above passing (D) you need to show that you learned key aspects we are studying, such as the importance of referencing and verifying information properly.

I have improved your score to passing (D).

Regarding your translation at zh:韩国摇滚, I'll ask @Mirfaek / @Sohryu Asuka Langley Not Shikinami if it reads well. When translating to Chinese, remember to read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

In addition, when you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:43, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

The translation is overall good, but I'd like to address a few minor problems:

• “尽管如此，随着留声机在中产阶级家庭的普及、盗版外国音乐的流传以及咖啡厅里摇滚与流行音乐的演奏，摇滚乐迷数量增加，摇滚音乐文化的基础逐渐建立” is very awkward. I'd rewrite it to “由于这一年带留声机开始在中产阶级家庭普及，外国音乐通过盗版唱片流入韩国国内，咖啡厅内也开始演奏摇滚音乐，摇滚乐迷人数增加，为后续文化发展奠立了基础”
• “进入大学或成年” this one is because the original sentence ("became college students or adults") is BS. What you mean "or"? Is there a choice between attending college and being adult? Rewrite it as “长大成人”.
• Ska-punk does have a Chinese translation 斯卡朋克;
• “如今，韩国大部分音乐推广活动在线上进行，主流关注较少，专辑可供下载。”, you do not interpret the original sentence correctly, it should be “如今，韩国大部分音乐推广活动在线上进行，来自主流媒体的关注和可供下载的专辑都较少”;
• What's the Chinese name for Shin Jung-hyeon? He has two different names “申正贤” & “申重铉” in your article.

I think after fixing these the article would be good to go.--Mirfaek 02:58, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your advice, I have corrected the errors. Alexk27 (talk) 03:39, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

OK, Professor, I have modified some of the translations that are not smooth as requested by the administrator and I also found some and modified them myself. Korean rock: Revision history.I added the template to the talk page as you said, Talk:Korean rock but because I am in China, I can only edit the Chinese Wikipedia now, but I still hope to get a better score. Alexk27 (talk) 03:47, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I asked my friend to upload my article on the incorrect blogger. Here is the link to my article! Please give me a higher score! Alexk27 (talk) 08:08, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Alexk27 Good. Now that we located your blogs, your score has been improved to B. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:33, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (week5) - Kim Donggun(김동건)

Dear Mr.Piotr,

This is Donggun Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished translating two of the three topics I chosen, I have attached the link to it here and here, please check it out.

Best Regards, Donggun Kim Hy donggunkim (talk) 05:59, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hy donggunkim Good, you are almost ready. Please follow these steps to publish your articles:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:33, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor

I just found out that the first and second article I translated has already been translated in another class.

Could you please advise me on how to proceed?

Thank you.

Best regards, Donggun Kim Hy donggunkim (talk) 04:40, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hy donggunkim ko:저작권 트롤 can still be expanded by you, there is no problem.

As for the other article, I have already awarded you partial credit based on your effort; to get more points you can chose and translate another topic. How about Book censorship in Canada? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:38, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final-CUI ZAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure (Class B) and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I would also like to confirm my final grade for the courses.

This semester, I completed four main translations and seven additional articles for extra credit. All of my submissions were successfully published, and none of them have been reverted or moved to draft space.

Here are the links to the articles:

Main translation projects (4):

• 帽子
• 网络购物
• 转蛋
• 冰淇淋

Extra credit translations (7):

• 每日电讯报
• 肌肉记忆
• 利口乐
• 蛇羹
• YUNA (音乐奖)
• 噩梦的倒影

I have also submitted all required weekly blog posts, which can be found here:

🔗 CUI ZAN blog archive

Lastly, I sent you an email titled “Semester Attendance Verification Photo (CUI ZAN)” regarding attendance for Everyday Life and Social Structure (1:00–2:30 PM). Please kindly let me know if anything was missing or unclear.

Thank you so much for your guidance throughout the semester! Cuicuizan (talk) 08:12, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Very good. The grade for EL class is being calculated. Your grade for the Collective Intelligence class is A. I suggest one more small translation to push it to A+. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:18, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

Thank you for the feedback and the chance to improve my grade.

As you suggested, I have just added an additional translation to strengthen my portfolio. You can see the new paragraph here:

• The Daily Telegraph

Please let me know if any further adjustments are needed. I appreciate your guidance and hope this extra contribution will meet the A+ standard for the Collective Intelligence class.

Thank you again for your time and support. Cuicuizan (talk) 10:33, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Very good; your score for both classes is now A+ _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:45, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Wikipedia editors - CHENYUNLIN

Professor, hello. This is my bonus Wikipedia editing assignment. Please check it out. https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%8D%97%E6%98%8C%E5%A4%A7%E5%AD%A6&action=history Songyi77 (talk) 19:02, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77

Unfortunately, your addition was rejected by the Chinese reviewers, who wrote that "Add content that violates verifiable guidelines: Wikipedia content must be verifiable from reliable sources. Please contribute based on secondary sources, avoid original research, and list the sources in the text." This is in line with the instructions for our assignment, in which I wrote: Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability.

That said, @Ghostingb: some of the content you have rejected did seem to have had references? Was there something else wrong with? Can some of it be accepted, or is it all bad? Thank you for your review! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:31, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

I'm sorry but all source are flawed as he obviously just provides some random websites, not article etc as the source.

He did something like using the BBC as reference of US bombing Iran, but instead of providing the article reporting the strikes, he provided www.bbc.com as reference. Ghostingb (talk) 07:22, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2Forgot to mention before, but now @Songyi77 has been given a lv3 warning for sourcing problem and a lv3 warning for adding imapproperate external links in zh wiki, I afraid he might be blocked if he continue to do similar things...... Ghostingb (talk) 11:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ghostingb I am sorry to hear about that, and I apologize for the trouble my student is causing.

The assignment requires them to make constructive edits, and translate content that is reliably referenced. For now I'll caution @Songyi77 to only add content that is sourced to a reliable source on English Wikipedia, since they seem to be unable to do it themselves. For any extra credit activity, only translate content - with references from an article on this list: Wikipedia:Good articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:49, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional Translation for Extra Points - Yeonseo Koo (구연서)

Dear Professor,

I have translated these articles to improve my Collective Intelligence in Practice grade.

Sexualization and sexual exploitation in K-pop to K팝의 성적 대상화와 성적 착취 (3692 words)

History of the Republic of Korea Navy to 대한민국 해군의 역사 (3693 words)

Social media use in education to 교육에서의 소셜 미디어 활용 (3597 words)

Social media use by businesses to 기업의 소셜 미디어 활용 (3828 words)

Social media and identity to 소셜 미디어와 정체성 (4141 words)

Response bias to 응답 편향 (4103 words)

I had 80 points (B), but with the additional 30 points, I have 110 points (A+).

Please confirm. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 03:18, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yeonseo Koo Very good, your grade for both classes is now A+ _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

==Final---JIA MENGZHUO

Dear Professor,

I am 2021047629 JIA MENGZHUO, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B).

1. I finished expanding my English Wikipedia write-up, this is the link to my writing record.

2. This is my group member ZHANG LINYUE's Chinese Wikipedia(The big assignment of article writing), and this is the link to the write-up record.

3.Final additional edits confirmation: I made a total of 164 additional edits. I made 123 additional edits on the English Wikipedia. Please check. I made 41 additional edits on the Chinese Wikipedia. Please check.

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your guidance and support throughout this semester.Zhuo1221 (talk) 04:47, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Your grade should be A+, I'll confirm it tommorrow _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Points- TRAN THUY NGA

Hello professor. I am Tran Thuy Nga -2022024920- everyday Life and social Structure class A. i have written 1 blog: http://socwiki2025.blogspot.com/2025/06/week-5-sting-performance-deception-and.html Please check it. 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 09:11, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 Good. Your grade for that class is A+, well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:10, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional Translation for Extra Points - Ljhwa (이진화)

Dear Professor,

In order to improve my grade for the Collective Intelligence course, I have translated additional articles.

If the points from these articles (21 points) are included, my overall score would increase from 83 (B) to 104 (A+).

Below are the links to the articles I have translated.

COVID-19 misinformation by China (3368 words) : en / ko

Censorship by Facebook(2312 words) : en / ko

Chinese information operations and information warfare (4411 words) : en / ko

Women and smoking (4262 words) : en / ko

LGBTQI health in South Korea (4032 words) : en / ko

Please check it. Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 09:29, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ljhwa Very good. Your grade for both classes should be A+

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:19, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional Translation for Extra Points - Gayeong Kim (김가영)

Hello Professor,

I’m Gayeong Kim (2021026899), taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class A. Below are two articles where I have supplemented the existing Korean translations:

Dimensionality reduction : en / ko

Data processing : en / ko

Additionally, I have translated an English article that previously had no Korean version, and added the Korean language to the original English article:

Data integration : en / ko

I would appreciate it if you could review them. Best regards, Gayeong Kim (김가영) Gayeongkim0 (talk) 12:28, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeongkim0 Very good, your score for that class should be A+

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:20, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6 (week 10) - Kim Nahee (김나희)

Hello, professor. I'm Nahee Kim who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. Here is my feedback Link. Naheekim2025 (talk) 17:13, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

I missed the deadline, so I’ve added my feedback as a comment on the main Wikipedia page instead. Naheekim2025 (talk) 17:58, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Kim Myeongjun (김명준)

Hello professor, I have provided feedback on Kim Donggun post 'Copyright troll'. Here is my feedback link Myeong220 (talk) 10:30, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220 It's very late for your friend to find it useful. In either case, please copy it from their sandbox page to their main user talk page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:58, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

The friend I originally left feedback on hasn't posted the main page and he hasn't done it until Deadline 8 yet, so I left feedback on another friend's main page. Here is the link. Myeong220 (talk) 18:05, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Kim Jae Jun (김재준)

Hello, I have provided feedback on Lee Dong Gyu post 'The Better Angels of Our Nature'. Here is my feedback link. Kimjaezzang (talk) 05:41, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

I'm sorry for the late submission. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kimjaezzang (talk • contribs) 05:42, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Good. When you leave feedback on Korean Wikipedia, it should be not just in English, but also in Korean. Please fix that (add Korean feedback). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

I have added Korean feedback, this is my link, please check, thank you. Kimjaezzang (talk) 23:24, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation---JIANG SIYU 강사우

Hello Professor, I have completed the Chinese to English task for the part I am responsible for. Here is the link, as well as the English to Chinese task. Here is the link. Please ask if it is possible to upload it.. Thank you for watching. JIANG SIYU (talk) 15:10, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Good, but fixes are needed.

There are numerous paragraphs in your English translation that are unreferenced. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Proofread your article with Grammarly or similar tool. Numerous headings begin with lower case letter or use strange symbols 《》 - those issues need to be fixed. Also, remove 《》 from the text, and replace them with symbols commonly used in English ("" or similar).

Histories section should be History, and needs to be rewritten into prose; it should not be in bullet points.

For both articles, here's additional commentary:

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I have revised the article as per your instructions, adding references and blue links, and correcting any errors. I have also published the article; here is the link. However, the Chinese translation cannot be published; here is the link to the sandbox. Thank you for your review. JIANG SIYU (talk) 15:26, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU To publish your Chinese article, you have to fix the translation problems. Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. Please ask the Chinese reviewers to publish your article after you improve the quality of the prose in your article. @Mirfaek may be able to give you a few pointers (TIA). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Your English article was rejected by the reviewers due to poor translation. Please revise it. If you are unclear what needs to be fixed, ask the reviewer who rejected it to give you a specific example or two. I hope you followed my prior advice and proofread your article with Grammarly or similar tool? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 16:01, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I used Grammarly, but it did not detect any errors（Grammarly：Looking good so far）. What should I do now? I am currently re-attempting the Chinese translation and have contacted the administrator to confirm the unreasonable parts. I am now further checking and making revisions. Thank you for your reply. JIANG SIYU (talk) 16:26, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU When a reviewer declines your work, but you do not understand why, you should talk to them and ask them for feedback, just like we practiced in our module on communucation on Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 17:05, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. Over the past two days, I have been in close communication with several administrators and have actively completed the relevant adjustments, including the changes you mentioned. Both documents have now been reviewed and approved by the administrators and have been uploaded. Please check them. This is the link for Chinese to English translation, and this is the link for English to Chinese translation. In addition, I would like to confirm the final grades for this semester. I look forward to your review and response. Have a nice day. JIANG SIYU (talk) 03:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Mirfaek Is zh:旅行者 (电视剧) indeed acceptable? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:09, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Yes.--Mirfaek 10:22, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Please show me where you have been discussing your English article? I don't see any sign of improvement; please explain how you improved it. I still see unreferenced paragraphs and unusual symbols like 《》.

Another section heading is titled "Progra" - you obviously have not proofread this.

In fact, I see you reintroduced errors we fixed before, such as reinsanting bullet points in the history section (which is incorrectly titled "Histories"). The infobox was also moved lower, which is incorrect. Wikipedia:Categorization is missing. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:15, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have revised the English translation of the Chinese article once again. Here is the link. Please review it to confirm if it meets the standards and if I may proceed with publication. I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused due to my incomplete understanding, and I appreciate your review. JIANG SIYU (talk) 07:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU I see progress, but there is still more that needs to be done. Please go through what I wrote point by point; if something is unclear - ask. For example, I you still haven't changed the bad heading "Histories" and converted the bullet point list to prose. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:42, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, thank you for your reply. I have made the revisions you requested. Here is the link. Please take a look and let me know if there is anything you are not satisfied with. I apologize for taking up your time during your vacation. Thank you very much. JIANG SIYU (talk) 14:19, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Good. You can now republish your article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:34, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, In addition to the two regular translation assignments, these are the extra credit assignments I have completed for the two courses this semester. One is a variety show that was very popular in China last year; here is the link, and the other is a very popular modern TV series; here is the link. Please take a look, thank you very much. If the review is approved, would you mind letting me know my current score? JIANG SIYU (talk) 19:46, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Good, but it seems you forgot about this:

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:36, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Also: Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:37, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have completed two additional assignments, bringing the total to four including the one I submitted last night. The translation content this time is about a well-known Chinese film, here is the link, and the Shandong Provincial Bank, which is the bank I am about to join, here is the link. Thank you for your review. JIANG SIYU (talk) 01:00, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Very good. Your score for both classes is now B; you can still submit extra credit until the end of the day. Please make sure to review my comments above and ensure that your new submissions are not rejected. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:43, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

The article is very long, thus I would drop a few suggestions here instead of giving a thorough review:

• Understand what the original article said. If something looks confusing (like this sentence from Slider: "Michio Kaku explains in the appendix of his book, The Future of the Mind, that the Sliders series began 'when a young boy read a book. That book is actually my book Hyperspace, but I take no responsibility for the physics behind that series.'"), try to dig into the reference used in the article. If it still does not make sense, throw it out;
• Try not translating word by word. Due to huge linguistic differences between English and Chinese, it's a better idea to get the meaning of the original sentence and rewrite it in Chinese with your own words. For instance this sentence “在拍摄间隙发生的一场事故中，斯特德曼将一辆沙滩车移至下一个拍摄地点。在移动车辆时，沙滩车翻倒并压伤了他，导致他当场死亡。据斯特德曼的父母说，他的死亡是可以避免的。” sounds awkward, that's because here many expressions necessary in English grammar are redundant in Chinese. I would translate it as “当斯特德曼在拍摄间隙将一辆沙滩车移动至下一个拍摄地点时，车辆不甚翻倒，将其当场压死。斯特德曼的父母说，他的死亡完全可以避免。”
• Double check the choice of words, some words you used are not best fits in the scenario. For instance, the word you chose for "turbulent", “动荡不安”, is usually used to describe the instability of society, economy or political schemes, not a TV cast. I would translate it as “剧组人事变动频繁”

You are most certainly welcomed to come to my talk page if need more helps--Mirfaek 15:55, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@JIANG SIYU Please carefully review the feedback you got here and on zh wiki. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

I have made changes to the entire translation. Please check to see if it meets the standards. I have also communicated with several reviewers, and this is the final result. If you still feel that something is inappropriate, please let me know. Thank you for your attention. JIANG SIYU (talk) 07:45, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (Final) - Kim Myeongjun (김명준)

Dear Mr. Piotr,

This is Kim Myeongjun, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I completed two final translation assignments. Here is first link and second link. Thank you.

Myeong220 (talk) 12:18, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220

Good. Please follow the instructions below to complete your assignment:

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page- ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:59, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Mr. Piotr,

As you said, I added the ko:틀:과제 문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 to the talk page of each article translated.

Please check it out. Thank you. Myeong220 (talk) 19:47, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Myeong220 Very good, your grade is A+. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:46, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Summary of this semester-WU SHUHAN

Dear Professor I am a student in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structures.I will report to you on my Wikipedia editing work this semester. 1.I have completed the translation of two main project articles（en→zn）,The two articles total more than 15,000 words.日本摇滚乐ang劳伦斯·莱斯格 2.10 edits per week this semester: English：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/WSH0927 Chinese:https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/WSH0927 WSH0927 (talk) 14:45, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Very good, your grade is B+.

Please complete the following as well:

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

If you want to improve it further, please translate one or two more Wikipedia articles by the end of today. Good luck, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:50, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Additional bonus translation—CHENYUNLIN

Hello professor, this is a Korean article..https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9E%A5%EC%AF%94%EC%9C%84 Songyi77 (talk) 15:43, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

I have written another English translation bonus article. Please review it.Lighter and Princess Songyi77 (talk) 23:51, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello, Professor. I have completed another bonus English translation assignment. Please check it out.Shuyi Tealicious Songyi77 (talk) 01:16, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Your grade for CI class is now passing (D). Please fix the following issues in your articles:

Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Currently some of your references appear to have been added by AI. Please double check that they are indeed the same as in the original article, and that they verify the content cited.

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Internal link helper .

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:59, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - NGUYEN KIM CHI

Dear Professor,

I am NGUYEN KIM CHI, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished my final assignment. For the main Wikipedia translation assignments, I worked on the following 11 articles:

1. Trí tuệ nhân tạo trong giáo dục

2. Gian lận học thuật

3. Dịch vụ làm bài thuê

4. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phát_triển_Đạo_đức

5. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chủ_nghĩa_vị_lai_châu_Phi

6. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stan_Twitter

7. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tư_duy_t%C3%ADch_cực_độc_hại

8. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doomscrolling

9. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hội_chứng_anh_hùng

10. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blackface_kỹ_thuật_số

11. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cottagecore

And extra credit translations:

1. https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thành_viên:NGUYENKIMCHI12/_Nháp11

I have also posted some more blogs. Please check them out for me. https://www.blogger.com/blog/posts/6200238162061299902?q=NGUYEN%20KIM%20CHI

I would also like to confirm my final gradefor the courses. Thank you so much for your guidance throughout the semester!

NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 16:20, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@NGUYENKIMCHI12 Your translations have been marked by the reviewers at Vietnamese wiki as low quality (not proofread). Please proofred them carefully to avoid getting them rejected. Your grade should be good after you address these problems.

In addition, please do the following:

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page vi:Bản_mẫu:Bài_dịch

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Vietnamese Wikipedia, use vi:Bản mẫu:interlanguage link

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:04, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Blog resubmission—CHENYUNLIN

Dear Professor, his is my resubmitted blog，Very sorry, I forgot to upload it before.

https://www.blogger.com/blog/posts/6200238162061299902?q=CHEN%20YUNLIN Songyi77 (talk) 16:26, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Your grade has been updated to C, good job. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:09, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline4(week5) - Kim Jaejun(김재준) (modify)

I’ve completed the additional translation and added references throughout the text.

All paragraphs now include citations, and I’ve inserted relevant blue links as well as appropriate categories.

This is the link to my sandbox — I’d be grateful if you could take a look.

Apologies for the late modify. Kimjaezzang (talk) 01:57, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Good, you are ready to publish. Please complete the following steps:

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this (for help in Chinese, see zh:Help:页面重命名, for Korean, see ko:위키백과:문서 이동). If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE (zh:维基百科:合并页面, ko:위키백과:문서 합치기) instead.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page, ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:16, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 12)--계해운

Dear Professor, regarding the course "Daily Life and Social Structure" (Class A, 10:30-12; 00), this is the article I translated: Zheng Peimin, Zhang Rongsuo, Touching China Annual Person of the Year Award. The following are my additional bonus points: Zhang Qiandong, Zhong Qirong, Xu Benyu, Wang Xuan, Liu Shuwei, Niu Yuru, Janis Chan, Du Fuguo, Xu Guoyi, Wang Shunyo, Lou Xia. Please check it. Thank you. Lrxx123 (talk) 12:38, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Very good, I will award you extra credit.

. Few touch ups are needed:

• When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.
• When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:08, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, Thank you for your feedback. I’ve now added both the {{ Educational assignment }} and the Template:Translated page to the article's talk page, as you advised. May I kindly ask what my current grade is? I’d like to know if I should continue working on extra credit to aim for an A+. @Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 06:47, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 I have yet to grade the final, but considering the amount of English-language extra credit translations you finished, I think your grade will be good, unless you skipped most other written assignments, or scored very poorly on them. Your grade is already A just based on your Wiki contributions. Very good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, Thank you for your kind message! I’m really glad to hear that my Wikipedia contributions are being recognized. I’m aiming for an A+ if possible, so I wanted to ask if it would be helpful for me to continue contributing more translated articles or improve existing ones. I’d love to do a bit more if there’s still time and opportunity.@Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 07:34, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Yes, you can continue editing Wikipedia, and you can choose any topics you like or think will help you build your Electronic portfolio _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:43, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, Thank you again for your encouragement and the opportunity to continue contributing to Wikipedia. As part of my ongoing effort to aim for an A+ and enrich my electronic portfolio, I’ve recently completed and published two more English Wikipedia translation articles: Du Junhui and Wei Kemei. I have also properly added the {{Educational assignment}} andTemplate:Translated page templates on each article's talk page, following your previous instructions. I will continue working hard and contributing more if there’s still time and opportunity.@Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 15:57, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Great work on these articles! Really enjoyed Du Junhui; I'm fascinated by connections between China and Korea during this period. Piotrus thanks for coordinating all this. grapesurgeon (seefooddiet) (talk) 02:53, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Grapesurgeon Glad to see someone appreciates the work we do here (I am getting grilled at ANI at this very moment by someone who does not... :P). Thanks for your kind words, and any feedback or copyediting you feel like offering. It is always very appreciated! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:21, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m really happy to hear you enjoyed the Du Junhui article. Knowing that others are interested in the same topics is always encouraging.@Grapesurgeon Lrxx123 (talk) 04:12, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Very good job, I am grading your class now and I expect your grade to be A+. Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:23, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, thank you again for your continued support and encouragement. I’m very happy to hear that my grade might be A+. May I kindly ask if it has been finalized? @Hanyangprofessor2 Lrxx123 (talk) 04:14, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Dear Professor, Just checking in. Has my final grade been confirmed? I’m hoping to know if I received an A+. Thank you again. Lrxx123 (talk) 02:58, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lrxx123 Yes, it's A+. We will post it when we trouble shoot the LMS. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation - TRAN THUY NGA

Hello professor, I am Tran Thuy Nga(2022024920) - student of class 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' (class A). I have completed the wiki project and published it. Please check my project. Thank you.

project 1 project 2 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 16:26, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 Good. Please follow the instructions below to complete your assignment:

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page- ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean).

Do the same in Vietnamese, following the template's interlanguage link to locate the Vietnamese versions to use there.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

However, please note that due to not completing homework (weekly wiki edits and blogs, as described in the syllabus) your score is below passing (F). If you completed any blogs, please link them here. You can do extra credit translations until Monday to raise your grade, but remember that it has to be of good enough quality to be accepted by local reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 17:09, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@짠 튀 응아 PS. Please see the warning messages you got in Vietnamese. Apparently, your content is poorly translated and not proofread. Please fix it to ensure your grade is unchanged.  _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:33, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

I have moved the entire article to my draft space for further editing and improvement. 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 03:24, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit - Subject: Participation Report: Ukraine’s Cultural Diplomacy Month

I participated in Ukraine’s Cultural Diplomacy Month, and contributed Petrykivka 장식화 with approximately 2500 bytes and scored 15 points. Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 01:52, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo The link is broken - please fix it so I can review it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:14, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/Petrykivka_장식화 this one ! Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 03:29, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kiim Miin Joo Good, but you need to the following to fix it (after that, your grade will be A+)

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page, ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:06, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Weeks 11-12)-CHEN SIYU(진사우)

I'm CHEN SIYU taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia. I have completed four main translation projects (from English to Chinese), all of which have been successfully moved to public Wikipedia pages. Here are the links: 咖啡的文化 韩国偶像 南印度文化 泰国街头小吃 If you have any feedback or suggestions, I’ll be happy to make further improvements. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 08:41, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004

Good. Please fix the following:

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Also: Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:11, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

As you said, I have added these two related templates to the discussion pages of each Wikipedia article. Please check here for咖啡的文化 韩国偶像 泰国街头小吃 南印度文化Please check it for me, thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 11:41, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 You need to remove the nowiki code preventing the template from working. See here for one fix - please fix the others. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

I revised it according to your request.I have added these two related templates to the discussion pages of each Wikipedia article again.Please check here for咖啡的文化 韩国偶像 泰国街头小吃 南印度文化Please check it for me, thank you～ Chensiyu2004 (talk) 12:59, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Very good. You should remove your signatures too - we don't sign templates, only messages. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:40, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,

I'm CHEN SIYU taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I deleted my signature again as you suggested.Made the final revision.Please check here for咖啡的文化泰国街头美食韩国偶像南印度文化Please check it for me again, thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 02:46, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Very good. I recommend some extra credit translation for extra credit. If you post links to your blog posts here I can calculate your grade shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:23, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor，

I have Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have two courses: Everyday Life and social structure.I took your advice.I want to get extra credits, so I posted my blog link here as you requested.The link is the blog from week 1 to week 16.Please ask the professor to check it. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 14:39, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Very good. Assuming your wiki translations are not declined by the Chinese reviewers, your grade for Collective Intelligence should be A+. Grades for the other class will be calculated early next week. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:58, 19 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor,I just saw the email you sent, and you have calculated grades.I wonder if my grades are the same as those above.thank you Chensiyu2004 (talk) 02:44, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Yes, your score for CI class is A+ _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello, dear professor.I saw your email, and I want to know my grades in this course of daily life. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 03:38, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 Your score for both classes should be A+, well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:07, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation---CHENYUNLIN

Hello professor, I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. The two Everyday Life and Social Structure on collective wisdom in practice have been translated from Chinese to English, and I have revised them according to your requirements. This is an English to Chinese translation. Please check thank you. 114.202.187.95 (talk) 18:25, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Don't forge to sign - only edits made while logged in are credit.

Good progress, but fixes are needed. The section "Produce Camp 2021 Summary" should not be at the bottom. Fix code errors such as broken "Career" section heading, or references (such as text "Weili Culture Archived 2022-01-20 at the Wayback Machine." in the body - that probabl should be a reference.

There are numerous paragraphs in your English translation that are unreferenced. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Proofread your article with Grammarly or similar tool.

For both articles, here's additional commentary:

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:17, 17 June 2025 (UTC)

Okay, I have published an English Wikipedia article. Please take a look.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhang_Xingte Songyi77 (talk) 20:46, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Your article is not yet ready for the publication; it will be moved back to your sandbox soon unless you fix the issues I've mentioned above. You skipped fixing pretty much all the issues I've raised. Your primary job is to translate the article properly, publishing it too early wastes the time of everyone concerned. Please fix the above issues immediately. That also includes completing your translation. Your article has just 3 citations, whereas the original Chinese has over 10. They all need to be copied over. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:36, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

ok, I have added citations as per your request, but I'm not quite clear on how to add categories. I hope the professor can provide some guidance.Here is the link I have modified.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhang_Xingte Songyi77 (talk) 06:18, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Categories can be added after publication. First, some issues need to be fixed:

• Your reference should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references. Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service).
• Please add references to paragraphs that don't have them. As per our syllabus and assignment instructions, all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).
• please fix the issues I've raised in my review on the 17th. I still see some have not been resolved, clearly indicating you did not proofread the article. It cannot be accepted for publication until you fix all the issues I mention above.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:29, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

This is the Chinese article I translated, which has been modified by you and includes some citations and blue links. Please have the professor check it out.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Songyi77/Sandbox Songyi77 (talk) 06:23, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia, fix all links, references, and other code issues that arise from working on the wrong Wikipedia; and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:25, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

This is my translated English article. I have made the required corrections as instructed. However, I understand that the citations still need to be added, and I will continue working on that. I have also moved the incorrect Chinese translation to my sandbox page on the Chinese Wikipedia, as requested.

Please kindly review it. I will continue to revise and add content. I sincerely apologize and kindly ask for a bit more time.

Chinese version and English version of the article Songyi77 (talk) 14:09, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

This is the Chinese translation article I have already published. Please have the professor review it.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%8E%84%E5%86%85%E6%96%AF%E7%89%B9%C2%B7%E5%85%B0%E6%A0%BC%E6%9E%97 Songyi77 (talk) 20:25, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 I am glad to see you are finishing your main project (translation to zh). Please don't forget about the following:

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

One more translation to zh should make your grade passing (D). Please complete this task today _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:30, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

ok， I have added it to the discussion page of the article. Please have the professor check it out.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3A%E5%8E%84%E5%86%85%E6%96%AF%E7%89%B9%C2%B7%E5%85%B0%E6%A0%BC%E6%9E%97#CHENYUNLIN Songyi77 (talk) 03:40, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Good, now please finish a small additional translation to receive enough extra credit for D grade. Good luck _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:08, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Blog and Weekly Edit--CHEN SIWEN 진사문

Hello Professor,I'm CHEN SIWEN taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure& Understanding Wikipedia.This is my blog for the Understanding Wikipedia course. Please check here.1，2，3，4，5，6，7，Week7 -- Class Discussion，8，9（1），9（2），10，11，12，13，14，15.Then this is my blog for the Everyday Life and Social Structure course. Please check here.1，2.And my Wikipedia weekly editor has already sent this to you before（1）.If possible, I would like to know my grades for these two courses. Thanks. Chensiwen (talk) 07:16, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen Very good. Your grade for the Collective Intelligence class is B+. You can improve it by translating another article or two, but please submit any extra assignments you want me to see by Tuesday. Score for the other class is being calculated. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:53, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor.I saw your email, and I want to know my grades in this course of the Everyday Life and Social Structure. Thank you. Chensiwen (talk) 03:46, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiwen It's A+, well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:09, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (Final) LYU YANGCHENG

Dear Professor,

I have revised the “Protest Songs” article as you pointed out. Specifically, I corrected translation errors (such as changing “Turkey” to “Türkiye”), improved sentence clarity, removed unnecessary translated templates, and reformatted the lists according to Wikipedia standards. I’m also reviewing the “Political Cartoons” article to avoid similar issues.

Moving forward, I will pay closer attention to translation accuracy and Wikipedia editing guidelines, and continue improving the content based on community feedback. If there are still areas that need improvement, I’ll be glad to revise them. Thank you for your continued guidance and support.Thank you for your hard work

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8A%97%E8%AE%AE%E6%AD%8C%E6%9B%B2secondhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%94%BF%E6%B2%BB%E6%BC%AB%E7%95%AB3rdhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BC%97%E9%87%8C%E5%BE%B7%E9%87%8C%E5%B8%8C%C2%B7%E5%B0%BC%E9%87%87%E8%88%87%E8%87%AA%E7%94%B1%E6%84%8F%E5%BF%974thhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%9C%9F%E7%90%86%E4%B8%8E%E6%96%B9%E6%B3%95

Hanyangdaxue (talk) 14:21, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Please see above for issues pointed out by another review (Sohryu Asuka Langley Not Shikinami) and make sure you fixed them as well. Please note that the errors listed are not a comprehensive list but examples.

It's good that you are trying to fix things - keep it up and try to ensure your work is spotless by the time the class is finished. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:09, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. I said this before, but: When translating to Chinese, read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:11, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I have retranslated and revised the two articles — Political Cartoon and Protest Song. May I kindly ask you to review them again at your convenience? Thank you very much for your time and guidance.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8A%97%E8%AE%AE%E6%AD%8C%E6%9B%B2https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%94%BF%E6%B2%BB%E6%BC%AB%E7%95%ABThank you, Professor Hanyangdaxue (talk) 04:32, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Help a friend ask for grades.

Dear professor.Because my friend returned home early, she saw the email and wanted me to ask about her grades for the daily life class.Her Wikipedia name is Ryuthefang The student number is20230999889，her name Is LIU YINGTONG，thank you~ Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:12, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Chensiyu2004 I replied to her @, she is doing well (A+). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:16, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) Hyunseo Nam

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B). I left my feedback after watching your feedback on https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Apple_Criticism(%EC%95%A0%ED%94%8C%EB%B9%84%ED%8C%90)#Article_Translation_Task_Feedback_-_NAM_HYUNSEO here. Please check it. Thank you Hyunseo050907 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 It's very late for your friend to find it useful, but it's better late than never. Please see my feedback above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:17, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B). I left my feedback after watching your feedback once again https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Myeong220/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#Feedback_-_NAM_HYUNSEO Hyunseo050907 (talk) 06:29, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor,

I am currently studying "Daily Life and Social Structure" and "Collective Wisdom Practice". Thank you for your courses this semester. Your knowledge is very helpful to me, broadens my thinking and improves my understanding. Here are my four articles, translated from English to Chinese.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Protest_Songssecondhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%94%BF%E6%B2%BB%E6%BC%AB%E7%94%BBthirdhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BC%97%E9%87%8C%E5%BE%B7%E9%87%8C%E5%B8%8C%C2%B7%E5%B0%BC%E9%87%87%E8%88%87%E8%87%AA%E7%94%B1%E6%84%8F%E5%BF%97fourthhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%9C%9F%E7%90%86%E4%B8%8E%E6%96%B9%E6%B3%95I have completed the weekly editing assignments from Week 2 to Week 16. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/HanyangdaxuePlease review them. Thank you for your hard work. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 01:34, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Good, but your work needs a number of fixes.

First, your work at Protest Songs - Wikipedia was incorrectly published as a separate article. Your task was to expand the existing Chinese Wikipedia article on that topic at zh:政治漫畫. Please follow the instructions at zh:Wikipedia:合并页面#方法 and merge your work there, as has been suggested by the reviewer (@Sohryu Asuka Langley Not Shikinami).

For your other articles, please follow the instructions below:

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Can you add some pictures to the articles? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. I will also ask Chinese reviewer @Mirfaek to double check the quality of your translation, if they have time.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Well, actually, in Chinese Wikipedia, we will use zh:Template:tsl or zh:Template:ilh instead of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi, by the suggestion in zh:MOS:IWL. AromaTake　Talk 03:28, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@AromaTake Thanks, I learned about it few days ago and updated my instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2#Deadline_4_(outline); from next semester we will use the zh-wiki preferred style. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

That looks great!

BTW, since Chinese Wikipedia will redirect namespace in chinese to english one, for example, zh:维基百科:翻译腔 will auto redirect to zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, you can reduce some interwiki link like that. AromaTake　Talk 04:21, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. If you post links to your blogs here, I can give you a quick grade estimate. Make sure to link to a search result listing all your blogs, or list them all one by one. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have organized all my blogs (20 in total) into one long document and uploaded it to Google Docs. You can click the link below to view it:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eAqX7gCQcY104FWvZW_bj2y1Cz5a-71l/edit

My blog URL is http://13181517379.blogspot.com/Thank you, professor. You've worked hard. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 15:15, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Very good. I calculated your grade for Collective Intelligence class - it's A+. Good job. Please monitor your Wikipedia articles and make sure to fix any issues raised by the reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 15:45, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

I would say translations for both articles are unacceptable, and have rollbacked them. I am most certain that these are not carefully checked and very hard to understand. I'd like to give a specific example to support my point: In the "Protest Songs", "Turkey" is translated to “火鸡”, which means the bird, not the nation Türkiye.--Mirfaek 16:07, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Please fix the translation issues that have been raised above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:24, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

Hi sir, I am curious as to how the student's grade is determined when it seems that you personally cannot read Chinese. Before even reading the translated content, there are multiple obvious issues in this student's work. To name a few, in ver 87862024 of :zh:Protest Songs:

1. English title for no reason
2. a = = page title level heading is used
3. the first line is the content of the {{about}} hat note from en:Protest Songs
4. the second line is the image caption for the first image
5. multiple "主條目：", "主要文章：", "另請參閱：", "主詞條：" lines, all translations of {{main}} or {{see also}}, with no actual link to related article
6. image of John Lennon in section zh:Protest Songs#法国 appeared again in section zh:Protest Songs#爱尔兰
7. plain text list, instead of bulleted list used in sections zh:Protest Songs#參見 (see also) and zh:Protest Songs#进一步阅读 (further reading)
8. most if not all references unnecessarily translated

I am almost certain that some form of machine translation, AI or not, was used, with essentially no proofreading afterwards. Allowing students to edit Wikipedia in their native language is very nice, potentially making the process more enjoyable and rewarding for the student, but in this case, it is questionable whether the student have learnt anything, and due to language barriers, you were unable to notice so. Sohryu Asuka Langley Not Shikinami (talk) 05:58, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Sohryu Asuka Langley Not Shikinami Indeed, this is why I am very grateful for feedback from local reviewers like yourself. I try to review the students' English contributions, but many students who take my classes are not sufficiently proficient in English to contribute here (despite my class being in English). You are welcome to offer the feedback to my student in Chinese on zh wiki. Perhaps it would be easier for them to undesrtand (the student in question is one that I am sure relies on machine translation to understand any text we write here anyway). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:23, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

These are my two articles for the Daily Life and Social Structure course. I have thoroughly retranslated both the Political Cartoons and Protest Songs articles. Issues such as translationese and unnatural expressions have been fully revised. Both articles have now been published.

I kindly ask you to review them again at your convenience. Thank you for your continued guidance and support.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%94%BF%E6%B2%BB%E6%BC%AB%E7%95%ABandhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8A%97%E8%AE%AE%E6%AD%8C%E6%9B%B2The following are the articles for the Collective Wisdom course.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BC%97%E9%87%8C%E5%BE%B7%E9%87%8C%E5%B8%8C%C2%B7%E5%B0%BC%E9%87%87%E8%88%87%E8%87%AA%E7%94%B1%E6%84%8F%E5%BF%97andhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%9C%9F%E7%90%86%E4%B8%8E%E6%96%B9%E6%B3%95If there are still areas that need improvement in the article, I sincerely welcome your continued feedback. I will keep revising it to ensure that it meets the quality standards and guidelines of the Chinese Wikipedia.hank you for your guidance and valuable time. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 04:24, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue I see. I'll review them shortly; in the meantime, I have received a warning from the zh wiki reviewers (@Mirfaek) that you are not following their advice. Please make sure to review it carefully and address any issues ASAP. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:10, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

In order to earn extra credit, I have continued my translation work and completed an additional article titled Nietzsche and Philosophy, which has already been published. Across the two courses, I have now translated a total of five articles from English to Chinese.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%B0%BC%E9%87%87%E4%B8%8E%E5%93%B2%E5%AD%A6

Thank you very much for your time and guidance. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:54, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue Did you fix the issues raised concering your previous work? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:38, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - 남현서 NAM HYUNSEO

Professor,I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure B class. I have completed the article translation with your feedbck as required for the Week 5 deadline. Please check the progress here in my https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Hyunseo050907/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Thank you Hyunseo050907 (talk) 04:26, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 I see that your progress has stalled since early May. I provided feedback back then, which I see you have not read or replied to: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_5#Deadline_5(week_9)_:남현서_NAM_HYUNSEO

Your class progress is also reflected in your current score (D) .If you want to improve it, you need to finish your wiki project. The deadline is tomorrow. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:15, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Hyunseo050907/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 I do it with your feedback can you please check? Hyunseo050907 (talk) 06:53, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Hyunseo050907 I am not seeing any improvements; you just removed some content rather than progressing with your translation. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:40, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Bae Jinsu

Hello Professor, this is Bae Jinsu who took the Collective Intelligence class. I have checked my grades. Here are the links to the wiki pages that I completed. Also I translated one more article to English additionally after reading your message. Thank you.

article 1 - https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8F%84%EC%8B%9C%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99

article 2 - https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%84%ED%9A%8D%EC%A0%81_%EA%B5%AC%EC%8B%9D%ED%99%94

extra article - Battle of Yeongpyeong (2002) Jameseugene (talk) 07:12, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jameseugene Your Korean work was graded previously and is already reflected in your grade. Regarding your new English work, you need to do Wikipedia:Merging carefully. You replaced the previous, shorter article with your new content.

But in doing so, you removed valuable information and references that were present in the article, from the Korean name of the event to the gallery.

Your version also contains many errors, such as links to Korean Wikipedia in the casulties section, broken pictures, etc.

Links should be created in this fashion: Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

You need to restore the old version, then carefully, sentence by sentence, and fact by fact, expand it with information from Korean Wikipedia, adding it to the relevant, existing sections or creating new sections when necessary. Old information (content, references) should not be removed unless you are convinced they are wrong. In other words, you shoud not simply replace the old content with your work, you should build upon the old work, improving it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:55, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3) - Jang YuKyung (장유경)

Dear Mr. Piotr, This is Jang Yukyung, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays(Class A). I want to ask a question about topics. Can I translate these two topics from English to Korean?

Artificial intelligence arms race

Boycott of Russia and Belarus

Thank you for taking the time to read this. I have sent the same to your email. Best Regards, Jang YuKyung Jang Yu Kyung (talk) 07:58, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Jang Yu Kyung Yes, you can. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:12, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Kim Nahee (김나희)

Hello professor,I'm Nahee Kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I completed two final translation assignments. Here is first link and second link. Thank you. Naheekim2025 (talk) 17:54, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Good but that deadline has passed, I am afraid it is too late for your friends to benefit from your feedback. Your grade is A, if you want A+ you need to finish your wiki project; right now your drafts are not good enough to be published and I expect they'll be deleted shortly (ko:반(反) 폴란드 감정 , ko:일본 내 반한 정서). You need properly add references and blue links. See instructions below:

Your reference should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references

Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service).

Your reference should be added to the end of a sentence or paragraph that has no references, to verify claims made in it. Right now your reference has been added to the end of the article, where it serves no purpose.

lease carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has no blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page, ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:13, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I accepted the feedback and wrote the reference correctly and left blue links.

Also, I set the category for each article and left both ko:틀:과제문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 in the discussion section.

Please check. Thank you. Naheekim2025 (talk) 08:20, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Naheekim2025 Good, your grade is A+. now. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - LIU JUNYU

Dear professor, I am a student in the class Everyday Life and Social Structures at 10:30am and the class Collective Intelligence in Practice at 2:30pm. I have updated my blog, please check it . Please inform me of the updated score. Thank you very much. LJY2455 (talk) 15:21, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Your score is close to passing; please complete one translation on Wikipedia - this will give you enough points to pass. Please complete this ASAP. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:53, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor, I translated an article, please check it . LJY2455 (talk) 10:43, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@LJY2455 Good, your grade for this course is now D (and for the other course, B). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:29, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3) - Yun ChaeEun (윤채은)

Dear Mr. Piotr,

This is Yun Chae-eun, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A).

I would like to ask for your approval regarding the topics I plan to translate from English to Korean for my Wikipedia project. The two topics are:

1. Censorship by Apple
2. Electronic Frontier Foundation

Would it be okay to translate these articles into Korean?

Thank you for your time and consideration. Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 12:44, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yunchaeeun0810 The first was already translated by another student, but the second is ok. Deadline for any submission, however, is tommorrow. For the second topic, you can directly expand ko:전자 프런티어 재단.

Please make sure to follow the instructions below:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP. As explained in the Help:Translation#Licensing, please explicitly say in your edit summary that your work is a translation, and from which Wikipedia. Next, please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:48, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Final translation-TANG BIYAO

Professor,My article has been published here.And it has already been linked to the original text. Tby0204 (talk) 13:36, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Tby0204 Very good, this should be enough to raise your grade to A+, but please fix the following:

• proofread your work with Grammarly, there are various small issues, such as punctuation problems. In particular, strange stop sign (。) is used in many places instead of a regular stop (.)
• The section titled "Pudu" needs to explain what is "Pudu". What is it? I don't know.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:54, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Can I get the list of participants of your course please?

Hi, sorry to bother you. Unfortunately in zh wiki we got 2 cases of problems related to the participants of your course which raised some concerns of some editors in zh wiki, so may I ask for the list of participants of the course for the editors in zh wiki to do the checking and to provide some possible help for your students please? Thanks 🙏 Ghostingb (talk) 10:07, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ghostingb Of course. The list of participants (usernames) is available on the outreach dashboard, which, together with the list of articles edited (created or expanded) by my students, is available here: User:Piotrus/Educational project results

My apologies for any trouble my students are causing; I hope the positive contributions outweigh any problematic ones. As I've always said, please feel free to block any disruptive students, they should not be treated any differently than normal editors.

I would appreciate pings whenever there is a problem, and I'll try to explain this to the students. Note that the grades are due in few days, so any editing related to this project, good or bad, will cease for few months, since student motivation to edit, in 99% cases, will disappear as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:27, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Wonderful, thanks, I'll let other editors know Ghostingb (talk) 12:48, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

I think most contributions from your students are positive contributions 👍 Ghostingb (talk) 12:56, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ghostingb Thank you for your kind words :) We are also discussing a similar issue here (the problem with translations from Chinese to English done by my students). You may find the discussion interesting - feel free to comment. Some folks think student translations are not a good idea, so I appreciate your positive approach :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:44, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Thanks a lot for your help, the issue is a user named Hanyangdaxue (talk · contribs) edit warring against other users and using machine translation on the page zh:抗议歌曲, we have warned them not to do so, but they came with an IDHT attitude and saying that "google translation is a good translation, not a rough one" [99] -Lemonaka 13:56, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

N.B. the discussion about that on English Wikipedia is on here -Lemonaka 13:58, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lemonaka Again, my apologies. That student, for better or worse, got their grade, so I am pretty sure they'll stop any editing now, assuming they have not been blocked yet _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:22, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Kim Jae Jun (김재준)

Hello Professor,

I’ve completed the translation of the second topic from the exercise book and uploaded it to the Korean Wikipedia. along with the editing history for article.

Editing history for Topic 2

Apologies for the delayed submission. Kimjaezzang (talk) 05:28, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Good, but you need to fix the issues below.

Your translated content has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:08, 15 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I have made further improvements to the article based on your suggestions. I added internal (blue) links, refined the translation for clarity, included a relevant image, and added interlanguage links to the original article. I also added appropriate categories after publishing. This is my sandbox revised, and I uploaded the revised translation article to Wikipedia in Korea.

Editing history for Topic 2

Thank you again for your guidance throughout this process. Kimjaezzang (talk) 13:57, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang I see. But in either case, this is a very small edit; to improve your score to A+ from A you should translaste one new article (you can choose any topic you like). You can finish this activity today, the deadline is 6pm. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:27, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final--Gaoxiaoxia

Hello Professor,

These are my main projects,Wuhai,[100] I revised my Chinese article based on the volunteers' suggestions

These are all my blogs 12345678910 11 12 13 14 1516

These are my other translation articles，Fireworks (game)， Contractual brothers(homosexuality)，The Yellow Prince in Chinese In Korean Babaibiaobin (talk) 05:35, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Very good.

For your article Contractual brothers you need to provide at least one source in English that uses this term ("Contractual brothers"). It also needs to be mentioned in the text - right now you don't use this term outside the name, and this is unacceptable. A name needs to be sourced, too. Otherwise it should use the term qixiongdi (but that also needs an English-language source). Also, please replace the last source, at is is unreliable (Wen Wei Po) and not allowed on Wikipedia.

Please double check that that all of your articles have translation attribution and educational project templates on talk; see instructions below:

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. If you publish it in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

After these fixes, your grade will be A+. Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:17, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor,I put the templates in the talkpage of all my articles Talk:Wuhai，Enforced disappearance

I found more references in English and changed the nameTalk:Sworn Brotherhood（Homosexuality） Babaibiaobin (talk) 08:14, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Also, Professor, I put these two templates in the talk pages of all the articles I translated in your class before (as long as I don’t forget it). Sorry I missed this before. Babaibiaobin (talk) 14:32, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:28, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - LIU ZIYE

Dear Professor, My name is LIU ZIYE 유자엽 2022030428. I’m currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. For the main Wikipedia translation assignments, I worked on the following four articles: 1.中国和平崛起 2.中国反韩情绪 3.工人阶级 4.外貌至上主義 And i hope to know my score, thank you！ Poeyal (talk) 23:34, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

@Poeyal Good, although it would have been much better if you'd have completed your work weeks ago, following our deadlines, rather than yesterday.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Chinese, read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, Izh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引. Perhaps @Mirfaek can see if the translation quality is acceptable?

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use zh:Template:Internal link helper .

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:39, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

I would say all four of them are acceptable.--Mirfaek 03:03, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Your score for the Everyday Life and Social Structure is being calculated.

Your score Collective Intelligence in Practice is F, since I could not locate any evidence you completed most of the obligatory weekly homework editing. Likewise, if you completed any blogs, please link them here and I'll provide you with the grade estimate. For both classes, you have fewer than required class activity points.

If you want to achieve a passing grade (D) for the Collective Intelligence class, you should do more extra credit translations. I estimate that ~5 more will be enough. However, please keep in mind that rushed translation, done without proofreading or wikification (lacking blue links, references, etc.) will be rejected by the reviewers and will not generate any credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

I’ve worked on the following eight articles(zh → en) for extra credit:

Doujiang

Xihua County

1990 Guangzhou Baiyun airport collisions

Zhengzhou Airport Economy Zone

Yinchuan Hedong International Airport

Zhanjiang Wuchuan International Airport

Dunhuang Mogao International Airport

Jiayuguan Jiuquan Airport

And here is the link to all of my blog posts: link

And i hope to know my Everyday Life and Social Structure score

Please let me know if anything is missing. Thank you for the class this semester! Poeyal (talk) 08:55, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Poeyal Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). Some, in fact much, of your translated content is not referenced and as such is mostly useless, both for Wikipedia and for our course.

When translating references, please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

Your grade for Collective Intelligence course, thanks to your wiki edits and blogs, has been improved to C. Your grade for the Everday Life course is A+. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:22, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I understand now that all paragraphs need to be properly referenced, and that non-English sources should include both the original and translated titles in the citation format.

Just to clarify, I translated the content quite closely from the Chinese Wikipedia article, which itself didn't include inline citations for many paragraphs—so that’s why some parts of my translation also lacked references. But I see now that this doesn't meet our project or Wikipedia’s standards.

I’ll go through my edits again and work on fixing the citations. Thank you for pointing it out! Poeyal (talk) 15:33, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Poeyal I understand. The simple rule of thumb is that for any translation, we should choose only content that is referenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:29, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline2 (week3) - Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Dear Professor This is Ryu hoyeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I would like to ask for your approval regarding the topics I plan to translate from English to Korean for my Wikipedia project. The two topics are: “Cannabis in Japan” and “Culutre shock"

Would it be okay to translate these articles into Korean? Ryuhoyeong (talk) 14:49, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Both of these topics have already been translated to Korean. This is the last day of the class, I am afraid it is too late for you to start on this project, given you have not participated in any of our class Wikipedia editing activities before. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:00, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5) - 유호영 Ryuhoyeong

Hello professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). Please check the progress here in my sandbox link 사용자:Ryuhoyeong/연습장 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 Ryuhoyeong (talk) 16:40, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong It is a good start, but I am afraid there's not enough time to finish and grade it. I will improve your grade to C to reflect your last-minute motivation. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:01, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 - Yun ChaeEun(윤채은)

Dear Professor,

I have completed Deadline 3 by adding a citation to the article "영화 검열."  

Here is the diff link to my edit: https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%98%81%ED%99%94_%EA%B2%80%EC%97%B4&diff=cur&oldid=39776033

Thank you for your feedback! Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 16:41, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yunchaeeun0810 I am unsure how useful the sentence you've added is to the article in that particular place; in addition, we are months after this deadline was supposed to be completed. If you want to improve your grade to C, you can try to translate an article of your choice to your Korean Wikipedia sandbox; please show me your work by 6pm today. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:04, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 - Lee Ga Eun(이가은)

Dear Professor, although I’m late, I have completed Deadline 3. Below are the diff link and the article link. Diff : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Minjudang&oldid=prev&diff=1297182842 Article : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minjudang

Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 16:49, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun The page you have edited is a Wikipedia:Disambiguation page. This type of page does not need references. In addition, we are months after this deadline was supposed to be completed. If you want to improve your grade to B, you can try to translate an article of your choice to your English or Korean Wikipedia sandbox; please show me your work by 6pm today _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:08, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Week 4): Haein Lee (이해인)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). I have added the citation after the article content. 1) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=BoyNextDoor&diff=prev&oldid=1297178651 2)https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Music_Bank&diff=prev&oldid=1297181707 Please check. Thank you! Haein Lee (talk) 16:51, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee Your first reference was added in the wrong place, see review reasons for why it was rejected. I have also rejected your second reference, for the reasons I stated there. In addition, we are months after this deadline was supposed to be completed. If you want to improve your grade to C, you can try to translate an article of your choice to your English or Korean Wikipedia sandbox; please show me your work by 6pm today _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:13, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5) - Haein Lee (이해인)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). Please check the progress here in my sandbox link https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Haein_Lee/sandbox2

https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Haein_Lee/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5&oldid=40128413

Please check for this! Haein Lee (talk) 17:49, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언. When translating to Chinese, read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:15, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Kim Seoyoung (김서영)

Hello, professor. I'm Seoyoung Kim(2024020700) who is taking the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class. Here is my feedback Link. Seoyoung0710 (talk) 17:58, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710 It is too late to complete this deadline - your colleagues are unlikely to read and benefit from your feedback. In addition, you left it in the wrong place (on the article's talk page, instead on the user talk page) and in the wrong language. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:17, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Kim Seoyoung (김서영)

Hello professor,I'm Seoyoung Kim(2024020700), attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I completed a final translation assignments. Here is Link. Thank you. Seoyoung0710 (talk) 18:01, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710

Good progress. I have improved your score to B.

Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your work.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:23, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(Week 6) - Haein Lee (이해인)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B) For my final project, I translated the articles https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A7%91%EB%8B%A8%ED%96%89%EB%8F%99_%EB%AC%B8%EC%A0%9C Thank you. Haein Lee (talk) 18:55, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee The article you published here does not look like it was in a state that is acceptable. It was later changed by another editor. @Ykhwong _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:25, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Haein Lee (이해인)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). Here is my feedback. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:2024064839LeeGaeun/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Haein Lee (talk) 19:16, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee It is too late to complete this deadline - your colleagues are unlikely to read and benefit from your feedback. In addition, you left it in the wrong place (it should be on the user talk page) and in the wrong language (communication on a Wikipedia should be in that Wiki's local language). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:37, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Haein Lee (이해인)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). I completed a final translation assignments. https://w.wiki/EZJA Haein Lee (talk) 19:19, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee The quality of your work was unacceptable; it was rejected and redone by a Korean Wikipedia reviewer @Ykhwong. The Wikipedia assignment is not something you can successfully start and finish in one day, there's a reason it is an assignment designed for an entire month. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:42, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7 (Week 11-12) - Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Good morning! Dear Professor, I am taking the morning class of understanding daily life and social structure. I'm almost done translating the article. Please check this link! https://w.wiki/EZLB

Should I do this? Please let me know if there is anything lacking! I'll fix it right away. Lee0616 (talk) 21:15, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Good progress, but very late - you should have started months ago, and asked for my feedback also long ago. Please continue working on this activity in your sandbox and I will update your score to passing (D) after I review your final progress today at 6 pm. There is no time to submit any further projects after that. You do not need to publish your work; an experienced Korean reviewer, @Ykhwong, will take a look later, if they have time, and see if this content is salvageable for Korean Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:49, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 7(Week 10) -Ryu hoyeong(유호영)

Hello professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). To get extra points, I've translated about Japanese prisoners. Please check it my link 사용자:Ryuhoyeong - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 Thank you! Ryuhoyeong (talk) 00:01, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong That article has already been translated to Korean at ko:일본의 연합국 전쟁 포로. The reason why our class instructions require you to check with me first before you start on your topic is to avoid this problem (wasting time translating content that has already been translated).

Your score in our class is already passing; I am afraid there is no time to improve it further beyond what I told you before (above). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:59, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Hello professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I have provided feedback on Kim Donggun post 'Lost sales'. Here is my feedback link

User talk:Hy donggunkim/Lost sales - Wikipedia Ryuhoyeong (talk) 15:25, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong It is too late to complete this deadline - your colleagues are unlikely to read and benefit from your feedback. In addition, you left it in the wrong place (it should be on the user talk page) and in the wrong language (communication on a Wikipedia should be in that Wiki's local language). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:00, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (Week 4)- Ryu hoyeong(유호영)

Hello professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I have completed Deadline 3 by adding a citation to the article ' MInhwa ' Here is the diff link to my edit : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Minhwa&diff=prev&oldid=1297242520 Thank you! Ryuhoyeong (talk) 00:38, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Your citation is incomplete - it is missing URL of the article, making it impossible to verify the content. In addition, see the following instructions:

Your reference should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references

Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:02, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline3 (week4) Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Good morning! Dear Professor, I am taking the morning class of understanding daily life and social structure. I found late that you told me to modify week 4 with 3 deadlines. I'm sorry. But please understand that I can't reply on week 4 page because I can't find this page now, so I'm adding it separately and posting it! I added a source to the References, but I don't know why, but the link says it's broken, and I'm sure there was a5 related content in the text when I looked for this source in the past, but now it doesn't seem to be there. I may be confused, but I'm not sure exactly. This may be confusing to me, but when I checked two months ago, the source was properly marked in the References column, so I thought I had already completed the two-week project and left it alone. What should I do? First of all, please check the added footnotes! It's number 20 and 21 in the References column! https://w.wiki/EZLZ Lee0616 (talk) 21:50, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 The Wikipedia assignment is not something you can successfully start and finish in one day, there's a reason it is an assignment designed for an entire month.

The reference you have added was in the wrong place. If we were doing it when it was supposed to be done, in March, we would have plenty of time for me to demonstrate it correctly how to do this; now it is too late both for demonstration and for you to receive extra credit. beyond what I said earlier above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:55, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

PS. If you want to practice more, you are of course welcome. The following instructions may be useful:

Your reference should be formatted using the Wikipedia:Citation templates. For an easy how-to, see Help:VisualEditor#Editing_references

Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter).

Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:03, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit activity - Kim Seoyoung(김서영)

Dear professor,

Hello I'm Seoyoung Kim(2024020700), taking Everyday life and social structure class. I did extra credit activity.

Here is my content page.

Please check it. Thank you. Seoyoung0710 (talk) 19:01, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710 I see. To finish that article, please do the following:

Ensure that your article has headings, including the final one for references (called "References" in English, "각주" in Korean, or

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (instructions in Chinese: zh:维基百科:頁面分類; instructions in Korean: ko:위키백과:분류). See bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP. As explained in the Help:Translation#Licensing, please explicitly say in your edit summary that your work is a translation, and from which Wikipedia. Next, please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean).

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:34, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

I fix it. Here is my Link. I added the overall title, and I revised the Korean translation. And I also revised the contents for the additional small parts. And I put footnotes and blue links in all paragraphs. Please check. Thank you. Seoyoung0710 (talk) 01:55, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Seoyoung0710 I am afraid this is incorrect, please read my instructions carefully. I never ask you to add "the overall title" - it is not necessary and I have removed it. The new links you have added have not been added correctly, please fix them following my instructions above, and complete other steps, such as adding categories and talk page templates _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:10, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Final Week)-Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Hello professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I got to do a total of 3 translations because I saw one after another that I couldn't do two topics. I'm so sorry for the late submission and thank you for your time. If I don't get an A+ grade, please let me know what I need to do more. Thank you so much for the semester

Fist link about "Cannabis in Japan" https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52

Second link about culture shock https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A53

Third link about Hoax https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A54

Thank you Ryuhoyeong (talk) 02:12, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong It will be hard to improve your grade beyond what it already is, as we are almost out of time. To improve it by one letter grade, please select two articles that do not exist on Korean Wikipedia and do your best to translate them in your sandbox and show me the result of your work by 6pm today. No assignments are accepted after 6pm. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:16, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you, Professor I'll do my best until 6 PM. Thank you. And I'm sorry Ryuhoyeong (talk) 02:28, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5(Week 6) - Lee Ga Eun (이가은)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B) For my final project, I translated the articles

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/미국의_부패

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/트럼프-머스크_갈등 Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 19:17, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun The quality of your work was unacceptable; in both cases (one, two) it was rejected and redone by a Korean Wikipedia reviewer @Ykhwong. The Wikipedia assignment is not something you can successfully start and finish in one day, there's a reason it is an assignment designed for an entire month. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:41, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the revisions according to the feedback. Please kindly review it.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%B6%80%EC%A0%95%EB%B6%80%ED%8C%A8

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8A%B8%EB%9F%BC%ED%94%84-%EB%A8%B8%EC%8A%A4%ED%81%AC_%EA%B0%88%EB%93%B1 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 03:40, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6(Week 7) - Lee Ga Eun (이가은)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). Here is my feedback. https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0%3A%EC%A7%91%EB%8B%A8%ED%96%89%EB%8F%99_%EB%AC%B8%EC%A0%9C#Feedback_on_collective_action_problem Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 19:36, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun It is too late to complete this deadline - your colleagues are unlikely to read and benefit from your feedback. In addition, you left it in the wrong place (it should be on the user talk page) and in the wrong language (communication on a Wikipedia should be in that Wiki's local language). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:43, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0%3AHaein_Lee%2F%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#%EA%B4%80%EB%A0%A8_%ED%94%BC%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%B1

I have made revisions according to the professor's feedback. 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 03:50, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit Activity- Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Dear professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I did extra credit activity. Here is my link https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A55 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A56 about Doubloon and Doomscrolling Please check it,thank you Ryuhoyeong (talk) 02:52, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Good progress. Continue - fixes are still needed:

Remove broken code to templates or such that do not exist on Korean Wikipedia.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:53, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Lee Ga Eun (이가은)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). I completed a final translation assignments. Subject 1 : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/미국의_부패 Subject 2 : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/트럼프-머스크_갈등 and also, I changed my topic and worked on “Corruption in the United States” (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corruption_in_the_United_States) and the “Trump–Musk feud” (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trump–Musk_feud). I apologize for not obtaining prior permission before proceeding. Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 19:44, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Obtaining permission is not optional, it is obligatory. See additonal feedback above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:45, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

I have made revisions based on the professor’s feedback. Please kindly review it.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%B6%80%EC%A0%95%EB%B6%80%ED%8C%A8

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8A%B8%EB%9F%BC%ED%94%84-%EB%A8%B8%EC%8A%A4%ED%81%AC_%EA%B0%88%EB%93%B1 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 03:53, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Please do not post identical replies. Please use just a single thread to talk about your final grade improvements. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8-Cho Gayeong(조가영)

Hello Professor, I am a student from the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the Korean translation of the two articles. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Gayeong_Cho/연습장1 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Gayeong_Cho/연습장 I apologize for the late submission. Thank you for taking the time to review my work. Gayeong Cho (talk) 04:35, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho Yes, I've seen your work already and it is included in your current grade.

Your recent changes are very minor and most unreferenced, so they did not change your score. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:42, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Wikipedia editors - CHENYUNLIN

Dear Professor, this is a new bonus English translation article I have published. Please review it.Xinda Village (新達里) Songyi77 (talk) 06:11, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Please fix the following:

Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:42, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Songyi77 Good. Please revisit my previous feedback on adding more blue / red / interlanguage links to your article, and add the required translation and educational assignment pages. Any future assignment you submit can be left in your sandbox for my review. The effort from your work here can be used to improve your letter grade by one letter; which class would you like me to add your points to? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit Activity- Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Dear professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I did extra credit activity. Here is my link https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A510

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A59

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ryuhoyeong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A58

about Mean world syndrome,Phubbing,Infinite scrolling

Please check it, Thank you Ryuhoyeong (talk) 04:45, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Your work is progressing well. Please address the following:

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) - Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Dear Professor, I am taking the morning class of understanding daily life and social structure. I gave my feedback on other students' writings. Please check it! https://w.wiki/EZL3

I’m sorry I’m late. Thank you! Lee0616 (talk) 21:05, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 It is too late to complete this deadline - your colleagues are unlikely to read and benefit from your feedback. In addition, you left it in the wrong place (it should be on the user talk page) and in the wrong language (communication on a Wikipedia should be in that Wiki's local language). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:43, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

I revised it as the professor said! Should I do this? Please check!

https://w.wiki/EZSm Lee0616 (talk) 06:16, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Now it's in correct language, but still in the wrong place. It should be on their talk page, not subpage of a talkpage. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:05, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

New translated article - Kim Jae Jun (김재준)

Hello Professor,

I have completed the additional article translation as requested.

Here are the links to my sandbox and the Korean Wikipedia article, as well as the edit history.

Thank you. Kimjaezzang (talk) 04:43, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Very good. Your grade will be A+ after you double check my prior feedback - your article still needs categories, and talk page templates attributing it as a translation and education assignment. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Done. I have added appropriate categories, the translation template on the talk page, and the education assignment notice. Please let me know if anything else is missing! here is edit history. Thank you. Kimjaezzang (talk) 06:56, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Kimjaezzang Good, your score is A+ now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:05, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit Activity- Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Dear professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I did extra credit activity. Here is my link This is about Clickbait sandbox

Thank you! Ryuhoyeong (talk) 06:01, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Ok, See below _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit Activity- Ryu hoyeong (유호영)

Dear professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I did extra credit activity. Here is my link This is about Digital detox

Here is my link sandbox

Thank you! Ryuhoyeong (talk) 06:45, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Good progress. I will update your score to B now. To finish your work, do the following:

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this (for help in Korean, see ko:위키백과:문서 이동). If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE ko:위키백과:문서 합치기) instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (instructions in Korean: ko:위키백과:분류). See bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) - Im Yeon Jin

Dear Professor,

I apologize for the delay in submitting my article for Deadline 5.

My article is now mostly finished and ready for your review.

Here is the link to the article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:ImYeonJin/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:ImYeonJin/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52

Please feel free to provide feedback on my talk page when convenient. I will respond there to confirm, as required.

Thank you for your time and understanding. ImYeonJin (talk) 05:15, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin Good, you are almost ready. Please follow these steps to publish your articles:

Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. .

Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP: ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:20, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

Thank you for your feedback.

1. I have checked all the blue links, and they all point to the correct Korean Wikipedia articles.
2. You mentioned that the article about the peace flag is missing an image, but my articles do not include content related to the peace flag. Additionally, both of my articles already contain relevant images.
3. I have moved both articles to the main namespace.
   • https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/중국의_문신
   • https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/범죄_문신
4. I have added appropriate categories and connected interlanguage links.
5. I added the assignment template to the talk pages.
6. I also included a note indicating that the articles are translated works.

I have made all the necessary revisions based on your feedback. I would appreciate it if you could take another look. Thank you! ImYeonJin (talk) 07:22, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline8 (The Final Week)-YunChaeEun(윤채은)

Hello Professor, I am a student from the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the Korean translation of the article. 사용자:Yunchaeeun0810/sandbox - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전I apologize for the late submission. Thank you for taking the time to review my work. Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 06:09, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yunchaeeun0810 Ok. Here are the next steps:

• please remove all broken code like 틀:Use American English
• delete all red-links from "See also" section. Translate "See also" and any other content in English to Korean, such as the captions of the pictures
• This will complete the main part of your project, and your grade will be updated to A in the evening update
• Next, you can do the following

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this (for help in Korean, see ko:위키백과:문서 이동). If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE ko:위키백과:문서 합치기) instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (instructions in Korean: ko:위키백과:분류). See bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:15, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank You!

Would it be alright if I continue translating additional content related to "dependency theory" into Korean? Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 07:22, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

FINAL_ Kim Da Young

I converted the articles on China’s gender imbalance and animal welfare in India into Korean temporary links and have completed the final upload on Wikipedia. Please check them. Day123kk (talk) 07:18, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Day123kk

Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

Remove the duplicate heading / title at the top of your articles.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언. When translating to Chinese, read zh:Wikipedia:翻译腔, zh:维基百科:翻译腔/城墙, zh:维基百科:翻译腔, and zh:维基百科:翻譯指引.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

Let me know when the above is completed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:23, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8(The Final Week) - Ryu hoyeong(유호영)

Dear professor,I'm Ryu ho yeong, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I saw the professor's feedback and I finished fixing it again. Thank you Here is my link sandbox sandbox2

hank you for taking the time to review my work. But as I sent by e-mail, I lost my Wikipedia account and it has only been two days since I created it, so I can't move between documents. It is said that moving between documents is possible only four days after the account is created. Ryuhoyeong (talk) 07:37, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong Good progress. Please remove untranslated code like " Research on the effects of violence in mass media 문서를 참고하십시오."

Your article has blue links but no links to English Wikipedia. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

• Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

If you cannot move your work, after you believe it is ready for publication, ask for help in one of these live chat fora: 문서 유지보수 (일터) | 디스코드 대화방 | 카카오톡 대화방(어린이·청소년 대화방) | 오프라인 모임 정책과 지침 | 요청 | 위키프로젝트 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:49, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline6 (Week 10) Im YeonJin

Dear, professor. I'm sorry for the late submission.

I left feedback on the document "The Japanese in North Korea".

In addition, I also revised the Week 5 task as feedback and put the answer back on Week 5, so please check it! Thank you. ImYeonJin (talk) 07:50, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin Good that you are finishing you main project.; I've updated your grade to C. Here's feedback for the next steps:

Your article has blue links but no links to English Wikipedia. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

• Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

It is too late to complete old assignments, like deadlines from a month or more ago. Details on how to improve your grade are available on the syllabus, but the deadline for submissions is 6pm. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:01, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

FINAL-Yunchaeeun(윤채은)

Professor,

I’ve finished all the required edits on the EFF article, including fixing broken code, removing red links, and correcting references. 사용자:Yunchaeeun0810/sandbox - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A0%84%EC%9E%90_%ED%94%84%EB%9F%B0%ED%8B%B0%EC%96%B4_%EC%9E%AC%EB%8B%A8 Could you please check and let me know if anything else is needed?

Thank you! Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 07:59, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yunchaeeun0810 Good. Please continue step by step with my instructions above. I'll be reviewing your work after 6pm _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:11, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Credit Activity - Haein Lee(이해인)

Dear Professor. I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). I did extra credit activity. Here is my content link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tina_Karol&diff=prev&oldid=1297243971

Please check it, thank you Haein Lee (talk) 00:52, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee I am afraid I had to reject your contributions. The content you've added was unreferenced (there references were added in the wrong place), and the text duplicated information already present in the article, which you do not have appeared to have read carefully enough. Please see my previous feedback. We are running out of time to submit more extra credit work, please follow my previous instructions. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:06, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you so much for the professor's feedback. Based on the professor's feedback, I added a new content that didn't exist, so please check it. Here is link Haein Lee (talk) 08:13, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Haein Lee That content was already discussed in the article. The last paragraph of your addition is clearly written by an AI. I am afraid your grade is now finalized; we don't have remaining time in the semester to improve your skills further. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:28, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (Final) Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Good morning! Dear Professor, I am taking the morning class of understanding daily life and social structure. I've finished translating the article. Please check this link! https://w.wiki/EZLB

If there is anything else you need to revise or add, please let me know! Thank you!! Lee0616 (talk) 22:03, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Good, see my feedback above. Keep improving this in your sandbox and I'll update your grade as discussed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:55, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I revised it to reflect the feedback of week 10 and completed the translation! Please check this link!

https://w.wiki/EZLB

Can you raise my score? Lee0616 (talk) 07:01, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Some section headings are not translated. The list of institutions can be deleted, it is unreferenced anyway. Delete the broken code 틀:Economics sidebar from the top. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:08, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

As the professor gave me feedback, I revised and completed the translation! Please check this link!

https://w.wiki/EZLB

Can you improve your grades now? Thank you! Lee0616 (talk) 08:26, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 I will review your work later and if you indeed followed my instructions carefully I will update your grade. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:30, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final- Ryu Hoyeong(유호영)

I’ve finished article feedback, including fixing broken code, reseting links, and correcting references.

Could you please check if anything else I fixed.

I apologize for the late submission, and Thank you professor. Here is my link sandbox sandbox2 Ryuhoyeong (talk) 08:28, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Ryuhoyeong

Good. Next, you can do the following

When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this (for help in Korean, see ko:위키백과:문서 이동). If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE ko:위키백과:문서 합치기) instead.

After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (instructions in Korean: ko:위키백과:분류). See bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article.

You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

When you publish your article in Korean, please add ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - ko:틀:번역된_문서

Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Im Yeon Jin

Dear Professor, I would like to submit my completed translation project for your review.

• https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/중국의_문신
• https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/범죄_문신

This is a complete piece I did as I got the feedback!

ImYeonJin (talk) 08:29, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@ImYeonJin Good. I'll be reviewing your work later today and updating grades then _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:34, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra credit Activity-Yunchaeeun(윤채은)

Dear professor,I'm Yunchaeeun, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I did extra credit activity. Here is my link This is about dependency theory

사용자:Yunchaeeun0810 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전

Yunchaeeun0810 (talk) 08:48, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yunchaeeun0810 Good, I'll update your score shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:27, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Credit Activity - Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Dear Professor, I have completed the extra credit translation activity.

There are many lists and some errors, so it took more time to complete the translation than I thought.

I’m very sorry.

I would appreciate it if you could understand!

I didn't translate English words that don't have to be translated, such as place names, because it would be easier to understand if they were left in English!

Please check this link! https://w.wiki/EZZq

I would appreciate it if you could reflect it in your grades!! Lee0616 (talk) 12:23, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 You do realize Korean Wikipedia already has content on this under ko:IPX (기업)? Can you explain to me how your translation is of use to anyone? Are there any parts of your translation that are superior to what already exists on Korean Wikipedia? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:28, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Oh, I chose this article when I decided on the topic of the Wiki translation assignment before, but the professor said it was not suitable because it was short, but it was okay as an additional credit assignment, so I chose this article and translated it! Lee0616 (talk) 12:42, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Can you link here to the discussion in which I said that article was ok to translate? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:44, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Line_Friends

I translated this wiki article! Lee0616 (talk) 12:38, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Yes. Line Friends in English is IPX (기업) in Korean. See Line Friends - Wikidata

Why the Korean article has a different name from all the others, I am unsure.

Perhaps it should be renamed. You can start a renaming discussion there for extra point. See here how to do this: 위키백과:이동 요청 - 위키백과 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:43, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Yes. We had a name change discussion! Check this link.

https://w.wiki/EZb8

You will get additional points as an additional assignment, and if you discuss changing your name, will you get additional points separately? Lee0616 (talk) 13:13, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Deadline 4(Week 5) - Lee Ga Eun (이가은)

Dear Professor, I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure(B). Please check the progress here in my sandbox link https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024064839LeeGaeun/Sandbox2

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024064839LeeGaeun/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 19:00, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun It's a good start - a good place to be, if it was April, maybe May. But now we have only few hours left for you to finish. Please continue working and show me your progress in your sandboxes by 6pm the latest. Here's some advice:

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언.

Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:30, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, thank you for your feedback. As per your request, I have doubled the number of blue citation links and carefully reviewed the Korean translation as well.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024064839LeeGaeun/Sandbox2

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024064839LeeGaeun/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 03:26, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Please read my feedback carefully. Your articles still have zero blue links, to either Korean or English Wikipedia.

Ensure that your article has headings, including the final one for references (called "References" in English, "각주" in Korean, or

If you have proofread your work and think it is correct, good. I'll ask Korean reviewers @Ykhwong @Sadopaul to double check if they have the time (thank you) whether your work is acceptable for publication.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Does the professor require that all citations be from Wikipedia? 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 04:11, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun All citations should be faitfully translated (copied and fixed) as necessary. Never cite Wikipedia itself - see Wikipedia:CITOGENESIS.

This is different from the requirement to attribute content: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP. As explained in the Help:Translation#Licensing, please explicitly say in your edit summary that your work is a translation, and from which Wikipedia. Next, please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean), zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese), or ask me if it is in another language and you cannot find the right template to use in it.

I hope this answers your question _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:16, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I'm not quite sure why you mentioned that my article has very few blue links. I added [1]-style citations after the sentences (as footnotes), and I also included the corresponding source links. I'm having trouble understanding exactly what is wrong. Could you please clarify which part needs to be corrected? 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 04:23, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024064839LeeGaeun/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#cite_note-1

Professor, Is It correct? please check it. Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 04:50, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024064839LeeGaeun/Sandbox2

This is my sandbox 2, please check it. Thank you 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 05:23, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Your article at ko:사용자:2024064839LeeGaeun/연습장 has no blue links at all, outside references. This is also true for ko:트럼프-머스크 갈등

Please read this again carefully; if you don't understand it, you can stop by my office today, I'll be here until 6pm.

Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:35, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Professor, I'm done

Please check it

미국의 부패

트럼프 일론머스크 불화 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 13:21, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Good, I'll update your score tomorrow. See my advice on this page if you want to continue to improve your work and make it useful to others. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:12, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Credit Activity - Cho Gayeong(조가영)

Dear Professor, I am a student from the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the translation assignment for extra credit. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Gayeong_Cho/연습장4 I have also uploaded Project 4 to the LMS. Please check them. Thank you for taking the time to review my work. Gayeong Cho (talk) 07:41, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Gayeong Cho The translation choice should be an article that has potential to be useful to the local readers. The Korean Wikipedia already has a good article on KakaoTalk; there is no need to translate English entry on it to Korean,

I've updated your score to B based on your activity. I am afraid this is all the time we have to review extra credit work this semester. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:53, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your time and help, Professor. Have a good night! Gayeong Cho (talk) 15:28, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Credit Activity 2 - Lee Jeong Eun (이정은)

Dear Professor, I am a student taking the morning class to understand daily life and social structure. Can I submit another extra wiki translation assignment?

I’m sorry I’m late. But I tried to do an additional wiki translation assignment as soon as possible!

Please!! https://w.wiki/EZcY Please check this link!

It's an existing wiki article! https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Sociological_Imagination

Thank you! Lee0616 (talk) 14:32, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Lee0616 Although the deadline to submit extra credit work has passed, I'll update your score to B to recognize your effort. That's it, no more work will be graded. Any furher wiki edits are made for yourself, to build up your digital portfolio and contribute to the humanity's wellbeing. Good job, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:37, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Yes, I see! Thank you so much for understanding! Lee0616 (talk) 16:14, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Choi yunji - final

Dear professor,I'm Choi yunji, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 a.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class A). I did activity. Here is my link This is about dependency theory This is my exercise book 1 and exercise book 2 Yumdanggg (talk) 23:11, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yumdanggg Thank you for the links. Your work represents that early draft that should've been done in April, and your score reflects your effort. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:31, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

Final - Kim Yerim

[101]

[102]

[103]

I have completed moving to the body. Yrmisoee (talk) 09:00, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee Good, I'll update your score shortly .

Please double check that you've followed my instructions correctly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:29, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

북한의 대마 for example does not appear to have correct categories.

Please make sure to finish your work correctly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:31, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

There was an error posting after setting up a category. I'll wait a little longer and try and report it. 222.237.218.107 (talk) 09:41, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@Yrmisoee I think you still need to move one of your articles correctly; ko:사용자:대마와 종교 should be at ko:대마와 종교. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:33, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

Remember to:

Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use ko:틀:임시링크.

Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to Korean, read ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:33, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Credit - Lee Gaeun Eun (이가은)

Professor, I have submitted additional work to earn extra credit. Please kindly check it. [104] 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 15:38, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Good, but you need to address concerns about your work raised at ko:사용자토론:2024064839LeeGaeun. Can you explain why you deleted some content here and here, without any explanation or rationale? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:28, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

I believe I continued making edits without noticing @Ykhwong's assistance. I have also reviewed the discussion at ko:User talk:2024064839LeeGaeun and, after acknowledging it, I proceeded with editing the article. Thank you. 2024064839LeeGaeun (talk) 01:15, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

@2024064839LeeGaeun Good. Your score will be updated to B+ shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:26, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

And, I have made additional edits to this article(추가 번역), such as adding foreign language links and the translated pagetemplate. Please review them at your convenience.

Wikipedia release--Hong Jiaran

Hello professor, I have published my Chinese-English Wikipedia translation, please check it out Shoulder Pole Dance Redyeoni (talk) 10:31, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

@Redyeoni I see. You should have chosen your topic and run it by me in March, but fortunately it seems you chose a good topic. Here's a feedback for your work. If you have completed any blogs for our class, please link them here and I can give you a grade estimate. If you want a good grade, you'll need to do more extra credit translations (you skipped all in-class activities and much of our homework).

Feedback for your article:

• Please carefully proofread your work. Poor translation quality resulting from not proofreading machine translation output is the most common error for articles to be rejected by the reviewers. When translating to English, please read User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator and Wikipedia:Translation. Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability). Check whether all blue links are identical between your translation and the original article. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget. After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article). You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page (and fill in the information about our course). When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:56, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you, Professor. I made the corresponding changes, but the content is all I can find. The information found in other channels is almost the same. Redyeoni (talk) 04:54, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Dear Professor Piotr,

I am HONG JIARAN, student ID 2021039470, from the course Collective Intelligence in Practice. I forgot my previous Google account and was unable to log in, so I registered a new account and completed the blog content there. The translation work was done on Wikipedia.

here is the link to the bolg：

https://www.blogger.com/blog/posts/6634946517354791642

I kindly ask if it would be possible to add some extra points to my grade, as I am graduating this semester and only need a small amount of credits to pass this course. I sincerely hope you could allow me to pass this course.

Thank you very much for your understanding and support.

Best regards,

HONG JIARAN Redyeoni (talk) 05:33, 29 June 2025 (UTC)

Extra Credit - HONGJIARAN

Dear Professor Piotr,

I am HONG JIARAN, student ID 2021039470, from the course Collective Intelligence in Practice. I forgot my previous Google account and was unable to log in, so I registered a new account and completed the blog content there. The translation work was done on Wikipedia.

here is the link to the bolg：

https://www.blogger.com/blog/posts/6634946517354791642

I kindly ask if it would be possible to add some extra points to my grade, as I am graduating this semester and only need a small amount of credits to pass this course. I sincerely hope you could allow me to pass this course.

Thank you very much for your understanding and support.

Best regards,

HONG JIARAN Redyeoni (talk) 00:00, 30 June 2025 (UTC)