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Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 00:38, 17 March 2025 (UTC)
Deadline6(week10)-yejoo Yang
[edit]안녕하세요 이시훈님. 저는 당신의 ‘일본 연합국 전쟁 포로’에 관한 문서를 읽고 피드백을 남깁니다.
당신의 문서는 적절한 본문 내용과 그에 따른 충분한 보충 설명이 담겨져 있었습니다. 저는 덕분에 ‘일본 연합국 전쟁 포로’에 관하여 흥미롭게 읽을 수 있었으며 저의 이해에 많은 도움이 되었습니다. 당신의 문서는 다양한 1차, 2차 출처를 기반으로 일본군의 전쟁 포로에 대한 학대와 그 맥락을 충분히 서술하고 있습니다. 구조적 구성의 흐름이 자연스럽고 논리적 입니다. 하지만 약간의 피드백을 더하자면, 일부 문장이 지나치게 길고 한 문단 안에 너무 많은 정보가 압축 되어 있어 가독성이 조금 떨어집니다. 또한 일부 주제는 지나치게 세세하지만 그렇지 않은 주제는 다소 짧고 단편적 입니다. 독자를 위해 균형 있는 분량 배분을 추천합니다. Yangyejoo (talk) 01:36, 16 May 2025 (UTC)