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_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:08, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestion

Hello, I’ve read your article U17 Original Comic DreamWorks, and I found the translated content detailed and comprehensive. It covers many aspects of U17 Comics, including its history, features, and business model. The structure is very clear, following the standard Wikipedia article format, which makes it easy for readers to navigate and understand. The references are also abundant, citing various news reports and official announcements, which enhances the article’s credibility. The language is concise and clearly expressed, avoiding lengthy and complex sentences, which improves readability.

However, while the page is written in English, some parts include Chinese names and terminology. It is recommended to unify the language style for consistency. Adding relevant images or multimedia content, such as interface screenshots or the U17 Comics logo, could enhance the visual appeal and effectiveness of the article. Also, adding internal links to related Wikipedia entries, such as “Bilibili” and “Alpha Group Co., Ltd.” where appropriate, would help improve the interconnectedness of the page. Xjx921 (talk) 09:31, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestion

Hi Xuan,

Thanks for your detailed and informative article! One small but important suggestion relates to the citation formatting. Specifically, Reference [4] currently includes only the Chinese title without an accompanying English translation in brackets, which is recommended for non-English sources on the English Wikipedia. Also, for several references (including [4]), it’s unclear that the source is in Chinese because the language parameter is missing. To improve accessibility and meet Wikipedia standards, you could add |language=zh to the citation templates, and include English translations of titles in brackets after the original. This will help non-Chinese readers better understand the source and ensure the article meets Wikipedia’s citation guidelines. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 10:44, 18 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]