The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SonOfYoutuberstalk 15:21, 26 July 2025 (UTC)
Overall: @Luis7M: The hook is verified, but it's on the border for me if it's "interesting". I'll mark it down as such since leading a team to 2 titles is notable. The article does not read neutrally/encyclopedic. I know that the tone of sports articles is different on Wikipedia, but this one sounds too promotion in my opinion. I think it should be rewritten to be more neutral. PizzaKing13 (¡Hablame!) 🍕👑 00:10, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
@PizzaKing13: I gave this a rudimentary copyedit. Which bits do you consider unduly promotional?--Launchballer 12:06, 11 June 2025 (UTC)
@Launchballer: I thought the beginning of the second paragraph of the club career section sounded to promotional, but I went ahead and copyedited it myself to make it more neutral. I believe the article is ready for DYK, though I suggest that Segunda División should be linked. PizzaKing13 (¡Hablame!) 🍕👑 17:19, 16 June 2025 (UTC)
Note:@PizzaKing13 and Luis7M: I don't find the hook that interesting, for the reasons PK13 notes above; as DYK slots are currently under high demand, I won't be promoting it. Other promoters may disagree. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:24, 18 June 2025 (UTC)
@Luis7M: If you propose another hook I think this could be saved. @AirshipJungleman29: What do you think? Earth605 (talk) 15:30, 1 July 2025 (UTC)
@Earth605: There is no other hook. I still think the current one works out, but since it is a "hedge case of interest", then I don't mind waiting until the DYK slots become less in demand. Luis7M (talk) 00:05, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
@Luis7M: Yeah, we need another reviewer to at least consider this.
Not touching this with a barge pole per WP:DYKINT; the hook requires knowledge of what Sabadell and the Secunda Division are.--Launchballer 11:19, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Maybe this makes it a little more interesting? ALT1: ...that Luis Aranaz was named an "adopted son" of Sabadell after captaining the football club to two Segunda División titles in 1943 and 1946? ~ L 🌸 (talk) 21:48, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
Maybe this more layperson friendly version works? ALT1a ... that footballer Luis Aranaz was named an "adopted son" of CE Sabadell FC after captaining it to two Spanish second division titles in the 1940s? At the very least, the hook is supposed to make it clear that it is talking about (association) football and a second-division league. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:10, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
@AirshipJungleman29: and @Earth605: What do you guys think of the new hook proposed by Narutolovehinata5? Luis7M (talk) 14:45, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
I don't have much experience, @Luis7M: (at least by my imaginatory standards), but this is a for me. Please somebody else tick this. @LEvalyn:, @Launchballer:.Earth605 (talk) 14:53, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
ALT1a fails verification; he was the named the son of the city of Sabadell, not the football club, which might even make for a better hook! theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 17:52, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
not gonna endorse it as the most concise hook ever written, but my factual objection was addressed, yep :) theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 06:21, 20 July 2025 (UTC)
@Luis7M: The hook is verified, but it's on the border for me if it's "interesting". I'll mark it down as such since leading a team to 2 titles is notable. The article does not read neutrally/encyclopedic. I know that the tone of sports articles is different on Wikipedia, but this one sounds too promotion in my opinion. I think it should be rewritten to be more neutral. PizzaKing13 (¡Hablame!) 🍕👑 00:10, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
ready for DYK, though I suggest that Segunda División should be linked. PizzaKing13 (¡Hablame!) 🍕👑 17:19, 16 June 2025 (UTC)
Note: @PizzaKing13 and Luis7M: I don't find the hook that interesting, for the reasons PK13 notes above; as DYK slots are currently under high demand, I won't be promoting it. Other promoters may disagree. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:24, 18 June 2025 (UTC)
@Luis7M: If you propose another hook I think this could be saved. @AirshipJungleman29: What do you think? Earth605 (talk) 15:30, 1 July 2025 (UTC)
@Luis7M: Yeah, we need another reviewer to at least consider this.
ALT1a fails verification; he was the named the son of the city of Sabadell, not the football club, which might even make for a better hook! theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 17:52, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
