Template:Did you know nominations/Chohan family murders
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 16:32, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
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Chohan family murders
- ... that the Chohan family murders trial, which took place from 2004 to 2005, was the longest in the history of the London Metropolitan Police?
Created by Moondragon21 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 13 past nominations.
Moondragon21 (talk) 16:53, 17 May 2025 (UTC).
New enough, long enough and hook is interesting. Could you consider tweaking the hook that 1) it mentions the year of the trial and 2) that "Metropolitan police" is linked? Ping me when all's done :) Ippantekina (talk) 09:41, 22 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Ippantekina: Thanks. As the trial started in 2004 and ended in 2005, how could this be reworded into the hook? Moondragon21 (talk) 14:18, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
- I would suggest something like "... the Chohan family murders, which took place from xxx until xxx". Does this work for you? Ippantekina (talk) 02:56, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Ippantekina: I did consider that originally. I could change it to "...that the Chohan family murders trial, which took place from 2004 to 2005, was the longest in the history of the London Metropolitan Police?", but it sounds a bit clunky to me. Moondragon21 (talk) 18:31, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
I don't think it's that clunky; anyways, happy to pass this. Great work! Ippantekina (talk) 02:51, 26 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Ippantekina: I did consider that originally. I could change it to "...that the Chohan family murders trial, which took place from 2004 to 2005, was the longest in the history of the London Metropolitan Police?", but it sounds a bit clunky to me. Moondragon21 (talk) 18:31, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
- I would suggest something like "... the Chohan family murders, which took place from xxx until xxx". Does this work for you? Ippantekina (talk) 02:56, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Ippantekina: Thanks. As the trial started in 2004 and ended in 2005, how could this be reworded into the hook? Moondragon21 (talk) 14:18, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
| General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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| Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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| QPQ: Done. |
