Talk:Henry Darger/GA1

@MSincccc: Hey, I nominated this late last night but looking at it now theres some changes I'd like to make before it gets reviewed. Could you please fail it so I can work on it a bit more? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:44, 28 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- If you prefer to, sure.
- @Generalissima I did have a question about the article and your interest in the topic — I've left it here in case you're happy to share. There's another question on your talk page too. Looking forward to hearing from you when you have the time.
MSincccc (talk) 17:13, 28 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

Fail. MSincccc (talk) 17:16, 28 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 07:49, 28 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: MSincccc (talk · contribs) 15:58, 28 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Prose

Lead

Could the relevant language template be added to the article?
15,145 page novel→15,145-page novel
206 page autobiography→206-page autobiography
- Add a hyphen between a number and a noun when they come before another noun.
The protagonist Vivian Sisters, the seven princesses of Abbeiannia, fight on behalf of the Christian nations against the enslaving Glandelinians.
- "Sisters" is plural; "protagonists" should agree.
artwork... are now featured
- "Artwork" is uncountable; takes singular verb.

General

I have given the article a read and will be posting further suggestions (improvements) for the prose in due time; but it still beats me as to how you come across these persons. I am just (naturally) curious. I hope you don't mind me asking. MSincccc (talk) 17:07, 28 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.