User talk:Greg03140318

June 2025

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Harold Finch, from its old location at User:Greg03140318. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. — rsjaffe 🗣️ 17:05, 8 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Harold L. Finch (June 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WeWake was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There are NPOV issues (besides reading like an essay) that make me reluctant to accept this article. Please review the guidelines on how to write in a neutral tone, remove any promotional language, and ensure information only relevant to the subject is included in the article with appropriate sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Harold L. Finch and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

WeWake (talk) 17:29, 18 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Greg03140318! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! WeWake (talk) 17:29, 18 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Harold L. Finch has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Harold L. Finch. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 19:56, 21 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Harold L. Finch (June 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WeirdNAnnoyed was:

I think the promotional/NPOV issues in the article are mostly resolved, but my concern is the sourcing. Almost every source in the article is primary, and most are inaccessible (e.g. personal documents). WP does not allow articles to be based entirely on primary sources. Ref. 32 might be appropriately secondary, but I can't access it. I might feel better about the sourcing if links to more of the sources were provided, so that they could be verified. But only a few sources in the list have URLs and those few aren't really about the subject, just verifying that something happened.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Harold L. Finch and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

WeirdNAnnoyed (talk) 11:19, 24 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]