Template:Did you know nominations/Sakura Miko
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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 23:57, 3 April 2025 (UTC)
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Sakura Miko
- ... that VTuber Sakura Miko was featured in a paper on "Structural stability and thermodynamics"?
- Source: Inside Magazine The paper itself
- ALT1: ... that Sakura Miko often accidentally playing eroge and bishōjo games on stream? Source: RealSound
- ALT2: ... that Sakura Miko was appointed as Tokyo Tourism Ambassadors in 2023? Source: The Asahi Shimbun
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dam (song)
- Comment: Inside Magazine is owned by Oricon and was linked from Oricon. You can find Sakura Miko on Fig. 9
Moved to mainspace by Miminity (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.
Warm Regards, Miminity (Talk?) (me contribs) 11:24, 8 March 2025 (UTC).
Looks good User:miminity. I think the first hook is the most interesting of the three, but you may want to add VTuber in front of her name, so that it a more odd contrast between the paper topic. I've corrected some grammatical mistakes in the article, but there was one sentence I didn't fully understand. Would be good to have this corrected before the article is mainspace ready.
- She is a big fan of bishōjo games and eroge even accidentally playing one often on her stream because of which, she worked on various eroge and bishōjo games. How does one accidentily play? And how does the first half of the sentence explain the second half?
- Not a DYK criteria, but a tip for improving your writing: try to avoid WP:PROSELINE to write more engagingly. So, don't start each sentence with a date, but vary it instead.
- In the article itself, you may want to explain what a VTuber is. I wasn't aware of the concept (showing my age?), and I assume others clicking from the front page may not be either. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:47, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- @Femke: Thanks for the review. The bishojo and eroge one is fixed by another user, I think I mistranslate it. I also add a short explaination for VTuber. (taken from the article on VTuber itself. Also, thanks for the tip on WP:PROSELINE, I will keep this in mind later. Warm Regards, Miminity (Talk?) (me contribs) 09:26, 11 March 2025 (UTC)