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Hello, I am a newcomer. This is my first copyediting article.

The line in the first paragraph of the article, "The group recorded four albums featuring a repertoire of Irish traditional songs and they always sang unaccompanied." can be restructured as "The group recorded four albums featuring a repertoire of Irish traditional songs. They always performed unaccompanied."

Please give suggestions. I am still learning and understanding editing in wikipedia.

Dk.Editors535 (talk) 11:12, 17 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

That would be an acceptable restructuring, and a safe one for a newcomer task. Iaineditor (talk) 22:27, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you sir! Dk.Editors535 (talk) 09:26, 28 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]