Talk:Sae Kitamura/GA1

GA review

Quick fail. GoldRomean (talk) 17:04, 21 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Saimmx (talk · contribs) 22:22, 20 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: GoldRomean (talk · contribs) 02:27, 21 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, interesting article, but unfortunately I’m likely going to have to quick fail this for grammar problems. More detailed reasoning to follow. GoldRomean (talk) 02:27, 21 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Failing - the article's prose has too many issues (ex. She studied Antony and Cleopatra and befriend with Noritaka Moriyama during the time.). I highly reccomend requesting a copyedit from the Guild of Copy Editors before resubmitting. Let me know if you have any questions. Best, GoldRomean (talk) 03:43, 21 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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