Talk:Phyllis Edness/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:16, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 17:12, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

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Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) clock

I think this article needs a bit more detail to meet broadness requirements. Searching [1] gives loads more sourcing. I found the following information in the first 15 or 45 results from that search:

• [2]: Some sourcing on her beating the Bermudan record and running faster than the Olympic qualifying standard
• [3]: Original announcement the would participate in the Games
• [4]: Improved personal best
• [5]: Apparently she struggled with the climate
• [6]: A description of how she performed in the race
• [7]: Information about her 200 m performance

I think once all the sourcing found by that search has been incorporated, I think this will be sufficiently broad.

• @It is a wonderful world:, I've done this! Arconning (talk) 03:53, 22 June 2025 (UTC)