Talk:Jim Lankas/GA1

GA review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:51, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 17:38, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:09, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:09, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

Lankas was born on August 26, 1918, in Stratton, Nebraska.[1] He was of Czechslovakian and Polish descent. I would combine these two sentences
he scored 126 points, and his coach comma isn't needed
those games, an average change the comma to "for"
In 204 quarters of play, this is a weird stat, one that isn't very common. Why is the number of quarters relevant?
- Cut.
References:
- All appear consistently formatted and reliable for what is being cited
- Spot checks: 3, 7, 9, 10, 15, 18, 21, 26

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:49, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:27, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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