Talk:Jason Kwan/GA1

GA review

Pass LastJabberwocky (talk) 13:38, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Prince of Erebor (talk · contribs) 15:31, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: LastJabberwocky (talk · contribs) 12:35, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, happy to free you from nomination purgatory! The article already looks good, I'll give the more complex suggestion here and edit minor things myself. We can discuss all the changes here. LastJabberwocky (talk) 12:35, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

That's it, I like a quick review! I also checked the integrity of links, reliability of sources, and spotchecked some of them. I also tried searching something about his personal life, but it seems 24/7 preoccupied with movies :). Closing my review. LastJabberwocky (talk) 13:38, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

General things

earned him a nomination for Best Cinematography in the 30th Hong Kong Film Awards,[13] as well as Raymond Yip's martial arts drama film Bruce Lee, My Brother. Bruce Lee, My Brother wasn't nominated for the Best Cinematography. Instead, we can mention that the film won Best Original Film Song, even through it isn't directly related to Jason Kwan, OR put other films from cinematography nomination, OR delete "as well as.." phrase all together. LastJabberwocky (talk) 12:35, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey LastJabberwocky! Thank you so much for taking on the review and copyediting the article!! What if I change this line to: That same year, Kwan shot the drama Merry-Go-Round, co-directed by Yan Yan Mak and Clement Cheng, and the martial arts film Bruce Lee, My Brother, directed by Raymond Yip. He earned a nomination for Best Cinematography at the 30th Hong Kong Film Awards for the former. —👑PRINCE of EREBOR📜 13:07, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

AAooh, he cinematographer FOR Bruce Lee, My Brother, and not connected to the award for cinematography. I like the way you paraphrased it. LastJabberwocky (talk) 13:38, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvios is green Y LastJabberwocky (talk) 12:35, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Jason Kwan works on the upcoming film Raging Havoc. LastJabberwocky (talk) 12:35, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done —👑PRINCE of EREBOR📜 13:07, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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