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Listed below are twenty (20) scholarly sources that make the case that the India-Pakistan wars of 1947 and 1965 were military stalemates. Some sources while pronouncing the judgment of military stalemate also consider some strategic or political advantages accruing to India in the 1965 war. By "scholarly" I mean the university presses and in addition Routledge, Wiley, Palgrave, Springer, and Hurst. I have not included trade paperbacks published by Harper Collins, Vintage, and so forth. Here is the list, which I have collapsed on account of its length:
Twenty scholarly sources on the outcome of the wars of 1947–48 and 1965
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I have now added 20 sources. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 02:43, 25 March 2019 (UTC) Updated Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:57, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
Sources with Google Scholar Citation Index >= 50 in the above list
[edit]12 scholarly sources, with Google Scholar Citation Index >= 50, on the outcome of the wars of 1947–48 and 1965
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Reduced from first list. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:56, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
Discussion
[edit]- See WP:CHERRYPICKING. You mention Christine Fair, who actually says six decades despite the fact that Pakistan has either lost outright or failed to defeat India in every war they have fought.[1] at Fighting to the End: The Pakistan Army's Way of War, p. 31. Aman Goel (talk) 14:54 UTC, March 24, 2019 (UTC)
- "Pakistan as experienced in its lost wars with India in 1948, 1965, and 1971." Falling Terrorism and Rising Conflicts: The Afghan "Contribution" to Polarization and Confrontation in West and South Asia, Greenwood Publishing Group, 2003. -- Aman Goel (talk) 15:00 UTC, March 24, 2019
- Failing to defeat India includes instances of stalemate. It does not constitute victory for India or defeat or disaster for Pakistan. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:03, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- Aman, you are doing the cherrypicking here. Its only one source vs many. AshLin (talk) 16:54, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- Fowler cites a source that actually says that Paksitan lost all wars or failed to defeat India. That's WP:CHERRYPICKING, to point out only the particular narrative which supports your POV from the same source. 03:37, 25 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aman.kumar.goel (talk • contribs)
- Aman, you are doing the cherrypicking here. Its only one source vs many. AshLin (talk) 16:54, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think it makes much sense to talk about the "result" of the 1947–48 war. Both India and Pakistan war British dominions, their armed forces were commanded by British officers and London was pulling the strings from behind the scenes. The "result" was as such what London could live with.
- As for the 1965 war, there was a long-time consensus that it was a stalemate, but it seems to have been mostly based on the fact that Tashkent Agreement reverted to the status quo ante bellum and neither side was able to claim any advantage. The "fog of war" had lasted for a long time (as it usually does in all Indo-Pakistani conflicts). Nobody even knew what territory was gained or lost by the two sides. But when people drilled down into the details, they definitely saw the advantage India possessed, which it gave up voluntarily. Please see the discussion at Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965#Change in result in the infobox. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 17:24, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- The best commentary I have seen is this:
Most important, Shastri was honest and above board in peace as he had been in war, projecting India as a powerful but good neighbour instead of the intolerant, unbudgeable centre of the world.[1]
- If that is not victory then I don't know what is. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 17:39, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ Praagh, David Van (2003), The Greater Game: India's Race with Destiny and China, McGill-Queen's Press - MQUP, p. 297, ISBN 978-0-7735-2639-6
- I'm afraid I can't respond to your interpretations. The sources are clear. Both wars were military stalemates. That is Stephen Cohen's judgment as well. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 17:49, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- Take a look at WP:RGW, since that is exactly what you are doing. Also read WP:GEVAL. We are not going to create a false balance unless your "sources are clear" that Pakistan won this war. So far sources speak India won, not Pakistan. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 03:41, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Please don't make false allegations about what I am doing. I am a competent editor. I am the major contributor to the India page, as well as the author of its major sections, including history, in its FA runs. I am the major contributor to the Kashmir page. I know what scholarly consensus is, and the fifteen sources adduced above constitute a scholarly consensus that the war ended in a stalemate. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:48, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Sorry, if I went harsh. But you jumping from one side of argument to other yet staying rigidly on one line enraged me. Nevertheless, discussion can go in any direction, there was a key word "most" and not "all" for the battles involved inside wars. The "stalemate" you are talking about, I mentioned in one of my initial responses. It was "military damage" inflicted on India most certainly and not any other gains.
- Your edits on other pages have no bearing on what you are doing here. If we look at your "fifteen" sources, we find enough of them to be about military damage and not actual victory. And finally none say Pakistan won. You need to understand the very basic that failure to achieve the purpose in the war is a defeat. I can write a line India won all wars or Pakistan lost most may be called undiplomatic and biased by you. But you can't put a line Pakistan won most or even Pakistan did not lose most of wars as that would clearly be contradicting sources. I hope you get what I'm trying to say. If the sentence "defeat or disaster" is offensive, there may be a mild sentence not ended up in favour Pakistan. But still it should be there as it provides summary of conflicts to the reader before he goes deep into article. Regards Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 04:02, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- What is it you don't understand. No source is saying the war ended in a Pakistani victory. They are saying that the two wars, of 1947-49 and 1965 ended in a military stalemate. They do not support a judgment of an Indian victory. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 04:07, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- And in fact that is the main point. Sources don't say Pakistan won the war, they say India won the war. Maybe not all of your sources say India won the war but there are tons of academic sources that certainly do, and Wikipedia needs to report that unless same number exists for claiming that Pakistan won the war which they clearly didn't. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 04:14, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- What is it you don't understand. No source is saying the war ended in a Pakistani victory. They are saying that the two wars, of 1947-49 and 1965 ended in a military stalemate. They do not support a judgment of an Indian victory. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 04:07, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Please don't make false allegations about what I am doing. I am a competent editor. I am the major contributor to the India page, as well as the author of its major sections, including history, in its FA runs. I am the major contributor to the Kashmir page. I know what scholarly consensus is, and the fifteen sources adduced above constitute a scholarly consensus that the war ended in a stalemate. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:48, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Take a look at WP:RGW, since that is exactly what you are doing. Also read WP:GEVAL. We are not going to create a false balance unless your "sources are clear" that Pakistan won this war. So far sources speak India won, not Pakistan. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 03:41, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- I'm afraid I can't respond to your interpretations. The sources are clear. Both wars were military stalemates. That is Stephen Cohen's judgment as well. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 17:49, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- I have to agree here with Kautilya3 and Aman Goel that sources exists for saying that India won the war and such number of sources are in fact huge in amount..It will depend on the consensus whether we need to include "stalemate" or "Indian victory" but there is no reason to ignore "Indian victory" which is a mainstream academic view of these wars. Current consensus supports Indian victory and a new consensus cannot be formed without an RFC. Sdmarathe (talk) 03:51, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- If the scholarly sources are "huge in amount," then it should be no problem finding them. Thus far there are only two or three scholarly ones (ie academic presses) that suggest this. I already have 15 above. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:55, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- While I agree with you that a majority of academic sources do agree that the 1965 war was a stalemate, I have to call out a few bad sources in your list. The ninth source by Weeks, Jessica L. P. makes the exceptional claim that India initiated both 1947 and 1965 wars. This is so far out of the mainstream opinion that I'd have to discount the source itself as POV for making that claim. The eleventh source can be shown as supporting either side of the argument by highlighting particular sentences. The same applies to the fifteenth source too.
- A binary discussion about Indian victory/stalemate seems reductive, as a sizeable minority of sources declare Indian victory. Even among the majority declaring stalemate, many sources attribute an upper hand to India in one way or the other. Anyway, this discussion about 1965 war should really be happening on Indo-Pakistani War of 1965 page, considering its higher visibility and that the last consensus was reached there. —Gazoth (talk) 04:55, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Gazoth: This is not a binary discussion; only one adduced for whether the sentence "Most wars ended in defeat or disaster for Pakistan." which had been added to this page's lead, but removed later, can be re-introduced. You are incorrectly using the word "many sources attribute an upper hand." In the 15 sources I have presented only four (4)—numbers 10, 11, 12, and 15—mention anything more than a straightforward stalemate. The other page has a separate issue. It has a "Military conflict infobox." If the war has ended in a military stalemate, that is what we enter. If there is dispute among the sources, then we simply add "inconclusive." Fowler&fowler«Talk» 05:45, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Fowler&fowler, since you disputed the infobox result and linked this discussion from 1965 war page, the origin of the discussion does not matter. As for only four sources supporting an Indian upper hand, it is only four among the parts that you quoted. For example, in Fighting to the End, Fair writes
On September 20, 1965, with the war rapidly approaching a stalemate, the UNSC passed a resolution calling for a cessation of hostilities. India conceded, but on political, not military, grounds: it could have sustained the conflict and turned the stalemate into an outright victory (Raghavan 2009). Pakistan was even more willing to settle: military setbacks had cost Ayub his will to continue fighting (Ganguly 2001; Nawaz 2008a).
- Plenty of the sources that you quoted don't dedicate more than a few sentences to the 1965 war, and two (8 and 9) don't even have a full sentence on it. It is unreasonable to compare them on equal grounds with the rest. —Gazoth (talk) 07:06, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Gazoth: Sources which devote no more than a few sentences are more relevant to a discussion whose object is to consider the ultimate in due weight in the form of one "outcome," "victory or defeat." Monographs or journal articles on the 1965 war will by their very nature make either more complex judgments or more limited judgments, depending on their own focus. See WP:SCHOLARSHIP which says, "Avoid undue weight when using single studies in such fields. ... Secondary sources, such as meta-analyses, textbooks, and scholarly review articles are preferred when available, so as to provide proper context." A book, such as my reference 8, by Lloyd I. Rudolph and Susanne Hoeber Rudolph (Google Scholar citation index 1140), which declares the war to be a draw, in one sentence, or my reference number 5, (Google scholar citation index 450) which is similarly brief, the considerations of weight are made by the authors, and vetted by the review process to which such books are subjected. In contrast, a single study, such as my 15 the reference (Google scholar citation index 21) is less reliable for issues of weight. The later references which you mention have been deliberately added by me to show the full range of the non-military, i.e. political and strategic, advantages at the end of the war. Contrast that with the sources used in the Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965 RfC, as evidence of an undisputed Indian victory. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 10:47, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Gazoth: This is not a binary discussion; only one adduced for whether the sentence "Most wars ended in defeat or disaster for Pakistan." which had been added to this page's lead, but removed later, can be re-introduced. You are incorrectly using the word "many sources attribute an upper hand." In the 15 sources I have presented only four (4)—numbers 10, 11, 12, and 15—mention anything more than a straightforward stalemate. The other page has a separate issue. It has a "Military conflict infobox." If the war has ended in a military stalemate, that is what we enter. If there is dispute among the sources, then we simply add "inconclusive." Fowler&fowler«Talk» 05:45, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Hi @Fowler - Since your only issue is that we can't find sources for supporting Indian victory then you must read Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965#Change in result in the infobox as already linked above by Kautilya3 on 17:24, 24 March 2019. More than a dozen high-quality source had been provided there which supports either Indian victory or decisive Indian victory. Like I said, there is no reason to omit that. Additionally the sources you cited even though list the war as ending in stalemate merely state so because both sides retreated to their earlier positions. That does not always mean one side did or did not win the war - just that both sides retreated because of Tashkent accord to maintain peace. Sdmarathe (talk) 04:19, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- I have already looked at those sources. Their are six. Kux doesn't count as he is not making the claim of an Indian military victory. It is "Infobox military conflict" after all, so victory means military victory. Your sources are not particularly weighty. Their Google Scholar citation indices are lower than most of my sources. Here are a few Van Praagh: Greater Game. Citation Index 16, McGarr: Cold War in South Asia. Citation index 49; Conley: Indo-Russian military .... Citation index 28; Haggerty: South Asia in World Politics. Citation index 50. Contrast them with the citation indices of some of my sources which state that the war ended in a stalemate. Nayar: India in the World Order. CI 374; Sisson: War and Secession. CI 450; Rudolph and Rudolph: In search of Lakshmi. CI 1140; and so forth. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 05:29, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- This contention about an Indian military victory is not at all true. The 1965 war was not a military victory for India, at most we can say that India had an advantageous position at the time of its conclusion. And while I do understand that this is not "evidence" as understood by WP, I have been the Director of the Corps of Engineers Archives & Museum in CME, Pune for almost 7 years and have domain knowledge not just because I was a military man but was a military historian too. This is a faux nationalist POV bashing by a few editors and does India's military history and the interests of this encyclopedia no good. AshLin (talk) 05:41, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- I am from Pakistan and I can assure you that Fowler&fowler is lying and deceiving. Pakistan thought that it is gonna win the war with funding from UK and the US but it had to beg India for the ceasefire and India returned the land it won during the war. This was such a humiliating defeat for Pakistan that Pakistan never "directly" fought India or ever thought about invading India with military. Next war of 1971 happened only when Pakistanis started engaging in genocide of Bangladesh and Indians saved them. To say this was a "stalemate" is erroneous and POV pushing. 39.42.10.113 (talk) 15:56, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- More sources supporting Indian victory in 1965 war:
- ""trends accelerated after "Pakistan's defeat in 1965"[2]
- "India defeated Pakistan in 1965"[3]
- "The two fought again in 1965 and in 1971 and Pakistan lost both wars"[4]
- "India's victorious success in the 1965 war"[5]
- "A three-week war in 1965 resulted in an Indian victory."[6]
- "Pakistan as experienced in its lost wars with India in 1948, 1965, and 1971" [7]
- "In South Asia, Pakistan lost the 1965 war with India."[8]
- "Indo-Pakistani War of 1965, which saw the largest tank-battle since the Second World War, was a strategic win for India"[9]
- "in its 1965 war... India defeated Pakistan again".[10]
- "Pakistan experienced defeat by India in war over Kashmir immediately after independence in 1947, again in 1965"[11]
- "This was proved during the 1965 Indo-Pak war when India defeated Pakistan comprehensively."[12]
- "Pakistanis who had relied on their armoured superiority to defeat the Indian Army but, in turn, were defeated."[13]
- "1965: India defeated Pakistan"[14]
- "In 1965, a war erupted between India and Pakistan over Kashmir. Although India won this war" [15]
- "during the war of 1965, in which India defeated Pakistan in twenty-one days".[16]
- "India defeated Pakistan in 1965"[17]
- "on September 23, just seventeen days after the war began, Pakistan was defeated."[18]
- "India's relative victory in two Indo-Pakistan wars on Kashmir in 1948 and 1965"[19]
- "lost face with his defeat in 1965"[20]
- "Pakistan attempted the 1965 aggression. The domestic unrest was aggravated and so did antipathy towards India after they lost in 1965 war."[21]
- "Pakistan's defeat in 1965 finally contributed to the secession of 1971"[22]
- Above high-quality reliable sources easily outnumber the sources from Fowler, many of which Fowler appears to have misunderstood as pointed by Gazoth. Now including the sources that we see on Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965#Change in result in the infobox, most of which are very great in quality, we clearly have more than enough reliable sources to establish Indian victory as the outcome of 1965 war. This dispute started after Fowler reverted Gotitbro who had restored the sourced content.[23]
- Also take a look at: Nitin A Gokhale. 1965 Turning the Tide. Bloomsbury Publishing. p. 224. ISBN 9789386141217. This book has analysed the arguments about the conclusion of the war and said that "there is only one conclusion: India won the war."
- Now unless Fowler can find such sources that fulfill WP:CONTEXTMATTERS and/or offer opposite views such as "Pakistani victory", I see no reason to keep debating about this. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 16:57, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- I have now created a reduced list of sources with Google Scholar Citation Index greater than or equal to 50. Please see Talk:Indo-Pakistani_wars_and_conflicts#Sources_with_Google_Scholar_Citation_Index_>=_50_in_the_above_list. Please note WP:SCHOLARSHIP, which states, " One can confirm that discussion of the source has entered mainstream academic discourse by checking the scholarly citations it has received in citation indexes. A corollary is that journals not included in a citation index, especially in fields well covered by such indexes, should be used with caution, though whether it is appropriate to use will depend on the context." In a few minutes, I will present the citation index of the sources presented by @Aman.kumar.goel:. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:09, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
Google Scholar Citation Index for the list of Aman kumar goel
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- So, the entire debate has been circular and back to the point we had two sections ago. Please don't open another section now.
- * There has been open showcasing of POV and narrative pushing. The summarizing sentence initially was removed for using "unencylopedic" language and was restored as neutrality and not "diplomatic narration" is Wikipedia's policy. Edit warring was started creating the row here and the perpetrating member has been jumping from one side to other side of argument continuously (See: WP:CONTEXTMATTERS). The sources which were put in another article after a complete consensus were tagged as "dubious" without offering any contradiction to the outcome of the war. After switching aspects, there was an irrelevant complaint of "not enough Pakistani members being here". The member however outrightly rejects my allegations. The nature of set of actions involved make it perfectly consistent with WP:IDONTLIKEIT. For the other article, consensus was made when a fairl number of Pakistani members were involved. I, however maintain my position to restore the summarizing sentence with more encyclopaedic language if not as it is, citing clear sources, describing sources provided by others and explaining changing aspects/contexts from "diplomatic language", literal framing of sentence, number of sources cited, changing the contexts and providing quality sources where I have got lead the argument one by one. The latest one is about scholar index which I'm yet to explain. I can't use my original research as per rules. Nevertheless, I have continuously being contradicting misinterpretations. Hence, I also reject allegations on me and fellow members by @Fowler&fowler: for PoV pushing what we haven't been doing since start but he has been doing by WP:CHERRYPICKING and misinterpreting the sources.
- * There was a keyword most and not all, the argument enough to settle down the discussion. The statement India won most wars is accepted and cited by dozens of sources on this talk page while Pakistan won most of wars or even Pakistan did not lose of most wars isn't even summary of a neutral observer (ignored in this discussion). India and Pakistan had three official wars and multiple unofficial conflicts where India has secured the outcome completely or incompletely in its favour. Hence, even if the one is led to believe that any one or two of conflicts was stalemate, the line most of these wars should be perfectly consistent for him if he's being neutral.
- * WP:CONTEXTMATTERS is most important here as the particular member is not only misinterpreting losses context as military context and pushing this irrelevant context wrongfully ahead of purpose context in Second Kashmir War but unknowingly or deliberately ignoring the same in First Kashmir war.
- * I will vote First Kashmir War as stalemate despite the fact that India was having upper hand militarily by a very large margin as purpose of both countries were not achieved completely and ended up dividing the land. My agreement on this is not enough yet to reject Pakistan lost most wars because 1947-48 war wasn't only one. It was followed by 1965, 1971, Siachen Conflict and Kargil War.
- * 1965 War was purposeful and informally (Kashmir infiltration) & formally initiated by Pakistan with Operation Gibraltar. The conflict ended with UN intervention when both countries had nearly same number of losses with India having slightly upper hand. But it ended up at a time when attack on Kashmir was already thwarted and India was advancing inside Pakistan, capturing a large chunk of their territory. Moreover, there has already been a source above mentioning that India was going to turn the losses gap wide and military superiority if war continued. As the Pakistan didn't achieve what it wanted at all, incurred heavy military losses and defeated politically & diplomatically, war can't be termed as stalemate. Gap in losses is not a correct and actually irrelevant when you are assessing the result of war. By applying this, First Kashmir will be a clear Indian Victory which in fact had limited success. The result of war is judged by its outcome. It's not necessary that everything should have grey shades. Some things are either black or white only and multiple perspectives aren't involved there. So, is the victory in an expeditionary war.
- * Not much relevant to our discussion but it may help to judge the source itself:
"Second, despite the considerable relative power advantage that India seemed to enjoy on paper, it soon became apparent that New Delhi was not going to emerge as a local hegemon that could dominate South Asia, if it managed to achieve a victory at all. Rather, the Second Kashmir War demonstrated to U.S. officials that India would remain preoccupied with Pakistan because it was not yet strong enough to break free of the balance of power on the subcontinent. In short, the hegemonic power shift that was taking place was incomplete. This, in turn, forced Washington to revise its earlier assessments and reconsider its regional strategy.
The above narrative of "containing Indian hegemony" belongs solely to Pakistani intellectuals, scholars and political scientists. Islamic Republic of Pakistan sees itself as a balance of India in Indian Subcontinent meanwhile Republic of India who alone comprises 74% of population, 76% of landmass and 80% of economy of region has its concerns and sphere of militray capabilities and assets spread around the entire Indian Ocean Region while narrative among Indian Scholars is to establish India as a great power. The narrative often runs among Indian defence enthusiasts and scholars to "ignore and dehyphenate" Pakistan till Pakistan makes it impossible for India to ignore it. To find if writer on Indian Ocean Region contexts is Indian/Pakistani/some foreigner with bias towards either of them, you just may check the narratives to judge. Here is a Pakistani analyst on Indian foreign policy that may help you to understand. "Difficult Equation". The Dawn. October 9, 2019. Retrieved March 27, 2019.
- * While you were busy changing "narrative" in the article, you said Balakot adventure was a retaliation of Pulwama episode. Yesterday in an interview, India's National Security Advisor Ajit Doval denied and said that strikes were pre planned and Pulwama's retribution has not been attained yet. So its better if the "retaliation" is removed from the article.
- * In the end, I understand that Most of these wars have ended up with defeat or disaster for Pakistan may sound offensive or biased. The sentence may be replaced with milder version not ended up with favour of Pakistan but not removal at all. It puts the summary of history of conflicts beforehand. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 10:05, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
Proposal
[edit]I think Fowler&fowler's compilation of sources shows that the scholarly consensus still prefers "stalemate" as the result of the 1965 war. So I propose that the 1965 war page be reverted to what it was before this edit, and this page modified accordingly. I also think the sentiment expressed in this scholarly view
Most important, Shastri was honest and above board in peace as he had been in war, projecting India as a powerful but good neighbour instead of the intolerant, unbudgeable centre of the world.[1]
should be respected. The contrary views expressed by other scholars can also be summarised in the body, but not unduly. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 08:21, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- But there are dozens of sources that more accurately support Indian victory in the war. Any discussion about changing the outcome must be initiated at Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965. I would recommend initiating WP:RFC as there are enough citations for supporting either parameter. Not this page. Orientls (talk) 08:40, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- The previous change was made by local consensus, not an RfC. So I am not sure why we need an RfC now. Since the discussion is taking place here, it would be best to conclude it here as well. I will make a post there inviting comments. As for sources, yes, there are dozens of sources for both the results. I am asking editors to review all of them to the extent of their ability and interest, and provide their input. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 09:40, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- I would support the following words in the infobox outcome, which is in keeping with @AshLin:'s assessment: "Military stalemate (with India possessing a military advantage at the time of conclusion, and somewhat greater political advantage)." Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:13, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- Pakistan lost the war and started engaging in proxy terrorism against India after seeing humiliating defeat in 1965.[45] Don't censor this. 39.42.89.236 (talk) 16:20, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- I would support this wording too. —Gazoth (talk) 15:53, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- I would support the following words in the infobox outcome, which is in keeping with @AshLin:'s assessment: "Military stalemate (with India possessing a military advantage at the time of conclusion, and somewhat greater political advantage)." Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:13, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- The previous change was made by local consensus, not an RfC. So I am not sure why we need an RfC now. Since the discussion is taking place here, it would be best to conclude it here as well. I will make a post there inviting comments. As for sources, yes, there are dozens of sources for both the results. I am asking editors to review all of them to the extent of their ability and interest, and provide their input. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 09:40, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
Fowler's references fail WP:CONTEXTMATTERS unlike few I provided right above as well as all those provided at Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965#Change in result in the infobox, which are of great quality.
Analysis of Fowler&fowler's sources by Aman.kumar.goel
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I will analyze more when I get time but so far Fowler's sources have failed WP:CONTEXTMATTERS and they are being misrepresented. Interpreting what the source says as 'stalemate' is a clear misrepresentation. There are many reliable sources out there that says the same thing but nonetheless notes that India was a clear victor in the war, if not decisive clearly won the war, if not decisively*. This is something that was mentioned in the discussion at the main article's talk page as well. I am opposing this proposal. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 16:31, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- Here are four sources, authored by political scientists, which speak to the nuances implicit in my proposal above, the first three giving a sense of the political or psychological advantage garnered by India and the last offering a binary (or really tri-nary) result. In this last reference, some editors might be surprised by India being listed as the "initiator" in both Kashmir wars, but I suspect this is because the authors do not consider infiltration to constitute initiating, especially in a disputed region, i.e. Kashmir, only crossing the international border (airlifting Indian troops to Kashmir in 1947), or crossing the international border into Punjab in 1965. Regardless, this is a highly cited source, as you will see, and makes the one-word judgment of Win/lose/draw.
Four sources speaking to the war's outcome
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- Well, the thing that you don't understand is that it doesn't matter whether a source is highly cited or not, but whether it's reliable for a particular claim, which is determined by WP:CONTEXTMATTERS. Your last source is a perfect example of why we don't rely on such sources which discuss a subject only in passing, and why we have policies like the one I just mentioned. Now, I won't even go telling how preposterous your justification is for using such a source peddling fringe theories in passing, because I don't need to. The policy is clear on this. Orientls (talk) 06:25, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- More analysis:
- Ref 12 is a book on cease-fire agreements in general by a political science professor (not a military historian!) and of the total 243 pages, it barely has a single page on 1965 war. Clearly not a high quality sources of the likes of which were presented during the discussion at the main article's talk page. Furthermore, this source too is being misrepresented as it only says that the "war quickly reached a military stalemate", not that it ended in a military stalemate (those are two different things), and then goes to say that "Pakistan was beginning to run out of ammunition, and could see that the war would turn to favor India over the long haul."
- Ref 11 has a single paragraph each on the 1965 and other wars. Hardly a quality source for the claim that war ended in a military stalemate, because it doesn't analyzes the war comprehensively like sources cited at the main article's talk page. Just a single paragraph, basically it's just providing a brief summary of each wars -- the likes of which, like I showed, exists in numbers for the claim that India won the war decisively too.
- Ref 13, again, is a handbook on Asian Security and the cited page hardly has a single paragraph on the 1965 war. Yet another source making passing mention. This won't pass muster, like others.
- Ref 14 is a book solely dedicated to the Kargil conflict; it is not a reliable source for anything related to the 1965 war, about which it contains just a single sentence anyway "India and Pakistan fought their second war over Kashmir in 1965, the outcome of which was another stalemate". Enough said.
- Fowler cites a reference (vide, "In Dixit, J. N. (2003), India-Pakistan in War and Peace") that despite saying that there was "no decisive military victory for either side" concurs that strategically India emerged victorious in the war.
- More on this; vide, "In Hewitt, Vernon (1997), The New International Politics of South Asia: Second Edition": it's not a quality reliable source for the claim made either, because it devotes just a single paragraph on the entire war. Easily fails the relevant RS policy.
To say that such sources outweigh the ones which do comprehensively cover the war in dozens of pages is just pointless. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 10:05, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Orientls: Please do explain how two authors who are leaders in the field of Democratic peace theory, have written a book cited by 1,100 scholarly articles in Google Scholar, whose paradigmatic example illustrating their work in the book, along with the Second World War, is the India-Pakistan war of 1971, and in turn whose five page discussion on pages 33 to 38, they begin with,
quote from the book Democracies at War
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"We demonstrate and illustrate these points by briefly examining two wars, the India-Pakistan War of 1971 and the Pacific War between Japan and the United States during World War II. In each case, as our theory would lead us to expect, understanding the origins of the war is centrally important to explaining its outcome. India-Pakistan War, 1971 India exploited the advantages of democracy in its 1971 war with Pakistan. Since decolonization in 1947, the two wings of Pakistan, West and East Pakistan, had united under the common bond of Islam to comprise one nation. However, political power had always fallen into the hands of the West Pakistanis, and the relationship between West Pakistan and East Pakistan was paternalistic at best. These facts, coupled with the gross economic disparities that existed between the two wings, prompted an East Pakistani movement for regional autonomy beginning in 1965. In 1971 the political conflict reached a head. A national election held in December 1970 gave the majority of seats in the Pakistani National As-sembly to a single East Pakistani party, stunning the West Pakistanis. ... |
- who, in addition, mention wars relating to India and Pakistan on a dozen other pages—do not fit the context. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:12, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Aman.kumar.goel: In light of your critique above, "Ref 7, again, is a book on an unrelated subject: the political economy of India, and hardly has a one line passing mention. This is also not a good quality source." please explain how Lloyd I. Rudolph and Susanne Hoeber Rudolph, the authors of Ref 7, whose book is cited by 1,143 scholarly articles, also don't fit the context when the describe the 1965 war variously on several pages as a draw, a military failure, or disappointment for India, but call the 1971 war a victory for India.
- who, in addition, mention wars relating to India and Pakistan on a dozen other pages—do not fit the context. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:12, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
Quotes from Rudolph and Rudolph's In pursuit of Lakshmi
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"The ground was being prepared for the electoral and organizational crises of 1967 and 1969, in the face of two consecutive bad monsoons (1965 and 1966), a draw in a major war with Pakistan (1965), and an unsuccessful devaluation (1966). In the fourth general election of 1967, Congress lost power ... (page 133)" "Congress's loss of support and the marked (5 percent) increase in turnout in 1967 (see fig. 4) reflected voter dissatisfaction with poor economic and military performance in the preceding two years ' The depressing economic consequences of two consecutive bad monsoons, disappointment with the outcome of the 1965 war with Pakistan, and the unsuccessful devaluation of June 1966 were blamed on the Congress government. (page 161)" "Demand politics surfaced in 1964-65 and continued through 1974-75, with a brief remission in 1971-72. Exogenous factors contributed to this change; these included shocks caused by security, political, and economic events: military failure in wars with China (1962) and Pakistan (1965); the deaths of two prime ministers (Nehru in May 1964 and Shastri in January 1966); and the "worst weather on record" (page 228) " In a 1972 khaki election for state assemblies held soon after India's military victory over Pakistan in December 1971, the electorate not only confirmed its 1971 judgment but also re-warded Mrs. Gandhi's conduct of the war by returning Congress majorities in most states. (page 239) |
- Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:47, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Aman.kumar.goel: Please compress your two lengthy replies involving sources (above) in the manner I have done with the template "compress top/bottom"). It becomes very difficult to keep track of this thread for other interested users. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:53, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:47, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ Praagh, David Van (2003), The Greater Game: India's Race with Destiny and China, McGill-Queen's Press - MQUP, p. 297, ISBN 978-0-7735-2639-6
- I've already explained it, and so have other people here. As with other references you posted, this book's theme too is nowhere related to the military history of India, let alone the war of 1965 between India and Pakistan. As its title and description reads, it focuses on the subject of India's political economy. I cannot help you if you want to keep pretending otherwise. There is nothing substantial whatsoever in the book with regards to the war of 1965 apart from the hardly-one-line passing mention. Heck, that mention too is in the context of the events leading up to the Congress's poor electoral performance in the late 1960s in general and the fourth general elections in 1967 in particular, of which events such as China's attack in 1962, the 1965 war with Pakistan, the droughts in 1965 and in 1966 played a crucial role in undermining the congres system in that period -- all of these thus expectedly had mentions in that book. If you think the book gives us anything substantial about the war in particular, you need to show where by linking to the particular page(s). The sources I provided and a few of yours as well in fact confirm that both sides had some losses and wars end up with ceasefire one day but this war involved a victory and a defeat. Per WP:NPOV and WP:RS we can't omit this necessary part. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 17:41, 28 March 2019 (UTC)
- 4. "India's victorious success in the 1965 war" in Foreign Policy of India, 7th edition, Vikas Publications, Delhi (Google Scholar Citation Index: 44) Author: V N Khanna Formerly Reader in Political Science, Deshbandhu College University of Delhi
- 5. "A three-week war in 1965 resulted in an Indian victory." The Genocide Debate: Politicians, Academics, and Victims (Google Scholar Citation Index: 23) Author: Donald W. Beachler, Associate Professor, Department of Politics, Ithaca College, New York.
- 7. "In South Asia, Pakistan lost the 1965 war with India." The Eagle and the Peacock: U.S. Foreign Policy Toward India Since Independence (Google Scholar Citation Index: 35) Author: M. SRINIVAS CHARY is Adjunct Professor at the New School of Social Research in New York.
- 11. "This was proved during the 1965 Indo-Pak war when India defeated Pakistan comprehensively."India and the Dynamics of World Politics: A book on Indian Foreign Policy Pearson Education, Delhi (Google Scholar Citation Index: 7) Author: Reetika Sharma has been involved in free lance writing on the implications of recent policy initiatives on related social, political, and economics spheres. She has been associated with reputed institutes guiding students for civil services exams contributed significantly to the success of many candidates. (From back cover of book.)
- 13. "1965: India defeated Pakistan"Illustrated History of Women, Volume 10 (Google Scholar Citation Index 0)
Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 02:41, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- Sources I provided were aimed to count if your "15 sources" can be outnumbered and it was not even difficult. We are clear now that enough sources agree that India won the war. When we discuss the qualified sources for discussing the results then Talk:Indo-Pakistani War of 1965#Change in result in the infobox already had enough quality sources that we didn't needed another discussion. You are beating a dead horse unless you can provide sources which surpass that great quality of sources. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 05:36, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Aman.kumar.goel: You say, "the sources were aimed to count if your '15 sources' can be outnumbered." Could you please clarify what this means, which Wikipedia guideline (from WP:POLICYLIST) recommends it, and what relation this bears to military history, which I failed to comprehend in my brief career as a military history reviewer? What Wikipedia principle of congruence balances Lloyd I. Rudolph and Susanne Hoeber Rudolph's magnum opus with a book whose author is described on its back cover as, "--- has been involved in free lance writing on the implications of recent policy initiatives on related social, political, and economics spheres. She has been associated with reputed institutes guiding students for civil services exams contributed significantly to the success of many candidate.?" Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 09:09, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- Why you are collapsing my analysis of your sources. As a matter of policy, you shouldn't be doing that without my consent per WP:REFACTOR; and the comments aren't as long as you pretend anyway. You seem to be intransigent as far as your sources are concerned, which doesn't really help. We don't normally use sources which provide information about a subject, which isn't related to the principal topics of the source, in passing. Most of your sources fall in that category as shown above. It's incumbent on you to look at what context the source is making that particular statement about that subject. That's even more the case when the thing being argued upon is a result of an India-Pakistan war. Again, this is accepted widely as a matter of policy. Wikilawyering doesn't help either. As with any other article on a major war, there is no dearth of in-depth analysis of the war in reliable sources, as also evidenced by the laundry list of such sources in use for the current result in the article. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 16:18, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Aman.kumar.goel: I have uncollapsed your analysis. Please accept my sincere apologies. However, let us stick to Military History. Again, you say, "the sources were aimed to count if your '15 sources' can be outnumbered." Could you please clarify what this means, which Wikipedia guideline (from WP:POLICYLIST) recommends it, and what relation this bears to military history, one which I failed to comprehend in my brief career as a military history reviewer? What Wikipedia principle of congruence balances Lloyd I. Rudolph and Susanne Hoeber Rudolph's magnum opus with 1143 Google Scholar citations with a book, with 7 Google Scholar citations, whose author is described on its back cover as, "--- has been involved in free lance writing on the implications of recent policy initiatives on related social, political, and economics spheres. She has been associated with reputed institutes guiding students for civil services exams contributed significantly to the success of many candidate.?" Please no WP:Weasel answers. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:45, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- First, sorry for replying late as I'm running too busy at office. Second, I have actually quoted many high quality sources which includes dedicated analysts who have spent their careers studying Indo Pakistani conflicts to institutions like Oxford University, Colombia University, Routledge. Now, we both rush to outnumber each others' sources and start to bring political scientists here after military historians, I don't think its going to help discussion in any way. I cited WP:CONTEXTMATTERS for a very good reason. The sources you quoted assert stalemate were all suggesting Military stalemate on the basis of close & heavy losses on both sides. Pakistan didn't get its purpose served in any way. There is no single source that unambiguously can state that Pakistan won the war or there was any stalemate except the context of extent of losses. 1965 war had a purpose for Pakistan and blocking the same purpose was the aim of India. I find no way to call it stalemate while it stopped after UN intervention during Indian expedition. 11:06, 31 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aman.kumar.goel (talk • contribs)
- @Aman.kumar.goel: I have uncollapsed your analysis. Please accept my sincere apologies. However, let us stick to Military History. Again, you say, "the sources were aimed to count if your '15 sources' can be outnumbered." Could you please clarify what this means, which Wikipedia guideline (from WP:POLICYLIST) recommends it, and what relation this bears to military history, one which I failed to comprehend in my brief career as a military history reviewer? What Wikipedia principle of congruence balances Lloyd I. Rudolph and Susanne Hoeber Rudolph's magnum opus with 1143 Google Scholar citations with a book, with 7 Google Scholar citations, whose author is described on its back cover as, "--- has been involved in free lance writing on the implications of recent policy initiatives on related social, political, and economics spheres. She has been associated with reputed institutes guiding students for civil services exams contributed significantly to the success of many candidate.?" Please no WP:Weasel answers. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:45, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- Why you are collapsing my analysis of your sources. As a matter of policy, you shouldn't be doing that without my consent per WP:REFACTOR; and the comments aren't as long as you pretend anyway. You seem to be intransigent as far as your sources are concerned, which doesn't really help. We don't normally use sources which provide information about a subject, which isn't related to the principal topics of the source, in passing. Most of your sources fall in that category as shown above. It's incumbent on you to look at what context the source is making that particular statement about that subject. That's even more the case when the thing being argued upon is a result of an India-Pakistan war. Again, this is accepted widely as a matter of policy. Wikilawyering doesn't help either. As with any other article on a major war, there is no dearth of in-depth analysis of the war in reliable sources, as also evidenced by the laundry list of such sources in use for the current result in the article. Aman.kumar.goel (talk) 16:18, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Aman.kumar.goel: You say, "the sources were aimed to count if your '15 sources' can be outnumbered." Could you please clarify what this means, which Wikipedia guideline (from WP:POLICYLIST) recommends it, and what relation this bears to military history, which I failed to comprehend in my brief career as a military history reviewer? What Wikipedia principle of congruence balances Lloyd I. Rudolph and Susanne Hoeber Rudolph's magnum opus with a book whose author is described on its back cover as, "--- has been involved in free lance writing on the implications of recent policy initiatives on related social, political, and economics spheres. She has been associated with reputed institutes guiding students for civil services exams contributed significantly to the success of many candidate.?" Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 09:09, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]However, I do know of the work of Daniel Marston, Professor of Military History, Australian National University, and formerly Ike Skelton Distinguished Chair in the Art of War at the US Army Command and General Staff College., and author of many books on military history:
Books on military history authored by Daniel Marston
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Here is Marston and Sundaram's detailed verdict on the War of 1965:
Verdict: Strategic miscalculations by both nations ensured that the result of this war remained a stalemate.
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The Indian gains led to a major Pakistani counterattack on September 1 in the southern sector, in Punjab, where Indian forces were caught unprepared and suffered heavy losses. The sheer strength of the Pakistani thrust, which was spearheaded by seventy tanks and two infantry brigades, led Indian commanders to call for air support. Pakistan retaliated on September 2 with its own air strikes in both Kashmir and Punjab. The Pakistani attack on Chhamb was brilliant in conception but poor in implementation. While Pakistan made some initial gains, it was halted by Indian troops. As an answer to this, India decided to drive up to Lahore. What probably saved Pakistan was the Ichhogil Canal and the failure of Indian intelligence to reveal the existence of Pakistan's 1st Armored Division that was brought up to the canal to face the Indian forces.' The PAF had planned preemptive strikes against Indian airfields, particularly forward airbases in the Punjab, Jammu and Kashmir, and Rajasthan. Only 32 aircraft carried out this strike, and it did not have a major impact. The IAF in return used its Hunters and Canberras to good effect and attacked the Pakistani bases at Sargodha, Chaklala, Peshawar, and Kollar. Since this did not prove effective, the IAF switched to operating on deep-strike missions in Pakistan, launching its bombers supported by Gnats on road and rail targets in the Lahore and Sialkot sectors. At the end of the war, both sides claimed large numbers of kills, but in the fog of war it was difficult to determine the exact number of losses on either side. (p 145) Command and control of forces on the Indian side under Prime Minister Shastri was clear, and objectives were defined well. In the case of Pakistan the politico-military objectives were vaguely defined, and no thought was given to finishing the battle. Instead, operational military orders tended to be rhetorical rather than commands, which led to confusion. On both sides officers were sacked or moved during operations, and leadership that had served in the first Kashmir war was sometimes found wanting. The Indian Army failed to recognize the presence of heavy Pakistani artillery and armaments in Chhamb and suffered significant losses as a result. (p 146) Strategic miscalculations by both nations ensured that the result of this war remained a stalemate. (p 146) |
Also pinging @Winged Blades of Godric:. I have to now write narrative prose in place of a list in the other article per promise made to @Gazoth: Also pinging @Kautilya3:, @RegentsPark:, @AshLin: for general wisdom, as I fear by the time I'm done, too much time will have been spent over something fairly simple. And I would rather not do a formal RfC and advertise at WT:INDIA, Military History Project, Village Pump, etc Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:21, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
- Finally, I found a second, very recent, military history account: Gates, Scott; Roy, Kaushik (2017), "Chapter 4 The Second India-Pakistan War: 1965", Limited War in South Asia: From Decolonization to Recent Times, Routledge Series in Military Strategy and Operational Art, Taylor & Francis, pp. 65–86, ISBN 978-1-317-10500-8 This book has a very detailed description and assessment. It asseses the war to have been equally waged. Here are some excerpts:
Excerpts from Gates and Roy's Chapter 4 The Second India-Pakistan War: 1965, pages 65–86
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Legacies and assessment, pages 80 to 86: "Major-General Sukhwant Singh asserts that at Khem Karan, the 4th Indian Mountain Division destroyed 107 Pakistani tanks. According to General Chaudhuri, the Pakistan Army deployed 620 tanks and lost about three-fourths of them. He counted 471 Pakistani tank losses: 236 Pattons destroyed and 26 captured; 60 Chaffees destroyed and 1 captured; 26 Shermans destroyed and 11 captured; and another 111 tanks destroyed within Pakistan. Chaudhuri claimed that the Indian Army had lost 128 tanks. Major-General Sukhwant Singh writes that Chaudhuri probably overestimated the Pakistani tank losses. India fought an attritional campaign, and the Indian Army at that time was not sufficiently combat effective to inflict three times its losses in armour on its opponent. The Indian tank units were certainly not Panzerwaffe(page 81)" "The PAF lost 73 of its fleet of 140 combat aircraft (Sabres 104, F-104 Star Fighters 12 and B-58s 24), and the IAF lost 33 aircraft (Chaturvedi 1978: 147). Air-Marshal M.S. Chaturvedi writes that the IAF halted the Pakistani advance in the Chhamb-Jaurian sector by attacking the enemy armour in the evening of 1 September 1965 (Chaturvedi 1978: 149). It seems that Chaturvedi’s conclusion is a bit overdrawn. (page 81)" "The Pattons and Sabres shaped the tactical dynamics of land and air war in favour of Pakistan. On the issue of command, both sides were on an equal plane. India’s bigger size and larger amount of resources saved the country from defeat. Pakistan probably underestimated the combat effectiveness of the Indian Army after its bad performance against China in 1962. Again, the US had already warned Pakistan in 1954 that in case of a war with India, all military aid to Pakistan would cease. Moreover, the US supply of spare parts was ungenerous (Effendi 2007: 187–88). Logistics was the Pakistan Army’s Achilles heel. (page 82)" "Major-General Jogindar Singh writes that Harbakhsh Singh’s plan for the 11th Indian Corps was formulated without detailed groundwork. ... Jogindar blames only Harbaskhsh for the fiasco at Ichhogil Canal Offensive, but the Indian COAS probably also deserves some blame for the fiasco resulting from bad planning and faulty implementation of this operation. (page 82)" "Both Harbakhsh and Jogindar write that the inferior performance of several Indian infantry units in this war emphasized the need to put officers and men through battle inoculation. The weak leadership of several COs resulted in desertions from several Indian battalions (including the Gurkhas). Thus, Harbakhsh challenges the so-called Martial Race syndrome in the Indian Army. The desertion was serious, especially for the 4th Indian Mountain Division: It went into action on 6 September, and within 24 hours, the strength of six infantry battalions had plummeted to three and a half battalions, only partly due to enemy action, and mainly due to desertion. (page 82)" "The IAF units operating from the airfields of Agra and beyond, without any briefing by the air contact teams that were left behind in the forward airfields, failed to provide timely and intense close air support. In contrast, writes Harbakhsh, the PAF from the Sargoda/Sargodha airfield was able to pound the Indian ground units efficiently (Harbakhsh 2000: 340–41, 346). (page 83)" "The Indian Army always feared an enveloping attack by Pakistani armour. Hence, the Indian armour was overcautious during the 1965 War (Rahman 1989: 101). Command of the armour proved to be a problem even for the Pakistan Army. Major-General Shaukat Riza rightly notes that the deployment of armour by the Pakistan Army was faulty. (page 83)" "Overall, we can conclude that both the Indian and Pakistan armies were good at defending defensive localities. However, both armies exhibited weaknesses in launching division-size attacks. During the Khem-Karan Offensive, the Pakistan Army failed to establish a corps headquarters to conduct a joint infantry-artillery-armour attack against the 4th Indian Mountain Division. At the brigade level, both the Pakistan and Indian armies exhibited some form of infantry-armour and artillery-armour attacks. But, infantry-artillery-armour-close air support, – i.e. combined arms tactics – was beyond the pale of either of these Dominion armies. Both armies used their tanks in penny packets (that is, as a squadron or a regiment supported occasionally by a battalion). Either a few tanks were used to provide fire support to the infantry in defended localities, or a few tanks supported by an infantry battalion were tasked for conducting limited probes. Outflanking thrusts over long distances by autonomous brigade-size armoured groups with mechanized infantry, self-propelled guns and close air support – which the Wehrmacht exhibited during the Second World War and the IDF in Sinai Desert – were beyond the reach of the Indian and Pakistan armies. (pages 83–84)" |
Neither book is in the article's citations or bibliography. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 05:07, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose. I've waded through the superfluity of sources with a fine-toothed comb, and having done that, I also agree with the conclusion that, notwithstanding the excessive amount, the sources presented here won't suffice to usurp the present result parameter of the Indo-Pakistani War of 1965 article: virtually all these sources offer nothing significant but mere passing mentions of the war's result at issue in the context unrelated to the war. Even if we leave aside for the moment the fact that the policy on reliable sources encourages excluding such sources making passing mentions, there is even a precedent for this vis-à-vis the aforementioned article itself; vide Adamgerber80's comment here. I further warn Fowler to stop WP:CANVASSING. Orientls (talk) 06:03, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- Dear @Orientls: I have 30 times the edits on WP than you do; indeed I have more edits in the FA India than you have on Wikipedia. If you think I don't know what canvassing it, please take me to ANI. Please also read WP:Weasel and write clearly. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:31, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- Comment. I stand by my proposal to go back to the old consensus which said Inconclusive, both sides claim victory. I don't think we will have consensus for anything more definitive. I am afraid the fog of war continues. I also can't disentangle political, military and diplomatic aspects to say, one was stalemate, one was victory etc. The military part of it was really a draw, not a "stalemate", because India had the staying power while Pakistan did not. All the scholars that say "stalemate" are basically following an old script and don't have any interest to examine it in any more depth. I am not sure why we should have so much interest in it either. All the war pages are in despicable shape. If we have energy, we should try and improve them instead of fighting over the infobox. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 09:12, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: "Inconclusive" is fine. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:06, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- PS Why do you think Marston and Sundaram make the determination of "stalemate?" Not sure India had the staying power. I think it is revisionist history produced by Indian historians based on a lot of surmising about information they claim Shastri did not have or was not given. India's more enhanced economic and military condition today should not blind us to the fact that both India and Pakistan in 1965 were impoverished nations on the periphery of the world order, no matter how many Bandungs Nehru had been to. The Bihar famine, which the Indian government continued to call a drought, was only two years away, as were the US airlifts of wheat. Btw, its not the infobox, I wasn't even much aware of it. Its the lead; and the section whose summary the lead purportedly is. That is the bigger worry for me.
- PPS I just became aware that the Hindu nationalists decided to celebrate it in 2015, creating no doubt a climate of opinion in India. The same time that the slant in the article began. Check the lead before 2015. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:06, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- PPPS And here is the one paragraph summary of the war in the Oxford Companion to Military History. This is for enhancing my own understanding and and as a resource for future use, not for changing minds about the silly infobox.
- PPS I just became aware that the Hindu nationalists decided to celebrate it in 2015, creating no doubt a climate of opinion in India. The same time that the slant in the article began. Check the lead before 2015. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:06, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
Oxford Companion to Military History
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"In 1962,a brief border war between China and India resulted in India's defeat, encouraging Pakistan's government to believe that they might be able to win a conflict between the two countries, in spite of the numerical advantage enjoyed by India. In January 1965, a border dispute over the poorly marked frontier of the Rann of Kutch escalated into conflict, although this was ended by agreement in June. In August, tension over Kashmir rose, culminating in further border clashes and claims by each side that the other had violated its territory. An advance by Indian troops was countered by a Pakistani advance, and a full-scale war ensued. By 23 September 1965, both sides were running low on ammunition after a UN embargo had been imposed, and a ceasefire was agreed. In January 1966, both sides agreed to return to the positions they had occupied before the war broke out. (page 439)" |
According to Srinath Raghavan doi:10.1080/01402390802407616, only 14% of India's "frontline ammunition" had been spent, but the COAS J. N. Chaudhuri told Shastri that all of it had been mostly spent. Whether he had bad information or he deliberately misinformed Shastri, I can't say. He seems to be an old school gu,y brought up in the British Indian Army, who was basically after status quo, not an adventurer. He saw the Indian campaign as basically a defensive action, to remove the threat to Kashmir posed by the Operation Grand Slam. The Sialkot campaign, with its meagre gains, achieved that, and there was no need to continue fighting any more. The Sialkot campaign had the chance to achieve a decisive victory, but it blew it. There was nothing more to be done about it. The Lahore Front was a side show. Chaudhuri has said that India didn't have the strength to take Lahore or to hold it afterwards. Even though it had a big psychological advantage, that is not where the action was.
Not only was India a poor country, as you say, but the military had also been assigned a very marginal role in the society in the Nehru era. It was mostly starved for funds. Reason dictates that Akhnur should have been strengthened and alternative bridges built over Chenab. But it looks like they didn't have the funds for such things. We saw how badly equipped they were when they went to fight in the Himalayas. So, blowing more money and men in a pointless war wasn't in anybody's interest.
The relations with Pakistan were also not bad. Ayub Khan was a decent President, mostly focused on domestic development. He even offered to team up with India to fight the Chinese threat (and it was Nehru that rejected the offer). So I don't think Pakistan was thought of as an "enemy" as it is today. So, the Indians rightly assessed the magnitude of the threat, and acted accordingly. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 14:53, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- It was the 14% story I was referring to. It has been around in the Official (Indian) History of the 1965 War, long before Raghavan. No one other than some Indian historians believe it. What are the chances that only 14% of ammunition was used and neither the General nor the prime minister knew? And the outside chance that that did really happen, the war still ended in a stalemate, at the time it ended. "If ifs and buts," as my late mother-in-law use to say, "were candy and nuts, My what a Christmas we'd have." You did not answer my question about why Marston and Sundaram make a clear unambiguous judgment of stalemate. Anyway, on that note, I should add, I really am looking to find the more contemporary military history sources. Any help will be appreciated, especially about work by military historians from outside the subcontinent. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:50, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- Marston and Sundaram were the editors of the book. The passage you quoted is most likely from the chapter by Bhashyam Kasturi, of which Yaqoob Khan Bangash wrote:
In the post-1947 section of the volume, there is a chapter on India’s ‘State of war with Pakistan,’ by Bhashyam Kasturi which, based wholly on already published Indian sources, adds little to our understanding of the conflict.
- I thought it was off the mark from the very first line of your quote, where he says "Punjab" whereas he should have said "Jammu" or "Kashmir".
- For the 14% ammunition info, Raghavan gave two sources (the other being Palit). The official history itself cites multiple sources. It certainly reflects the poor state of organisation in the Indian Army, which the official history is taking pains to highlight. Note that it calls the result of the war a draw. The present campaign to turn into a "victory" is certain driven by BJP. But Indians are actively debating it. See for example, Indo-Pak war: Snatching a draw from the jaws of victory in 1965, Hindustan Times, 13 September 2015.
- If you are inclined to believe that India did run out of ammunition, then I wonder what you make of this information, according to Pakistan's Air Marshal Nur Khan:
General Ayub was told on the second day of the war by the Army Chief, General Musa Khan, that the Army had even run out of ammunition.
- This is covered in Ahmed, Ishtiaq (2013), Pakistan – The Garrison State: Origins, Evolution, Consequences (1947-2011), Oxford University Press Pakistan, ISBN 978-0-19-906636-0. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 17:16, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: Thanks, first of all, for the article. I have the book here. I ordered the kindle version soon after I made the first post. I realized right away the error I made, but felt then I didn't want to confuse readers by going back and changing the citation with chapter info. I should have. The important thing is it has been vetted. It has a foreword by Stephen P. Cohen who says,
- It was the 14% story I was referring to. It has been around in the Official (Indian) History of the 1965 War, long before Raghavan. No one other than some Indian historians believe it. What are the chances that only 14% of ammunition was used and neither the General nor the prime minister knew? And the outside chance that that did really happen, the war still ended in a stalemate, at the time it ended. "If ifs and buts," as my late mother-in-law use to say, "were candy and nuts, My what a Christmas we'd have." You did not answer my question about why Marston and Sundaram make a clear unambiguous judgment of stalemate. Anyway, on that note, I should add, I really am looking to find the more contemporary military history sources. Any help will be appreciated, especially about work by military historians from outside the subcontinent. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:50, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
Short excerpt from foreword by Stephen P. Cohen
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"Not only is this volume a breakthrough in the study of Indian military history, it bears witness to the argument made by the editors that this field has been grossly neglected by the South Asian studies community and by military historians. I would add that the changing international order makes the study of the military history of approximately one-fifth of the world's people especially relevant to our times. This is the first edited scholarly book to deal with the study of India's military history (India being broadly defined to cover all of South Asia)." |
- The chapter moreover has Kaushik's Roy's reasonably positive recommendation. See here.
- As for the rest, a draw is a judgment; a stalemate is a condition. All stalemates end in draws, but not all draws result from stalemates. When they don't it is either because the player (the terminology is originally from chess) has miscalculated his options or is deliberately throwing the game away. (OED: stalemate: A position in which the player whose turn it is to move has no allowable move open to him, but has not his king in check. According to modern rules, the game which ends in stalemate is drawn.) India had no allowable moves open to it in 1965, whether Pakistan did or not is unimportant. No one is saying India lost. The 14% theory assumes that having access to 76% more ammo would have drastically changed the outcome, not waiting to consider that there's a lot more to war than having ammunition. First there is the question of what's on the books and what is fit for service (see quotes below). Secondly, they don't consider other factors, for example, that the Indian Air Force had taken a beating; the Chinese were champing at the bit to punish India again. All those things determine a stalemate. A recent paper by a sharp military historian, Rudra Chaudhuri speaks to this. See:
Rudra Chaudhuri (2018), "Indian "Strategic Restraint" Revisited: The Case of the 1965 India-Pakistan War", India Review, 17 (1): 55–75 {{citation}}
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The PAF had an estimated 260 aircraft or 17 squadrons, including the F-104 Starfighter. The IAF had some 26 Fighter squadrons on their books. Effectively however, only seventeen were deemed fit for service. Further, India was yet to receive around 24 MIG 21s from Russia out of a total order of 38. The CIA estimated that even if these arrived in time to fight Pakistan, “India was not known to have sufficient pilots trained on the MIG 21 to operate three more squadrons.” The air war escalated quickly. ... 35 out of 59 IAF planes were destroyed while on the ground. ... So poor were the IAF’s logistical arrangements that at times – in Pathankot and Amritsar – the PAF “caught the IAF refueling in line abreast, thus presenting an ideal target.” Twelve aircraft were immediately destroyed or damaged in one instance. For the remaining part of the war, the IAF focused on protecting its bases against further pre-emptive attacks. |
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What worried India most was Chinese military entry through “Pak held Kashmir,” which would allow the “Red Army to attack Kargil and cut off India’s Division in Ladakh.” The US confirmed that 97,000 Chinese troops were stationed in Tibet and Sinkiang together.119 By September 16, Chinese forces were found in strength on the border with Sikkim with an infantry Division moving from Lhasa to the Chumbi Valley area near the border with India and Bhutan.120 It is for these reasons that while India deployed three Divisions in West Bengal, Shastri made clear that India had “no quarrel with East Pakistan.” |
Chaudhuri's conclusion, short excerpt
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This study challenges the fundamental assumption that Indian political leaders’ disinclination to use force across India’s borders serves as the primary source for Indian strategic restraint. The case shows that restraint was in fact shaped by issues such as limitations in capabilities, especially during the conflict in Kutch in April 1965, and the threat of external intervention – from China – in September 1965. Indian political leaders’ approach was hardly antithetical to the large-scale use of force. |
Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:38, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for that. It is a nice article and in fact the first full-length scholarly discussion of the war we are seeing in this discussion. I have no problem with the conclusions drawn in this paper. But I also note that the paper fully supports my contention when it says:
Rather, as previously evidenced, strategic restraint was reinforced once India achieved its primary goal (of securing J&K) and only when external factors (such as the threat of Chinese intervention) limited Indian choices.
- So it can hardly be called a stalemate for India. I know about the China factor too, but I also believe that the world powers would not have idly watched any potential Chinese interference in the conflict.
- Note also that Shastri accepted the UN Secretary General's proposal for a ceasefire on 11-12 September, even before the Sialkot campaign was well under way, i.e., before the Battle of Chawinda. If the ceasefire went through, there would have been no need for the Sialkot campaign. This was also before China moved any troops, apparently on 17 September. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 21:46, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
- I mean stalemate in the sense that there is nothing more the Indians or Pakistanis could have done. Both the US and China would have ensured that India could not have gone into Lahore, even if it had the wherewithal, the US, as an old ally of Pakistan, by applying unprecedented pressure, China by opening another front. The world powers would have acted in any meaningful way against the Chinese, only if the spur for the Chinese action was not further Indian advance into west Pakistan or new one into East Pakistan. Britain was upset at India for even opening the Punjab front, i.e. for extending a conflict over a disputed territory into a war between nations. After all, why did India need to open the Punjab front if it indeed had been prevailing in Kashmir. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:49, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- First of all,I would like to thank Kautilya, Fowler and Aman for the research everyone has put forth. Kudos! This is exactly what we need - a scholarly discussion :) Secondly, I would like to point, most of the research appears to indicate, that India exercised strategic restraint, even while Lahore was within reach. Now whether or not Indian forces would have could have should have had secured Lahore or not, both their objectives had been met - 1. Securing J&K and 2. Offensive inside Pakistan territory. I would argue that Indian position certainly had an upper hand having achieved objectives of securing its own areas and on offensive inside Pakistan territory - only to retreat to peacetime positions as a way to de-escalate. That unto itself is not a draw but a ceasefire and de-escalation via Tashkent accord back to peacetime positions after having secured their defensive objectives.. Sdmarathe (talk) 04:10, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- Dear @Sdmarathe: Thanks for your generous reply. The author's point is that India's goal of "securing J&K" was met only by the terms of the cease-fire, not before it. In light of India's air-force losses, of pressure being applied by the US and the UK, and of the burgeoning Chinese threat, whose previous memory from three years before was still raw in India, the cease-fire ensured that India would get Kashmir back even if it meant returning larger, but less strategic, real estate in Punjab. The author says, "The case demonstrates political primacy over military means. It also shows how limited capabilities, international demands for a ceasefire, and the threat of intervention on the part of China played a much larger role in shaping political decisions." and later, "As far as the US was concerned, the main red line for the Chinese was Indian military engagement in East Pakistan, and potentially deeper penetration in the west in and around Lahore. It was for these reasons that Indian envoys in London, Washington and Moscow were all urged by the Indian Ministry of External Affairs to accept a ceasefire proposal as fast as possible." Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:55, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- PS More relevantly to current events, the author concluded with, "In his seminal study on perception and misperception in international politics, Robert Jervis begins by asking a seemingly simple question: do decision-makers’ perceptions matter? How easy or difficult, Jervis wrote, is it to distinguish between the 'world as the actor sees it' and 'the world in which policy will be carried out?' The key problem, Jervis surmised, is that 'decision-makers assimilate evidence to their pre-existing beliefs without being aware of alternate explanations.' In the contemporary Indian context, it is all-too-evident that Indian decision-makers see no difference between the world as they see it and the one in which their policies will be carried out."
- Jarvis's and the author's words were brought into focus in recent events, when on February 27, 2019, Pakistan struck back, downed a plane, captured a pilot, and India has been working overtime to give positive spin to the events in the world in which its policies were carried out. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:02, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- Dear @Sdmarathe: Thanks for your generous reply. The author's point is that India's goal of "securing J&K" was met only by the terms of the cease-fire, not before it. In light of India's air-force losses, of pressure being applied by the US and the UK, and of the burgeoning Chinese threat, whose previous memory from three years before was still raw in India, the cease-fire ensured that India would get Kashmir back even if it meant returning larger, but less strategic, real estate in Punjab. The author says, "The case demonstrates political primacy over military means. It also shows how limited capabilities, international demands for a ceasefire, and the threat of intervention on the part of China played a much larger role in shaping political decisions." and later, "As far as the US was concerned, the main red line for the Chinese was Indian military engagement in East Pakistan, and potentially deeper penetration in the west in and around Lahore. It was for these reasons that Indian envoys in London, Washington and Moscow were all urged by the Indian Ministry of External Affairs to accept a ceasefire proposal as fast as possible." Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:55, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- First of all,I would like to thank Kautilya, Fowler and Aman for the research everyone has put forth. Kudos! This is exactly what we need - a scholarly discussion :) Secondly, I would like to point, most of the research appears to indicate, that India exercised strategic restraint, even while Lahore was within reach. Now whether or not Indian forces would have could have should have had secured Lahore or not, both their objectives had been met - 1. Securing J&K and 2. Offensive inside Pakistan territory. I would argue that Indian position certainly had an upper hand having achieved objectives of securing its own areas and on offensive inside Pakistan territory - only to retreat to peacetime positions as a way to de-escalate. That unto itself is not a draw but a ceasefire and de-escalation via Tashkent accord back to peacetime positions after having secured their defensive objectives.. Sdmarathe (talk) 04:10, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- I mean stalemate in the sense that there is nothing more the Indians or Pakistanis could have done. Both the US and China would have ensured that India could not have gone into Lahore, even if it had the wherewithal, the US, as an old ally of Pakistan, by applying unprecedented pressure, China by opening another front. The world powers would have acted in any meaningful way against the Chinese, only if the spur for the Chinese action was not further Indian advance into west Pakistan or new one into East Pakistan. Britain was upset at India for even opening the Punjab front, i.e. for extending a conflict over a disputed territory into a war between nations. After all, why did India need to open the Punjab front if it indeed had been prevailing in Kashmir. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:49, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
Lahore was not "within reach". Neither have I seen any RS indicate that India had planned to go into Lahore. Rudra Chaudhuri has accessed enough internal documents of the Indian government (but apparently none of the Pakistani government) to give us an idea of India's strategy. Note in particular,
He [Shastri] stated that he could no longer “live from ceasefire to ceasefire.” Furthermore, the fate of Akhnoor and potentially India’s ability to defend J&K lay in the balance.
These are defensive strategies. I have seen it mentioned that capturing territory was not important to India, but breaking Pakistan's capacity to fight. "Breaking capacity" might sound like an offensive strategy, but it has to be understood in the context of living "from ceasefire to ceasefire", i.e., seeking durable peace rather than yet another ceasefire in a cycle of conflict.
So, while the Chinese threat is certainly important in strategic calculations, India's goals were modest in comparison to the Chinese red lines. Going into Lahore or attacking East Pakistan were never on the cards. Fighting a "long war" was not on the cards either, for economic reasons. Here is one analysis that states it explicitly:
Acutely concerned about the impact of the war on the economy, Prime Minister Shastri, Finance Minister T. T. Krishnamachari and Food Minister C. Subramaniam were all in favour of agreeing to a ceasefire on the basis of the UN Security Council Resolution of 6 September. But they were strongly opposed by Defence Minister Chavan, who was not only reflecting his own views but also that of the leadership of the armed forces.[1]
This was on 11-12 September when the UN Secretary General visited Delhi. The reason for the Army's opposition wasn't desire for a long war, but the fact that, at that point in time, the Sialkot campaign had just started. (This is what removed the threat to J&K, not the Lahore campaign.) But Shastri accepted the proposal anyway, telling the Army that Pakistan was unlikely to accept it and they would get more time. By 20 September, the Sialkot campaign achieved as much as it could. So the Army Chief supported ceasefire. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 06:28, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks, @Kautilya3:, for the clarification. Interesting. We certainly have enough scholarly sources. In the coming week(s) I will take a stab at summarizing them briefly and broadly in narrative form in a paragraph or two. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:14, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ Kalyanaraman, The Context of the Cease-Fire Decision in the 1965 India-Pakistan War, Institute for Defence Studies and Analyses, 21 September 2015.
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There have been a furry of edits, changing large swathes of information, with no discussion and continuous edit warring. I have restored the last good version. This being a longstanding High Importance article, these sorts of changes MUST be done with consensus, not through edit summary exchanges. Please feel free to raise these discussions in this section or make a new one as necessary. Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 19:31, 10 April 2025 (UTC)
- Hello @CapnJackSp,
- Changing the information was based on various sources done by a few editors over a long time, your restoring it to the "last good version" doesn't help the article. It would be right to revert if -
- 1. The sources used are not credible enough
- 2. The sources used dont represent neutrality (somewhat biased)
- In this case, neither of these two scenarios are happening, as the sources are both neutral and credible enough. Again, informations used in the article do not rely on only one source but numerous sources. Therefore directly reverting the article is not the right thing in my opinion.
- Your opinion on changing the information with consensus is a valid point, and editors are welcomed in doing so. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 20:19, 10 April 2025 (UTC)
- I note that @Taeyab has still not bothered to reply on the TP before restoring their preferred version with an edit summary. This will be reverted back to the stable version prior to the mess being created.With regards to the edits, there are two types of problems here. One is regarding the blatant disregard to actual editing procedure, and Two, is the content itself.For the first, you can go through the diffs below.1)[46][47][48][49]
2)[50][51][52][53][54][55][56][57][58][59][60][61][62][63]This is just last month, and I dont think anyone could reasonably argue that 14 reversions with no TP discussion is not an edit war. I note that Taeyab has been very much involved in these edit wars. They have also been a habitual offender w.r.t. the BRD cycle, reverting other (often experienced editors attempting to intervene in the chaotic edits) with no consensus attempted. [64][65][66][67]Despite being told to discuss on TP, they have continued to revert to their preferred version. Regarding the content, it is an obvious and major undiscussed change that attempts to completely change the portrayal of the war by inserting dubious sources. The stable version, supported by very strong academic consensus, has been overwritten in this edit conflict by a new version that attempts to downplay the Pakistani losses. It is obvious that such a change must be discussed.Pinging (non banned) editors for the discussion - @RegentsPark @Cinderella157 @User:Extorc. Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 05:03, 12 April 2025 (UTC)- Expanding on the content issue, the new version stands in stark contrast to the stable version. The new figures rely on cherry picking each figure from separate sources to present a figure more favorable to Pakistan. The sourcing itself is dubious, using at best tangential sources like "Origin of Political Extremism". Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 05:26, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- How is it more favorable to Pakistan? Using neutral edits instead of biased Indian news is favourable to India not Pakistan? In this circumstances, we should use neutral references, as it was used before. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:45, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- The previous version was good enough, as it showed things transparently, such as indicating the actual number of soldiers killed in action & wounded for both india and pakistan.
- Using documented history from actual neutral historians is a better thing to do instead of using pro indian/pakistan sources which contradict eachother. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:48, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- And about "downplay the Pakistani losses", your " last good version" states 3800 pakistani casualties whereas the older version stated 1500 killed and 4300 wounded, which is much more than 3800 and more specified & accurate. I don't understand why specifying the losses is a bad thing. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:55, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @CaptShayan The 3,800 dead source comes from a US Library of Congress research report which is itself based on UN figures. Official Indian figures put total number of Pakistani regulars dead at 3,200 (1992 official MoD history), with another 1,900 - 2,000 Pakistani Kashmiri insurgents killed in the mo the before the official war was declared. If anything, the official Indian version would be more favourable to Pakistan than the most credible neutral version Sid of Sid (talk) 07:52, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Sid of Sid Its not about puting pakistan in favourable position but to show the actual information. The real agenda is not to show Pakistan's less loss and India's more loss but to state the actual facts from neutral sources. Again, we can not use Pakistani source or Indian source in the neutral claim. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 07:58, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @CaptShayan The 1,500 claim comes form an encyclopedia that cites the Pakistan Army's official statement. Encyclopedias are, themselves, not a good source - it'd be like referencing a Wikipedia article in a Wikipedia article. The most credible neutral source is the US LoC report which puts Indian dead at around 3k and Pakistani dead at just shy of 4k. The earliest available information on the conflict, a CIA report from October 1965, puts the floor of Pakistani casualties at 3k Sid of Sid (talk) 08:04, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Sid of Sid According to CIA report Pakistan suffered from 3000–5000 wounded and killed meanwhile India suffered from 4,000 – 6,000 killed and wounded.
- Secondly, thats not Pakistan Army's statement. Pakistan put it's military figures 800 killed but neutral figure give the casualties number 5,800 including 1500 killed. Source - Warfare and Armed Conflicts: A Statistical Encyclopedia of Casualty and Other Figures, 1492-2015, 4th edition page 600. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 08:19, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @CaptShayan The 1,500 claim comes form an encyclopedia that cites the Pakistan Army's official statement. Encyclopedias are, themselves, not a good source - it'd be like referencing a Wikipedia article in a Wikipedia article. The most credible neutral source is the US LoC report which puts Indian dead at around 3k and Pakistani dead at just shy of 4k. The earliest available information on the conflict, a CIA report from October 1965, puts the floor of Pakistani casualties at 3k Sid of Sid (talk) 08:04, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Sid of Sid Its not about puting pakistan in favourable position but to show the actual information. The real agenda is not to show Pakistan's less loss and India's more loss but to state the actual facts from neutral sources. Again, we can not use Pakistani source or Indian source in the neutral claim. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 07:58, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- @CaptShayan The 3,800 dead source comes from a US Library of Congress research report which is itself based on UN figures. Official Indian figures put total number of Pakistani regulars dead at 3,200 (1992 official MoD history), with another 1,900 - 2,000 Pakistani Kashmiri insurgents killed in the mo the before the official war was declared. If anything, the official Indian version would be more favourable to Pakistan than the most credible neutral version Sid of Sid (talk) 07:52, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- Expanding on the content issue, the new version stands in stark contrast to the stable version. The new figures rely on cherry picking each figure from separate sources to present a figure more favorable to Pakistan. The sourcing itself is dubious, using at best tangential sources like "Origin of Political Extremism". Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 05:26, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- I note that @Taeyab has still not bothered to reply on the TP before restoring their preferred version with an edit summary. This will be reverted back to the stable version prior to the mess being created.With regards to the edits, there are two types of problems here. One is regarding the blatant disregard to actual editing procedure, and Two, is the content itself.For the first, you can go through the diffs below.1)[46][47][48][49]
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- (Pinged) I can't really help here. I merely followed up a request on this talk page to revert a sock edit. Sorry!RegentsPark (comment) 15:04, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- I actively watch this page and have intervened in some of the edits since this edit of 26 January 2025, which CapnJackSp would revert to. All edits are subject to WP:CONSENSUS; however, this does not mean that all edits must be discussed at the TP. There needs to be reasonable reason to revert edits. I don't like it or the old version was stable are not reasonable reasons to revert but can be seen as WP:STONEWALLING. The ethos of WP is one of continuous improvement. Diffs allow us to see what changes have been made and it would be much more productive to address any questionable edits on a case by case basis. I will observe that not all sources are created equal and that is why we have WP:VNOT. Also, just because a source would appear to be written at arms length from the subject, it does not mean that they have not sourced information from either belligerent - ie while the source may be independent, it does not mean that all information sourced therein was sourced independently. Many of these edits relate to strengths and casualties. I am of the view that there is too much detail and nuance in this information for it to be reasonably summarised in the infobox per MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE. The nuance and detail requires the support of prose by way of explanation. For example, the amount of land captured or lost is not of itself representative of the prowess of either side. It does not consider the terrain and its strategic or tactical importance and this would require a critical analysis. I would caution though, that the analysis must represent RSs and not be that of WP editors. Just because there is a paremeter in an infobox does not mean that the parameter should or must be populated. Finally, this is a contentious topic and all of the participants in this discussion have been made aware of this. This means that a higher standard of editor conduct is expected. I know that many editors contributing to this article have nationalistic ties to the subject (I don't) and this is often a cause of disruption. We are here to write from an NPOV. This may mean that we identify and report the different nationalistic perspectives with appropriate WP:WEIGHT but we are not here to advance one over the other by partisan editing. Where there are issues of editor conduct that can be substantiated, this is not the place to make allegations or cast aspersion. I suggest that editors might review their comments, noting that two wrongs don't make a right. I hope this helps us find a way forward without unnecessary disruption. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:57, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- I kinda agree with you. As there was a ceasefire and according to the Tashkent Declaration, both of the countries returned the captured land area, it is not necessary to put that information there. Only casualties such are enough. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 06:19, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- Casualties such as Killed, Wounded, lose of aircrafts & tanks. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 06:22, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- Removed the territorial claims as per the above message & Tashkent Declaration. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 11:53, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- You are right, though territory was captured, both sides returned to pre-war boundaries, so I guess these don't need to be considered 'losses'. The recent addition of the territories lost has been a source of.. conflict within the last few days, to say the least. With an number of users (All of them appearing to be Indian Nationals) requesting the reversions of these changes. There is no need for it in the infobox under losses. Taeyab (talk) 11:54, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- There is too much nuance/detail about different figures and who said what even for that.
- I kinda agree with you. As there was a ceasefire and according to the Tashkent Declaration, both of the countries returned the captured land area, it is not necessary to put that information there. Only casualties such are enough. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 06:19, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- Upon checking the restoration by Captain Jack Sparrow, I have to agree with him that the version he restored was at least the last longstanding version. Since then, the article has went through many significant changes, many of which are indeed problematic. Reverting the status quo especially in the light of this discussion is certainly not productive. >>> Extorc.talk 18:14, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Extorc which changes do you think are "problematic"? Adding neutral and non-biased sources? ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 03:43, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Not every small edits need discussion on tp. While adding important & major informations, it was talked in the talk page before. See [68], [69], [70]. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 03:47, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Comsats777 and PWC786 are both ban evading socks. There is no reason to count their contributions when it comes to consensus building. >>> Extorc.talk 12:13, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- why not just revert it to before the controversial edit? Since it's controversial there is no accurate numbers. I think the format itself is a bad one.
- Instead of neural claims which implies all neutral claims each claim should have a source of their own. But all claims should be valid. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 04:41, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- and all claims are valid. Instead of seeing the number, perhaps open the source and read it yourself? ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:17, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- I read it and I replied to you in another comment why I said it. Absence of primary source is why they not credible. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 05:59, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- and all claims are valid. Instead of seeing the number, perhaps open the source and read it yourself? ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:17, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Replacing or overwriting data instead of adding is the main problem. I think both parties should be satisfied as long as all the data remains instead of eliminating data.
- And lastly Taeyab seems to not be a good faith actor himself/ herself. His edit history is very controversial. Not to mention he has been flagged and warned for his behavior too. So it's better to take these with a grain of salt. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 04:48, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- How is it controversial? Taeyab has given proper sources taken from books written by neutral people, not poor newspaper articles. And about replacing data, a neutral source is better than biased indian/pakistani source. I don't think it is suitable enough to take source of an indian/pakistani person which has not been cross-checked by any other guy. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:16, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- No. I looked at it. Those numbers are not credible enough. He/she gave two sources but neither of those source themselves are taking data from a primary source. Primary sources are very essential in conflicting data.
- Not surprising there aren't any primary source considering only UN observers were involved in the war. There were no third party observers besides them. And I can't find the numbers from them. Thus in absence of such a source the data becomes a disputed data.
- So the closest thing we have are intelligence reports. These are more credible as they would have means to actually get information from the field.
- Therefore the CIA report becomes the most credible source of the lot. And CIA report has no seperate section for killed individuals. So I am really surprised how anyone can claim killed numbers without even being on the field or even having indirect access like intelligence operatives.
- The neutral claim section itself should be deleted and replaced by the CIA numbers. That means combining killed, wounded and captured numbers. Trying to seperate each of that will be nothing but non credible information. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 05:45, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Kindly read Encyclopedia of Wars page 602 and [71]. Both of these sources are used for killed stats. I don't think these 2 neutral books are 'biased' more than some indian/pakistani media sources. If you read it, you will see there are both Indian claims and Pakistani claims, but we have taken the neutral claim. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:51, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- As i said they do not provide primary source. Neutral or not does not matter when the chain of source itself is broken. This is why i said the neutral section itself is a problem.
- If there are conflicting neutral sources then which source should be "more neutral"? That will just open a deep rabbit hole.
- Just put the data from the CIA report as its the most credible one. No self edits of the data. Just the raw numbers from the report. If anybody disputes that then bring a primary data source to support your argument. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 06:06, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Kindly read Encyclopedia of Wars page 602 and [71]. Both of these sources are used for killed stats. I don't think these 2 neutral books are 'biased' more than some indian/pakistani media sources. If you read it, you will see there are both Indian claims and Pakistani claims, but we have taken the neutral claim. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:51, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- again, there are enough sources in the infobox. If you see there are INDIVIDUAL sources for each casualties which have been cross checked multiple times. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:22, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- And none are primary. They are cross checking with themselves and not the primary source. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 06:13, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- How is it controversial? Taeyab has given proper sources taken from books written by neutral people, not poor newspaper articles. And about replacing data, a neutral source is better than biased indian/pakistani source. I don't think it is suitable enough to take source of an indian/pakistani person which has not been cross-checked by any other guy. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:16, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Alright i digged into some stuff since this conflict interests me. I think the neutral claim section itself is disingenuous. Fact is there is no data accurate data regarding deaths. None of the sources provided there are credible as there were no other observers besides the UN in this war.
- The most credible data I found is the CIA report. And it makes no mention of specific killed individuals. I suggest editing the section into a combined killed, wounded, captured number as done in the CIA report. Anything other than that will probably just be biased information. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 05:28, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- killed & wounded are specifically mentioned. Captured soldiers were released afterwards just like the territorial claims, hence that is not necessary to put. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:44, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- No. Captured soldiers are the aftermath of war. Released soldiers are aftermath of the treaty. And honestly i do not agree with territory discussion too.
- War is the kinetic phase of the conflict. And thus the results of the kinetic phase should be taken into account.
- It is in the end of the entire conflict phase that should have the final territory adjustment and they should have a seperate entry. War is not equal to conflict itself. War is just the kinetic phase. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 05:55, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Kindly point it out which source do you think is biased. Because none of the major sources are from India/Pakistani author nor pro indian/pro pakistani, all of them are neutral. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:47, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- all sources are biased without a primary source. That's called the liberty taken by authors without any conclusive data. It's similar to how testimonies by themselves are not enough to prove things in a court. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 05:58, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Is this a court? And additionally there is no point of adding claimed territory whereas both of the countries exchanged the claimed areas. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 07:38, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- so you are self editing without any reference to primary source is more credible than an actual primary source? You are not making any sense.
- I welcome disputes but the way you frame it is very immature. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 14:41, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Also by this [72] are you suggesting to add Indian claims and Pakistani claims? I mean that is a good thing we can do, but that would be some extra unnecessary information in the infobox. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 07:42, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- This discussion is only bearing out why we should not be reporting casualties in the infobox but leaving it for discussion in the body of the article. Cinderella157 (talk) 11:30, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Unnecessary? Thats the kind of information that is critical. Plus a neutral section requires a primary source of information. Without that its just some random data without any evidence or methodology. It becomes a he said she said scenerio without any documents to back up the claims.
- I looked up both of those that are given as source for the edits here and neither of them cites from where they got the information from or even how.
- This is why I said the CIA numbers are the most accurate and only those numbers should be there. Without any views, opinions or edits. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 14:49, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Much of the inappropriate changes have been left in, again without reaching consensus. Since the editors show no signs of wishing to self revert, I think we need an rfc. Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 22:37, 24 April 2025 (UTC)
- I am coming here after the recent clashes, expecting to see a stable article to compare with the newly minted ones. Surprised (though not really) to see much recent activity here. I am especially vary of newer users making major edits without first gaining consensus at the Talk page which is absolutely the case here. Personally attacking users on the basis of their nationality is also unacceptable (Taeyab above) as is the use of LLMs (by the same user).
- Coming to the content itself, the losses are cited to WP:3PARTY encyclopedias, already a red flag, which themselves don't cite their sources. I am not sure how reliable Facts on File is, but it calls the 1947 war a civil war which Gandhi helped to stop! This itself should render the source unacceptable. Calling these "neutral sources" is also unnecessary (as we don't give any info regarding the claims of any side).
- Also conspicuous was the leaving out of territorial losses (included in the ib here for a long time) all the while claiming neutrality.
- If any sources for these are to acceptable, these should be reliable secondary sources.
- Agreeing with @Cinderella157:, I will be removing these from the article for now both from the body and ib, subject to much nationalistic sabre rattling, unless better sources are brought to light and aptly incorporated into the body.
- The only consensus here on this article for a long time has been that for the lead. Gotitbro (talk) 21:17, 10 May 2025 (UTC)
- Can add two different section in casualties — Indian Claim & Pakistan Claim, just like 2025 India-Pakistan strikes. As this is a controversial topic, doing so will make it easier for the people to understand. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 04:13, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- I don't put much confidence in those as well. The first task is bringing reliable secondary even for partisan claims and then incorporate those into the body/section. The infobox is the least of our worries when the body itself cites even poorer sources. Gotitbro (talk) 07:04, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- This is a bold move from someone who just got out of a 3 day ban. Taeyab (talk) 08:12, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Taeyab: Read Wikipedia:Content not contributor. Anyhow my recent ban had nothing to do with this article or anything in the Indo-Pak article space. If you continue attacking users without addressing the core content and sourcing issues, this is going to ANI. This is the second time you to have done that in this very thread.
- My edit was in line with what other uninvolved editors are saying above. If you can't address basic sourcing and content issues without besmirching other editors than you shouldn't be contributing here at all.
- The same goes for your edits at Indo-Pakistani war of 1947–1948. Gotitbro (talk) 08:46, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- What personal attacks have i made?? Taeyab (talk) 08:48, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- This is a bold move from someone who just got out of a 3 day ban. Taeyab (talk) 08:12, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- I don't put much confidence in those as well. The first task is bringing reliable secondary even for partisan claims and then incorporate those into the body/section. The infobox is the least of our worries when the body itself cites even poorer sources. Gotitbro (talk) 07:04, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Cinderella157, Extorc, and CapnJackSp: Further inviting previous participants for comments. I am reviving this on the basis of source reliability discussion which appeared to have stalled. Gotitbro (talk) 08:50, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- Agreeing with @Cinderella157?? this is not what Cinderella was going about. He/She was only suggesting the removal of the territorial losses which we all agreed on with consensus, not removing the entire losses. Im also still awaiting proof of my 'personal attacks.' Again you seem to be twisting the words of other mediators here. Taeyab (talk) 08:53, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- That you are commenting about editors and not the content should be the first hint.
- "All of them appearing to be Indian Nationals", "Disruptive changes from a user known for edit-warring" and "This is a bold move from someone who just got out of a 3 day ban." all fall under WP:PA.
- You should drop this and address the content issues that have actually been raised. Continuing on this line is not going to be good for you.
- I think I have been on this project long enough to know that an editor is saying. There is no consensus for territorial removal, itself partisan. And that Cindrella like others suggested a complete removal of claims at all. Gotitbro (talk) 09:00, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Gotitbro, Cinderella didnt suggest to remove entire claims, they suggested to remove territorial claims as after the ceasefire both of the countries exchanged their captured land. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 09:06, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- Can add two different section in casualties — Indian Claim & Pakistan Claim, just like 2025 India-Pakistan strikes. As this is a controversial topic, doing so will make it easier for the people to understand. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 04:13, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- Much of the inappropriate changes have been left in, again without reaching consensus. Since the editors show no signs of wishing to self revert, I think we need an rfc. Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 22:37, 24 April 2025 (UTC)
- Is this a court? And additionally there is no point of adding claimed territory whereas both of the countries exchanged the claimed areas. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 07:38, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- Since, there appears to be a co-ordinated effort to repeatedly introduce a preferred version of the article without a dint of effort to address sourcing issues I will be taking this to WP:INB.
- @Lt.gen.zephyr: Asking for consensus while changing long stable articles is something. At Indo-Pakistani war of 1947–1948 you have also made a complete misreprentation of the already dubious sources, the sources you added already do not delienate between Pakistani and Kashmiri troops, you inexplicably removed the "6,279" figure (already in a range). And then reinserted a state department ref in the lead which does not even mention the thing it is used to cite 'first Indo-Pak' war. You should either self-revert or directly address these issues. Gotitbro (talk) 09:14, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- I didn't add that claim, it was done before. But since you are now changing it after a long time, Id want a consensus. However, I don't think taking it to WP:INB would do anything better, as the pro indian editors will try to put their agenda. Similar thing could be done by Pro pakistani editors, so Id want a neutral consensus. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 09:41, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- NIB is the neutral where all major discussions and consensus regarding in the topic space (India-Pakistan) have taken place including the last major consensus for Kashmir-related articles back in 2020. That you don't know this is itself telling that Wikipedia:Competence is required (also the fact that you miss this clearly unambiguous comment from Cinderella above: "This discussion is only bearing out why we should not be reporting casualties in the infobox but leaving it for discussion in the body of the article.)
- And again Wikipedia:Comment on content, not on the contributor.
- PS: Wikiproject Pakistan is much less active. Gotitbro (talk) 09:56, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Gotitbro taking it to WP:MIL would be a better choice. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 10:15, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- If you missed my comment previously, I mentioned it above weeks ago that while adding important informations, it was posted on talk before adding it directly.
- See — [73], [74], [75]. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 10:19, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- You still aren't addressing sourcing and content issues and we are going around in circles.
- I have started a discussion about this at NIB, previous discussions about Indo-Pak conflicts have also taken place there. Gotitbro (talk) 10:28, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- I don’t think taking this to WP:INB is the right move. That’s a heavily one-sided WikiProject, and this is already a politically sensitive topic. Bringing it there risks introducing further regional bias rather than helping with neutral, source-based resolution which is the center of this debate. Since, according you, the issue is about sourcing, keep the discussion on the article’s talk page or AfD where it belongs. Escalating to a non-neutral venue will certainly not help neutrality. Taeyab (talk) 10:31, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- Please don't use LLMs here, both of you clearly have no idea what INB is about. Gotitbro (talk) 10:34, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- WP:RSN
- WP:NPOVN
- Here are some much more neutral options which you deliberately avoid. So i myself will bring this up on these venues. Taeyab (talk) 10:39, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- Please don't use LLMs here, both of you clearly have no idea what INB is about. Gotitbro (talk) 10:34, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- I didn't add that claim, it was done before. But since you are now changing it after a long time, Id want a consensus. However, I don't think taking it to WP:INB would do anything better, as the pro indian editors will try to put their agenda. Similar thing could be done by Pro pakistani editors, so Id want a neutral consensus. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 09:41, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- all sources are biased without a primary source. That's called the liberty taken by authors without any conclusive data. It's similar to how testimonies by themselves are not enough to prove things in a court. 2409:40E6:1F:A604:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 05:58, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- killed & wounded are specifically mentioned. Captured soldiers were released afterwards just like the territorial claims, hence that is not necessary to put. ᶜᵒᶥᵒⁿᵉᶥ (talk) 05:44, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
- While commenting on the question of territory specifically, I have also stated above (twice) that I do not believe that what is presented in the strength and casualty sections of the infobox belongs there (per MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE) because it is too detailed and nuanced for an infobox and thereby unsuitable for the infobox. Instead, it should be presented in the body of the article, where the nuance of who said what (etc) can be better presented in prose that is more suited to detailing and explaining nuance. Just because we have a parameter in an infobox does not mean that it can or should be used in any particular instance. Cinderella157 (talk) 22:26, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Cinderella157: Thanks for clarifying, I saw both of these comments of yours [and Extorc] above and implemented the same; though apparently some users could not see the unambiguity in those comments.
- If you would be so kind, to implement the change that would be great. Thanks. Gotitbro (talk) 01:52, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- I obviously support your edit and believe that it was reasonable per WP:BRD but it has been challenged, so we are back to the D part of BRD - which hopefully brings us to a consensus consistent with MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE. This discussion may become WP:RFCBEFORE. Cinderella157 (talk) 02:01, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- The D of the BRD would have been the revert that moved the article back to the stable state. I have gone ahead and made the revert. WP:ONUS does apply, and however much some editors above might have tried to just stonewall unreliable info into an article, its just not something WP policies support.
This is a high visibility page, especially given recent events, and the lopsided claims - attributed to dubious sources added without consensus - absolutely should not be allowed to stand. Even if we treat both the previous, stable version and current version as equally "contested", its best to keep both out. Captain Jack Sparrow (talk) 20:18, 12 May 2025 (UTC)Haha, that's the longest discussion I've ever seen... It took me almost an hour to read it all. I’d like to share my opinion. Captain Jack Sparrow called the new references unreliable and ambiguous, but when I asked ChatGPT about these sources, it confirmed that they are highly credible and well-regarded. So, Captain Jack Sparrow, could you please explain why you believe The Encyclopedia of War and The Encyclopedia of Casualties and Other Figures are unreliable sources? 9Ahmed9 (talk) 04:23, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
- The D of the BRD would have been the revert that moved the article back to the stable state. I have gone ahead and made the revert. WP:ONUS does apply, and however much some editors above might have tried to just stonewall unreliable info into an article, its just not something WP policies support.
- I obviously support your edit and believe that it was reasonable per WP:BRD but it has been challenged, so we are back to the D part of BRD - which hopefully brings us to a consensus consistent with MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE. This discussion may become WP:RFCBEFORE. Cinderella157 (talk) 02:01, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Proposal to expand 'Air War' section with radar coverage history
[edit]Hello editors, I'd like to suggest a sourced addition to the Air War section that highlights the critical role of Indian Air Force radar stations during the 1965 war. These installations, positioned along the Radcliffe Line in Punjab and Jammu, enabled timely interception of PAF raids and supported early warning coordination. A detailed and historically grounded reference documenting these radar operations — drawn from veteran accounts and archival synthesis — is available here: Radar Resilience: Tales of the Scanners on the Radcliffe Line
https://iafhistory.in/2023/09/03/radar-resilience-tales-of-the-scanners-on-the-radcliffe-line/
Proposed insertion: Radar stations along the India–Pakistan border provided critical early warning to the Indian Air Force, enabling interception of PAF aircraft and coordination of defensive operations. The establishment and functioning of these units along the Radcliffe Line has been documented through personal accounts and operational histories.
[1]
Happy to make the edit or leave it to the consensus of the group. Thanks! — Anchit Gupta (https://iafhistory.in) 49.36.191.38 (talk) 13:28, 5 May 2025 (UTC)
- Second sentence is unnecessary. Cinderella157 (talk) 22:12, 5 May 2025 (UTC)
- Could be added in Indo-Pakistani air war of 1965. 𝗭𝗲𝗽𝗵𝘆𝗿 (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 15:48, 6 May 2025 (UTC)
References
- ^ Gupta, Anchit (3 September 2023). "Radar Resilience: Tales of the Scanners on the Radcliffe Line". IAFHistory. Retrieved 5 May 2025.
Why is the casualties section keeps getting deleted?
[edit]I requested it to be reverted and it got deleted again? Ironman993 (talk) 07:34, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
AI upscaled/colorized image
[edit]An image in this article, posted in the section "Background", depicting a Pakistani militiaman, seems to have been upscaled and colorized using AI, due to having weird squiggly lines and weird colorization (look at the militiaman's right arm). I couldn't find an original image by searching, all I could find is a post on Reddit featuring a smaller picture with same colorization. Shouldn't this image be removed as per WP:AIIMAGES? It might not be fully AI generated but I still don't think it's suitable for use due to errors in colorization and upscaling.
Thanks in advance for the responses. Broadhead Arrow (talk) 13:30, 21 May 2025 (UTC)
- The uploading detais describe this as a colourised version [of the original] with a copyright release of "own work". Colourising an original does not dissolve the copyright of the original. Either this is an AI generated image or there is sufficient concern regarding the copyright status for us to delete this either way. Your opinion Nikkimaria? Cinderella157 (talk) 01:16, 22 May 2025 (UTC)
- If the original image is not known to be free, the derivative work should be treated as non-free regardless of how it was created. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:31, 22 May 2025 (UTC)
- Accordingly, I have removed this image. Cinderella157 (talk) 02:05, 22 May 2025 (UTC)
Edit war of 18–19 March 2025
[edit]There was a series of reversions 18–19 March 2025. I believe the right side of that reversion conflict may have given up and left a bad version in place, but it might be that the version left in place was mostly good and only a little bit bad.
- I start with the version of 16:48, 18 March 2025 (UTC) by Comsats777.
- The next version, version of 17:11, 18 March 2025 (UTC) by Pax98 reverted that edit and reintroduced an error that had been there before, Cite error: The named reference
auto
was invoked but never defined (see the help page). - The next version, version of 20:26, 18 March 2025 (UTC) by LesIie reverted that edit, removing the reference error.
- The next version, version of 00:28, 19 March 2025 (UTC) by Pax98 reverted that edit, replacing the reference error.
Since then, the article has been edited 78 more times, by users including Steel1943, AmNaTi200, Maryshelagh, Gotitbro, MrGreen1163, User:Cinderella157, Shankargb, Jessicapierce and others, and red error message continues to scream at you, and nobody has fixed it.
I came to this article because it was listed in Category:CS1 errors: DOI, which happened because somebody entered two extra digits in a DOI, and as long as I was fixing that, I fixed a few other things. But I have no expertise in this subject, so I ask editors to review the back-and-forth of 18–19 March 2025 and determine if what we ended up with is OK. And will somebody please figure out what <ref name="auto"
is supposed to be?
And will everyone else remember, if you edit an article more than once, you probably care about it, and if you care about it, and you see a screaming red error in the references, you should try to fix it. —Anomalocaris (talk) 08:27, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for bringing this up. I looked around a bit and it seems that the previous editor had copied over references from the main article of the offending subsection - Battle of Phillora. I have replaced the empty named ref with the full citation from that article. Ujwal.Xankill3r (talk) 14:10, 8 June 2025 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 June 2025
[edit]2,862 Indian soldiers were killed; Pakistan lost 5,800 soldiers India lost 97 tanks; 450 Pakistani tanks were destroyed or captured — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2409:40C2:104F:E682:78C0:FDFF:FE0D:A611 (talk) 13:48, 8 June 2025 (UTC)
Not done Please make request in the form change X to Y. You also need to provide sources. Cinderella157 (talk) 23:58, 8 June 2025 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 July 2025
[edit]In the box where is Casualties and losses mentioned, according to the reference number [9] and [10] 1,500 Pakistani killed and 3,712 Indian killed. Correct that, add these numbers.Alexendrya ohio (talk) 01:05, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
- There are differences between Indian and Pakistan military statements about their own and the other side's casualties. The differences are actually not that great (generally only a factor of 2.5 to 3 when comparing like-for-like). The place to add further data on casualties is the body of the article, not the infobox. You would need to propose an exact wording, giving citations to good sources.
- The sources you mention [9] Clodfelter, 2017, Warfare and Armed Conflicts and [10] Phillips, 2005, Encyclopedia of Wars are questionable sources. For some things they are excellent, and for other things rubbish; without doing a great deal of research the reader cannot tell which bits are excellent and which bits are rubbish. Clodfelter makes a good starting point for a research project, but in Wikipedia terms both Clodfelter and Phillips are unreliable. Note that Clodfelter's work has gone through many editions, and some of the data differs between editions.-- Toddy1 (talk) 08:22, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
But i am unable to edit on the main page, i can't write anything on the body of the article.I have another source CIA article on the 1965 war (https://www.cia.gov/readingroom/document/cia-rdp79t00472a000600020013-0) and there is mentioned that [3,000 to 5,000 Pakistani killed and wounded] [4,000 to 6,000 Indian killed and wounded]. Alexendrya ohio (talk) 11:12, 13 July 2025 (UTC)https://web.archive.org/web/20070928115342/http://164.100.24.219/rsq/quest.asp?qref=60605 Indian official figures about Indian losses in 1965 war is 3,264 killed. Alexendrya ohio (talk) 12:05, 13 July 2025 (UTC)Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Pr0pulsion 123- @Alexendrya ohio:, you do it like this:
- How to propose an edit (this is an example, not a real request)
- Please delete the second paragraph of the Ceasefire Section. And replace it with the following text:
- The reasons I want this change are (1) ......, (2) ......, and (3) ......-- Toddy1 (talk) 19:50, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
- Notice that the proposal is specific. So if we adopted it, the editor implementing it would know what to do. It includes a correctly-formatted citation. It includes reasons making the change [and sorry I could not be bothered to write out example reasons].-- Toddy1 (talk) 20:01, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
References
- ^ "Rupert Bear: KGB tried to recruit me". Daily Express. 28 May 2006. Archived from the original on 28 January 2007. Retrieved 6 November 2006.
Battle of Phillora and ref name="auto"
[edit]There is a sentence in the article that says: "Failure on the Pakistani side to cause damage to the Indian advance forced the 6th Armoured Division to retreat to the town of Chawinda on 11 September and the Battle of Phillora was an Indian success.", and one of the citations for it is <ref name="auto"/>
, which is undefined. All the many reverts have made the history very confusing, but I think that the citation was added in this edit of 03:07, 13 March 2025 (UTC). @Pax98: Do you know what it is? If yes, please define and rename it. If no, please can we delete it.-- Toddy1 (talk) 13:21, 19 July 2025 (UTC)
Official History, 1992 edition
[edit]The article had the following citations to the 1992 edition of the Indian Official History, and I have improved the citation templates as explained below:
- ref name="Chapter 1 official history"
- Rakshak, Bharat. "Page 15" (PDF). Official History. The Times of India. Archived from the original (PDF) on 9 June 2011. Retrieved 14 July 2011.
- ref name="Chapter 1 official history – Effective Strength"
- Rakshak, Bharat. "Page 14" (PDF). Official History. The Times of India. Archived from the original (PDF) on 9 June 2011. Retrieved 14 July 2011.
- no ref name
- Rakshak, Bharat. "Operations in Sialkot Sector pg32" (PDF). Official History. The Times of India. Archived from the original (PDF) on 9 June 2011. Retrieved 12 July 2011.
- Official War History – 1965 Chapter07Page 194[dead link]
- "Official History of IAF in 65 War"
- "Official History of IAF in 65 War" (PDF). Archived from the original (PDF) on 29 September 2012. Retrieved 27 July 2012.
These citation templates have been improved by using citation templates that give correct information on the book being cited, and a current URL. I have assumed that the page references were correct in the original and where they seemed to mean the pdf page, I have converted them to the page numbers given in the book.
- ref name="Chapter 1 official history"
- Chakravorty, B.C. (1992). "Chapter I, The Prologue" (PDF). In Prasad, S.N. (ed.). History of the Indo-Pak War, 1965 (PDF). History Division, Ministry of Defence, Government of India. p. 15 – via ETH Zurich.
- ref name="Chapter 1 official history – Effective Strength"
- Chakravorty, B.C. (1992). "Chapter I, The Prologue" (PDF). In Prasad, S.N. (ed.). History of the Indo-Pak War, 1965 (PDF). History Division, Ministry of Defence, Government of India. p. 14 – via ETH Zurich.
- no ref name
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-- Toddy1 (talk) 13:50, 19 July 2025 (UTC)
It is worth noting the existence of:
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