Talk:Dick Zoll/GA1

GA review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:49, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 03:56, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 23:39, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:39, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
· · ·

Comments

being only 14 years old when he debuted for the team --> debuting for the team when he was only 14 years old
, being a member of the freshman football team there that year. --? and was a member of the freshman football team his first year.
weighing at 215 pounds delete "at"
He then initially made the varsity football team --> He initially made the varsity football team
he won further letters in 1934 I know I mentioned this on a previous review, but winning letters still feels weird to read
With the Rams having only 17 players on the roster, Zoll played at right guard, left guard, right tackle, and left tackle for the team. maybe clarify that he played these positions "at different times throughout the season" and not all at once
References: all are consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
- Spot checks: #3, 4, 8, 14, 17, 20, 21 (note I don't have access to #2, AGF)

The Zolls are so interesting! Nice work bringing these guys' history to life BeanieFan11! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:51, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:38, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:48, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.