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  • ALT1: ... that the Dexcom Seven, launched in 2007, was the first CGM system capable of delivering continuous glucose data for a full seven days, doubling the lifespan of its predecessor?
  • ALT3: ... that the Dexcom Follow app enables up to ten designated users—like parents or caregivers—to remotely monitor a person’s real-time glucose readings on their mobile devices?
  • Reviewed:
Created by MallardTV (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

MallardTV Talk to me! 23:36, 6 April 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: So far so good, article passed minimum length criterion and newness. Source spot checks indicate good results, though I don't think every product name needs to be bolded? I would AGF on the interpretation that "first real-time factory-calibrated CGM system" means "without requiring calibrations". I also endorse the ALT0 hook, though I think it would be much more compact if you end the hook at "...calibrations" (no need for the "thereby eliminating the need for regular fingerstick blood tests?"). Approved! Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 04:32, 29 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

ALT2 may be better, it is easily verifiable and just as interesting. MallardTV Talk to me! 13:13, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestion from our Discord discussion:
I think this is just as interesting, shorter, and a bit less promotional. jlwoodwa (talk) 03:04, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
On second thought, I might have trimmed this a bit too much, at the expense of meaning anything to someone unfamiliar with the subject matter. Perhaps a mention or link to type 1 diabetes should find its way back into the hook somewhere. jlwoodwa (talk) 03:12, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeromi Mikhael: as the original reviewer, can you determine if ALT2a or ALT2b are approved? If not, please outline your concerns. Z1720 (talk) 14:53, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@MallardTV, Narutolovehinata5, Jlwoodwa, Jeromi Mikhael, and Z1720: Jumping in as it's been a week without comment; the source is in future tense and does not confirm it actually happened.--Launchballer 21:42, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I can find another source. Here: https://investors.dexcom.com/news/news-details/2023/Dexcom-and-Nick-Jonas-Make-Super-Bowl-Magic-to-Launch-New-Dexcom-G7-Continuous-Glucose-Monitoring-System/default.aspx MallardTV Talk to me! 26:46, 3 June 2025 (UTC).[reply]

I don't think Dexcom are an appropriate source for that.--Launchballer 21:01, 3 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

how about https://admeter.usatoday.com/story/sports/ad-meter/2023/02/07/nick-jonas-magic-dexcom-super-bowl-57-2023/77668440007/?

Still future tense I'm afraid. It says "The ad is set to run during a 30-second spot in the second quarter of the Big Game", emphasis mine.--Launchballer 10:09, 4 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

https://www.billboard.com/culture/tv-film/nick-jonas-super-bowl-commercial-2023-dexcom-g7-1235252549/ -MallardTV

Excellent. Now let's see it in the article.--Launchballer 12:56, 4 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Let's roll.--Launchballer 17:08, 4 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]