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GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Nominator: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 16:34, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 10:54, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take this review. Comments to follow soon. Please consider reviewing another nomination at WP:GAN.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Sourcing

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For consistency and ease of verifying, I would cite the "Theatre credits" table line by line as done with "Filmography" above. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:59, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done - I initially did the table differently as most of it comes from the same source but I have now made the tables the same DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 14:26, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

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The tone of the article needs work. It is more often conversational than encyclopedic. When writing up information from more "informal" interviews such as [1] you must be careful to isolate the encyclopedic information and to summarise it neutrally and professionally. The most egregious example is "O'Shea also enjoys spending time and having conversations with other people", but numerous other instances need work. Focus on the facts, rather than what the article subject said she felt about the facts. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:05, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I have tried to trim some things to make it more encyclopedic DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 14:27, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Much more is there: ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:26, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"Speaking about the episode, O'Shea explained in an interview, "As a Queer Brown woman, I'm very aware that my moments of joy and safety are a result of people before me fighting, I owe that same fight to the people around me and the people that come after me."
This lengthy quote says nothing about the episode, character, or herself, and thus is effectively a PR statement.
"O'Shea also explained that she was enjoying working with Malik, saying that they "clicked" from the moment they met."
"Person doesn't publicly say that colleague is unpleasant to work with."
"O'Shea enjoyed playing Rumi and thought of her co-stars as a "little family"."
See above.
"O'Shea was happy that Nadira had a "happy ending" as she felt that the character had grieved a lot during her time on the soap."
This article is about the actress, not the character.
@AirshipJungleman29: I have trimmed and/or removed the fact below. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 15:44, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The lead also needs work. Focus on the key biographical facts and events that establish her notability, and minimal detail on the less-important early career.
The first paragraph of "Career" is entirely sourced to two paragraphs in an interview. This is WP:UNDUE and needs to be cut down severely. Again, focus on the facts, not feelings, beliefs, or PR quotes. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:23, 11 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@AirshipJungleman29: Done. I think this was too much cutting but I have done so anyway DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 17:31, 11 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Link theatre therapy and theatre studies
@AirshipJungleman29: Done DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 21:38, 11 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@AirshipJungleman29: Is everything okay? DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 18:21, 13 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

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  • ... that actress Ashling O'Shea found joining the cast of Hollyoaks "surreal" as she had grown up watching the soap?
Improved to Good Article status by DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 24 past nominations.

DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 11:06, 14 July 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: