Talk:Aquilegia paui
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[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle talk 19:24, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
- ... that the conservation of a goat might endanger the survival of Aquilegia paui?
- Source: Martinell, M. Carmen; López-Pujol, Jordi; Blanché, Cèsar; Molero, Julián; Sàez, Llorenç (2011). "Conservation assessment of Aquilegia paui (Ranunculaceae): a case study of an extremely narrow endemic". Oryx. 45 (2): 187–190. doi:10.1017/S0030605310001754 – via Cambridge University Press.
- ALT1: ... that a mistake led to Aquilegia paui not being considered a species? Source: ibid
- ALT2: ... that all Aquilegia paui plants are found within a few kilometers of each other? Source: ibid
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Amtrak Susquehanna River Bridge
Pbritti (talk) 22:52, 27 April 2025 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: I'd prefer if the second paragraph were cited, but I suppose some would consider it part of the lede. All statements there are supported in the rest of the body, so not a deal breaker. I'm also curious what the Spanish common name is. ALT1 could be rephrased to be more interesting: Even just saying "mix-up" instead of "mistake" would punch it up. Still interesting enough as is. Likewise ALT0 is good. ALT2 is alright in a pinch. Great job. awkwafaba (📥) 00:46, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Awkwafaba: Thanks for the review—always nice to see a nice and quick one! To clarify, MOS:LEAD explains that the lead is anything preceding the first heading. I generally refrain from citations in leads for plant articles as there's typically little room for controversy, but please let me know if you have specific facts you think ought to be directly verified in the lead! Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:41, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
Pbritti, would this be more clear for ALT2:
- ALT3: ... that all Aquilegia paui plants are found within a few kilometers of Mont Caro?
I think that is the same fact unless I am misreading it, Rjjiii (talk) 14:53, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Rjjiii: I think that's essentially the same content, so it should be fine if a promoter prefers that verbiage for ALT2. ~ Pbritti (talk) 17:13, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
Sounds good, I just don't want to propose alternatives that nominators are opposed to, Rjjiii (talk) 21:08, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
GA review
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Nominator: Pbritti (talk · contribs) 02:44, 8 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: ZKevinTheCat (talk · contribs) 11:59, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
Beginning the GA review.
—ZKevinTheCat
Review
[edit]The article is mostly good, but there are some issues I spotted:
The total area covered by each subpopulation combined measures less than 1 km (0.62 mi).
These are not the correct units. kilometers measure distance, not area, so this statement doesn't really make sense.Done. ~ Pbritti (talk) 17:27, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
- The caption in the last image reads
Construction on the mountain is thought to have damaged two A. paui subpopulations.
But in the text it saysThe study suggested that construction of telecommunication facilities on Mont Caro may have been responsible for the drop in plants in one subpopulation
Done. ~ Pbritti (talk) 17:27, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
- Aquilegia viscosa is apparently a synonym of A. einseleana, so this should probably be changed/clarified in the article (in taxonomy sect.).
- Aquilegia viscosa was, as Enio Nardi put it, once a controversial species. It is now an accepted species by POWO and other major authors on the genus. The accepted form of A. viscosa is whats discussed in this article. ~ Pbritti (talk) 17:27, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
Spot check
[9] - good
[15] - good
[7] - good
I've also merged some paragraphs in the description section that talked about similar topics, fixed a few typos and tweaked the wording in some spots. These are mostly just personal preferences (except typos obv.), so you can change them if you like.
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Alright, looks good. About the wording and such, they are mainly just nitpicks and it isn't anything you would need to worry about in terms of GA status. I think we're done here. Good work. ZKevinTheCat (talk) 18:03, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
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