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Recently added quote removed

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The recently added quote about Jackson's justification of the bank war. One of the reasons the article had been submitted to review was its length. The block quote adds more words, and may give a sense of Jackson's writing style, but doesn't say more than the article states.

The short sentence preceding the block quote, which is supported by secondary source, makes the point that Jackson justified it as protecting people from the wealthy, so the extended block quote from a primary source (Jackson) doesn't add new information.

Jackson's writings and style is fascinating, but part of this article's format is that it avoids block quotes and their length, particularly if the summary information is given in the text. If readers want to get a sense of Jackson's writing style, the article later gives links to his letters. There may also be a place for the direct quote in the article on the Banking War, which is focused specifically on the issue. Wtfiv (talk) 15:38, 22 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback RE the block quote. I get your concern regarding the article length and I appreciate you keeping the article focused and accessible. That said, I believe there is value in including a concise excerpt of Jackson's own words, not as a block quote but integrated in the text. His veto message is one of the most rhetorically striking presidential vetoes in U.S. history and including a bit more illustrates the populist tone and moral argument that supported his opposition to the Bank. I'll make a change that paraphrases what was put in but is a trimmed integrated quote. Hopefully this is a workable middle ground. Gjb0zWxOb (talk) Gjb0zWxOb (talk) 16:58, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure even the paraphrased quote adds much to the article. As you can see, the addition of this quote gave rise to a further edit to qualify the quote, addressing the question of whether the populist sentiments given in the speech reflect Jackson's actual motivations. This qualification of Jackson's rhetoric has validity too, as the article suggests elsewhere that Jackson's attitude toward the bank was more complex than populist concern. The addition of both point/counterpoint both enlarges the article and muddies the point. I think just leaving the summary is the best way to go. As a compromise, I added a link to the text of the speech in the Baptist (2016) citation. Readers can access it there if they choose. Wtfiv (talk) 20:20, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

New Andrew Jackson Portrait

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Hello everyone! I am just wondering, can we do a new portrait of Andrew Jackson? This one is a real life photo of him in 1845.

Andrew Jackson

Carson5034 (talk) 23:37, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

You might want to look at the discussion in Talk:Andrew Jackson/Archive 16#Photograph. The photo you like was mentioned (although it wasn't in the gallery of photos at the start of that discussion). Bruce leverett (talk) 01:56, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ahh okay. Carson5034 (talk) 02:13, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Removing assassination attempt from lead

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I don't think the assassination attempt on Jackson belongs in this paragraph of the lead. The focus of this paragraph emphasizes events that involved Jackson's agency and policies. The assassination attempt is something that incidentally happened to him, but does not address his policy strategy. This is the actions, the paragraph lists:

  • Reelection, which is due to his previous policies.
  • Implementation of the Indian Removal Act
  • Response to the Nullification Crisis
  • Dismantling second bank of United States
  • Supporting the Van Buren, Polk, and the Annexation of Texas

Only the election could be seen as something not directly under his control, but that too was a thought out part of his strategy. As the list of assassination attempts makes clear, this was not a unique event for a president. (Though, as noted in the article, it was the first.) Wtfiv (talk) 16:49, 23 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

It's OK to want to organize material into paragraphs, but I would be surprised if there were not a place somewhere in the lead to mention the assassination attempt. A reader who had heard of this might well expect to find it here. Perhaps another paragraph? Bruce leverett (talk) 17:29, 23 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not so sure it need to be in the lead. Being president and the subject of an assassination attempt is not unusual. According to the List of United States presidential assassination attempts and plots, nineteen (42%) of the presidents have been subject to assassination attempts. Out of the 12 presidents mentioned the list who, like Jackson, were not physically harmed by an attempt, only one, Herbert Hoover's, is mentioned in the lead. Many of the others are not even mentioned in main space. The amount of detail given to the attempt on Jackson in main space seems appropriate, as it was the first recorded assassination attempt. In my view, this mention is sufficient as this was not a defining aspect of Jackson's presidency. It'd be interesting to hear what others think. Wtfiv (talk) 23:17, 25 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]