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I have taken the recommendations and attempted to apply them. I have removed informal language as well as any words that might be perceived as "puffery". I have highlighted the more critical roles including the three presidential appointments and the public service. I have left the membership of boards as I believe this is relevant to a business audience interested in philanthropists and the business background modelled after other examples on Wikipedia and for transparency. There are, I believe, sufficient, varied and credible references for all facts stated. I hope the reviewing editors find this version much improved and will consider publishing it. Profberger (talk) 12:35, 23 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
