Wikipedia:Peer review/Tigger's Honey Hunt/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I have expanded the article and would like some feedback on its current state.
Thanks, IngeniousPachyderm (talk) 18:31, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]Comments after a quick skim:
- MOS:VGGP says that gameplay sections need to be cited. There should be a citation at the end of each paragraph, minimum.
- The lead should include information about its development, gameplay, and reception. In short, it should be a summary of the entire article.
Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 20:13, 26 June 2025 (UTC)
History6042
[edit]- Please add alt texts to all images for accessibility.
- There are five Citation Needed tags that need fixing.
- There are three paragraphs that need citations and don't have them.
- "was later released for the Game Boy Color, with different mini games but otherwise sharing much of the same story." needs a citation.
- What makes GameRaveTV a reliable source.
- It should be made consistent in sources of whether you either use the url as the website or the website name.
- Please archive all online sources.
- Please consistently use dates written out or with all numbers, not both.
- Some release dates are missing inline citations.
- Ping when done. History6042😊 (Contact me) 14:07, 28 June 2025 (UTC)