Wikipedia:Peer review/Major Food Group/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because this is my first article written for a class and I would love some feedback on how to improve!
Thanks, SpressNEU (talk) 17:11, 12 March 2025 (UTC)
- Hi, @SpressNEU, I will do this one. History6042😊 (Contact me) 13:48, 27 April 2025 (UTC)
- Could an image be found for the company?
- If so add alt text and a caption to it.
- The lede of the article should not have any info that the article body doesn't, it also should have no references as it should be a summary.
- Could an infobox be added.
- Any awards other than from Michelin.
- "Their brand identity has been characterized by high-end dining experiences and elaborate restaurant designs." is very promotional sounding and should be removed.
- The founders should be added to the article body.
- All souces should have access dates, source dates, archive links, archive dates, and consistent date formatting.
- Ping when done. History6042😊 (Contact me) 13:55, 27 April 2025 (UTC)