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Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get it to feature article status at some point in the future, and I want to ensure that it is as complete as possible. If any additional changes could be made to the "Release" and "Reception" sections, please let me know. Moreover, if any additional sources exist that could be used to enlarge either one, I'll be happy to make the appropriate changes.

The section I'm most interested in improving is the film's "Production". I feel like I've exhausted my resources regarding either print or online sources, so if anyone is familiar with any additional sources that could be used, I'd really appreciate that. Lastly, if someone has access to a DVD of the film and could upload the audio commentary somewhere—a tall order, I know—that would be the most useful addition to the article after the behind-the-scenes documentary.

I appreciate any help. PanagiotisZois (talk) 14:14, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

OK. It's been almost three months since you put this up here. I will print it out and take a look. Daniel Case (talk) 06:08, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

Unfortunately I lost the printout I had gone over it with a red pen.

While I will say there are places where the article's prose could be less wordy and more direct, it was still readable, and addressing that might be better left to the Copy Editors' Guild. I didn't see any serious issues there.

And as for your sources on those sections, having worked on a few film articles myself I don't really see any deficiencies there. It looks like you found everything there was to find except the DVD commentary. I wish I could help you with that; when you are able to find it it would likely be helpful. Daniel Case (talk) 06:37, 17 January 2025 (UTC)

Good news! I just found the printout, and will be doing the copy edit soon. Daniel Case (talk) 05:03, 22 January 2025 (UTC)