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Your submission at Articles for creation: Fideocomisos: U.S. Tax Implications (June 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Opm581 were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

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Opm581^{(talk | he/him)} 22:04, 16 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Paralegal-knows-nothing! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Opm581^{(talk | he/him)} 22:04, 16 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, OPM581. I was wondering what was the issue with my current sources. I believe they provide sufficient enough backing to constitute a subject. Seeing that there is no added section on the Spanish fideicomiso Wikipedia page, I would not want to add this section on U.S. tax implications. This webpage provides an easier understanding for the intended demographic. I would like y'all to reconsider. Paralegal-knows-nothing (talk) 23:35, 16 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Paralegal-knows-nothing. The sources that you used appear to mostly be primary sources, and multiple secondary sources are needed to show that the topic is notable enough to have its own article. Please see WP:GNG for more info. Also, the article seems to be written like an essay, and parts of it are unsourced. Opm581^{(talk | he/him)} 00:42, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, OPM581, I had just added some secondary sources that I could have included in the first draft. Also, I am not trying to convince anyone of something, so I apologize if it is written like an essay. I think the article clearly states the circumstances around U.S. trusts and fideicomisos and the subsequent tax implications this may have. Paralegal-knows-nothing (talk) 18:11, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, thank you for improving the draft. Also, in the future, it would be better to ask questions about AfC submissions at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk or at the talk page of the reviewer, rather than at your own talk page. Opm581^{(talk | he/him)} 20:52, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]