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Your submission at Articles for creation: Get Loose Crew (November 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Get Loose Crew (January 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mach61 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Mach61 (talk) 13:49, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Get Loose Crew has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Get Loose Crew. Thanks! jlwoodwa (talk) 01:23, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Get Loose Crew has been accepted

Get Loose Crew, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 22% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the help desk. Once you have made at least 10 edits and had an account for at least four days, you will have the option to create articles yourself without posting a request to Articles for creation.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Mach61 11:00, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

April 2025

Your additions at East Park Productions added extraneous markup, incorrect capital letters, and incorrect italics around a quotation. Most importantly, you changed several direct quotes. Please don't ever do that, with regards to "hip hop" vs. "Hip-Hop," or with anything else. Quotes cannot be corrected. If there's an actual error in a quote, such as a misspelling, you can add a "[sic]" tag.

I have fixed the above issues, but please review the Manual of Style before editing further, particularly with regards to capital letters: MOS:CAPS. Also, please get in the habit of using Preview, to make sure your formatting displays as you intended. Thank you, Jessicapierce (talk) 22:51, 3 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Jessicapierce!

Thank you so much for the help with editing. Your comment is highly appreciated! I will look at the preview function more closely in the future. Gentrit97 (talk) 19:23, 4 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in East Park Productions, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Jessicapierce (talk) 22:51, 3 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. Regarding your edits to East Park Productions, please use the preview button before you save your edit; this helps you find any errors you have made and prevents clogging up recent changes and the page history, as well as helping prevent edit conflicts. Below the edit box is a Show preview button. Pressing this will show you what the page will look like without actually saving it.

The *Show preview* button is right next to the *Publish changes* button and below the edit summary field.

It is strongly recommended that you use this before saving. If you have any questions, contact the help desk for assistance. Thank you. Jessicapierce (talk) 22:51, 3 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

MC Shadow moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to MC Shadow. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it needs more sources to establish notability. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. GSS ^💬 16:13, 16 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @GSS! Thank you for your feedback! Do you mind sharing on what type of sources are needed? I believe I have provided as quite a lot with a large variety. Looking forward to improve my article! Gen (talk) 13:00, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]