User talk:69.125.160.224
the term 'mentally immersed' is hard to understand here and i think it would be better served with a different word. Schumann attempted suicide and i think referring to his death at age 49 or admittance to a sanatorium might allude to the same distress without adding so much? i can't think of the right phrasing though so i thought to say here rather than changing it 69.125.160.224 (talk) 03:33, 18 May 2025 (UTC)
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