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Declined by Shadow311 4 months ago. Last edited by Shadow311 4 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The religion of Salmonism.

   Salmonism is a religion that is believed to have started with a man named Dr. Brain Corll. It is known that he started this religion from an event that happened on March 28,1986. While Corll was fishing in a pond within the city of Sacramento, CA with his family,his father Ronald R Corll was cooking some of the fish that the family had caught over the long day. Everyone got a nice plate of fried salmon, then they all rested for the night, but Brain couldn't go to sleep. He was up all night with a major stomach ache. He tried to wake up his parents to alarm them but Brain fell asleep, but didn't wake up in the morning. His parents were frightened and rushed him to a hospital. The doctors said that Brain was in a food coma. His family were in the room with him for the first day and all of a sudden he sprang up out of the bed. He started talking as soon as he woke up, which was unusual after a coma. He started saying all these things about a flying salmon with bright red wings appear to him and started telling him all about why he was in a coma. His family thought it was just some weird effect after a food coma, but Brain went around telling everyone about the "real" religion of Salmonism.

                                    (THIS IS NOT A TRUE STORY)

                           Only Christianity is the real a true religion 
    
          (God will open the Gates of Heaven one day and bring all his children up with him)
                    (The day is coming sooner than you think, so be prepared)