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IronWrath

IronWrath^[1] is a cinematic metal band based in Fontana, California. Known for blending music, storytelling, and film into immersive theatrical production, the band has been described as a "modern-day Pink Floyd^[2]" and a "patriotic Trans-Siberian Orchestra." Their theatrical concerts are considered though-provoking, exploring themes of freedom, faith, and family through hard-hitting compositions and award-winning^[3] visuals.

History

The origins of IronWrath trace back to the early 1980s with the formation of the band Free Will by guitarist Sean Silas, alongside John and Jerry Boudreau. In 1985, Free Will merged with vocalist Keith Miles to form the Christian metal band Holy Right, which became a fixture in the Southern California music scene. In 1986, drummer and percussionist C.G. Ryche^[4] joined the group, and the band released their debut album Stand as One^[5] on Erica Records^[6].

In 1988, Ryche, Silas, and rhythm guitarist/vocalist Steve Bell left Holy Right to form IronWrath, shifting toward a more progressive and cinematic metal sound. The band disbanded in 1990 but officially reformed in early 2021.

Artistic Vision

IronWrath is distinguished by its unique integration of cinematic storytelling with live music. The band's theatrical production, IronWrath’s Master Storyteller^[7], is a “Vegas-style show experience” combining original film content, theatrical performances, and progressive anthems.

Central to IronWrath's identity is its commitment to exploring meaningful themes that reflect societal challenges and personal transformation. Their performances are designed to provoke thought and dialogue, making their concerts both entertainment and reflective experience.

Members

C.G. Ryche – Drums, percussion, producer, creative director
Sean Silas – Lead Guitar / Backup Vocals
Steve Bell – Rhythm Guitar, vocals
Noe Morga - Bass Guitar / Backup Vocals

Awards and Recognition

IronWrath received notable acclaim in 2023, winning “Album of the Year^[8]” from several respected music platforms. The band's films and music videos have garnered 20 film awards^[9], reinforcing their reputation as pioneers in the cinematic metal genre.

Musical Style and Influences

IronWrath’s sound blends elements of progressive metal, cinematic scoring, and theatrical rock. Their style has drawn comparisons to Pink Floyd, Queensrÿche, and Trans-Siberian Orchestra, characterized by layered compositions, dramatic narratives, and a focus on live performance as storytelling.

Influences

Pink Floyd
Queensryche
Trans-Siberian Orchestra
Metallica
Iron Maiden
Killswitch Engage

External Links

Official Website: https://www.ironwrath.net/
YouTube / Streaming Platforms: https://www.youtube.com/ironwrath
Social Media: https://www.facebook.com/ironwrath

Film Awards

· Accolade Global Film Competition: IronWrath’s Master Storyteller - Best Feature Film, Best Original Score, Best Concept Film (Winner)

· Best Shorts Competition: The Best Part of Me – Best Music Video & Best Original Song (Winner/Top Honors)

· Hollywood Gold Awards: The Best Part of Me – Best Music Video (Winner)

· New York Movie Awards: The Best Part of Me – Best Music Video (Winner)

· Paris Film Awards: The Best Part of Me – Best Music Video & Best Original Song (Winner)

· Accolade Global Film Competition: Freedom - Best Music Video, Best Original Score, Best Concept Film, and Best Director (Winner/Top Honors)

· Reale Film Festival: Freedom - Best Music Video

· Silver State Film Festival: Freedom - Best Music Video (Winner)

· Accolade Global Film Competition: Thy Shall Return – Best Original Song (Winner)

· Best Shorts Competition: Bed of Lies – Best Original Song (Winner)

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^ Tim Ristow (2025-01-08). Album of the Week: IronWrath "Master Storyteller" (2023) | TTCR. Retrieved 2025-07-09 – via YouTube.
^ "C.G. Ryche - Awards". IMDb. Retrieved 2025-07-09.
^ "C.G. Ryche - cgryche.com". C.G. Ryche. Retrieved 2025-07-09.
^ Holy Right - Stand As One, 1986, retrieved 2025-07-09
^ "Erika Records :: Vinyl Record Manufacturer :: Keeping Vinyl Alive!". www.erikarecords.com. Retrieved 2025-07-09.
^ "IW-MST". IronWrath. Retrieved 2025-07-09.
^ Covenant Metal Show (2024-01-01). TOP 10 CHRISTIAN METAL ALBUMS OF 2023. Retrieved 2025-07-09 – via YouTube.
^ "C.G. Ryche - Awards". IMDb. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

[1] "IronWrath". IronWrath. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

[2] Tim Ristow (2025-01-08). Album of the Week: IronWrath "Master Storyteller" (2023) | TTCR. Retrieved 2025-07-09 – via YouTube.

[3] "C.G. Ryche - Awards". IMDb. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

[4] "C.G. Ryche - cgryche.com". C.G. Ryche. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

[5] Holy Right - Stand As One, 1986, retrieved 2025-07-09

[6] "Erika Records :: Vinyl Record Manufacturer :: Keeping Vinyl Alive!". www.erikarecords.com. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

[7] "IW-MST". IronWrath. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

[8] Covenant Metal Show (2024-01-01). TOP 10 CHRISTIAN METAL ALBUMS OF 2023. Retrieved 2025-07-09 – via YouTube.

[9] "C.G. Ryche - Awards". IMDb. Retrieved 2025-07-09.

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