Talk:Udayamperoor Old Church
Unclear
[edit]It is unclear what this page is about -- a building, a congregation, or a broader synod? The English prose is inadequate to describe the subject matter in a straightforward way. Dclemens1971 (talk) 19:16, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- It is about the building. Logosx127 (talk) 20:03, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- Then the prose needs to be more focused and rewritten to focus on that. Dclemens1971 (talk) 20:58, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- It would be helpful if you could suggest any needed changes. Logosx127 (talk) 02:48, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
- Then the prose needs to be more focused and rewritten to focus on that. Dclemens1971 (talk) 20:58, 28 May 2025 (UTC)