Talk:Two Stars in the Milky Way/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 22:37, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Jon698 (talk · contribs) 19:11, 2 February 2025 (UTC)

• Hello @Crisco 1492:, I reviewed one of your other GA nominations, The Great Mecca Feast, and will be very interested in reviewing your work on this article. I'll make my comments in either a few hours or tomorrow. Jon698 (talk) 19:11, 2 February 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   I could find no problems with the article's prose or grammar. I made some minor edits to flip one sentence, changed a few words, and added the studio where the film was shot.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

   I checked five of the works cited (1. A Talented Child Actress: Violet Wong, A Tragedienne in the Teens, 2. The Occurrence of Cross-Media and Cross-Cultural Anxiety, 3. Wishful Images: Three Cinematographic Portraits of a National Film Company, 4. Listening to Early Chinese Sound Film: Two Stars in the Milky Way, and 5. Historiography and Sinification: Music in Chinese Cinema of the 1930s) and saw that the content was properly sourced from these works.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Covers the plot, production, release, and reception of the film along with some analysis of it.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   No neutrality problems

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   No edit wars and only minor edits from other users.

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Good images choices that are all in the public domain, including one that was on the front page as part of a DYK.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Another fine article that you made.