Talk:The Language of Injury/GA1

GA review

Passed. Arconning (talk) 10:11, 30 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 00:10, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 11:26, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review. Arconning (talk) 11:26, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

ty. the reception might suck so i'll likely redo it by the end of the review, amongst other ce'ing where needed. quotes r the main issue if there is one // Chchcheckit (talk) 12:11, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Chchcheckit Here are my comments. Arconning (talk) 17:05, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning All is addressed. ty // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:31, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning Chchcheckit (talk) 14:01, 29 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and MoS

I feel like the first mention of "unsaid" should be wikilinked as the term itself is quite idiomatic, though the wikilink could provide some context.
- see below // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:31, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

No issues.

Background and recording

"collapse of a toxic relationship.", collapse is quite informal. Though, it can be used if there aren't any other synonym that's more formal.
- tried redoing: "at the end of a toxic relationship" yeah // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:30, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics

"looking back and realising that memories I cherish are ultimately a lie" quote could be shortened, "Azzouz said that "Secretspace" is about her looking back at her own memories she cherishes, stating that she realised they were "ultimately a lie".
- used // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:30, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"the value of words and what is, and isn't, said.", I feel like this could be worded better unless it's an official quote from the source.
- redid a bit. i got rid of things unsaid bc the communication lackthereof is kinda self-explanatory // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:30, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"Azzouz said that Ithaca "didn't want [the album] to finish on a high note or a resolution or happy ending, because there isn't one".", the quote could definitely be shortened to "Azzouz said that Ithaca didn't want the album to "didn't want [the album] to finish on a high note or a resolution or happy ending," citing the absence of it.
- used // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:30, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Release and promotion

No issues.

Critical reception and the rest...

"Bandcamp Daily selected it as their "Album of the Day", ", which day?
- clarified // Chchcheckit (talk) 16:31, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"end-of year". "end-of-year", sorry if the comment is a bit nitpicky.
- done // Chchcheckit (talk) 16:31, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Camp's last name should probably only be used as her full name was already mentioned previously.
- done // Chchcheckit (talk) 17:28, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Media

Album is on a free use license, relevant to the article.

Refs

Earwig just picks up some quotes, all good.
Ref check: 1, 3, 5, 9, 13, 16, 25, 27, 34, 42. All good.

Misc

No ongoing edit war, neutral, and broad enough information about the topic.

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