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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Kingsif talk 22:29, 28 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

A Mandan Bull Dancer
A Mandan Bull Dancer
  • ... that at the end of the Okipa, Bull Dancers of the Mandan tribe (example pictured) had ritual sex with married women and then smoked a "pipe of reconciliation" with their husbands?
Created by ThaesOfereode (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 20 past nominations.

ThaesOfereode (talk) 14:19, 31 May 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Everything looks good here. Great work! MallardTV Talk to me! 13:10, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@MallardTV: Much appreciated! Thanks for the review. ThaesOfereode (talk) 17:06, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Hello - I know this is currently DYK, but I found the lead a bit confusing. The first sentence is: The Okipa (Mandan pronunciation: [o'kipa]), sometimes rendered as Okeepa or O-kee-pa, was the most important religious ceremony among the Mandan people in modern-day North Dakota - which made me think it was still a modern-day practice. It was only when I got to the end of the (very long) lead that I saw that this ceremony ended in 1890. I don't want to change it, but maybe this is something to think about for those who have been working on this article. Blackballnz (talk) 08:07, 9 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello - Seeing that this is a good article nominee, I think the first sentence could be clearer. How about:
'...among the Mandan people in what is now modern-day North Dakota.'?
Also, under Evolution, this sentence doesn't make sense grammatically to me: 'Six of the clans were wiped out by smallpox: the three unnamed clans, Masedomak, Amakadomak, and Manakasanumak.' Blackballnz (talk) 00:35, 11 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]