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I randomly stumbled across this article and must say it’s incredibly poorly written. It reads like a high school assignment. It makes wild, largely unsubstantiated claims, and uses very clunky language. I don’t know who it would fall to to clean it up, but I urgently suggest it! 80.2.251.211 (talk) 21:31, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]