Talk:M&M's Kart Racing/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: The Green Star Collector (talk · contribs) 15:56, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:05, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

Shall review in a few days. Arconning (talk) 06:05, 16 May 2025 (UTC)

@The Green Star Collector Here are my comments! Arconning (talk) 16:16, 17 May 2025 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

Lead and infobox

• Retrospectively doesn't need to be wikilinked imo.
• The staff in the infobox could be included in the Development and release section so it doesn't have to utilize sources + it'd make sense to include them there too. :)

Gameplay

• "Although there are not any items that can be used to attack other racers,", quite an odd statement out of context, could there be a statement contrasting it to another game? The IGN source somewhat insinuates it with Mario Kart.
• "driving on two wheels", wikilink to Ski (driving stunt).
• "a barrel of oil ", possibly specify which type of oil.

Development and release

• See second comment.

Reception

• See first comment.

Media

• All media are on proper licensing and are relevant to the article. All good.

Refs

• Earwig's all good.
• Ref checks: 2, 3, 4, 15, 24. All good.
• Not sure on the Guinness World Records source but I'll accept it per Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources, case-by-case basis.

Misc

• No ongoing edit war, broad enough information regarding the topic, neutral.

Thank you for your feedback, @Arconning:

• I've removed both links to "retrospective".
• The staff in the infobox is now credited in the development and release section with a reference.
• I've opted to omit any comparisons/contrasts to other racing games in the gameplay section, and therefore cut the part about the Wii version not having items for attacking.
• "driving on two wheels" is now linked to Ski (driving stunt).
• The type of oil appears to be petroleum specifically.

★ The Green Star Collector ★ (talk) 17:04, 17 May 2025 (UTC)

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