Talk:Leave It All to Shine/GA1

GA review

Passed. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 18:01, 10 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 08:02, 9 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 05:44, 10 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! I love this song. Well done for your work on the article so far! You know the drill by now with these reviews so I will dive right in with my comments:

1.) Can you please clarify which studio the mashup was recorded in? Was it the Victorious or iCarly one (or another one entirely)?

Couldn't find which one it was for so I changed it to say "the casts of both shows recorded the mashup in a recording studio"

2.) "The song was mixed by Greg Wells and mastered by Brian Gardner" - Could you please link "mixed" and "mastered" for readers unaware of these musical terms?

Done

3.) "Justice to "celebrate their girl power to"" - I think there is a word missing here

Fixed

4.) "then engage in a joint performance of "Leave It All to Shine"." - Could you explain how the characters do this (e.g. that they are at the party and doing karaoke)? If the sources allow

The sources only mention how the characters engage in the performance and not what lead into it.

5.) "lasting one week" - can you clarify what this means?

Changed

6.) Could you please have another look for sources to strengthen the GNG of the article? It would help make it more broad and detailed/thorough

Added more sources

7.) Could you please add free images (e.g. Cosgrove and Justice maybe)?

Done

Also - Earwig shows no copyright violations (yay!)

Please let me know if you have any questions or need any assistance. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 05:44, 10 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

DaniloDaysOfOurLives Thanks once again for the review. I really appreciate your help with the articles! I have addressed your concerns above. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be fixed or changed. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 06:51, 10 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your edits! I have spotchecked Sources #1, #2, #14 and #20. I am going to pass this - well done! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 18:01, 10 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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