Talk:Kurapika/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 13:18, 16 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Z. Patterson (talk · contribs) 02:05, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The article looks well-written. I have some points to address.

"ScreenRant" should be changed to "Screen Rant", and "GameRant" should be changed to "Game Rant".
I would suggest archiving the links with WP:IABOT. You may use the Internet Archive Bot Management Console, as I frequently do with anime-related articles. This decreases the likelihood of WP:LINKROT.
The book Togashi Empire needs a publisher in the citation to avoid citation messages.
The citation for "Shocking Hunter x Hunter Anime Ending That Togashi Rejected Surfaces" should not have the purple highlight when you open the source. This happens because part of the link has #:~:text= in the URL. Ensure URLs do not have text that start with #:~:text=.
I would remove filler words, such as "so" in the sentence "He said he started the project without expecting it to be so tiring."
I would change instances of "while", as noted in Gog the Mild's GAN/FAC checklist.

Overall, good work. If you make these changes, I plan to make this a good article. Z. Patterson (talk) 02:05, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I tried doing everything you asked but sadly I don't have the archiving tools. If possible could you use it? Cheers. Tintor2 (talk) 11:38, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Nevermind. I managed to install it through my cellphone. Tintor2 (talk) 16:02, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: I have determined the article is well-written, is well-structured, has no original research, is written in Wikipedia's tone, cites reliable sources, and attributes sources when appropriate. I recently promoted the article. Good work. Z. Patterson (talk) 01:07, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]