Talk:Jump Out/GA1
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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 19:14, 16 March 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 18:28, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
Then here. I'll get to this (2nd part of efforts to make up for A Great Chaos wordcount) // Chchcheckit (talk) 18:28, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
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Broad
- covers all relevant bases, in the lead and in body of text. Passes.
Prose
- lead copyedit hypothetical (I feel the way Osamason is not related to its content):
Jump Out is the third studio album by the American rapper OsamaSon, released on January 24, 2025, through Atlantic Records and Motion Music. Going through numerous revisions due to constant leaking, it was primarily produced by Wegonebeok with contributions from a variety of producers, including OsamaSon himself. Jump Out is a rage album characterized by saturated vocal performances and distorted production utilizing synthesizers and 808 drums. Its lyrical content departed from the drug-heavy themes of his previous work, instead favoring themes of money, fashion, women, and weapons.
Jump Out was supported by its lead single, "The Whole World Is Free"; plans of a rollout were aborted after it was leaked and subsequently released weeks ahead of schedule. It received critical acclaim, with reviewers praised it for being a creative and boundary-pushing release. It was OsamaSon's first album that appeared on the Billboard 200, debuting at number 151. An accompying world tour began in March 2025.
- Mostly done (see my comment about OK's name below) and I didn't include "world tour" because it's just across the United States.
- the producer "OK" is supposed to be "Wegonebeok" (per the fader)
Not done He has never been officially credited as "wegonebeok" on any of his contributions. In the album's liner notes, he is credited as OK, he refers to himself as OK, and "We gone be OK" is only his producer tag; The Fader and co. probably just called him that to avoid confusion of his vague name.
Accepted, but perhaps in the article body you can add "(a.k.a. wegonebeok)" in brief acknowledgement? // Chchcheckit (talk) 22:41, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
- No reference to how the album was released ahead of schedule because it got leaked ahead of its planned date (February 14)?
- From The Fader: "So instead of releasing on Valentine’s Day in three weeks, Jump Out is set to hit streaming platforms a little less than 8 hours from now. It’s a fitting-if-frustrating finale to a year of near-constant recording and refinement: previous iterations of the album leaked at various points in 2024, prompting loosie singles and tracklist overhauls."
- You should probably include Darville (Fader)'s commentary in the reception
- Done completely meant to do that but I forgot
- id suggest removing medithi since darville's commentary is a stronger evaluation // Chchcheckit (talk) 22:43, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
- Not done since Medithi still gives critical commentary. It's not like we need to be limited to one reviewer per publication Locust member (talk) 02:41, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
References
- No unreliable sources
- The deluxe edition of Jump Out includes the bonus tracks "Logo" and "Luv" Any better sources for this?
- Not that I can find, but the album itself can be used as a source in this case (WP:TRACKLISTING)
Spotchecks
- In contrast to his debut album, Osama Season (2023), the production on Jump Out was handled by people OsamaSon considers his friends (fader interview)
- "Waffle House" contains a drum-heavy, twitchy instrumental[11] reminiscent of a video game soundtrack.[6] A line in the song uses MAC weapons to mean "Mack", a reference to the rapper Phreshboyswag, who OsamaSon has a feud with. On "I Got the Fye", he claims he is a "big boss bully" and states, "I don't pass out no hugs, bitch, catch a slug." He expressed that the former line is him "flexing" due to people online trying to bully him. He further disavows drugs in the line "I'm addicted to cash, these boys addicted to drugs." minor edit by me, but good.
- The album utilizes off-mic ad-libs that pan intermittently. The Fader's Jordan Darville felt that this effect "give[s] the impression that [the album] is […] a party, and you're in the center of it".[12] Vivian Medithi from the same magazine wrote that, in contrast to other rage albums, Jump Out favors "melodic euphoria" that recalls Pi'erre Bourne's production on Die Lit (2018) by Playboi Carti.[1] Passes, but fader also mentions Bourne's production of Carti's debut mixtape (2017) also.
- Added that; didn't see the italicized text and just thought he was saying "Playboi Carti and Die Lit" :sob: Locust member (talk) 02:42, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
- it is his first album to appear on the chart. source? i think there is one
- lmao ill add it sorry // Chchcheckit (talk) 12:42, 7 April 2025 (UTC)
- It is a rage album characterized by saturated vocal performances and distorted production utilizing synthesizers and 808 drums. passes, though fixed the refs to avoid WP:SYNTH
Copyvio
- Artwork has rationale and alt text; passes
- Earwig passes: highest % is 17.4
NPOV
- Reception summary is cited to AllMusic
- It received critical acclaim, with reviewers praising it for being a creative and boundary-pushing release. I don't know how much I agree with the line "boundary pushing" though it is supported by allmusic and pitchfork. my concerns stem mainly from the general lack of reviews but thats kinda the last qualm i have. ill think
- yeah idk im prolly overthinking // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:28, 8 April 2025 (UTC)
Stable
- Mostly from March 16. I made an edit but nom has corrected me
progress // Chchcheckit (talk) 14:56, 3 April 2025 (UTC)