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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk21:33, 24 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that British outrage at the sentencing of a white Kenyan settler to just two years imprisonment for the 1923 killing of a black employee eventually led to the replacement of the colony's legal code? Source: "Sheridan elected to award the minimum sentence of two years rigorous imprisonment" from page 487 of Anderson, David M. (September 2011). "Punishment, Race and 'The Raw Native': Settler Society and Kenya's Flogging Scandals, 1895–1930". Journal of Southern African Studies. 37 (3): 479–497. doi:10.1080/03057070.2011.602887. The Colonial Office's outrage and attempts at reform, culminating in the 1930 replacement of the Indian Penal Code are covered at length in the subsequent pages

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Self-nominated at 09:56, 4 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jasper Abraham murder case; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: @Dumelow: Good article. AGF on sources I can't access. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:03, 4 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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Nominator: Dumelow (talk · contribs) 16:44, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 20:36, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I will be conducting this review as part of the May 2025 GA review drive. I will leave my comments within a few days. Kimikel (talk) 20:36, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Dumelow: I've finished my review of the article and left a few minor comments below. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns regarding my suggestions; thank you very much. Kimikel (talk) 21:35, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Kimikel, thanks for your thorough review. I agree with all your comments and have actioned per below. Let me know if you need anything else - Dumelow (talk) 06:01, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your prompt response. I've gone through the article and made a few minor chances; now I feel that there is nothing left to change. Congratulations, and thank you for your quality work! Kimikel (talk) 20:32, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written

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  • The jury, which was all-European and composed of Abraham's acquaintances, found him guilty of a lesser charge of "grievous hurt" and he was sentenced to two years' imprisonment. Wikilink grievous hurt and remove quotations.
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Abraham maintained a farm, known as Kweresoi... > remove comma
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Aged around 30 Kitosh... > add comma
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The horse was pregnant so... > add comma
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Kimnyigue reported the death to Abraham who sent... > add comma
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Scott arrived at 2.30 pm... > 2:30 pm (per MOS:TIME)
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • bullock cart and Nairobi > wikilink
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Despite this Sheridan gave the... > add comma
Done - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • At the conclusion of the case Sheridan commended the jury in a report to the British Colonial Office, for their efforts in trying a man "intimately known to many of them". > At the conclusion of the case Sheridan commended the jury for their efforts in trying a man "intimately known to many of them" in a report to the British Colonial Office.
Done, thanks these are all excellent suggestions - Dumelow (talk) 05:54, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Verifiable

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  • "crime which appears to me to offer no extenuating circumstances" > Direct quote, needs end-of-sentence citation.
  • "I share the reluctance ... to be carefully watched". same as above
  • "this case is more particularly serious having regard to the previous cases of Watts, Hawkins and Harries". > same as above
  • "sufficient in the ordinary course of nature to cause death" > same as above
  • "flew off the handle" > same
All done - Dumelow (talk) 06:01, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Spot check

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  1. 10: Verified
  2. 16: Verifies first half of sentence
  3. 17: Verifies second half of same sentence
  4. 7: Verified
  5. 19: Verified

Broad

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  • No issues

Neutral

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  • No issues

Stability

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  • No issues

Illustrated

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  • All images are properly-tagged public domain and contribute to the quality of the article.
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