Talk:Episode 6994/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 01:53, 27 May 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

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Will review. I can't believe there's over 7000 episodes of this show... How many have you watched? Also, how many of the episodes do you think are notable enough for their own article? IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Btw I sent you an email (maybe it went to spam?). Of course don't feel pressured to respond though :D IAWW (talk) 21:11, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) clock

Lead

I think the lead should be split into two paragraphs, separating the plot summary from the production and reception IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Plot

are working their recording: Is there meant to be an "on" in here? IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

she hits out at David for having sex with her, despite being married to Ian: Who was married to Ian? I though Cindy was engaged to him, not married? IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

she said that he broke the hearts of other women and abandoned his children Joe Wicks (Paul Nicholls) and Bianca Jackson (Patsy Palmer), accusing him of Double standard and ruining people's lives: Grammatically, "accusing him" modifies Bianca, but this clearly isn't meant to be the case. This is a very common grammar mistake. It's called a dangling/misplaced modifier. I suggest looking into it. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

confides in his dad confides to his father: I think you wrote this twice IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Cindy tells David that she does not love Junior but needs passion in her life. She tells David that she wants real romantic love in her life: This is almost fully repeated information, can you condense it? IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Cindy has some sort of relationship with everyone xD

Production and release

Were the Digital Spy spoilers released before the episode released? If so, I think it should be put before the release to maintain the chronology. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

The episode is set during Cindy and Ian's engagement party, which had started the prior episode: This seems like it should be in the beginning of the plot summary section. Also was the whole episode set during the engagement party? IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

woman, admitting that it started out as a fling: "admitting that..." modifies "woman". This is a dangling modifier. It's also not clear what "it" refers to. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

leading to George...: Another misplaced modifier. It's unclear what led to George giving his son advice. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

I think the last paragraph should be merged into the plot summary IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Reception

Denby also believed that Cindy and David's "revealing conversation" was a "ticking timebomb" just "waiting to be rumbled!"[14] Denby called the recording of the Cindy's "twisted" admission of her affair and being in love with George "a ticking timebomb" that could worsen the situation.: I think only keep one of these largely repeating sentences IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Sources Y

Reliability (Criterion 2b) Y

I think the Metro and Mirror are reliable for soap operas per the discussion on the soap operas wikiproject talk page. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) Y

Spot check based on this version.

[2a]: Y

[8c]: Y

[9c]: Y

[14a]: Y

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) Y

Earwig finds no issues. Since most the sources are online, it's unlikely to be missing anything.

Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) Y

Seems to cover everything

Media Y

Tags (Criterion 6a) Y

Nice relevant images that are all appropriately tagged

Captions (Criterion 6b) Y

I added "said" to "Collins and Palmer both [said] they enjoyed working with French again" because I think it's a little more accurate and neutral. Let me know if you have any issues with this. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)

Suggest archiving non-dead references to prevent link rot IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)

"Palmer told... Palmer believed... Palmer added... Palmer thought... Palmer was" is rather repetitive. IAWW (talk) 18:13, 12 June 2025 (UTC)