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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Nominator: MediaKyle (talk · contribs) 19:40, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 09:43, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. Nice 100% authorship, I have never seen that before on an article I have reviewed. IAWW (talk) 09:43, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@MediaKyle comments are below. I thought this was very well written, which is rather fitting for an article about a high-quality magazine! So, I didn't find many issues to quibble about. IAWW (talk) 10:37, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for reviewing! I wasn't expecting someone to take on the review so quickly. I'll see if I can resolve the issues you've raised over the course of the day. Cheers, MediaKyle (talk) 13:17, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@MediaKyle Thank you for responding to all my points. I am happy with all your improvements and am passing now. That was a nice quick one! IAWW (talk) 19:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) Magenta clockclock

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Lead

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the Periodical Distributors of Canada, and the Atlantic Journalism Awards: If these awards are not notable enough for a redlink, I don't think they should be in the lead. IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: I removed Periodical Distributors of Canada, and redlinked the AJAs because I think I have enough material to write on article on that soon. MediaKyle (talk) 13:35, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Description

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Looks good.

History

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and the adverse economic impact that would be felt by the community as a result: Make it clear this is his opinion (WP:NPOV: "avoid stating opinion as fact") IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: Good catch, thank you MediaKyle (talk) 13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Tantramar subscribers receiving an issue of Atlantic Insight as a replacement starting in March 1982: Were these paying subscribers? If so, did the money go to the company that previously published tantramar, or did it go to the Atlantic Insight? IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Not done for now: I don't believe this information actually exists. Tantramar was a very short-lived magazine, this is more of just a footnote in Atlantic Insight's story. I may revisit this later. MediaKyle (talk) 13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
 Done: I think I misinterpreted what you meant the first time around. I rewrote that part and it should hopefully be more clear now, let me know what you think. Thanks, MediaKyle (talk) 17:37, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

splitting the advertising sales sector of the business along with its 22 employees to Daley Communications: "Splitting" implies it was split between two parties, but only one is listed. IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: Believe I've solved this MediaKyle (talk) 13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) checkY

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No issues. Nice sfn formatting.

Reliability (Criterion 2b) checkY

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Sourcing is entirely local news. I see no issues with reliability.

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) Magenta clockclock

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[1a]: checkY

[3]: checkY

[8]: I don't think it supports that she became the president of the new company during the receivership proceedings. IAWW (talk) 10:35, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: This is a weird one, as I'm pretty sure based on my research that this did happen during receivership proceedings, but when I looked at the source again it seems where I got that was National Post referring to the company she became a President of as "newly created", and that doesn't mean it happened during the receivership proceedings. I adjusted the wording in the article to "around the time" to better reflect the source, pending confirmation of a concrete date if possible. MediaKyle (talk) 13:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

[1b]: checkY

[1c]: checkY

[19a]: checkY

[19b]: checkY

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) checkY

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Earwig finds nothing, I found nothing on the spot check.

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Appears to cover the whole magazine's lifespan. There is no list of notable journalists who wrote for it? IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: I added a simple bullet list as I think this does warrant a separate section, but I don't believe there's enough material to put it into prose. MediaKyle (talk) 17:24, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good! IAWW (talk) 19:10, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Stable (Criterion 5) checkY

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Media checkY

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Tags (Criterion 6a) checkY

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Good free use rationale

Captions (Criterion 6b) checkY

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Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)

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Modern conversions of the monetary amounts would be cool (Template:Inflation) IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: Great suggestion, never would have thought of that. Thank you. MediaKyle (talk) 17:24, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.