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About motives (comma)

Although the two points are bulleted separately in the template, it feels uneven when read though, as if they are part of same sentence and give a sense of unease as both are unrelated matters (and the second point with capital A in anger just makes it worse). So per WP:IAR (for if there is any rule for it) I think the ',' (comma) should be added. What do you think? Thanks, ExclusiveEditor _{Notify Me!} 09:11, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Courtesy ping: Swinub '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:24, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CanonNi: I already had sent them tb, nevertheless, ExclusiveEditor _{Notify Me!} 13:55, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, my bad. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 14:08, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see the need, personally. If other people feel that it is uneven, it would make more sense to combine the points with "and" rather than have a comma followed by a capitalized word. Swinub★ 14:40, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That would be fine too. ExclusiveEditor _{Notify Me!} 06:07, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am willing to reframe the first motive in infobox as "Owed wages by a factory where the perpetrator had been working." ExclusiveEditor _{Notify Me!} 14:02, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]