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Feedback on Sudhir Mehta (entrepreneur) – Neutrality, Notability & Reliable Sources

Hello fellow editors,

I’ve moved Sudhir Mehta (entrepreneur) to mainspace and am seeking feedback to ensure it meets Wikipedia’s standards for neutrality, verifiability, and notability. The draft was declined (March 6, 2025, by Gheus) due to concerns about insufficient notability under WP:GNG/WP:BIO, a potentially promotional tone, and weaker sources. I’ve addressed these and welcome input now that it’s live.

Key Areas for Review

Neutral Tone I’ve revised the article to remove promotional language, focusing on factual, sourced statements. If any sections still seem non-neutral, please suggest specific adjustments.

Notability and Reliable Sources The article now cites independent, third-party sources like The Economic Times Auto, Fortune India, The Times of India, and Indian Express, plus Lokmat Times for award recognition. I’m open to replacing weaker references or adding more to solidify notability—does the current set suffice under WP:GNG/WP:BIO?

Conflict of Interest Transparency I’m editing in good faith with no paid or undisclosed COI, per WP:COI. My goal is to document notable Indian entrepreneurs, and I welcome guidance if my approach suggests otherwise.

Specific Questions for Reviewers

Do the references (e.g., Economic Times Auto 2025, Lokmat Times 2024) adequately establish notability under WP:GNG/WP:BIO?
Are there tone issues needing further refinement?
Any suggestions to improve or protect the article in mainspace (e.g., against AfD)?

Thank you for your insights to help maintain this article’s quality! MH-wiki2025 (talk) 05:28, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Attn. @Gheus, in case you were not alerted. Patrick (talk) 16:53, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Requested

I’ve submitted Sudhir Mehta (entrepreneur) for a peer review to further refine its notability, tone, and sourcing. Please contribute your feedback there or here. Thanks! MH-wiki2025 (talk) 05:28, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]