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Thank you for your feedback. I’ve made substantial revisions to address the concerns raised:
The article has been rewritten in line with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view (NPOV) standards.
Claims of public notability are now supported with inline citations from independent, verifiable third-party sources, including NYC.gov, Hazen and Sawyer, and official DEP and legal documents.
Projects listed — such as the Paerdegat Basin CSO Facility, Wards Island WWTP, Tallman Island WPCP, and Shoreham Solar Commons — are publicly documented and independently verifiable.
References to personal or unverifiable business accomplishments have been removed or restructured to avoid any appearance of self-promotion.
The article has been reformatted to follow WP:BIO structure and improve clarity, tone, and sourcing.
I respectfully request a second review in light of these changes. Thank you for your time and consideration.
