Draft:A war Inside song by Thomas May

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Declined by Bonadea 2 months ago. Last edited by Bonadea 2 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Facebook and Spotify can not be used as sources (and those links should be removed). bonadea contributions talk 11:25, 8 April 2025 (UTC)

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A War Inside is the first single off the album "A Letter Home" by American musician, songwriter and multi-instrumentalist, Thomas May.

The song, release on February 25th, 2025, features lyrics that deal with loss, loneliness, drug abuse and recovery and pain. A vivid picture of the world the "storyteller" is experiencing.

With a haunting, echoing sound, pacing and delivery, restraining emotion in order to deliver the message. The lyrics lean hard into vulnerability and openness about the pain being felt.

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